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Well I couldn't be happier with the outcome of this chapter and the ending is WOW! This could be something that rehabilitated Caleb within the wolf packs as well. Super super super.
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That was a fantastic piece of writing. Im hopefully that it has worked and can't wait to turn the page, which I am doing right now.
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I'm very glad that Matty has met Rusty's mom. Even if she doesn't make it, this moment will be important for Rusty. Roy will come around. As for Connor, I'm certain be will be getting his cumuppence - the slimey little toad.
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You funny thing. I've got nothing to do with Connor, the evil-hearted little shit. I do not speak for @Joie J. however, who may well have a soft spot for Connor.
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I hope light shifters also live to be 100s of years old.
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So we learn a little more about what a light shifter can do and about Asa's background. Hopefully he can start sweeping out fhe cobwebs of Caleb's misery and self- recrimination. Go Asa!
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These two are going to be just fine together. Lots to work out first. Poisoned? Hmm. Let's see what that's all about. It seems like a light shifter can see inside a person on a molecular level?!
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Chapter 81: Final Chapter
Doha commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 81: Final Chapter
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Chapter 81: Final Chapter
Doha commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 81: Final Chapter
What a magnificent chapter! I love Granger and I'm delighted that he and Calvert will reunite. Additional insight into the family dynamics made for interesting reading as well. Thank you. Thank you. 😊- 57 comments
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I'm delighted Asa and Caleb have met and that Caleb's wolf immediaty recognizes his mate. Giles' compassion toward Caleb is remarkable and I hope that Caleb will learn to forgive himself. Can't wait to see how this first meeting unfolds.
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I'm loving this. ❤ I'm sure Asa and Caleb are meant for each other. Let's see if a wolf and a light shifter, whatever that is, can get along. 😉
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What a great chapter. I really enjoyed reading it the second time around. I'm glad Jubal has all his money back and a few extra horses to boot. Now we really need Lucas to recover, even if it is slow. Knowing Jubal, he will want to get the cabin finished so Lucas has a comfortable place to recover. Thank you for writing this fabulous story. I feel like I know the characters.
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Ooh. Yes. The farrier is going to make Caleb well ❤ 💙 💜 💖
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I've purposely waited so I can read chapter after chapter. Woo-hoo
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Mr and Mister Danvers: Initiation is a fast paced story of a man down on his luck, with a traumatic past and an uncertain future. Facing monumental plot twists and agonizing decisions, Greg Danvers becomes, not simply an heroic protagonist, but the friend we all want. A fabulous read, not to be missed.
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Well this has be a fabulous read. I have loved every chapter. You have an engaging style of writing and you've stretched my vocabulary at times too. 😃 😀 I really like Greg! I'm looking forward to finding out more about Nathan and Jean. Thank you for posting this story ❤
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A fantastic and fantastical chapter. I wonder what it is that Greg is remembering? I love Jean already. I've really enjoyed reading this story
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EPISODE 15: THE KING'S KNIGHT
Doha commented on LJCC's story chapter in EPISODE 15: THE KING'S KNIGHT
What a turn up for the books. So our boy is going to be a spy in His Majesty's service. Good. The UK will need men like Greg. -
Well that was grueling to say the least. I'm relieved that Greg did not rape Charles. Still no Nathan. Where be he?? And is he linked to this cabal?
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Chapter 13 If He Ever Does
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 13 If He Ever Does
What a difficult chapter to read, but a necessary one. I have great faith that Lucas will survive and flourish. In the meantime Jubal must take care of the farm, the animals and the partly built cabin. 8f I know Jubal, he will want rhat finished as soon as possible so Lucas can be comfortable.- 54 comments
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Dress down day with a difference. A brave work place to try that. It seems to have worked though and may potentially establish a new line if business for Ares. Exotic security men.
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😆 🤣 that was a cool chapter. He is so green, even though he was a police officer. I'm very glad his triceps didn't give in. The old duck is a fun character. I hope we see her again.
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Well Greg did an amazing job in a repulsive setting. Oy vey. Nothing about rhat was attractive, nevertheless, each to their own. For Greg though, he will need to be a sexual chameleon. More power to him. Where is Nathan in all of this?
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I tend to agree with @raven1 on this. I believe that half siblings can have very positive relationships despite parental issues - if they want to. It is something like children of divorced parents maintaining good relationships with both parents despite the possibility of animosity between the parents. Regardless of what Rusty feels about Roy's actions, it would be great of he kept contact with Gabriel.
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EPISODE 11: THISLEBAUM'S BRIDGE
Doha commented on LJCC's story chapter in EPISODE 11: THISLEBAUM'S BRIDGE
I wonder who calls him pumpkin 🎃. It seems like he may have an older brother that we don't know about yet. I wonder if Nathan is involved in any way? Wow. A heavy chapter. Torture, PTSD, near fatal beatings.
