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  1. bottomguy

    Chapter 14

    This is such a great story! Not only is there hate and fear. There is also unknown passion and love just waiting to be turned lose between Asher and Kenen. The two of them appear to have such thoughts about the other, they want to protect that as much as possible. Each does not want to see the other hurt. But they also do not understand yet how or why. Love reading this story. Thank you
  2. bottomguy

    Epilogue

    Thank you for a fantastic story. I just finished readingm I do hope you continue with more as well with Trevor, Shane, Lisa and Joel. I am sure there would be many of us to enjoy reading about these four. Thank you agsin
  3. bottomguy

    Revelation

    Holy Crap Shane. Glad you are Trev's boyfriend and love. He would be completely incapacitated if it were not for you. Chaper 98 was a good lead up to Trev's mother and then the fade away leaving all to try putting it together. Fantasic read here. Great story line and wonderful characters you have created here. Thank you
  4. bottomguy

    Epilogue

    THANK YOU! It is rather amazing for me actually this story you have give all of us to share with. Is soon to be played out in someone's real life. It has been wonderful reading and thinking about who was spilling the rumors about Johnathan and Maddox. Happy to know that such rumors will not be happening with the coming together of two individuals who have been apart for 2 years. I am going to make sure that he reads every sentence of your great story that I have just finished. Things will be much discussed with the other half soon. Will be waiting for more as well Thank you
  5. Yes I would say that Dr. V is protecting William. At least I think it is Dr. V?? Only time will tell!
  6. What is William going to do now??
  7. I now think William is beginning to have his mind and eyes opening a little more as to things he learns and sees. Great chapters and more to come i do beleive.
  8. It appears that someone is not liking to William's education regarding the history that he is so intent upon. Could another "student" of the history that he is learning feeling threatened by who William is being receiving lessons from? If the professor is concerned, then there must be something or someone who is not wanting William to continue.
  9. Wonderful once again.
  10. Unknown pleasures? Unknown drinks? Smoking room where no smoking was taking place? Sounds like a place you would enjoy but not enjoy!! What our William thinks when he reads his journal that he is maintaining.
  11. Seduced? Really? Surely you are jesting. Not remembering how one gets home after meeting a beautiful young girl can be explained rather simply. I think?? What will the next chaper bring to our WIlliam?
  12. Wondering if Mike is also part of this vampire equation. He seems to be rather immune to all of the alcohol he pours down his throat.
  13. WIlliam is getting in big time here now. What wonderous liquids is he drinking now. All of the falling asleep after the subtle mention of relaxing by the professor. I wonder what educational learning can be accomplished when you are sleeping so soundly as WIlliam has been doing at the sudden mention of getting relaxed. Wish I could have some of that refreshing drink? What more will our new student be shown next?
  14. WIlliam is definately been groomed for what seems to be taking place. Such tales of so long ago sounded as if they had just happened last week to the professor. And possibly to Willaim as well. I have not been much on vampires. But from what I have seen in movies and stories that I have read. The professor basically fits into the vampire sort of lifestyle he has. Only coming out in the evenings and night. William seems like a smart young man. I hope he begins to listen to what is opening up for him to experience.
  15. OK, that is different way to wake up from your first binge drinking and with beer and wine. Energized? Not what I would have called it. Something is happening with Willaim I venture.
  16. Very odd for a professor I would think after the first class session to ask a student to sit and discuss things that were not part of the class session itself. I could enjoy a professor as this myself.
  17. Mr. WIlliam Harker seems to be a rather unusual type student with the studies he was taking in High School. Not many that I have known were so interested in such history. The scholarship also is somewhat different. It also seems to be taking a very good look and interest in WIlliam. I am curious about his room mate though. It is also unusual to be room mates with someone who is very well versed with the campus and instantly is WIlliam's tour guide of the University. No background on either of the students. Yet! The night class which is usually for grad students seems to be right up William's interests though. WIll be interesting to follow him and learn more about who his family is and where they are from. No mention of dad, his work or his mothers as well. We shall see what interesting issues are directed towards WIllaim.
  18. bottomguy

    Chapter 18

    where I 007 at during all of this action. I always thought the JB was the only one who had to deal with slime like that? Glad the are all safe and sound. It also appears that there are those who mean to do some harm to the boys. Nothing like being in the middle of a hornets nest in DC.
  19. bottomguy

    Chapter 107

    Essell is thinking ahead in not wanting to cause any death. This may also be a very good ploy for him and Garjah after this rescue plan is accomplished without deaths. The Kardoval may be too self contained within their own circles and not getting thoughts of the planet is more about everyone and not just certain aspects of the population. I am sur Garjah has also planned for such a move by the Kardoval as a possible action they may take. Since he is in charge of the planet security. He would also be ready for sudden actions that may be attempted by certain forces that want to remain hidden to other worlds and cultures.
  20. bottomguy

    Chapter 15

    There is a place that rapist must be sent after they are convicted. I am sure there is an Island that is remote enough and easily accessable to be use as a segregation facility. There is only one way onto this wonderful permanent facilitiy, but no way for exit. The rapist can live their miserable lives there with other rapists. This is there island and the only way on it by air. Food, water, clothing, materials for building their own shelters. If they have not other skills than rape Then they have no shelter. Simple!!
  21. I have been reading about what love can be to someone by another man that has totally taken your heart. I can also relate to having to lose your love because of some drunken self centered drug addict driving when he should have been 6 feet under. Love can be a very powerful force when someone who loves you has this force within themselves. I can see Maddox getting the others on the road to his house and all of them storming the castle. I just hope that any bloodshed is that of Drew. Maybe Drew will be able to see what real love struck man can do to someone as him. It can also be thought of that Xpress may be in for a rude awakening as well. Once Maddox gets his hands on Drew. Drew may also end up as Xpress will. In pieces all over the place. Something that may be a lttle strong, but also very reasonable to all who have been hurt by their paper. It am going to be very interested is what will be coming towards Drew, Jonathan, Mr. Simmons and Jonathans family. WIll the Maddox group of storm students desend upon the house where Jonathan may be in for a lot more that it first seems What is Drew doing there in the firest place? Has Jonathans parents invited him just in case Jonathan did show up for Christmas. Then the family can get things all straightened out with Jonathan with the families blessing and Drew. Something smells here and I do not think it is Christmas dinner. May be different to have sparks and fireworks on Christmas. I will be waiting for the upcoming chapters. What a way to have Christmas break when you are the feast.
  22. bottomguy

    Asking Favours

    A very good chapter with a very good closing. It maked me happy to just be reading about our two adventurers.
  23. bottomguy

    Chapter 11

    Oh the stuffed cabbage. Enjoy eating stuffed cabbage as it is a wonderful way to fill the air with thoughts of its goodness taste! I am thinking that Nate and Brody will endup more civil to each other. Things do take time when a member of your family have gone through so much sorrow and injury. I think they will realize that soon enough.
  24. Their first experience shopping for their own condoms. Mr. D. appears to be a very good father helping the boys with their newly discovered attraction to each other and those neccessary things they will need along the way. The boys finding out about condoms in reality is typical of what most first time users seem to go through.
  25. bottomguy

    No Escape

    Jonathan seems to be amazed at this reception in the Maddox home. He also seems to be torn between what he feels for Maddox and wanting to keep him away for the Rag they call the newpaper on campus. When two individuals such as Jonathnan and Maddox have have this love for each other. This is something new for both of them. Now Maddox's family has appeared to welcome Jonathan into their family. We still do not know if Jonathan's family will accept him as well. I hope that the night in bed with Maddox will open up a new line of communication between the both of them. When total love has given both of them as it seems. The power they have combined within themselves will be more than enough to turn the paper into a less than honorable piece of used toilet paper. I beleive that Maddox and Jonathan will emerge in the morning with a renewed and more solid relationship. When Maddox gets to read the letter to him. He may be the one who is more in love than he had ever imagined. What a world of love, hate, friendship, college and blackmail has tried to do here with Jonathan and Maddox just may be what the two of them needed to cement what they have for each other I want to read more and see who feels the love first. Or will both of them be struck with sense at the same time.
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