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An assassination attempt of this scale, must have many other people involved. I wondered immedieately about the Kardoval. Has Garjah assigned any security to them? Or has he already done so before the attack even occured. After all he is Chief of Planet Security for good reason. It is going to be interesting to see what tactics Garjah has and uses to interrogate this suspect? I can imagine someone with 6 large muscel bound arms and hands wanting to relocated body parts of this suspect. Then there is Bouncer! We have not even paid that much attention to how he has been reacting all this time until this attack. Is Bouncer something/someone special and from another world as well. Maybe he himself was left behind on that planet where Essell discovered him? I think Essell may be watching Bouncer a little more intently now. Garjah as well.

So Mr. Torres is going to be incarcerated for 36 years. The only question in my mind would be. Who are the others who allowed Mr. Torres to travel as far as he had? Surely those two clerks have identities and credentials in the system? If they had been working before when Torres was cleared. Then there should be some trail for those two. I suspect they will appear again sooner than later. Just my feelings. I do think there may be more to this plot than is known at present.

Karl is beginning to understand a lot more of what he is on the inside. He also I think what understand what his adopted family means him and what he means to them as well. Many individuals lost loved one's during that time. Unfortunately this still happens today. Karl has within himself the love of his own family who are caught in the German occupaion. I hope Karl does not later know the pain of what Germany has done to so many others later. There is much pain in war. But there is much more emptiness in those who's loves will not return as well. Thank you for showing what are on the minds of people who know of such things. Even now it all remains the same.

Lasagna, without cheese?? I love lasagna with Italian sausage and lots of cheese I cannot think about what no cheese will make the lasagna taste as. I do like the Snoopy as Mike's personal A. I.. It seems to fit his character here. I can also understand what his thinking is about being moved to the moon to live and leave his "world and home " behind. That in itself would be depressing for a teenage boy. Enjoyable to read and looking for much more.

Ok, who's idea was it to give us a double dose of marylou?? Once is enough for those like her, but a double dose is too much. 😳

So it appears that Jonathan may have another side to him that is slowly emerging from within? Is he more dominate than we have seen until now? Will Maddox be that submissive type that outwardly he has not shown until now? Not forgetting the short statement about "enjoy the calmess"! So what wonders lie ahead for our two young men in love? I am looking towards finding out as well. I think the Triplets may have let it be known or soon will who the Xpress gets around. This also will be a part of the reason for "enjoy the calmness", statement. Who better to be undercover reporters than triplets who seem to know Maddox and Jonathan but did not know the girls. How fair is that. Of course both young men did not have eyes for the three girls. What new things will be revealed in the coming chapters of our two lovers? More and better sex? We wish.

If I remember correctly, did not Bouncer approch Essell on the other planet without being threatened by Essell? It is possible that Bouncer is also from another world who can change into other forms of life to "blend in" so to speak? He has become Essell's protector and has shown no threat to him. Something is much different now about Bouncer. Is he now a tracking entiy? Is he a form of protector of some sort to those that he senses are needing to be secure. I think there could be a lot more about Bouncer that we do not know yet. I am thinking Bouncer may be just the one thing that will get Essell and Ases more of what they are needing with bringing the two worlds together. Just wild and wishful hinking on my part. We will know soon what Bouncer finds in the garden. What things will be happening next? There must be a sleeper agent within the building as well. Just suppose those two young ones are the sleeper agents. WIth so many different people around who have the ability to change their looks and forms. What evils are lurking in the shadows for Essell and Ases and possibly Garjah?

Ok Alex, just kiss him already. Go for it and then you will know what you feel for Finn is either real or it is not for you. You will never know unless you take the leap yourself. As difficult as it may be, will it be worse than going to see your mother? She threw her hate towards you as soon as you entered the hospital room. But you did not leave until you had your say to her first. Your first step at gaining control. Now how about step number two. FInn. You do not feel "anything" for him? I really do not believe that. Do you? You are there in the bakery, You knew that he would either be there or soon be there. Now you went hiking with FInn to the place that means so much to you both. What better time to either go for it or leave and be frustrated again. Maybe Finn should be the one to tell Alex what he means to him even after 10 years apart. What is the worst that can happen. Alex have another panic attack of which Finn has helped him through most of them before. It would be wonderful to see the two get back into each others life and possibly even more. I hope they can look at each other and both begin to tear and reach out for the other to help.

This arrival on the planet is going to be good to read. Time for me to get popcorn and a drink to get settled in a wait for the show to begin when they arrive on the planet. I hope this is't going to be any horrible homecoming with an unexpected ambassador from another planet.

I have read many stories that have captured my interest and even my spare time. I read for relaxing. There are many things in this world that can interupt ones life and family. Dealing with the damages of a sudden powerful storm that hit the midwest in August of 2020. I am one of hundreds who were damaged by this storm and still dealing with an insurance company that seems they do not want to help with way the policy says. So living with a family member since then has helped. But the costs of running two households is extremely difficult and very demanding. WIthout the support of all of my family members and of all of my good friends. I have maintained. But I also need to find that time when I can relax and get away from all of the pressure and still no movement from the insurance company. So I go to what gives me the most relaxing part of the day. I come to read the stories here that give me the time to go into another relm along with Chris. It is a pleasure to read and enjoy. Reading your story does help with taking my many problems away and become a part of each chapter that I read. I do understand the forces of issues which can make life very miserable for someone. I have been there since that storm has hit. But I do know that life continues onward and with each day there is a little more light shinning and more little things that bring smiles. Your story is one of these things that gives me time to reflect as well a time to get away from the demands of certain things that interupt our lives. Bring Chris and all of our heros back as soon as you possibly can. I know you will have the strength to do so, but when you are ready. I will be waiting as well as so many others who want to continue on with the Relm along with you. Many thanks for your writing and by assured that there will be many other who will relish reading more chapters and give all of us more ways to restore ourselfs as well. Again Thank you.

I do think we have two young college men, who have found their soul with the other. Or so it seems? Something is still lingering in the back of my mind about Rusty. Who is he deep down inside? Is he someone that has doubts about himself? Is he looking for his soul as Maddox was? Going to be interesting in the coming chapters. Maddox and Jonathan seem to be more comfortable with each other, wanting to understand what each other are really all about inside. This could be very exciting or it could also become a very tense time for all of the boys. Reading onward is the only way to find out.

I think Amos just sighed he divorce papers here. Or they will be signed soon. Nic I am sure was blind sided by Amos. But still he should not have gone after Amos as well. Maybe Joey will be able to shed some light on some of the things that Amos has been doing in the past? I am on Nic's side here.

I am also wondering about this fantasic story. This story caught my attention from the first chapter. I can also understand the pressures of writing a story as this. But is there going to be a continuation of this story or will we be left with no future knowledge of all of our close friends we have been with all along.

Johathan is comparing Maddox to Drew. Maddox is comparing Jonathan to his other hookups. So when wiil both of these "boys" begin to use their brains and not their bodies to talk for them. Jonathan needs to sit down and have nice calm "this is me moment " with Maddox. Maddox needs to do the same with Jonathan. Let boy of these boys spill their guts to each other. Then they can figure out what they want, if anything with the other. Jonathan needs to either talk with his family with or without Maddox. But regardless he needs to close the book on his family for good or open the book wide and tell his family what happened with Drew. Make then sit and listen for a change. When Jonathan gets things out in the open with his family and with Maddox. Then it is time for him and Maddox to be a couple in front of everyone. If Jonathan is really physically into Maddox and Maddox is really into Jonathan. Then they both need to say so to each other and get the show on the road. Maddox has been giving mixed signals to his friends about this. Jonathan has been giveing mixed signals to himself as well. Both must figure out who the hell they are and what they want. Put both of them in a room toegether and let them figure things out in a day or two. Good read. Love this about college boys in love with someone and they are afraid of showing to others. But I also understand what the problems that can also rise up.

Karl needs to find himself and move on with his life and to study just a little more intently If he is wanting to be a pilot. It seems that he cannot focus on what should be something very important which would be part of the group and being able to focus when he is in the air. Karl also misses his family i am sure, Who would not miss their own family knowing the Germans have taken control of his homeland. Does not know what is happening with his family.

So who is kidding who here. Has Alex been fooling himself that he was finished with his parents. Where the shrinks fooling Alex with what he thought was an answer to his childhood. Is River fooled as well about things that Alex went through while in school. Seeing his so called bedroom and the lack of anything showing he had even been around. What is dear old dad been doing? Hiding under a rock someplace? If Finn stopped texting Alex, then Alex stopped as well, Who was going to make the first attempt to settle things. Why did the shrinks not have a few sessions about this. Did Alex even tell the doctors about Finn? Yes it was a really stupid idea to go to a bar there. Great idea? Not!! Now it seems like time for River, Alex and Finn, all sit down in the booth and either cry together or talk to one another and find out what they should do. We do not even know what is wrong with Alex's mother yet. Is she dying, is she having mental issues because of Alex leaving the way he did. Not much information for understanding what is wrong with her. Alex needs to come to grips with what is happening and him, River and Finn all help each other as I am sure all need some help from the others . Great chapter with a almost known ending. A little different way to have them come together but might be very effective as well.

I am sure there are many good reasons for not continuing with more chapters. I am still saddened by not being able to continue reading this saga of Daniel and Dustin, who apparently the only ones left alive in the area they are trapped within. At least the do have weapons they can use and are able to capture meat they can cook to eat. I have the feeling that both of these men have come together here at this point in each of their lives for a reason. I will be waiting to continue on with reading more chapters as soon as you are able to do so. Thank you for what you have done so far. I enjoy this quite a bit.

Alec is apparanetly working and doing well in that part of his life, as far as we know? River is also working but doing what? Finn has apparently stayed home and not accepted any scholarship from any school. But at what costs, DId he heip Milo his brother or did he not ? Alec is living in a delicate life. His home, his work, his friend are a part of his life but his parrents are still the anti gay squad that Alec tssel Going back to see his mother will bring back many of the issues that still plague Alec, I am not sure if it as a wise move for him or not. River will be with him, but River cannot be the one who decieds how to react to Finn whem he shows up. River can only be there as Alec's close friend. Alec's mother may not even know he is there to see ther. Maybe Alec will be too late to see his mother. He will regret not seeing her if she in danger of death. If she dies before he can see her and be able to tell her how she hurt him. I think Alec need to visitl his mother while he can. Finn probably will also know about Alec's mother being so ill and in the hospital. He may be ready to have Alec back into his life now. Who can tell. But regardless, your coming chapers will be filling all of us in about what this hospitalizatonhas cost Alec, and his own life? A great way to start the coming chapters. Jumping into the future so are by back tiwh the same people.

Alec and Finn both have been putting up with quite a lot from all of the others in school. Alec's parents are also not parents to him and when he is feeling that way his common sense will not work for him very well. Finn has seemed to be the stability in Alec's life for awhile now. I think if Finn had not come out as gay and also protecting Alec. Things would have fallen deeper for Alec with his parents not handling things themselves. I do feel sorry for Alec and for Finn. Finn is in a rather terrible relationship with Alec, but Finn also is aware there are things about Alec that he does understand. I have a feeling Finn is going to still be the hero here. But Alec also need to realize what is happening with Finn and his brother. Life is not very happy for either boy right now. They both are being pulled into different directions for different reasons. What if FInn and Alec as well at River all decide where they will be going to gether. Alec will still have River close as his good friend, Finn will be able to take advantage of the scholarships and Alec and Finn can continue with being who they really are. In love with each other.

I am and have enjoyed reading this. I also am a little saddened by not being able to continue reading. It is a great story about those who have gone through something terribel and as well as the reason they are there together. Maybe the two of them will continue on together after the help does arrive. At least one can hope. Thanks.

For all of us who have been reading your story. It brings some memories back to me and I am sure to others as well. This was such a touching story to read, but also one that meant so much for you as well. Giving us your stories as this has done, should be continued. It may be a difficult thing for you to accept as well. I can also understand this as well. But the way your story flowed and the way the characters in the story were written about. Made the entire experience of reading this something that all of us can imagine as well with our own lives, good or bad. This will make all of us enjoy the things that are around us just a little more than before. Thank you. I think you have some fans that will enjoy your writings.

Jonathan just experienced his fist cock in his body. He will remember that moment for the rest his life. He will also remember everthing about what he felt. I do think that Maddox is going to end up feeling the same way as Jonathan did when he filled him with his cum. I do beleive that both boys will enjoy being the "bottom boy", They may find out that each of them needs this feeling more than they thought. Maybe things will be changing for both of them. Could there be a possiblity that some of Maddox's house mates will get involved here with Maddox first when he now knows the pleasures that Jonathan had. Maybe Maddox will want to be the bottom boy of the house when Jonathan is not there. There are so many directions for both boys to go. I think this chapter is just the beginning of Maddox finding his place in the art of love making as well as Jonathan finding his way as well. I hope they all find what they have been looking for for so long. Let the next chapters lead us all to the temptations of the male body and the pleasures as well.

Connor is the one who has been truamtized by what the directors had done. There could have been a different way to handle what I am sure Kyle was responsible for. Just my own thought there as he was Connor's best friend and also knew what was happening. Maybe he thought he was losing his friend? I do not know myself, but that sounds like a logical reaction for a young teen. The reaction of the parents was not surprising to me. But now the directors are now in the middle of what Connor is dealing with just at much as parents are. Parents of both boys may be reacting to the way the directors handled this. At least I hope the parents are reacting to the directors tastless actions.

It appears Connor and Jarrod has now been introduced to each other in a way that neither will forget. Connor is now feeling the blissful feeling of man love as well as Jarrod. Their relationship is either now sealed between them so staying apart soon is going to be leaving both of them feeling empty without the other. This is going to be an interesting story in the coming chapters. I also think Connor's parents have seen the changes in him. He may be thinking on way they will deal with and react to his coming out to them. I think Connor may be the one getting surprised with what his parents tell him about knowing he is gay. Mothers all have this inner instinct about their children. Mom's know best. Dad's can also be aware of these changes and demeanor of their children. It is Connor who my be the one surprised. Let hope this bonding they both have will continue and both stay the course with each other.

I am beginning to think that Dani 'may be the key of the rebirth and of Dahlia. Does Ciprian know more about this than we think? Does he see Dani as a threat that is more than Dani understands yet? I think when Dani becomes 18 on his birthday. Things may be a changing! Will Dani's powers enter a new level more intense than he realizes? This merging of Dani and Vincent, may be more powerful that we think. Dani is now becoming a part of what Vincent is or will be. Dani will become more than he had ever thought. I do think the next chapters will be very interesting. Will Ciprian be eliminated? Or will he try become the power behind Vincent's back? Mystery, love and sex with vampires. What other wonderful things will be coming in the chapters ahead??