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It appears that we have a very serious condition here now Armand and Colin seem to have caught this condition! I wonder if there is a antidote for this condition of total love that seems to have afflicted these two young men. I hope their condition becomes even more catching.
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Finn has taken a huge step in his life and in his circle of "friends". If he feels as though they will be the ones who will be on outside so to speak. Alex and Finn will be the talk of the halls at school. It also appears the Finn seems to have his thoughts planned as best he can. He has feelings for Alex and also knows Alex does have difficulties with being close and surrounded. Finn has recognized this from the beginning and has taken things slowly for Alex benefit. Who could ask more of someone than what Finn as already done. Alex, own peace of mind my be slowly becoming more at ease with new feelings that he is having. Finn and Alex just may have a difficult time at school. Most young people in high school do have problems when they are different to others who do not understand themselves. I hope that as soft and kind that Finn and Alex both were there in the bedroom. That this kindness and softnes will let their budding relationship move forward at the pace they both will need. Kudos to River as well. He sees what has been happening and is also helping Alex as well. He does not appear to be jealous of what is happening with Finn and Alex. He is almost a match maker. I hope hes continues to be of help to both Finn and Alex. Waiting for the next chapter as well
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This must be because of Sammy putting all of that garlic in the soup. I wonder if people can get a reaction to garlic that makes their bodies overreact to certain stimuli? Both have a very close relationship on a bad day. But what will happen when a very good day arrvies? Will this brotherly love for each other really blossem suddenly or will Jakey, who seems to be more of the active one of the two. Notice what is happening and expand upon it, or has already with that last kiss he gave Sammy? It is going to be a wonderful cooking show. If things keep procressing the way they are now. The filming of Sammy's cooking show may need some longer editing done? So what wonderful meal will Sammy make for Jakey when things begin so simmer even more? Two young brothers who already have a wonderful relationship with each other, can only move towards more intimate areas of touching and kissing. A great way to slowly bring the physical aspects of brotherly love into the story.
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Chapter 1 Getting It Together
bottomguy commented on Ancient Battlecry's story chapter in Chapter 1 Getting It Together
So far so good. At least he is talking to Mr Perfect. In a sort of timidly way. Why did he not just open his mouth and say what he was actually thinking. What did he have to lose. At that point he really did not have much to continue with the conversation without some sort of interest. Strange way to get started meeting someone who makes you so interested that you begin to draw his covered penis in class. Maybe he is trying to be less interested than he wants to be. Will need to see how this plays out for our artisitic runner. -
Jarrod and Connor will learn that discovery about who you are attached to physically even in new relationship. You will learn about your other half in many ways you had not even begin imagining yet. There will always be something new and different about who you love and what they learn about you at a different pace then what you may. The excitement of learning about who you love is part of the journey you are on. Just make sure to enjoy what you have at the moment. Learning something new and different can be enjoyable as much as it can also make you fearful. But what you learn about each other everyday is something that you will never lose. Knowledge about your love and his about you will something the both of you will have forever. Make the best of what you learn and also what there is tha makes things difficult for you as well. Life will be an adventure for both of you now in a world that is not as accepting as it should be. But there too can be change. Family can sometimes be the worst part of coming out. Play your knowledge you learn everyday into how you want to go forward especially with family. You will know when the time is correct for you to let your family into you life as you have with who you also love now. Go boldly, go slowly and go with love and experience what the world has to show you about life. Enjoy what you have
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Karl sounds like he is really still lost without George being close to him. I think Karl is missing more than George, he is missing the touch of a man not just George. Karl has been struck with the feelings of love for another man, not neccessarily George. I hope Karl will find what he is looking for to allow him to feel good about himself inside and then be able to sleep once again. Karl need that to continue on with his deciding to join the RAF.
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Okay For Me To Hold Your Hand
bottomguy commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Okay For Me To Hold Your Hand
Jonathan is following his past exeriences with Drew thinking he will be let down again. But still Jonathan is also feeling the sensations the Maddox is giving him with two fingers searching and finger fucking Jonathan tight back entrance. Jonathan has also felt and heard the response of Jonathans fingers in Maddox before as well. Jonathan will know that next time he will need to be prepared for that Maddox wants to enter him with. I have a feeling though Maddox may also be clean and ready for some rear internal action from Jonathan. Maybe the both of them will experience the pleasures of being on the rear door receiving of such pleasures. What would I do if I were Jonathan. I would be ready to any and all to happen. Maddox is thinking he need to also be more roamactic wiith Jonathan. Maybe Jonathan will be a more aggressive romantic to Maddoxw taking him by surprise. So who will surprise the other first? I am putting my money on Jonathan to be the one who changes his attack with Maddox. Giving Maddox more to think about than he had ever expected. Regardless when two young men are having and enjoying each others bodies so much, Does it really matter which happens first? If it feels good then continue with what you are doing and enjoy the ride.- 20 comments
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Maybe mother should become more involved with Bouncer and get to understand him at a much closer distance!
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Chapter 9 - No Going Back
bottomguy commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 9 - No Going Back
If Jake felt what I think he has. This room may become an active classroom for these two boys. This may become a daily lunch time learning class for Jake. I will be ready to read about his education from Nic. Why not, when if feels good and it was good, why stop? -
I beleive that Maddox and Jonathan are two explosions waiting to go off at the same time. Maddox is intriged by ass play and Jonathan enjoys the giving pleasure side. So do we see Maddox more of receiving the things that Jonathan can give him that he has not had before. I see Maddox as the one who will be wanting of Jonathan shaft more than Jonathan wanting Maddox's shaft. This is going to be a enticeing 30 day adventure for both of our college men. But what of the Xpress. Suddenly there is nothing newsy for them yet?? Or is someone who knows what his taking place, just waiting for that newsworthy headline of the Bad man on campus getting his own treatment? Going to be interesting to see.
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I am sure Karl is going to have some more days ahead that will give him pause about his wanting to join the war. But he is in it now.
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Well Karl, is now where he will growing more and older here. He may even begin to grow a pair and stand up for himself possibly. Of course there always has to be a D***H*** someplace to get others riled up an irritated. But then Karl may end up paired us with Mr. Loud Mouth. This might be very interestin . Karl may be able to speak his native language as well here with fellow countrymen. It would be great if Karl actually became a flyer for the RAF. What surprises lie ahead of our young recruit?
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I want to see them, Please I want to read those comments from the paper. Tim should be happy that things are coming back to what should be normal. All depending the comments in the paper. Is the leaker in the DA's office going to continue to work there? What of the other victims of Bruce's rape victims? How many good comments will be seen in the paper as to those who still can only see the side of gay people that will bring the sins into the world. How nice it would be to see some revelation happen to those people. If they only knew that there are gay people all around them. Police officers, firefighters, doctors, nurses,business owners. Time for these people to figure out who it was that ended the rapes that happend. You would think some of these people would want to thank Tim and Stephen. But alas, maybe some day this may happen.
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I do think that Rich should have an article about those that were hurt my Bruce. At this time we know of who those who were assaulted Bruce. There are still questions about the leaks being given to Bruce. How many indivduals were vitcims and who were involved the the rapes. I would like to see some sort of accounting for all of those people as well. Tim and Stephen appear to be in the adoting mode now. Maybe they will be taking some time off for a little relax before they begin to look more deeply into adpting.
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I wonder what bomb Alex is going to print? Will it be more about Bruce? Did he confess to Alex about all of the rapes and did he give names as well of everyone involved in the rape gang. This article may be rather interesting and enlightening as well. We still have not heard from Donnie yet. What new bit of information will he be telling Tim? Donnie seems to be the one who gives the anwers to the many questions that are raised. He is better than a private investigator. What a team that would be Tim, Stephen and Donnie could be for anothe book to read. How about it??
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Very good chapters, but I agree what of Damien's father and what about Marc. This is not over yet I fear. I do feel like there are many unanswered questions now.
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What a chapter to read. I had expected Marc would be injured in the fight and Damine would rush to his side to protect him. But during battle of wars there is no victory for either side. Lifes are lost needlessly for what? Wars always hurt the ones that are being defended. Wars are not pretty or wonderful. Wars are themselves evil and as usless as well. If Marc can be brought back, will their love continue where it stopped when Marc was struck down? I do hope this is what happens. There must be some good out of this war. Should there not? Enjoyable reading I am hooked. Thank you.
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Will Alans feelings become a problem soon? Will the feelings Alan has for Damien become more or less intense and will Damien become to have feelings for Alan? I can foresee some problems arising with Alan, Damien and Marc. Who will win the affections of Damien? Who will win the affections from Alan? Will there be a major changing of feelings for others as well? Getting to be very interesting me. I would like to read more of this group's activities.
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I would not be sure if Rich was in Bruce's cell. Visitors are not allowed within the cell areas for many, many reasons. For their own protections mainly, but also for the protection of the inmate there. I have my own feelings about this suicide. If rich was inside the cell there should have been an officer there as well. Bruce was how tall? I cannot recall if we have known this. But the top bunks in jail cells are not ususally high enough to get a serious injury even with hanging. It must have taken Rich a very long time to find an officer to report this. Why did Rich not do something when Bruce suddenly hung himself. I am needing to see a complete forensics report on this one. It just seems a little to complete for me. But then. the scum bag is also dead. Tom needed to get his own relief from Bruce in his confession. Jails are different than prisons, but visits do not happen in the cells i either place. I think something is very off here. Opens up an opportunity for another investigation? Who would do such a thing? Lets ask Donnie!
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Is it okay to breath now???? This reminds me of my first time with twins. Bit were gay and identical twins as well, I mean identical twins. except one has this tiny little mole in the inside of his upper thigh that was the only difference between them. I was the receiving one for both of them. This story brought back memories of when young men enjoyed things together. Such a great chapter here. What more is coming infuture chapters? I hope more of the same. Thanks
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Finn is not overly excited is he, about Alec coming to the bonfire. Alex should take listen to River as it seems River can see the attraction Finn has with Alec. I think Alec is going to be surprised at the bonfire, more than he could imagine.
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Connor is gay and has revealed to his best friend Kyle that he is gay. But, that did not go as well as he was thinking. Connor has had his first lesson in coming out. It can be difficult to many as well. Now Jarrod who is also and not out, has just done so with another band member who just had the worst day. Jarrod should also move with ease here with Connor. Hormones can sometimes get in the way of common sense. Two young boys in high school and gay come out to each other. That can make a great bond with the both of them as well can also be rather difficult. So take is slow Jarrod. I think you will be rewarded with having a wonderful gay friend now.
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If Bruce in in jail. That is much different than Prison. But even in jails, news is discovered rather quickly at times. Newpapers are the mode of communication. IF Bruce has raped even more that we can imagine, there may be the possibilty that one of the officers at the jail is connected to Bruce's so called conquests. Maybe a relative of one of the officers in the jail or even someone who is spending time in jail. Bruce could very well end up a victim of his own devices .
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Chapter 8 - An Arrangement
bottomguy commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 8 - An Arrangement
I think Jake is going to suddenly fall hard and totally for Nic I think there is a huge suprise that is coming our way with this story. I do think that Jake will be able to do wonderful things with his body that Nic would enjoy as well. -
What is with not reading the papers? I want to know what was said in them as all reading this wonderful story do. Oh well. That's why it is called a story. Now that family is getting together once again, after such a long road to recovery as well.
