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So the big and powerful Jonathan was going to put a stop to Maddox?? And how did he think he would do this magic trick? I do think Maddox was on the right path of makin Jonathan come to him. And now we know that Jonathan does not have the will to stand up to our stud Maddox. But I do think Jonathan had a plan to pop Maddox's cherry when things become a little more intense shall we say. Now that Jonathan is to be a slave for a month. Which one of our guys here will truely be the slave? Maddox or Jonathan? I can see Maddox being overwhelmed when Jonathan begins to finger a nice tight back door of Maddox. Jonathan may well have the the plan to using his finger to get Maddox to where Jonathan can finally control him. What a turn of events that would be. And who knows, maybe this will lead Jonathan to becoming the roomie with Maddox and we may see who that actual slave will be behind their room door. Oh the sounds and smells of pure love may be in the air finally for our two boys. What fun will be happening in the coming chapters. Will Rusty become a part of this master/slave month as well? This can get real interesting. Time for more popcorn!!

YES, always will be a YES for me!!

I am wondering If the Good Dr. Bruce is beginning to hear little bits of information about the earthquake that is about to strike his world?

Always, War is Hell and there is Hell in War. Always. We will have to wait to find out if George is alive or dying and to find out if Karl does get George out as well.

Sounds like Austin may have an empty house again after the new tennants broke the lease. They sound like people who think that what they touch they own or have control over it. Shutting the door in Austin's face would make for some other thoughts if that had been myself. Now without knowing what transpired with Mr. Masters the attorney and the tennants, we will not know yet how that has turned out. Now the children of the tennants we assume are the ones who now are attempting to gain entry into Austins property. Would that make the children similar to the parents? Or could they be future friends with Austin? We can hope that is the case. It was great that Autsin was able to pick up on his brothers abuse and health. The Uncle and Aunt need to find out what happens when you commit attempted murder and child abuse. I do not think the courts will be very pleasant with this.

And to think that Bruce is a "respected Doctor"? What is his degree in? Sexual assault and rape? Maybe he should be presented with something like that infront of the student body! Just before he is charged with those crimes and assaults. I am sure he would be very comfortable being in an institution that has nothing but other men as long term tenants. Tim in on a mission and good for him.

Tim is trying to become the brother that he was not in Ann Marie's mind. So with everything he has been doing to look after her. I think the newspaper article will be Tims way of igniting a fire under those three less than human crap. This is going to open even more eyes as to what has happened during Ann Marie's high school years and possibly some others there as well. I wonder how many other girls at the high school during those years were victims as well? Suppose we may learn?

MIssing the Relm, Chris all the rest of our characters. When will the Relm be back? When will Chris defeat all of the evil that has been spreading? Will 2022 the the year of the Relm or will it be the end of the Relm? Very good and interesting reading. Need more of it. But I am now thinking that things may just quietly fade into the setting sun. Too bad this story has been such a burden which most of us cannot fatham. Maybe things will resolve themselves and once again the sun may shine upon your thoughts.

What I thought was going to be a sad family story was suddenly turned into something bright and cheerful. Even thought Austin has lost his Grandmother who was his Guardian as well, now has her to thank for his talent and the cottage that is now his. Not to mention the trust fund she has for him. Austin now needs to locate his younger brother and lets see how this will progress. I can hope that his younger brother has been good since living with the Uncle. This I am sure is going to be some good reading in the following chapters. Thank you for this Christmas saga.

It appears that Karl was good for George. So far George has not fallen into his suicidal thoughts, yet? I am wondering if Karl will end up back on the farm to help? Since they were so amazed that he knew how to milk a cow. Doesn't everyone? My concern now is that Karl and George are still a ways away from returning back to the Hopkins home. While their skinny dipping in the water, their activities might just well be seen by some others who are not so inclinded? What could happen to two young men during wartime enjoying each others bodies and carrying food. If food is becoming short supplied. Maybe George and Karl should be more aware of what is happening around them and where they are. The joys of young men exploring nature the natural way. So far things seem to be traveling somewhat smoothly.

Looks as though Karl is very good at making George relax is you want to call that relaxing. But George obviously enjoyed Karl's therapy. Going to be interesting to see what Paul's advice to Karl will be.

Is Jonathan really going to teach who a lesson. Sounds like Maddox has already got the teaching started on Jonathan. But then Jonathan does have a punch that may, could, possibly, sorta be a little more powerful when needed? We will see. I think Jonathan may be in for more that he thinks. But that is why we are reading to find out what happens. Sounds also like Jonathan was set up by the cute young heart throb that has Ray all lathered up. Going to me an interesting nex chapter.

Politics Essell, Politics. The success of their misson seems to want to take ownership of this planet. I may be wrong, but things appear to warrant that idea. I do think the scientists want to seperate Essell from Garjah and even hopper. Which may be something interesting as well. I love this.

Way to GO Essel!!

Karl it appears to be getting more pleasure than pain with each time George shows what he wants with Karl. It is non-consensual rape? Is it just plain rape? Karl does not have a grasp on the language, so even if he was saying "no or stop", would George understand? Would George even care if he did understand Karl saying no? I do think Karl is getting those feelings that nearly all of us have had at one point in time. There is some pain, there is some pleasure and for those who are new to gay sex. There is also the feelings of fullness, emptiness, passion, guilt, possibly love, hate or even have not feelings at all. Karl is in the very beginning of sexual actions between to men. He has not been given the talk apparently by his parents. So is George going to be his instructor in the art of gay male passion and sex? Or is Paul going to be a part of this education as well or totally? I can see this story progressing both ways. Will Karl, Paul and George become, lets say more involved with Karl's sex educational activities? Or will Paul and George become a sexual couple? Will things progress to where Karl is finding his true self and looking for the sexual pleasure that he is getting with Paul or George, or with both of them even? Will Karl progress into others who are with the same physical attractions with other men? What if George since he is not enrolled in the Universtity now, become a part of the war machine that England has in fighting the Germans? If he does become a soldier, will he be a medic? If he does become a part of the war and leaves, what of Karl and Paul. Do they continue with Karl's sexual education? Do they become more than teacher/student? What ingriging new twists will we see coming in future chapters. So far I have enjoyed the somewhat slow beginnngs of Karl's feelings about other men. I mean after all when you have not been given the 'Talk" by your parents. Get pushed away from your family by your own father, Does Karl even understand yet what his father has done for him by getting him away from Hitler's mad way of world dominataion. Only one knows the answer to that question. Let's hope you will eventually give us what Karl is feeling about so many lessons that must be learned while also having to understand the language, why he was pushed away from his family and why things are making him feel uncomfortable, pleasure, pain, joy, uncertainty or any other number of thoughts he will have in his future. Karl may be a young man who was forced from his family by that same father who always was there for him. Karl must be able to be his own man at some point. Yes give us your profile of the characters. I think this would be great but also have just a little saddness in knowing before the story is finished. The best of both worlds? Or not. Either way, lets read on.

So all is well now with the families that have grown upon us. The three Amigos (police offficer Benny, the "good" Doctor Bruce Stevens and the high school teacher who seem to be the ones involved in raping Tim's older sister in high school). But is this the last of those three? Or will something creep into the happy family that will bring the wrath of Tim down upon the three who skipped town. I can only hope that those three will be dealt with the way those types should be. Locked up and the only key to their cell just happens to get lost. Or possibly they themselves will discover what rape is like. As I hear there is sometimes things as that do happen inside some prisons around the world. What a nice touch some things can bring into life. Love the way things are so far. Thanks

I do think it is time for Tim and the doctor that is treating Ann Marie to get the State Department of Criminal Investigation involved now. Get restraining orders from the Judge that is not a friend to the high school teacher, the police officer and the good Dr. Bruce Stevens. Keep all of them away from Tim , Stephen, Randy, mom and Ann Marie. The farther the better. Tim must clue the doctor in about what is happening now. Maybe the doctor can assist with this bag of sexual predators.

Well now, isn't this a fine pile of rotten fish. We have a Doctor, a police officer and a teacher at the old high school and all of them are still doing what together?? Now we have a police officer who seems to have tried to basically abduct Tim's mother with a not so good warrant. I have a feeling that our good officer may have just jumped out of the frying pan and into Tim's fire! Poor Benny. The good doctor Bruce Stevens it appears now is also part of this paper they called a warrant. Now there are the police officer(Benny), Dr. Bruce Stevens that are both involved in the serving of a not so valid warrant. Would you consider that at being involved with conspiring to commit a crime? Damn close!! And what of our teacher who is teaching at the old high school. What subjects does he specialize in? What wonders may appear when we find out more about him. I think Tim either knows what is going on in town now or he is very close to having a very huge problem. So is the police chief involved in our little activities circle along with Benny the police officer and with the high school teacher? This is getting to be a very involved and possibly messy conspiracy gang. Rapes, cover ups, possible drugs involved by the good Dr. Bruce Stevens. What more would you want in a nice and calm small community. Which I will leave you with one more thought. How many rapes are not reported in this small community with the police, high school teacher and a doctor all who may be in charge of this activity. Oh my, oh my. What a tangled web of lies do we have here. More chapters please.

If the "good" Dr. Stevens is the rapist when in high school. What else is he doing now as a doctor? Is he still having some continued activities with other women yet? Maybe there is a bigger fish to catch here once all of the information comes to light about our Dr. Stevens. I am thinking there will be many surprises that may come to light once Tim and Stephen discover what was happening during the high school years. Maybe Dr. Bruce Stevens has more than a medical practice that is not so public? I sure do hope that Tim and his family can be back together again after all of the trash is exposed and thrown out.

I think Karl is just a little befuddled by the entire thing. He has good feeling, bad feelings, unknown feelings and feelings that kissing George is not as bad as hie thought af first. Need to read more before I decide if Karl has becom smitten with George and his talents. Love this so far.

What type of Doctor is Bruce Stevens? Is he related to maybe the Chief of Police, possibly the son? Now we have a a great big can of spoiled vegtables that is going to starte smelling the place up. What if "Dr. Bruce Stevens", is related to the Police Chief or the mayor and his buddies from school are still enjoying their little group of highschool buddies in some not so amusing extra curricular activites still? What if we wait to see just how corrupt this "Dr. Bruce Stevens" actually is or possibly was after Timothy gets in his face. Just supposing is all, but I do think this is going to get very interesting and possibly eye opening. Tim's mother may be getting some sort of medications from her doctor that are not that helpful for her. I would like to see this group of old school buddies get taken to the cleaners (if they are involved of course). Let's go Tim!!

I think Eric and Peter are going to make Makarovia a place where people will know just where it is located and who made it so popular. This chapter is showing that there is hope gaining for the Makarovia population. The next chapters will be fantastic to read.

Maybe Eric and Peter could have a segment on the broadcasing they are planning. A broadcast of just the two of them doing what they do everyday. Sort of a modern Laurel and Hardy Show. Ok, maybe I am dating myself, but they did entertain just like Abbott and Costello did. Ok, so I enjoyed both of those shows. Eric and Peter could become known as the two Royals that brought the country together during the childhood of their broadcasting the news and what ever else. Put in a little laugh or two from the most admired two in the Country. Just a sudden thought is all. But then again?? Great chapter once again.

Kyle and his mom will be much happier without that royal POS. I can understand though why Kyle took off from his parents. Maybe he should have maned up and gone to the authorities and got child services involved, maybe that would have gotten his mom in trouble as well. But now he and his mom are together and struggling to get through and beyond all of the tears and beatings. I hope there will be a sequel as well to Kyle and Mattias future and well as Mattias's mother and brother. Would be nice to have a greater ending to such a sad story of life that many young people also have. Great job with this one. I hope you can continue with lets say, book two??

I am thinking the meeting Tim's dad had with Ann Marie and the doctor was an eye opener for dad. He might have just discovered what all those years of AM and being so distant with the family were all about. It very well could have been when Tim and Stephen were getting bullied in school and those same bully's are responsible for Ann Marie's assault. I can only hope AM will be able to progress back into the family and Tim's mom will also be able to heal as well. Stephen and Tim seem to be moving straight towards having children soon. I am wondering who and where this will involve?