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Wow what a start! Looking forward to the developing story!
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Opening Night and Closing Thoughts
Modified Cub commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Opening Night and Closing Thoughts
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I can see how Hunter could love Miguel - he's handsome and charming and tender especially when they're alone. Hunter does seem to have a tendency to sabotage his relationships though. Lots of background info in this chapter about the country, which I enjoyed. I was impressed with Miguel's discussion with Hunter's dad.
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Seamen depositing their semen! Jody has great tastes and a penchant for finding willing guys full of testosterone to share with him!
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WOW! More twists and turns! Simply unbelievable!
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HOT night so far for the insatiable Jody!
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"Will It Always Be Like This?"
Modified Cub commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Will It Always Be Like This?"
An absolute masterpiece of a chapter, ending a story that had me engrossed in from the start! A beautiful, powerful tale of two souls who endured such divergent trauma only to find their true love in the unlikeliest of places and through wild circumstances! Bravo and thank you @Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro- 25 comments
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Seems like Jody's life in the Navy is working out just fine, and he'll get plenty of sea-men lol!
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"All The Trees Of The Field Will Clap Their Hands"
Modified Cub commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "All The Trees Of The Field Will Clap Their Hands"
A monumental victory for Liam and the future child actors was established in that courtroom. Marina finally got a dose of reality by the judge's epic takedown of her years of manipulation. Liam's indie movie was a smash hit, earning him accolades he probably never envisioned achieving without Marina's oversight. Matteo, glorious, hilarious Matteo, is Liam's manager in a role he was born to do! And sweet Hudson is still there for Liam in all the ways that matter, including a surprise birthday party while running a successful restaurant! Kudos for another spectacular chapter and another sizzling sex scene!- 20 comments
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Great chapter! Hunter is so reckless - I kept thinking something was going to happen at the park. He may think he passes as just another gringo but I'm sure the locals know how to spot someone tied to a "diplomat" quite easily. I was surprised somewhat that Miguel is really into Hunter and that he's a bottom. I'm unsure why - just didn't line up with the vibes but I guess it makes sense. The panic bracelet seems like it would make Hunter more of a target too.
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Damn, what a hot weekend! Hopefully Jody found his new sex-mates!
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Yet another powerful chapter full of... everything! More about the legal wranglings, the interview years later, the quick-witted Mateo and his man, Liam's fierceness towards Hudson's safety, Hudson's calm yet authoritative way of earning a promotion, and finally, more HOT sex! Thanks for another masterpiece in this series @Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro !
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Chapter 16: Dean feels threatened
Modified Cub commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 16: Dean feels threatened
Goodness, I hate Sofia and Aiden with a vengeance! The levels that they stoop to are absolutely cruel. Please don't do anything to Dean! -
Heavy chapter but feels important to the climb back to the top for Liam and hopefully a brief interlude until we see our guys back together and happy again. You've created two guys who have us readers fully invested and clamoring for a happy, thriving, loving, long-lasting relationship.
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Seems as though Jody has multiple possibilities!
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Chapter 14 - All's Well That End's Well
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 14 - All's Well That End's Well
I could picture the last scene so clearly and it was beautiful! I'm glad they finally figured out how to navigate their issues and hope they have a memorable vacation and a beautiful life together! -
Breaking Hearts Ain't What It Used To Be
Modified Cub commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Breaking Hearts Ain't What It Used To Be
I give Hunter credit for at least breaking up with Yeison before going off for the weekend with Miguel. The naked cuddling sounds romantic. I do believe that there will be friction between the friend group amidst the news of the breakup. I want to like Hunter but in some ways, he's just bouncing around looking for the love he doesn't get from his dad and has missed since his mom's death.- 25 comments
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Another excellent chapter! I think Liam did record the conversation and that will become the centerpiece of his case against her and the machine and the premise of what sounds like a juicy documentary chronicling how Hollywood grooms its young stars and takes control of their lives. Marina sounded desperate for sure!
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Wonderful recovery by Nate and a happy ending for all! Enjoyable story!
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Well, we knew she'd go to great lengths to control the machine that's made her filthy rich. Buckle up!
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A monumentally sad chapter but one that was deeply emotional for all involved. It's sad to think people in real life are subjected to these situations daily. I too want to see how this ends.
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"With My Whole Heart"
Modified Cub commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "With My Whole Heart"
Another powerful emotional chapter! Seems like clear lines have been established on both sides and now it's time for the war. Both guys have some emotional damage from the way they were raised. -
Chapter 13 - Jeopardy
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Jeopardy
It was time for the brutally honest conversation. Liam could definitely use some counselling. Adrian understands what he's signing up for. Very raw chapter and powerful indeed. -
That first part was terrifying but thanks to Robbie and Sue, Mr. Lube survived. Typically, Don had to be Don. Nicola will likely continue to tease Robbie but I don't think she'll ever forget how he saved her boyfriend. Rory definitely confuses the hell out of me and has to at least be bi-curious. Most teenage boys would not deny staring at a girl's boobs. Excellent chapter!
