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Chapter 3 - Coincidence
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Coincidence
Great chapter! I could feel Liam's pain and grief. Memories can be bittersweet and cruel at times, but important for us to remember the good times with the ones we loved and lost. -
Incredibly erotic! I definitely enjoyed that!
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Chapter 7: Where Hearts Go to Shatter!
Modified Cub commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: Where Hearts Go to Shatter!
I think it's a good thing - when talented writers are able to evoke a myriad of emotions from their readers it shows a true talent - at least in my humble opinion! -
At least Joel didn't punch dumbass Jaxton although he's becoming quite the social media star at his new school. I thought Colt would've reacted differently when Joel offered to help warm him up - like said something defensively. I have an inclination that someone catches Javin all cozied up in the tent. Joel definitely will be feeling all that beer the next day. Javin should also know by now to just skip the lame post-game field parties and get to partying on their own - like back at Davin's - where there's no one waiting for them!
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I feel bad for Kris - his life finally feels like it's coming together then, bam, Ethan's confession, the new job offer, the complicated relationship with Dean, the choices he'll have to make! I hope he takes the Toronto promotion and takes his mom. I also feel for Leah and the anguish she's experiencing. Dean is definitely a conflicted, complicated person who seems to genuinely want to be with Kris, yet his upbringing and self-denial could ruin his potential relationship with Kris.
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Chapter 7: Where Hearts Go to Shatter!
Modified Cub commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: Where Hearts Go to Shatter!
You certainly have a way to make me feel multiple emotions at once with your writing - anger, sadness, despair, you name it! -
"Melancholia" (Part 1)
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Melancholia" (Part 1)
I'll admit I'd forgotten about this sexy tale - but glad to see a new chapter where some family details are revealed. -
Treizième partie : Les Entremets
Modified Cub commented on W_L's story chapter in Treizième partie : Les Entremets
Bittersweet chapter. Glad to see Jasmine bounce back and gain success. Ritchie was an unknown blessing. Reese & Dexter finally thriving and then, bam, the return of cancer. Don't get me started on immigration - unless you're a direct descendent of Native Americans - you're from an immigrant bloodline. Great chapter -
Precious - every single line - just adorable and so sweet!
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Liam's really in his own head about the coincidental run-ins with Adrian. Was Adrian there of his own volition or had Rod mentioned to him the same workout center Liam just happened to visit like clockwork every Sunday? Interesting chapter and we heard more about how Kevin's decline began. Can't wait to see what happens further!
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A beautiful ending (for now?) to a superbly written story! Like my fellow readers implied, I'd love to revisit this loving family down the road and read more about their lives. Thanks for sharing with us!
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Wonderful, endearing chapter had me tearing up several times!
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Cathartic chapter!
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A thoroughly enjoyable experience for us all 🔥
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So, Hunter's expanding his circle and seems to have romantic options yet I feel like Miguel may indeed be a "plant" to keep tabs on his dad's whereabouts or actual job. Perhaps something develops with Yeison? Interesting chapter
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I really like this so far - it's a unique and refreshing concept. I'd love to read more. Thanks for sharing!
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Kate was a surprise and I'm sure Aiko would pass out from that news! Good on Dad for standing up for Creek & Dailan. I love them together and hope they get their happily ever after! It feels like it's meant to be especially how he sacrificed himself to save Forest!
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Yeah, the discussion among the guys was interesting. Seems like Len & Jody are about to further Jody's education in a meaningful way!
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Firstly, thanks for the early release @Krista and a Happy Thanksgiving to you and all the writers and fellow readers! I'm certainly thankful for my GA family. I'm glad Joel decided to play baseball and think it will be good for him. He does seem to be taking stock of certain guys around him and maybe he finds Mr. Braden attractive? Colt had no business blurting out Joel's sexuality, but he did seem genuinely apologetic. Like others, I wonder how Javin will be perceived once they're discovered? I could see Celia or Lacey catching them kissing. Even though we're all wanting to see Cody I'll take any bonus chapters we can get! Awesome chapter!
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Hot start!
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The City of Eternal Spring
Modified Cub commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in The City of Eternal Spring
Interesting start... I'm woefully undereducated about Colombia but have always enjoyed learning new things and this tale thus far will be a mixture of education about the country and Hunter's exciting tango with hot locals. -
Heartwarming chapter!
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Sounds like a promising semester ahead for Jody - perhaps he'll be quite busy!? I also enjoy the pics - adds to the context! Jody has good taste 😝
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A perfect segue from freshman to sophomore year! I'm glad our boys had a good summer and found ways to deal with their issues. Looking forward to the next installation of adventures. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us!
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Chapter 2: Julian feels trapped in everything
Modified Cub commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Julian feels trapped in everything
Great chapter! What interesting developments! Is Julian adopted? Where has Aiden been all this time? I can't wait to see what happens next!
