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realization - Word of the Day - Thu Mar 19, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Realization (early 1600s) stems from the Medieval Latin adjective realis ("actual", from res "thing") to the French verb réaliser, then to réalisation. It was formed by adding -ize (a Greek-derived verb suffix meaning make) and -ation (a Latin noun suffix indicating a process or result) to the root real. According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the noun realization is in the early 1600s, with the earliest evidence dating to 1611 by the lexicographer Randle Cotgrave. Its original meaning was "the act of making something real" or "to bring into existence" (1610s), while later usage covered "obtaining or amassing" (1753) and "understanding clearly" (1775). The verb "realize" (bring into existence) is also recorded in the 1610s, with early evidence found in the work of John Florio. -
This is scary. Think about it. Things that most people use daily and are good tools can be combined to completely take away your privacy. Surveillance cameras to protect your home + WiFi + 5G + AI = a total loss of privacy. George Orwell's fear about Big Brother watching you can now become a non-physically invasive (because no one has to come into your home or follow you around) reality!
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Voice is the unique personality, tone, and rhythm of a story, acting as the primary tool to build reader connection, establish tone, and distinguish the work in a crowded market. A distinct, authentic voice guides the narrative's perspective, creates emotional resonance, and improves readability. Key aspects of the importance of voice include: Creating Immersion and Tone: Voice sets the mood (e.g., formal, casual, humorous) and directly impacts how readers experience the story's scale and scope. Establishing Authenticity: A genuine voice builds trust with readers, whereas an inauthentic or overly stylized voice (sometimes called "MFA voice") can break engagement. Building Character Identity: Distinct character voices ensure readers know who is speaking, preventing confusion and enhancing characterization by reflecting their unique personalities, backgrounds, and worldviews, says a Reddit post. Driving Narrative Propulsion: A strong, engaging voice pulls readers through the story by providing entertainment, humor, or deep emotional insight. Author Differentiation: A consistent voice helps build reader loyalty and makes an author's work recognizable among others. Voice consists of the author's personal style (word choice, sentence structure) and the specific, unique voices of the characters and narrator.
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The word "voice" originates from the Latin Vox (accusative vocem) is the direct ancestor, closely related to vocare "to call". It means sound, utterance, or speech and entered Middle English through Old French voiz around the 13th century. It traces back to the Proto-Indo-European root *\*wekʷ-*, meaning "to speak". While originally referring specifically to sounds made by the mouth (13c.), the usage expanded to mean utterance, song, or opinion. According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of voice as a noun in English is from around 1300. Noun Use: Recorded around 1300, notably in St. Francis. It also appeared in works such as the Wycliffite Bible (c. 1382). Also used in the Wycliffite Sermons to describe John the Baptist as the "vois of Goddis werd", 1425. Verb Use: The earliest evidence for the verb voice is later, found in the 1429 Norwich Constitutions. The word was established during the Middle English period (1150—1500). Around 1600 the word "voice" was used to mean giving utterance to opinions or feelings.
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Yes, I think Clint's spending time with Michael and Devin has paid off with him growing up a bit, and because Daniel is nearly a year older than Clint, he's a little easier to influence. They appear to be good for each other, and although Daniel tends to give in to pressure from Clint, like with their open nakedness after just meeting Michael and Devin, Daniel also seems to have a calming effect on Clint. 😃 Thank you for the compliment and I'm glad you're still enjoying this story.
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I live in both NY and PA before moving to GA. 😃
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Yes, Chris, so far a good time is being had by all!
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It is a fun and exhilarating experience and I'm glad you had a chance to experience it as well.
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@sandrewn, do you have a green spider for St. Patrick's Day, with or without a shamrock or a shillelagh!
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The word "shamrock" derives from the Gaelic/Irish word seamróg, which is the diminutive of seamair "clover"), translating literally to "little clover" or "young clover". It stems from Old Irish semróc, rooted in Proto-Celtic semarā. Historically associated with St. Patrick, it became a key Irish national emblem in the 18th century. Frequently identified by botanists as Trifolium dubium (lesser clover) or Trifolium repens (white clover). Folklore Connection: Legend holds that St. Patrick used the three-leafed plant to explain the Holy Trinity (three parts, one plant) to Irish pagans. Symbolism Shift: Used as a national symbol since the 18th century, it was worn on St. Patrick's Day and was associated with Irish rebellion and nationalism, particularly when worn during the 1798 Irish Rebellion, leading to its restriction by British authorities. According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the word "shamrock" in English is from around 1571. It appears in the writings of Edmund Campion, a Jesuit and scholar, specifically in his work History of Ireland. Other early mentions were made by Stonyhurst (1577), Spenser (1596), and John Gerard (1597), who described it as a type of trefoil or clover.
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And over in the Emerald Island you can hear shouts of "Erin go braugh", which means "Ireland forever". To those of you who share a bit of the blarney in your veins and your DNA shows a link to the homeland, like mine, then a Happy St. Patrick's Day to you! And if you should decide to indulge at some point, which seems to be embedded in Irish genetics, don't drink too much green beer. Be warned that those who get inebriated often end up seeing leprechauns running around the bar/pub before they pass out in a drunken stupor. And please, don't drink and drive.
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I considered that, but then I worried that if they shifted in front of the boys, you can't always count on someone that age to not slip and tell someone else. It might happen when the two of them are talking about it, maybe at school or somewhere else that others might overhear. That would take this story in an entirely new direction. Possibly it would mean everyone packing up and moving away with no forwarding address. It could also mean the destruction of two wetsuits, if it happened during this trip. 😧 I think Michael and Devin were alarmed enough thinking that Preston might have figure it out, and he's more like to keep their secret, since he already believes there might be shifters running around.
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I didn't realize you lived in PA. And yes, using the toilet is also a problem when you're in a raft, so I'm hoping there were no females in your group as you were hanging off the raft to take care of that function.
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Chapter 40 – Daniel When we got back to our room at the Quality Inn, we carried our wetsuits and booties inside, we began to get undressed. “Daniel, did you bring long underwear with you?” “Yes, I was at Clint’s house when you called and told him about bringing them, so Mr. Fowler drove me home so I could get my long underwear to put in with my other things.” “That’s good,” I said, “because wearing them under your wetsuit will help to keep you a little warmer.” As I
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The first thing I noticed was those fangs! Nasty looking. The the artwork - comical horns and emphasis around the mouth. With orange and black striped legs, I would dub this the Halloween spider.
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visibility - Word of the Day - Mon Mar 16, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Visibility in storytelling—making characters, themes, and narratives prominently seen—is crucial for fostering human connection, building trust, and driving action. It enables audiences to see themselves in stories, turning abstract ideas into memorable, relatable experiences that, according to studies, increase audience engagement, brand loyalty, and personal reflection. Importance of visibility in stories: Human Connection & Trust: Sharing personal, authentic stories humanizes creators or brands, making them more relatable and trustworthy rather than just informational. Engagement Through Relatability: When audiences see their own struggles, growth, and emotions reflected in a story, they are more likely to stay engaged and connected. Memorable Impact: A visible story that focuses on sensory language and emotional cues creates an experience rather than just delivering information, making it more impactful and memorable. Driving Action and Reflection: Visible, intentional stories encourage reflection, prompting audiences to align their actions with their values and engage with the content, turning "out of sight" topics into remembered, actionable insights. Visible vs. Invisible Narratives: Effective storytelling often uses a "visible" plot (the action) to represent an "invisible" theme (personal growth or emotional journey), adding depth and resonance. Strategic Positioning: In the digital age, visible, consistent storytelling helps creators stand out. By focusing on authenticity over perfection, storytelling helps bridge the gap between a message and its audience, ensuring it is felt, remembered, and acted upon. -
visibility - Word of the Day - Mon Mar 16, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Visibility (n.) originated around 1400, directly from Late Latin visibilitatem ("condition of being seen"), derived from visibilis ("that may be seen"), which stems from the Latin visus (pat participle of videre, "to see). It combines the Latin root vid- (meaning "to see" or "know") with the suffix -ility, denoting a state. It came into Middle English through Old/Middle French visibilité. Initially meant "condition of being visible." By 1914, it referred to the "range of vision" and by 1958, the "state of being publicly prominent". According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the noun "visibility" in English is in the late 1500s, specifically documented in 1581 within the writings of theologian and college head William Fulke. The word "visibleness" also appears in the same era, with early evidence in 1581, while the adjective "visible" has earlier roots, appearing in English literature around the early 16th century. The modern sense of "range of vision under given conditions" was recorded in the early 20th century (c. 1914). -
Too bad the Knights Templar didn't believe in the Friday the 13th curse, since their headquarters in France was broken into and they were arrested, imprisoned, and many killed on Friday October 13th, 1307 by order of King Philip IV of France.
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recognition - Word of the Day - Sun Mar 15, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Recognition in stories, known in literature as anagnorisis, or the point in a play, novel, etc., in which a principal character recognizes or discovers another character's true identity or the true nature of their own circumstances. It is the pivotal moment a character moves from ignorance to knowledge, often shifting the narrative from tragedy to joy or vice-versa. It is crucial for driving plot, sparking catharsis, and developing character identity, as seen when characters realize hidden truths or identities. Key aspects of recognition in stories include: Plot Advancement: It acts as a major turning point, reversing fortune and transforming the character's journey. Deepening Emotional Impact: Authentic recognition scenes, rather than contrived ones, evoke strong emotional responses and provide deep satisfaction to the reader. Character Transformation: It forces characters to confront reality, identity, or fate, leading to profound personal change. Thematic Understanding: The act of recognizing a theme helps readers comprehend the deeper meaning of a text. Beyond traditional literature, "recognition" as a narrative tool in storytelling (e.g., in business) validates work, boosts confidence, and inspires others by sharing meaningful, detailed narratives of accomplishment. -
recognition - Word of the Day - Sun Mar 15, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Recognition (noun) originated in the mid-15th century from the Latin recognitionem ("a reviewing, investigation, examination"), derived from recognoscere, from re- (again) + cognoscere (to know/to call to mind/recognize). It came into English during the Middle English period via the Old French recognicion. It is formed by combining re- ("again") and cognoscere ("to get to know"). It was originally used to mean the knowledge, examination, or understanding of an event. In the 16th century it dIeveloped the sense of identifying or recalling something previously known. Its modern usage covers the act of identifying, formal acknowledgment (e.g., of a government), or appreciation (e.g., for service). According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the noun recognition was first used in English during the Middle English period (1150-1500), with the earliest evidence dating back to around 1430. This earliest usage appeared in the Acts of Parliament of Scotland. Related terms: Recognizance (noun): around 1325, Recognitor (noun): around1325, Recognizable (adjective): 1682, and Recognizably (adverb): 1831. -
Well, Steve, to answer your question, according to ancestry.com, most of my DNA comes from England, Wales, and Scotland, but I do have 3% Irish blood in me as well. The only thing that happened to me on Friday the 13th was that my microwave died after 8 years and I had to go out and buy another one. It's amazing on how dependent I've become on that little gadget. I'm not much of a poet, but I will read the poetry anthology, so bring it on! And please, no more limericks. Oh, and by the way, the limerick was developed in England by Edward Lear in the early 18th century. Limericks became popular in England in the 19th century.
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affirmation - Word of the Day - Sat Mar 14, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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affirmation - Word of the Day - Sat Mar 14, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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affirmation - Word of the Day - Sat Mar 14, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Affirmation in stories—whether as a narrative theme, character dialogue, or structural device—builds resilience, validates character transformation, and offers readers emotional, positive, and sometimes transformative experiences. These positive statements or affirmations help characters reframe challenges, overcome self-doubt, and solidify their growth, ultimately mirroring the process of personal growth. Key Roles of Affirmation in Stories: Character Transformation and Resilience: Affirmations allow characters to replace negative internal narratives with empowering ones, allowing them to overcome deep-seated fears or limitations. A character repeating, "I am developing resilience," shifts from a passive victim to an active hero. The Power of "I Am": In narrative, the words following "I am" shape a character’s reality, identity, and choices. By consciously using these, creators define a character's journey from insecurity to strength. Emotional Connection with Readers: When characters use affirmations to navigate challenges, readers often feel more connected to them, allowing for a deeper emotional journey through the story. Creating Hope and Optimism: Affirmations in dialogue or themes can provide hope and foster positive perspectives, shifting the tone from despair to possibility. Writing as a Tool for Self-Discovery: For writers, creating scenes with affirmation allows them to explore "what if" scenarios, fostering flexibility in thinking and improving character development. Incorporating affirmations, or positive reinforcing dialogue, allows for a more profound exploration of a character's inner world, making their eventual success more meaningful. -
affirmation - Word of the Day - Sat Mar 14, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Affirmations are essential in writing stories because they serve as a powerful tool to combat the inner critic, maintain consistent productivity, and build the necessary confidence to navigate the emotional highs and lows of the creative process . By consciously shifting from negative self-talk to positive, present-tense statements, writers can "reprogram" their minds to overcome writer’s block and stay focused on finishing their projects. Key reasons why affirmations are important in writing stories include: Overcoming the "Inner Critic": Writers often face a "critic-bot" or negative voice that produces "awful-mations" (negative self-talk) that can prevent them from writing or sharing their work. Positive affirmations help silence this inner critic, allowing the writer to produce work without being inhibited by fear of judgment. Boosting Productivity and Flow: Using daily affirmations helps writers get into the "flow" state, making it easier to start writing, maintain momentum, and finish stories. Building Resilience Against Rejection: Writing involves handling significant amounts of rejection and criticism. Affirmations remind writers of their worth and talent, helping them see rejection not as a failure, but as a stepping stone, often building "rhino skin" to persevere. Fostering Creativity: By encouraging an optimistic perspective, affirmations fuel creativity and reduce anxiety, allowing writers to explore new ideas rather than getting stuck in rigid, fearful thinking. Validation of Worth: Affirmations reinforce that a writer's work is valuable and their voice is worth hearing, even if they have not yet achieved traditional success. Common Affirmations for Writers: "I am a talented and skilled writer." "My words don't need to be perfect to be worthy and meaningful." "I grant myself permission to write bad stories and messy drafts." "I am worthy of success as a writer." "I have an infinite supply of writing ideas." To be effective, affirmations should be written in the present tense (e.g., "I am," not "I will be"), be personal, positive, and repeated often, preferably by hand.
