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Thanks again for the feedback, Butcher, and I believe your correct about Tristan's dad. What happened did seem intentional, but fortunately he didn't count on Tristan having his bedroom door closed, thus messing up his father's plans. I'm sure he'll do well at the Hotel, although he has some rough times ahead as he adjusts to his parent's deaths, but I'm sure the family will take good care of him.
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Thanks, tor.
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Thanks, Wesley, and none of those three are.
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Thanks for the feedback. ColumbusGuy. Yes, I post on several sites, but always first on GA. You'll always get the most updated chapters here. As far as the love triangle, I believe you are correct. Holly enjoys their friendliness but doesn't seem to be interested in a romantic encounter. We'll see if that changes or stays the same.
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After we got out of work the following Saturday, we rushed home to eat and change, and then we did our chores quickly, so we would be finished before it was time to go down to pick up Ryan. We told him to call when the bus got close, in case it was running behind schedule again, and my phone finally rang just after 4:00. “How long before you think the bus will arrive at the terminal?” “Probably fifteen or twenty minutes.” “Ok, we’ll meet you there.” We told Dad and the others
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Chapter 16 - Sex, Sex Everywhere
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 16 - Sex, Sex Everywhere
Thanks for the feedback, Butcher. This was a very difficult chapter for me to write because it was based on an incident that happened to a young man I knew. Unfortunately, he didn't survive his first use of ecstasy. I opted to let Dustin live and use it as a lesson for others, and hopefully no one who read this chapter suffered a similar fate. -
Than you for the feedback, Butcher. Yes, the family is growing and the boys have asked Josh to give other boys the same chance that he gave them. You'll hear more about the Judge as the story progresses, because he will become an integral part of the story.
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Thanks, Wesley, and don't worry. There's still more chapters to come.
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Thanks, flesco, and you've summarize the chapter very well. As the Brits might say, it could be a bit of a sticky wicket between Noah-Ryan-Holly, since there's obviously a competition for her attention. We'll have to see how that works out, but the other boys seem to be doing quite well. Thanks for the feedback.
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Thanks, tor.
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Chapter 39 - A Christmas To Remember
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 39 - A Christmas To Remember
Thanks for another comment, Butcher. Things are working out for everyone and Josh's grown children reacted nicely to the situation. It's always good when things work out so well. -
Thanks for the feedback, flesco, and I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter and that it brought back pleasant memories of times gone by. I appreciate your continued support.
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Thank you for the feedback, Tony, and for sharing your story with me. I'm glad that you've enjoyed this series and it's been an inspiration to you, and that makes me realize the long hours and hard work were worth it.
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The following week was pretty uneventful, at least until Friday night. That happened to be Holly’s birthday, so we held a surprise party for her after we finished eating dinner. When Dad was done with his meal, he got up from the table, went into the kitchen, and when he returned he was carrying a cake that he had made earlier in the day, and it had a lighted 1 and 8 on top. Dad, Pop, Dion, Trey, Brandon, and I all started singing Happy Birthday to her, since we were in on this, and the boys qui
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Chapter 34 - Inhumane Treatment
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 34 - Inhumane Treatment
Thanks for the feedback, Butcher. You're right, Cole and Graham have been through a lot, but hopefully things are about to get better for them. I believe you're correct about what Josh is going to do for them next, so Cole and Graham will be able to thrive now. You're also correct about other children going through similar situations as Cole and Graham, and we can only pray that there are people like Josh out there who will step in to help them. -
Butcher, thank you for your feedback and I'm glad you approve of some of the choices I made when writing this story. It's always heartening to receive this kind of feedback. Thank you again.
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Chapter 27 - Back In Pennsylvania
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 27 - Back In Pennsylvania
Thanks for the feedback, Butcher. Yes, it's been an eventful trip and the boys are gaining lots of experience. I'm glad you're enjoying my little tale. -
Chapter 18 - Washington D.C. By NIght And Day
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Washington D.C. By NIght And Day
Just, Butcher, this is turning into a great trip for them and they seem to be having a blast. You've laid it all out very well, and thank you for the feedback. -
Chapter 12 - Friends - Old And New
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 12 - Friends - Old And New
Thanks, Butcher, and I'm glad you like how Danny planned that little surprise for Ricky. It was nice that he was willing to do this for his new brother. -
Chapter 8 - Research and Recreation
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Research and Recreation
Yes, things are working out very well and Josh is very understanding. I'm glad you approve of the way this is all taking place. -
Yes, it was an interesting discussion between Josh and Ricky, so early in their time together. Ricky has a big heart, though, and was willing to share, and Danny is fitting in nicely. It will be interesting to see what a big part of the family he becomes as he gets older. Thanks for the feedback, Butcher.
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Chapter 1 - How It All Began
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - How It All Began
Thanks, Butcher, I'm glad you enjoy this series and you're right about Josh. He'd take in any boy who needed his help. -
Chapter 1 - How It All Began
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - How It All Began
Hobo, I don't know how I missed this comment before, but you're right. Ricky is a lovable imp. -
Tony, I appreciate your feedback, but I don't see what Danny and Brandon are doing as over involvement. I can see why you might, but we'll see what happens and how things play out over time.
