Benji

.......way to go Bob!!, congrats an looking forward to your 1000th

............"Born again Christians" CJ your not writing Horror Novels now are you?

........Let me nix out the first title........"For the Good of Eric"

......nah!! go ahead and post all you want, it always good to hear from you and no ones complaining

You could very well be right; he HAD to get the money, and the sheriff had double-crossed him. And good catch; he didn't flinch when killing. However, neither did Veronica, though she sure had good reason. And why did Eric try and save Veronica? He could have been doing the right thing, or, he could have been wanting a diversion so he had a chance to swipe the money. We just don't know. That's one of the problems with 1st person narrations; you can't definitively state any character (other than the protagonists' ) motives. And yes, Eric does have his bad sides; annoying kid bothers are a fixture of gay fiction, after all. Me thinks thou doth protest to much! Who? Me? ........I think Cj has "Future" plans for Eric, seeing the reaction he received from his readers, Oh yes I see it in the eyes above me that what I predict is true. Course he will need that evil sidekick Shadowgod!

...which one of us Me or the goat?

....I concur, in hindsight I did not mean to exclude them!

OMG!! I'm sorry Graeme but that is just TFF!! ......

.............Good point!! Is there anyone in SF that can check out reasonable room prices. I just couldn't just guessamate. SWA w/two weeks @ 160.00 RT, Hotel room?? Screw car rental, Taxi!!

.......One of my favorites "Dark side of the Moon" by Pink Floyd

.......What do you mean "if"...BeaStkid will post everything!!!

...............Congrats!!! Looking forward to many stories I know that you will have posted here!! Goatshead cheese for All!!

...........Actually I can read pretty fast ( I took a course in High School Evilyn Woods). This helped me throughout school the trick was to speed read the text, then read it slow then what I called skim speed read, this did wonders in comprehension and I did well on my tests by using this method. I do try to slow my reading in these stories though.

I think there is a goat sacrifice in order... :mace: Awww... But Aillie, somebody had to ride off into the sunset, didn't they? .......Somehow a goat sacrifice won't erase Eric's sunset ride Poor, misunderstood Eric. ......actually, I think I understand the creep very well! He did after all save his ass, and being the "savior" only worked out to his advantage. How could our hero's say anything without admitting to helping a wanted criminal escape. Then of course poor misunderstood Eric didn't seem to flinch when he killed. .........Very nicely done CJ, a bit of evil but nicely done!!