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Circumnavigation (99+44) Prelude to Betrayal
Benji replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
............... We don't know what Trevor and Shane talked about before heading north, but Trevor had a plan I suspect it was to smoke out problems. I'd guess he now suspects everyone including Grundig and wants to play this out in his hunch. If he no longer has the tracker and only tells Grundig his destination. If Julie greets him and I'm sure she will, which will surprise him he will be on high alert. Think about it, Julie was Bridget's room mate in college and a lifelong friend , if she is part of the cartel, she has the islands she coveted. Trevor will not reveal to here the 'tape' that would be stupid, however the doll comes into play. What if the Aussies blubbed out they found the tape in that doll? Only way I can see that is if Trevor confesses to Fowler about it. But who does he trust right now? Besides I'd really like to see armor piercing rounds from a 30-06 in action on a boat!! -
Circumnavigation (99+44) Prelude to Betrayal
Benji replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
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Circumnavigation (99+44) Prelude to Betrayal
Benji replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
..........Prelude ....a preliminary to an action, event, condition, or work of broader scope and higher importance. (Source dictionary) Sounds like something is being set up in motion to offer the betrayal to me, and right now who could that be in this chapter? -
Circumnavigation (99+44) Prelude to Betrayal
Benji replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
........ Well there a couple of things here, Grundig was kept in the dark because of job security of Trevor by Fowler, yet acknowledged no surprise or the fact that he had already deduced that Trevor was related to Fowler. 2dly we knew that there was an insider in the police force for the cartel. Who could be more perfectly entrenched then Gundig? Grundg has now gained the confidence, or thinks he has, as Trevor has now deduced that something doesn't add up right. The Julie thing has 3 scenerios; 1. She meets & greats Trevor unexpectedly out at sea and invites him to her dock. - Trevor is sure be wary here after all Julie and Bridget were friends. 2. Trevor tries to initiate contact with Julie to resolve the issue with Bridget, don't seeing that happening Trevor now knows Bridget is part of the cartel. 3. What if Trevor tells Grudig that the tracer has been floated away at a bearing of south sot west and that he is still bearing the eastward route to the canal. I see this scenario happening, Trevor escapes from Tahiti, is being chased by Bridget's people and calmly shoots up the boat of theirs with the 30-06 causing it to sink. Why else was that weapon being brought into attention if not being used? My thoughts1 -
Circumnavigation (99+44) Prelude to Betrayal
Benji replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
...............Only if Trevor memorized it, remember Trevor lost everything when the pirates stripped Atlantis. -
Circumnavigation (99+44) Prelude to Betrayal
Benji replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
....................I always thought Julie was involved with Bridget, but I could be wrong too! Right now Trevor has no way to communicate with Julie, but if she is involved and Grundig is also involved. She could be expecting them IF Trevor lays out his plan to Gunddig. That should alert Trevor that should she meets them either accidentally or on purpose.Remember Bridget still has a hit squad in New Zealand, how fast could she fly them to Tahiti? The boy's might be a bit alarmed if Julie try's to per-sway them to stay a few days, since Trevor has taking an alarm mode. If Julie is a safe mode or a motherly type one, why has the goat taken us there? The boys have already floated the idea of placing the tracker on a raft to Grundig, so their whereabouts are no where to be seen unless they voice it. Grundig is the prelude and Julie is the Betrayal. -
Circumnavigation (99+44) Prelude to Betrayal
Benji replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
..............Mike this is all fun and games to me, I'm aware of the evil goats mind and this would not surprise me of this scenario of Grundig. Yep, no evidence at all, but he was 2nd closest to Greg in knowing the whereabouts of Trevor. The fact that Greg did not give him Trev's satellite number until the last encounter, and the mention of his glazed eyes. Someone in the police force has been feeding the cartel information all this time. So check this out, if Trevor tells Grundig of their actual heading and meets up with Julie, only to find Bridget's hit squad waiting for them, how did anyone know where they were heading if Trevor sent the tracking device afloat? Julie may not be the bad person and wave Trevor off the island she is at. I see the 30.06 coming into play as Bridget's men try to overtake the boat. So fun and games while we wait for the next chapter, from a deranged goat brain!! -
Circumnavigation (99+44) Prelude to Betrayal
Benji replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
............. I'm thinking that Grundig has got their confidence and to do so had them locate the tracking device. He has their satellite phone number and can now track it, therefore he effectively has a new tracking device. Grundig already knew there was a tracking device aboard and had used the contacts to confirm it to cover his tracks. He is sweating bullets here, because he doesn't want to be where he is, he didn't mind supplying information but is discomforted by being exposed, maybe caught and being involved in Trevor and Shane's demise. The 'Prelude to Betrayal' may allude to forbearance to another betrayal, but I believe it has already started with Grundig, in setting up the boys with Julie. -
Chapter 19 Why Am I Feeling Like This
Benji commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 19 Why Am I Feeling Like This
............Hey Nephy, Nice to see another chapter, Gabriel does have other motives, primarily it is to get Uzzy, back into this battle. I guess his secondary reason is for his own selfish motive of wanting Uzzy for himself. Looking forward to another chapter soon! -
Circumnavigation (99+44) Prelude to Betrayal
Benji replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
......................Exactly!! Grundig's entrance at this late in the game came only mean an ominousness foretelling of betrayal. As the title forecasted. Once being the information officer, he is know being thrust into to the eliminate mode of Trevor and Shane. He is very uncomfortable in this mode. But, his telling of Fowler's survival probably led to his downfall and new orders. -
Circumnavigation (99+44) Prelude to Betrayal
Benji replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
...................... Well, well, well it appears that the doll will play a roll after-all; “Ah, about Ned. I don’t know if you’ve heard, but the police down in Perth are on the track of that doll he found on Kookaburra and sold. The bad news is that it was sold again, about a year ago, at an auction. It was a cash sale, so no record of the buyer. I'm betting it will play a roll with the tape being discovered inside it by the Aussie's, hopefully Trev and Shane will not mention it to know else but Greg. “I was told to speak to you alone. The long and the short of it is, the police have had some more success in rolling up the operation that tried to bomb you. They’ve got the one who planted the bomb, though he was killed after taking a few shots at officers. The diver may have been shot dead, but Grundig seems to allude that it was the 'person responsible for the attack'. His glazed eyes betray him Okay, that is a is likely a lie, but Grundig now has the resources, and with Greg kept at bay from making calls and getting Trevor's satellite number he has control of the situation. I have no doubt Gray will be killed by operatives because he is now known to the police. But also to his failure of blowing up the Kookaburra... if Grundig is involved! Steve I think you hit it on the nose about Grundig being involved with the underworld, I also think the doll will play an important role in this. I also believe Julie will reappear in this saga, if she is friend or foe is up in the air, if she decides that Bridget is facing a downfall she may abandon ship with her, if not more worries for Trevor. Okay, Grundig does seem to be taking control here and taking the situation under his control. This maybe significant if the boys reveal the are headed to Fiji and he has gained their trust and has not elevated there further fears.He has further gained their confidence by basically leading them to the tracking device. I think that Steve was right, as well as myself in portraying Gundrig, Julie and the doll into play in this saga! -
..........Nope I hate crowds, and would never venture into that foray.
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Hahaha! Interracial sex perhaps! I would never have imagined that one!
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Being best man at the wedding of the dude you're in love with
Benji replied to RyanWhite's topic in The Lounge
........ This is sad, but did his BF even know his best man was gay? If he did then the best man knew he was on a losing proposition as his BF married a woman. If he didn't know, then the Best man put his fears in front of his interests and should have come out to him earlier. -
...... I'm waiting for the photos, anyone got any of the goat at the farm?
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.................Yeah, so what the goat have planned for December 45th?
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[Nephylim] In The Arms of an Angel
Benji replied to Nephylim's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
........So Pasha is out of the pot and no into the fire? LOL, the appearance of Miach'el did not surprise me. I wonder where the almighty stands on this petty war? Should be an interesting ride of a story -
..........Hahaha! I don't even know why this makes news, the boy does have a bit of talent, but is a rich self adsorbed bratty teen that has yet to mature.
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............. I'm excited about this also, not sure where the rover is right now or if it is in the region where NASA hoped to find water or ice. Finding water could lead to finding life, I guess I''l have to be patient along with everyone else until they make the announcement.
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................You are such a tease!
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.................... Hell looking in at the timeline when he posted this I thought for sure the next chapter was going up!
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY NEPHY!!!! .......... Hope it is a good one!!
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[Nephylim] In The Arms of an Angel
Benji replied to Nephylim's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
................. Hey Nephy, btw Happy Birthday Interesting chapter, I didn't expect a confrontation between an arch-angel and a human. But that said, I wasn't surprised at Uzzi’el reaction to Gabri'el. Uzzi’el may not remember much but does understand his new found feelings for Pasha. -
.................For someone that didn't want to go out of the river into the ocean in the dark Trevor seems to have waited long enough to set sail, he could barely make out the statue. I like December as much as anyone but 45 days is just a tad too long.
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY LACEY!!! ............ Hope it was a good one, little brother!!
