Benji

.................... I thought only sheep had wool, does the goat have something I'm not aware of?

.......... If I were betting man (LOL, I live in Vegas) I'd put my money on Henry getting killed in this saga by George. Trevor and Shane are in danger, but they do not meet their demise. That leaves our favorite bad people of Bridget or George having their heads delivered to Sanchez at some point in the near future. Since I don't think the goat will do a sequel on this this one, I'm inclined to belive both Bridget and George will meet their fates. However, if the goat plans a sequel, plan on having Bridget around for some revenge!!

Wow, I waited long for this one. He has to come clean with this abuse to Brody at least! Or Brody is going to figure it out, that asshole of a father needs to go.

............... Well the title should give you a hint, 'Taking care of business' Sanchez needs to take care of business with Trevor, as does Gonzales with Joel. Frank needs to plant a bug.

................... Nah, I think in the next chapter there will be a phone call from Fowler announcing the 'news' as they both walk back to the zodiac. Within 12 hours it will be world wide, then we will back in Florida getting reactions from Dirk and everyone else. Of course the location of the town will no longer be secret, so Sanchez will act immediately.

................. Hahaha! Like I said earlier, I knew by the title it was all going to be about Trevor and Shane!

............... I knew from the title of the chapter that this going to be about Shane and Trevor in-depth exploring their relationship further along. I wondered why Shane took the satellite phone along, I'm going to guess in the next chapter he is going to get a phone call while heading back to the zodiac from Officer Fowler. I do hope the breaking news does not cause Trevor another panic attack, seeing that he had another one near the cliffs, I realize now, he really does need the counseling soon in spite of the danger it could bring to him. So Trevor has an Aunt, last known address somewhere in a inland town named Northam, Hmm, could this bring Trevor a step closer to his mother? Or will he even make it there? Otherwise a nice chapter complete with cliffs!!

........... Who speculated that Rachel did a circumnavigation? And the tid-bits of an early chapter release have no timeline! The insinuation that the goat would have more cliffhangers in mind?? Priceless

.... Have a great weekend too!! Benji

........... Would not put it pass the goat, with the newsbreak, Joel & Lisa, Bridget & George and yes Gonzales & Frank, not to be left unsaid Trevor and Shane. Things are happening very fast, I was amiss in mentioning Sanchez and Kline.

Yep, just a couple of day's left! Benji

.......................... I'll be damn!! Where the hell have you been? I had to re-read chapter 8 to get back into the story, but fell right into it. I noticed some nice changes that fit in well. Looking forward to more.

............ I do too!!!

Those are my thoughts! Benji

My thoughts!! Benji

Hey Marty, Hope that clears that up! Benji

...........Sorry you missed it! Slacker!!

...............Stop getting hurt!! You are an inspiration to me!!!

Yep, let me know if you have any thoughts here! Benji

Yep, let me know if you have any thoughts here! Benji

........... :lmao: :lmao: rumors???

Looking forward to the next chapter, a cliffhanger is always an option for the goat!!

....... I'm here sweetheart!!! I am all for a sequel here either out of the parents clutches or on their own, you never resolved the resolution between these two. The idea of a church sponsored camp had a lukewarm appeal, but I saw no resolution there in that. Perhaps a 1st year college away from the parents and giving some breathing room is the way to go with this, and keeping a few freinds along would help!