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You have covered the subject succinctly, I would add nothing other than we'll said.
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If only I could afford to take a vacation there. It would be the holiday of a lifetime I would also throw in a safari trip on the way there. Wonderful descriptive chapter
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When the new property was sold, it looked done and dusted. How forth are for the id to fail. What joy for Andrew, now we can get on with the redevelopment. Rascal has become an integral part of the family as most house dogs are. Another interesting chapter with a surprise ending. Thanks.
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What an amazing holiday with friends, finishing up with a visit to Scotland, before finally reaching home safe and sound. A very interesting read once again. Thank you👍
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Fabulous flight and Plane details. If this was the wow factor? One wonder what the Texas Lasswill be like. The bondage cd just shows there are sides to people one never can take for granted. Another interesting chapter.
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What a wonderful Christmas gathering of family and friends. Now a cruise to bring in the NY, great writing as always.👍
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About circumcision, we come into this world in perfect condition, who gave another person the right, to cut off something so necessary, for the nerve endings in the foreskin are there to add to the pleasure of sexual intercourse be it with another. If a person wishes to have it removed it should be their own decision once they have reached adult status. It should be for the individual to decide! Not even their parent should be allowed to have it done. I advised our, daughter of my thoughts when both my grandsons were born. They are now adults and can make that decision if they so desire. Other than that, another well-constructed chapter. Thank you. I
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A beautiful chapter,❤ renewing the hope of new parents worldwide, the love and safety of these beautiful babies.❤
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The storm was a reminder that life is a challenge and the similarities will often bring one face to face with past crises, Rhyan will come through this event in a better frame of mind and move forward with Andrew to the joy that awaits them mid-year. On a personal note, I am impressed with the lack of over the top sexual description in your writing. It is a natural part of loving one another and you leave all the graphics to the mind of the reader. Another great chapter, thanks.
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This was a harrowing chapter to read. At the same time, that victim impact statement was just an honest statement. Having said that, I can find no valid reason to write it into the story. It did nothing to make the story better than it has been from the beginning.
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Another entertaining chapter on board, as they settle down for the night🛌Well written as one has come to expect, great stuff😎
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Amazing chapter, you write so well about sailing, it was as if I was on the cat with them. With the lodge enlargement now including a spar, what new adventures are ahead, I can't wait to read.
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A delightful chapter, well told. Thank you!
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A little twee, all the same it was bound to happen that Ryan would be back. It will be interesting to watch and read about the transformation of the lodge.
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An interesting beginning, with death, comes sadness! Yet with the one you have as an anchor, all things can be overcome.
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A beautiful story well written please keep it going.
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Finally, A Little Action!
Lwj commented on underthehoodster's story chapter in Finally, A Little Action!
The innocents of youth, it was aptly called, puberty blues, in a film some years ago. I liked this first period of sexual exploration, with all of the worries and expectations felt. Liked the chapter a lot. -
One does not have to be fourteen to feel giddy when love walks in the door, it can happen at any time. Enjoying the story as the layers of social differences are appealed back. The Bruce Lee karate kid was a big surprise
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An interesting start, that has one thinking of why Jess would be hesitant letting Parry, know where they live and what background history he has. Could turn into a page-turner. Thanks for the info about the way you have written the story.
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It is hard to believe so many veterans come home to the apathy of an uncaring nation. This has happened to returned servicemen from the coalition of willing nations who fought in what was portrayed as a just cause. An Australian songwriter wrote a tune that become a best seller here in Australia called " And the band played Waltzing Matilda " This also dealt with the same difficulties of returned servicemen. It appears that this is a common problem across the world.
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This was an interesting read, nothing like what I thought it may be. It was interesting to learn of the mechanics of putting a show like the voice to air. I found that part of the story the most interesting and fascinating part. The ending did not disappoint as what was to be gained from having the winner announced.The competition was the story and well told. Thank you, I loved it.
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So pleased I came to your work so late, as I do not have to wait for the next chapter. Nice sharp intro. Thanks Carlos👍
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What a great way to end this year, it was a most interesting story. You have left enough ends open, for another chapter in the life of an angry young man his July trip back to Australia and catching up with Oscar to a low one to think there is more to come. Thank you Carlos for a story of love, hope and looking forward.
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Once again we see the effect a parent can have on a child, CJ is feeling so abandoned by his mother. Why is it that parents can do this and not realise the damage they are doing? One must suppose it is to cover their guilt. Like the letter sent to Owen. This would have to be one of if not the best chapter this far❤
