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This story shows the compelling need to follow your heart. When two soulmates find each other the love transcends all boundaries and obstacles. Even those that may have issues finally see the unconditional love between them and accept them.
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Chapter 7 - That Dark Day After
Jim Fraser commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 7 - That Dark Day After
Well @Jeff BurtonYou did it again. I was in tears through the whole chapter. I saw and felt your own person pain in this chapter. I truly hope the pain you endured ended with a happy ending. The unbearable pain of loosing someone you love is to clear to me. Life is life and we, can't avoid the inevitable. I have been grieving and in emotional pain for the past 2 years loosing my soulmate and my one true love. I'm thankful that life allowed me to experience my own one true love for 22 years. I'm working hard to find peace. Stories like this believe it or not have a healing power. For the first time since Frank's death do I envision maybe I might be lucky enough to find love again. Thank Jeff for this story. ❤️😢🏳️🌈💔💙❤️- 28 comments
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Chapter 6 - That Dark Good Night
Jim Fraser commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 6 - That Dark Good Night
Thank-you @Gary L- 34 comments
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Chapter 6 - That Dark Good Night
Jim Fraser commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 6 - That Dark Good Night
What a heartbreaking chapter. I've cried threw most of the chapters but this one really struck home for me. It brought back a day 2 years ago when I lost my husband of 22 years. I truly hope Jacob survives Tyler shouldn't have to face something so painful as loosing his soulmate. 🙏🏳️🌈- 34 comments
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Enjoyed this chapter immensely and the story line continues showing how a gay couple remain committed to each other and their 4 healthy growing children. They have shown that gay men can raise their children in that understand the impact of discriminaion that they may experience. Well done and well written. Cheers Jim
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Chapter 1: The Paolas seem happy. What could go wrong?
Jim Fraser commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Paolas seem happy. What could go wrong?
Glad your back. Please make Elena, Jim & Claudia pay by loosing everything. Let Ben quietly take over their companies & fortunes. Push the 3 of them into a life of poverty & homelessness. -
I agree with Drsawzall the boys deserve a free university education if they choose. But with all the treasures returned they deserve to be Knighted. Great writing i can't wait until the next chapter.
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@Libby DrewYou held me captive until The End. I was an enlightening story taking me back to my own coming out. The terror I felt in the late 70's and early 80's came true when I was outed by a so called friend. Intruly hope you will start a book II. We need to see a wedding with Marc and Sawyer. Finn hook up with Tim. There's so much for you to write about with the wonderful characters you created. BRAVO.
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Having time to refect I think Finn has the ability to make Marc see the error he's making giving his sperm donar half the estate. If he wants to do something with the money establish a non profit to help closeted threatened LGBTQ2S youth in his state so they can become their true self and help them build their own future. It will also kick Jonathan one last time.
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I think Finn & Tim has a nice ring to it. Marc & Sawyer could have a double wedding with them. I think in Jonathan case it has nothing to do with providing for others its all about him & making himself a pedestal that says look at me the great Jonathan, look at what I have done for you. It's time Maggie knocks him of the pedestal & totally excluding Jonathan & make the donation of money from Marc.
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OMG Libby your one amazing writer with such a creative mind. You've brought the characters to life, it feels like they are breathing and living with all of us. I'm so glad Marc and. Sawyer are finally happy, they deserve it. But I think I want to take Finn to bed a make him scream in ecstasy for hours and turn him into a loving man.
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I'm fully into this story & every chapter draws me deeper. I can only hope for a happy ending for Marc & Sawyer.
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A Home For Christmas 11
Jim Fraser commented on Comicality's story chapter in A Home For Christmas 11
I think Blake's parents are like so many today that can't ACCEPT or won't ACCEPT who their children are. I think Aric's will allow Blake to stay because they have accepted who their son and love him unconditionally. They would never put him through what Blake's been through for the past several weeks. I'll even wager there's no police report because it would have resulted in missing persons flyers every where including the strip mall where they met unless he's their ticket to a welfare cheque. -
I loved the story every chapter. It brings back so many memories of my 22 years marriage to my one & only true love. I lost my husband in May of 2021. I'm so thankful for the time & love we shared. We both had masks we hid behind at the beginning but as we fell in love the masks came off so we saw each other's soul. We new instantly that we were soulmates. I miss him every minute & your story brought me comfort & memories of true love. Thank you Cheers Jim.
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Chapter 21 - This Was My Life
Jim Fraser commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 21 - This Was My Life
Outstanding work as usual from my favourite writer. You captured the true essence of relationships and how they're built. I see so many young guys thinking they know how to make a relationship work. I have offered my opinion to a few and most looked like I had three heads only to approach me later after it end in a fiasco to tell me the wished they'd followed my advice. Keep up the amazing work. Cheers Jim -
A Home For Christmas 10
Jim Fraser commented on Comicality's story chapter in A Home For Christmas 10
What a beautiful love story so far. I truly hope you keep them together & the parents welcome him into their home. Blake has had a hard enough life so far he deserves to have Aric's love, Aric's parents acceptance and allowing him to live with them as their son's happiness is everything to them. Just imagine the message clearly sent to the grandparents. Cheers Jim -
Thanks for a great chapter. Merry Christmas to to all. The cliff hanger was a bit of a buzz kill lol.
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A Dillan In Wolf's Clothing
Jim Fraser commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in A Dillan In Wolf's Clothing
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Where do I start. What an epic journey you created in each and every character. It started with Boss Nanny where I feel in love with Seamus, Matt, Aiden, Jay & Loren. Then Jay Loelife where the characters fully came to life. Your accuracy and description of events made me love it even more. You're an amazing talent that deserves & earned your place in the literary world. I have to say I'm sad that the journey for my favourite story & characters is over. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next. Love you Mrs. G. Cheers Jim
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Building New Traditions
Jim Fraser commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Building New Traditions
You've brightened my life for months and I'm sorry for asking you to write more than the Final Chapter I just don't want to end it's so loving and filled with emotion and distrust everything you are. You are a brilliant writer and you will always be my favorite. Cheers Jim -
Building New Traditions
Jim Fraser commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Building New Traditions
Thank you again this story has me captured I never want it to end. Please keep going for a while. I Iove how your introducing the twin personalities. It looks like one's a heart breaker and the other a ball crusher. LOL.- 134 comments
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Chapter 12 The Final Act...
Jim Fraser commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 The Final Act...
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All I can say is you've done it again and I agree with all the previous comments giving you the accolades that you deserve
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Mrsgnomie you've done it again. These characters have me totally in their grasp and aren't letting go. I'm in for the long haul if your going to continue with these characters. Phenomenal writing in portraying the birth of the babies. As a RN the accuracy displayed in your writing is spot on. Kudos to you. Cheers Jim
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