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    Chapter 1

    Dan South commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 1

    First things first…very cool Buick. Obscure choice of muscle cars but absolutely excellent. Same as your incredibly subtle foreshadowing or perhaps it’s just the way you stimulate my imagination. Two Scottys seems rather unlikely. Your comments section is also absolutely excellent so congratulations on that! An adventure with these boys sounds like a great idea. Lead on…
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    Yall I’ve been here
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    Chapter 7

    Dan South commented on Mark Paren's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Where I think this might, not should, go? There’s a reincarnation vibe here for me. One was kind and one was strong. I could (always) say more but it’s probably Time For A Run.
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    Reflection

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Reflection

    I thought the intimate moment was over because of Kalian’s stream of consciousness but no. Talon was railing him the whole time 😂 Excellent, as always, #meepwillsavetheworld
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    Point of View

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Point of View

    Oh! Still two.chapters behind but if Wren is dead then Lyme better shoot his shot
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    Point of View

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Point of View

    I’m a chapter behind, no, this makes two. Jumped to the comments to say so happy to see you @Demiurge @Mattyboy holy spoiler alert! 😂 If Wren is dead then isn’t it dead…again? I’ll see you two in the comments 💜
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    If you share the dressing ingredients we’ll have the whole recipe, Chef 😂
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    Chapter 23

    Dan South commented on frozenphenix's story chapter in Chapter 23

    Lucky for me I was alone when I read “who threw sand in your vag” because I laughed loud and long. I’m going to seek out an opportunity to use that line and I promise to give you due credit.
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    Another great playlist!
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    Tasty cocktail now with that same name, I’ll have another
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    Chapter 1

    Dan South commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I’m going to leave sad because I know *think* it’s almost over. At the same time this aftercare is appreciated after Clarion. <big sigh>
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    Dangerous Liasons

    Dan South commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Dangerous Liasons

    This chapter gave me goosebumps three times. Fantastic.
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    Complications

    Dan South commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Complications

    I’m hoping there’s a good reason for dosing people. That’s super shady.
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    Chapter 2 Stench

    Dan South commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 2 Stench

    Saved this to read when I could set a spell. The comments are always a great read on their own! BM vs BPM 😂 Jubal’s thoughts betray him a bit. He’s paying attention to Lucas’ voice, laugh, smile. A fateful journey for both.
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    Chapter 2 Stench

    Dan South commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 2 Stench

    Easily settled debate! It’s an oxbow lake. It’s both!
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    Thank you for that more than I can express. Every author doesn’t want so much to be open to feedback even when they ask for it ❤️
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    This! Every other Sunday because that has become our ‘focus on home’ moment over time.
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    It isn’t paradise though. Right? No paradise in sight when you choose to lay with your dead wife’s brother yeah? Your dead sister’s husband yeah. They’re forever dads together in my imagination but I’m bracing for the road there. Trust they’ll find their way but fearful of their journey… No one asked for my freely given opinion 😂. Hawaii. Whoa. I’d prefer it applied gently but I recognize the opportunity. *takes his seat*
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    That’s a whole lot of overthinking with a surprising deficit of communication. Entirely believable because, well, it’s two guys. As a species we can be really dense. The eggplant bit is hilarious!
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    Had to come check for @kbois and she was already here at the 1 minute mark 😂😂😂
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    Naani

    Dan South commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Naani

    Suspecting some stuffs gonna happen that will prove this was a good thing to do now.
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    Sam

    Dan South commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Sam

    Ok! Cloaks as foreshadowing. Yikes.
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    Storm

    Dan South commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Storm

    That was such a big step! Monumental sex scene for so many reasons. ❤️
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    Love

    Dan South commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Love

    Guys can be real dummies when it comes to asking for help. Proud of Brandon
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    Chapter 7

    Dan South commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 7

    We finally get some detail about Connor’s sobriety! Very cool. At his age I had a friend, same age, who was a friend of Bill W. Well researched or well lived, regardless, well done. No leather work. Next time maybe…
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