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Epic. I am wonderfully heart heavy. Torn up. Worn out. Delighted to have read these words. Thank you
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Great chapter but that dressing recipe was a real surprise. You might want to check that link. LMAO that’s one special ingredient!
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💔*clocks out to deal with emotional overload *
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The Valley of the Temples
Dan South commented on Aditus's story chapter in The Valley of the Temples
Kudos on including the hepatitis and the discussion of STIs in general. Nice dose of reality and treated very well. -
Men trust their ears less than their eyes
Dan South commented on Aditus's story chapter in Men trust their ears less than their eyes
I have nothing more intelligent to say than What The Actual F*ck? When I reached “The End” I almost choked! Thank goodness it was just for the journal. I was trying not to binge today, but, WTF! -
Time for the proverbial other (red) shoe to drop. I see in a comment that this was your first foray into writing in English. I am sincerely, profoundly impressed, dear Author. Bravo!
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This name meaning conversation compelled me to look up Zach: “laughter” and “the Lord recalled”. Both seem quite fitting for the slightly judgy AI character. I’m mildly confused by the flash-forward / flashback sequences but I’m certain that the right thing to do is read on…
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Birthday Party and Jealous Conniption Fits
Dan South commented on Aditus's story chapter in Birthday Party and Jealous Conniption Fits
Play stupid games win stupid prizes, Eric and Chris. Lace up those shoes, Jonah… -
Michael with the cold, hard facts. A real friend where few, so far, seem to be. Feels slightly wrong to enjoy Jonah’s confusion and consternation so much. Just slightly…
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I’m worried for Jonah Michael is a hero. Great f*cking story Author
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Jonah is f*cking frustrating! As much as I don’t want to like Ren I can’t deny his game play. His kindness, yeah? Trying to keep my words few but I am stirred! Red is the right color. Mercy.
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Zaidu is the first of four captivating books that, together, create the Sparkle anthology. Ancient customs in ancient times reveal a culture we cannot conceive of today. A child is a sacrificial offering. No volcanoes here, nothing like that. He lives on. Every single word is as if this was copied from an ancient manuscript. Read Zaidu and, before you know it you’ll be at the end of book four. Time well spent for me. I needed some Sparkle.
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Spectacular, Aditus, start to finish.
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Definitely didn’t see this ending coming. Evil triumphs. Wow.
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Even more magnificent than the first two installments and they are outstanding in their own right. CTI: 2
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“No heaven for God’s mistakes. HE burns those in hell.” Powerful and tragic, both that quote and the entire narrative. An absolutely magnificent tale told so very well. Z to A here, huh? A beginning and an end no matter the order. Intriguing.
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Deities, temples, armies all creating ugliness in the world. How (not) surprising. A wonderful, albeit dark, read.
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More excellent additions to the cast of characters. And the promise of wicked, wicked acts. Delightful!
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“…bald-headed yoghurt slinger…” is definitely a new one on me. I laughed out loud.
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Not at all sure I should read things twice. I’m prone to love things, stories, love, even more…
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Powerfully unrequited.
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Hauntingly beautiful feels like an apt description of this abandonment. But then, what do I know?
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How can you trust a pink-eyed, centuries old monster? You just do, right? Let’s not forget the safe house. The runes. He spilled his blood. For family. The Council of Uncles is a delightful concept. Family. Any Meep is enough Meep. ❤️
