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  1. Dan South

    Chapter 9

    Toby is so easy to love
  2. Dan South

    Toby's friends

    Go Toby!
  3. Dan South

    Chapter 3

    How in the wiregrass heck did Rocky Face, Alabama get in here? Poor house.
  4. Dan South

    Harbinger

    “Not today …” says it all. ❤️ Four Horsemen are no match for a survivor. Right?
  5. A sister and brother finding the way back together is conceptually beautiful. Seems both apples fell far from the tree or, more so, Mhairi rolled away eventually. This is truly great storytelling. I love Joe’s oath: Blimey!
  6. Dan South

    Chapter 2

    So much to take in! Complex, fun read! Heather is a great addition. Here’s what really captures my attention … daily … ”Now, wars have sprung up everywhere, and hurricanes and other calamities have taken the world with a fury. They are not mere natural disasters.”
  7. Dan South

    Chapter 1

    It is indeed Halloween in the US! Seems I have 23 other adventures to read though I have to say this stands alone well, I wasn’t at a loss for my lack of knowing Charlie and Co. Fun read!
  8. Dan South

    All the Signs

    I have to believe a temporary boyfriend is better than no boyfriend. Right? Hudson is temporary. He’s leaving. What will he leave Otis with? On the front end our dear Author told us this is something different.
  9. Dan South

    Chapter 5

    These characters are so well established that I never wonder who’s who. This installment alone is a history lesson, a travel guide and made me think of ‘The Goonies’. Young people on an adventure. “…but I’m certain it’s south” is good enough for me. We head south…
  10. Dan South

    Chapter 19

    Love the story, happy to see Dakota is back, excited by Connor’s shift…But… I want to say that the depiction of the AA meeting was really accurate, if you’ve never been, and packed in some great information. It never should be ‘you use you lose’. It should always be the Serenity Prayer, not the lord’s prayer (autocorrect really really wanted that capitalized). I’m not a friend of Bill W but I’ve loved a lot of his friends. This chapter feels essential to understanding Connor. Really beautiful @Justin4Fun. Thank you.
  11. Dan South

    Chapter 6

    Fantastic start to the school year!
  12. Cohabitation. A very big step after so much trauma. Fingers crossed for the boys!
  13. Dan South

    Chapter 7

    As much as I’m looking forward to more of the ‘fun part’ I didn’t miss it. Pretty serious talk from Sam. Both these guys are easy to love. Well done.
  14. Dan South

    Chapter 1

    You are more than welcome to quote me anywhere it will expand your reach. I appreciate you sharing your gift with us here.
  15. Dan South

    Chapter 1

    125 views as of my reading and no comments. Odd for something so brilliant. I have too much to say so I’ll edit myself best I can. The complexity of this? Really great. Gods help Mery…for starters. Intriguing that there is a trinity in place and appearing to her. Trinity and trident. Huh. Disaster looming. Brink of an (another) disaster. Followers granted majick. Mum’s gone rouge…or not. El, Siva, gods of reproduction, dissolution and I think there is a reference to Michael the Archangel. The demon Mephistopheles? Without question there is a reference to Faust. I’d like to close my comment with some middle school humor. Kronos is a child of Uranus. Ur anus. Twelve year old me is dissolving in a fit of laughter… Brilliant storytelling @Vaughn Edward. Excited to read more 💜
  16. That was wild! Lort help me you killed again 😂
  17. Dan South

    Chapter 5

    Origin story for Aden’s messy jockstrap. Great read about a boy and his Him.
  18. Dan South

    All the Signs

    From super sexy to super serious. I know where I hope this goes but hope is never a good strategy…
  19. Dan South

    Chapter 5

    My eyes are very wet. ❤️
  20. Isn’t it a possibility that Jubal has already said something to get the conversation started? Who’s to say Lucas didn’t hear Jubal pray and confess his love? Our dear Author is a bit of a hopeless (hopeful!) romantic so the dam has to burst soon.
  21. Had to quote you so I could love this twice ❤️☮️
  22. Oh @Albert1434 HAPPY Birthday! 💜
  23. Dan South

    Chapter 18

    A whole lot packed into this chapter and it is a fantastic read! Couple things… Clint did a knock-off Mighty Mouse (Here we come to save the day) or is that only in my head? Wouldn’t be the first time… I absolutely loved how many times I needed to turn to the interwebs for knowledge that @Justin4Fun already posses. Everyone knows the green tractors. We were, later, given the brand of red tractors. The blue has multiple possibilities and I’m gonna lose sleep over it. Ford, New Holland, other? How’s Dakota?
  24. So sorry for your loss, Gary. Lots of goosebumps in this chapter.
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