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Teenage sarcasm and anxiety is hilarious. You’ve fucking got it down. Ok ok back on point here…Blair knows her brother waaaaay better than he realizes. Warren is bold..I like that. Very brave. Cal better fucking text.
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Chapter 54 - Epic-log Part One
SilentandBroken commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 54 - Epic-log Part One
@Krista can I just say you’ve written Cindy’s character brilliantly? Because you have. -
Chapter 54 - Epic-log Part One
SilentandBroken commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 54 - Epic-log Part One
Ok..breathe …sigh… I sad faced the story because ..well it’s just sad to see someone like Cindy’s denial get shut down and it completely breaks them. I’m still in the terrified stage of never telling MY mother for the same reasons Luke didn’t. -
I’m also not sure if Jackson is really going to handle the finality of leaving for Georgia as well as he’s expecting especially without Luke. Don’t get me wrong, I’m proud of Luke for standing up to his incessant mother..but he’s not resisted her completely yet. It’s coming though.
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Because it’s taking something of Jackson’s with him wherever he goes as a reminder that he can do things he’s afraid to do. That’s how I see it anyway.
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Perhaps you’re right. I can’t remember now and too lazy to go back and look 😆
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Ive met Mark Tremonti guitarist for Alter Bridge, Creed and his solo band Tremonti a few times. Super chill dude. We’ve chatted via twitter once in a blue moon. Really about it. I’ve only met him before and after a few shows they were doing. Got the autograph and a pic.
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Great chapter. Two things as takeaways I have however. One, Oliver absolutely hit on Jackson. Two, the tattoo and Luke’s literal lukewarm disposition about it with Jackson bothers me. It feels like he’s already saying goodbye.
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Luke is still torn. He didn’t say it. But he’s fighting it, showing it. He feels guilty about what his mom did at the party and at the same time feels guilty at times towards his mother I suspect.
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I kind of expected Luke not to get into Georgia but part of me still feels like there’s more to this than he’s saying. Yes, he said he wants to stay close to home, but I kind of get the feeling he’s still torn between pleasing Jackson and his mother. I’m not sure how I feel about Jackson’s reaction either. He kind of acted like nothing will change. Like it hasn’t hit yet. This isn’t resolved yet. I still feel that since Cindy found the rejection letter before Luke did, this has her manipulation in it. It’s a good chapter but sort of leaves me unsettled.
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Oh I’d have told her more that just to back off. It’s way passed that point now as Cindy isn’t listening to anyone and barely listened to the principal. She’s beginning to unravel me thinks
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Props to both Luke and Jackson. Luke for finally publicly pushing back against Cindy. Jackson for not pushing back as it isn’t his fight. Olivia would be wise to formally file a complaint to the principle for Cindy’s behavior.
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Cindzilla saw red when she saw her son dancing in such a way that would make a nun have a heart attack. She’s losing control of her son and she knows it. She’s only making enemies now and even more so with other staff and adults. It’s only a matter of time until she has a mental break at this rate. Frankly I’m shocked she didn’t get slapped by Olivia on the dance floor.
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She’s not coping well at all with her perceived loss of control.
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The kid turned out to be a narcissist
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Yes thank you. It’s not been fun. Nick better be careful or he’ll turn into Jack
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I can testify from experience that it is quite possible at 14-15 years old to be that manipulative. True, MOST aren’t. There’s definitely exceptions to it. I was manipulated and abused by an older student when I was 13 as a freshman. He was 15 and a Sophomore. Lots of factors involved there. Not arguing, just saying. Noah gives me the fucking creeps
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Yeah that shit was NOT cool. Jackson should’ve just walked away using the very legitimate excuse he cannot talk right now
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1) Cindy is always looming. Whatever. 2) nothing has materialized at this point as far as coming out and committing to one another post high school. Neither boy can’t make up their damn mind, but for different reasons. Jackson doesn’t want to force Luke out or make things difficult at home for him, wanting him to be happy…but he also wants him with him 24/7. Toby was right. Jackson still acts like a lost puppy around him. 3) I have a strong suspicion that the decisions will be made for them..err rather, they won’t have control over some things. they need to learn to trust the each other more and have faith all this shit will work out in the end.
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It’s your world. My high school started the DAY after Labor Day. I know others start the week before and they STILL got that day off. It’s whatever you want it to be.
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I’d rather Jack kiss him and build that relationship
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Cindy, are treading dangerously close to losing your son. Just wait until Luke realizes YOU were the distraction to Jackson. I have no doubt the coach is going to be keeping a much tighter eye on your nosey ass.
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48 hrs and while much has happened in that time, more panic will set in once he doesn’t show for school the following week at his old school with no word. A lot can happen this first week
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Yes I know.. right now it’s just hard to sit back and let things play out .
