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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    Please do relax and find peace. You have been exceptionally productive and busy. We all will understand your need for a break,
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    So as you say...."But it's a story about what Trauma does to a person. And those moments, however short, that give us connection." This is a tough read. Jimmy has lived through so many problems and problematic guys. Richard in Toronto was a horrible abuser and predator who lasted too long. He captured Jimmy and Marty found Jimmy and saved him. But, Ben saved him from being broken in Ottawa. Their relationship could not be normal. They kissed passionately, but wonderful Ben stayed a virgin and Jimmy did not give him up. This relationship is worth more development, please.
  3. Tate is surprised finds out he is potentially going to be a powerful wizard and he also finds out he has a strong, handsome muscled body. The catch is he has to find a gay bottom and have sex with him before he turns 19 or he will lose all his power and good looks. Tate and his aunt are now on the lookout for a gay partner for Tate
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    So, Stoker contemplated his death and was on a mission. He just knew Hugo would come for him they were united by love. I believe he knew he was being observed in some way, He arranged his shoelaces into a hanging device to look like he was committing suicide. Stoker wanted to provoke his guards and draw them out. Seeming to hang himself was his way to assume control. He knew he would not be allowed to die. Has he learned anything from Hugo's multiple past incursions in 1836? Of course, I could be making the wrong assumptions. We will find out soon. In a new time, The Bride, Kate, and Hugo were beginning a training session. She gave him a detailed description of what was going to happen next. Hugo was astounded at her knowledge of movements and forecasting ability. She would train him to understand how to find and defeat Dottie and her agents and then save Stoker. They would undertake multiple trips and piece together a complicated, layered plan "So that's how we're going to get Stoker back," she said, her voice a low, fierce promise. "We're going to use this." She held up her watch, its face a swirling vortex of light. "We're going to run the same loop, over and over, until we find the one perfect moment where Dottie is vulnerable. We're going to learn her every move, her every weakness, her every blind spot. We're going to learn the names of her agents, the location of her trap, the exact moment we need to strike."
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Clayton's underwear and socks will no longer be a subject for Lex to want for his own pleasure. I can see Lex wanting Superman's cum rag,. briefs, jocks and socks. How will Lex get what he wants from Superman? I guess we might see the answer in a new story.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    OMG--I can see them having lots of groundhog sex and getting more in sync and excited. They will slowly find love and feel it be reinforced with consummate physical skills. Hugo will keep trying to learn what pleases Alec and bring him towards him in real ways. Just like Bill Murray learned to be an excellent piano player by practicing, Hugo is going to learn how to give Alec the most powerful, fulfilling blow jobs he wants and be the most exciting bottom Alec has met.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Ok--spill the beans about the underpants in the bar story. You mentioned it but left us hanging. Jimmy, the alcoholic, is so clueless. His slowly developing relationship with a just younger Ben needs more development, please. I would love to know about them when they clicked romantically and really sexually.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Hugo left the shotgun to add one more item to educate Alec that they were connected. It is a physical piece of evidence Hugo can cite next time they meet He is learning how to play the groundhog game to win back Alec.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Hugo went back to find Alec working as a gamekeeper. Their meet was awkward. Alec was suspicious of Hugo and even more so when he said his name. They continued talking. They both began to connect. But, things changed when they both took their clothes off. Alec fucked Hugo twice. Sadly, Hugo had to leave before he could explain his time travel story. Ok--this was a first groundhog-type meeting, Hugo is going to make many more trips back until Alec realizes what is happening
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    But, you finished it. Completing the story mattered for you and your readers. I liked it. Thanks
  11. Sorry--This will take a lot to repair the story and re-energize the characters. You must have better current story lines that will excite your interests But, let us see what others say.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    As long as Flash is not like the controversial actor Ezra Miller who played him in a 2023 movie. Miller had a bad reputation from supposedly choking and abusing a woman
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    I loved this description of Will....." Will was like that though, he was music, wild and unexpected and intense." They are going to make beautiful music together one day as Jimmy prophesied.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    As a runner, Flash might love the reward of having his tired feet and legs massaged, kissed and licked. I bet his feet would have a powerful, beguiling fragrance when he rested after a long, fast run.
  15. I am wondering if the author has forgotten and moved beyond this story. It may be time to label it "Abandoned."
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    I was totally shocked. Superman raised his legs up and presented his bare ass for Lex to fuck him. Wow! Well, Clayton found a way and substance to confuse them and release their inhibitions. The result was amazing. Lex topped a willing Superman Clayton thought he escaped without leaving a trace since he thought his substance wiped their memory. Clayton did not count on the activities being recorded on tape. Lex will have a leather daddy he knows take care on Clayton. Clayton will be punished! This is worth a positive review. Ready for a new Superman--Lex Luthor story in a while?
  17. Both Lex and Superman are surprised to learn the other is ticklish. A third party intervenes and torments them. How they handle their tormenter and each other will be amazing and revealing. You might be shocked--or not!
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  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    Madam Woo centered Hugo and calmed him. The Bride appeared fulll of righteous fury over Dottie meddling with her friend. Hugo brought up groundhogging as a method. The Bride knew about it and had used it to win over husbands Hugo was not sure what to do. The Bride wanted to fight her. Hugo felt he would be trapped by Dottie and her agents. Madam Woo said he has to beat Dottie by going into the far past, not in the 1950's. She said he had to go back to 1836 before this all started. He had to win Stoker over and teach him how to groundhog--what ever that means to him I finally feel relief. Does Hugo have a real solution? Will the pain in his head subside?
  19. Vince is going to continue being a guardian, He is going to help Theadore and Jack. Theodore needs his pack lands back. Danny thinks he has said goodbye to Vince. “But it looks like I’ll have to work hard to bring everyone together. Wish me luck.” “Good luck, Vince,” Danny said right away, reluctantly letting go of his friend. For the strangest reason, he felt like he was saying goodbye, and not only for a few hours or a day. I hope the next chapter answers what happens to Danny, Ryder, Thedore, Jack and Vince.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    What is Clayton's end game? Does he want more than making Luther suffer? He can relish ticking Lex for an extended time. But, eventually he must leave. How will he be safe when he leaves ?. What can Clayton do to be safe?
  21. Danny willingly accepted Ryder's bit. They bonded and a new chapter for the pack opens Vincent opened up to Danny and told him what he knew at the point.He had been Danny's guardian and now he is Thedore's. He is still trying to understand what is going on. He and Jack are connected to Theodore. His pack lands are hidden. What might happen to Theodore and his pack are not yet clear. So, next time, I hope things are better settled.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    This was so painful. I like Hugo and Jimmy did for a while until he decided they were not boyfriends. Jimmy had too much baggage from his sick dad. The story about his manipulated therapy was awful. Jimmy had reasons to not trust In the end after a sad unwinding, Hugo moved on. Jimmy needed more time and the help of good friends to mature and find new strengths. I want to keep on reading to see what happens to Jimmy.
  23. So you are suggesting that he sees dead people as was remarked in the movie The Sixth Sense?
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Hugo arrived at Madam Woo's guest house in great distress with a serious migraine. Madam woo realized Hugo's mind had cave in on itself Dottie and her team had laid a diabolical trap. A complex array of facts were devised to overwhelm and confuse Hugo with too many possibilities for Alec's location. She intended to paralyze Hugo and force him to make a mistake when he returned so he could be captured. Alec was placed in a secure anonymous, hidden location with armed guards. Dottie told him about her plan to overload and confuse Hugo to help him make a fatal mistake. Dottie knew Alec would be helpless and could not warn Hugo. Can Madam Woo help Hugo find a solution to his mental overload? Dottie will not be counting on Hugo getting help.
  25. Who cannot absolutely like the end of the short story?. Will and Danny are together and planning a vacation. They no longer have a job rule conflict. I did not notice or miss the use of "I.' I
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