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Well, Canuk----Mark is a crafted literary wizard. we gratefully see how powerful his mind in these stories. He can surprise and will lead us eventually into a solid conclusion after puzzling us.
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Yes, this new evolution of the plot against Travis is bewildering. Fellowes has been sending out false data. He and the law firm are central. They are controlling the gang in this new understanding. “I think the only thing that is reliable is that the law firm knows about Big’s problem. Anything else may be dissimulation,” JP said. “In that case, we need to look at this in an entirely different way,” ....Will remarked We are not yet told what than is to stop/impair/destroy the law firm and the trust aimed at Travis.
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We have learned the Hugo and Alec are unique. Pairs have not stayed together in the time streams. She is facing something new and is not prepared for it. Dottie does not realize what Hugo can do by carrying out repeated tries. If he is threatened, he can activate his watch and retreat and take a break before trying to secure Alec once again. He is dedicated to find Alec and should succeed. Remember how Bill Murray after a multitude of tries turned into an accomplished piano player and beloved figure in that town. Bill Murray got what he wanted. Alec will also achieve what he wants plus maybe get revenge on Dottie.
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Joel told Celia about his old school and team mates....“I don’t want to walk up to people I’ve known my whole life and see that they know and hate me,” I whispered as another wave of tears blurred my vision and I blinked and let them fall. “It doesn’t have to be the truth; they’ll all find the reason they need.” That line is pretty much outed himself to Celia along with what else she has figured out already. She encouraged Joel to take his time and to give others a chance,..".you will find people that accept you, not all kinds of people think the same way.” Joel is still worried and has been crying. He was willing to go with Gavin and Davin to their home. Now he is going to be in a new environment. He has taken clothes to use in the hot tub to ease his aching body and is going to be given beer. I am looking forward to finding out what happens. Will Gavin and Davin pump him for more info? What else might happen?
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Jimmy--The life you have lived has been so challenging and you came out of top and did not let people or incidents drag you down. Your dad was so abusive and did not give you a strong foundation to grow upon and left you with issues for therapy. People you met along the way hurt you or gave you reasons to grow better or serve as hard and maybe better lessons for life. I am glad you found sex fulfilling and sometimes educational. Enough good people were drawn to you to help you out. You had to be a compelling, engaging guy. Vinegar Joe Stilwell, A US Army General who advised Chiang Kai-shek in China during WWII, had a favorite phrase which was "Don't Let the bastards grind you down." You did not let that happen to you, too. You have impressive ability to write about your past without being consumed by it. I am sorry to read about your train accident and need to use a wheel chair. I am now using a cane and sometimes a walker. We adapt and move on.
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Henry Reed may have heard some hints in the past 40 years where Alec is being hidden. Leaks about a kept guy might become known as time passes and the need for continued secrecy seems unwarranted My guess is that Alec would be housed near DC to be pulled in to the White House when Hugo is found --like at a military base such as Fort Meade or Fort Belvoir of maybe at the FBI training center at Quantico VA. A trap too obviously suggesting where Alec is kept might be devised in a location in DC proper.
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Henry is the key fulcrum point for Alec.He has explained the time situation and recurring limits to Hugo in clear terms. Hugo will come back every year at the same point and have a week to get Stoker back. This time Hugo returned 40 years after they met President Eisenhower. Mr, Reed or Henry as he wants to be called now played a movie on tape for Hugo. They both watched Groundhog Day so Hugo could see what he could do. He could repeat himself each time period until he got it right just like Bill Murray did in the movie. Dottie and crew would be expecting him and have set a trap where she expected him to look or where the false clues on his location were disclosed. She had made sure Stoker was really hidden But Dottie did not know where Hugo would first return each year in the same time period but she would be waiting at her trap. But, she may have not seen Groundhog Day. Hugo now knows he has an infinite number of times to get his efforts right to find a second watch and recover Alec. Hugo , I am sure, will be determined to succeed. I hope Alec has kept his spirits up and is looking for Hugo to return. Alec must have sought to be busy and physically active. His captors will have wanted him to be cooperative to aid their plans for Hugo's use.
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Joel was gracious enough to ride Raven and he survived. Now he has to make a school decision. He does not want to attend his old school and face the students and rumors. Surprisingly, his dad thought he would be still playing on. his old team His coach will miss him. Celia said she and Trace can arrange for him to go to a new school with her son. Will he be asked to play baseball at that school? Joel has accepted an offer to stay with Gavin and Davin. Their parents will not be home. Davin said they have a hot tub and beer. This is a recipe for mischief and loose lips. Will Joel say too much or do something he will regret? Let us see what happens.
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Umbridge deserved what she got in the Forbidden Forest. The centaurs got their revenge. Dottie is going to regret what she did to Hugo and Alec.
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Jimmy, You meet such interesting people and learn from them as you evolve. What fascinating experiences. The public sex shamelessly told. Your expanding and contraction relationships amaze me. I love that you keep those you care about near to your heart and them feel good about you as you both move on. I am especially impressed by your interaction with Professor Michael. He was taken with you, studied you, set you back on a path for your educational life and set good examples in the classroom that guided you later. You make me want to learn more about you and the key people in your life.
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Hugo returned the mirrors and shouted that he wanted to go back for Alec. He heard the music to Hallelujah playing as background. He saw and new it was his devil tormented him. He argued with the devil and was rebuffed. If he went back the men in 1953 would drain him dry and destroy him. Hugo was willing to go back and find Alec--who would be used as a way to force Hugo to comply. The devil told he could only go back a week later in 1953. Hugo will surf the streams to end up finding Alec. The devil is going to see Hugo in action. .Also, the devil said.... "This is really going to be interesting isn't it? I get to watch you go insane. Beautiful really... how does it go... you do it to yourself?" What a shocking end of this part. It is devoid of realistic hope for a good outcome.
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Pentatonix - Hallelujah (Official Video)
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We are told...."Hugo and Alec must navigate a world of anachronistic warriors, sadistic machine hunters, and enigmatic guides. They are on a collision course....." This is a challenging, very readable story of two main characters taken out of their time who grow beyond their original views of their boundaries and to become obviously close and to bond and to need to be together. We see them traveling through time facing unusual challenges, beings and some who want to use them. Be ready to be surprised and captivated by what you read.
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OMG--Hugo had to leave. He was the only one with a watch. He was the most prized because of the knowledge he could deliver. Alec asked Hugo to go on his own. He would seek a watch later. He assured Hugo he would not forget him and he would find him. Their situation got worse as tghey were planning what to do. Alec did not have a watch.The FBI showed up in force in the bar to take him and Alec. Dottie was with them and must have taken them to this place.Alec fought them off to save Hugo but could not impair all of the FBI men and was taken down and severely hurt. He would be arrested. Hugo used the watch during the fight and are now he is separated from Alec. Dottie did not see Hugo leave. She will be mad. Alec begins his trek to find Hugo What a cliffhanger!
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Five years later--- Azula and his people are prospering--But-- They are looked upon by other powers as a prize to claim or re-claim. Azula is going to be asked by his council on what is to be done Raith has been so upset and distant with his wife. She gave him drugs twice to force him to make love to his wife and she bore two children separately. He could not forgive her actions. Now back after a long tour of the border he met his wife, He would not take any drink from her. She poured tea in her cup and her son asked for one, too. She immediately became distressed and died quickly. Their son who drank little of the tea was knocked out but not dead now. Healers were called. Poison in the tea was found and some medicine was given to the ill young son who hopefully will recover. Raith has locked the house down. He will follow up investigating Rassa who was mentioned by his dying wife. Raith does not know Rassa is a spy for his wife's evil father and intended to poison the prime minister when he visited Raith. Raith's wife overheard her father's plans and she was killed before she was able to tell her husband. I hope Raith exposes the murder plot and gets justice. At least the dangerous Raith must die What a nest of vipers!
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Family Is What You Make of It
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Family Is What You Make of It
Jamie and Hearst are really good together and they are committed to each other Hearst told Wen... I’m the only guy who can call himself an expert on Jamie Wicklow, drummer extraordinaire, the best drum teacher in the world, and also the most gorgeous barista in a one-thousand-mile radius.” Jamie return home after his tour with food for Hearst. He took off his shirt and Melinda thought Hearst should worship his body. Hearst thought about it and said he needed to start licking his chest--mmmmm They have such and easy and comfortable way about their relationship Thank you for this compelling tale.- 8 comments
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I vote for EPIC as long as Ray and Gab survive and help the others regain their proper roles. I do want Valerius to turn into ashes.
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I vote for EPIC as long as Ray and Gab survive and help the others regain their proper roles. I do want Valerius to turn into ashes.
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The battle was intense and brutal between shifters and vampires. Lord Valerious overlooking the battle was disturbed. He no longer felt certain of victory. Rafael was fighting with deadly force in the midst of the carnage.. “This is pointless. A victory of ashes. Stop the fighting. There is a better way.” What is the better way? Will both leaders fight in single combat till one wins?
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So, we now hear the story of Jimmy's troubles from winning the national literary prize. What a mess. He was so young. Now he is older with new friends. Hugo and Sareena offered to help him. He would go to class with Sareena and slowly feel out going back to college. Jimmy stepwise recovered and began his new educational journey
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They know what must be done in this bizarre respite location and have been able to come to grips with what is happening in the Tides of Time. Some travelers are leaving and others remain. I expect they will find two people who see their watches as curses and want to give them up. They might start with people who seem to be near in time to this present and may want to stay here. Good Luck! I expect Reed with stay behind to do damage control and stop any current problems from Hugo's and Stoker's trip.
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The Three Amazing Vampires
akascrubber commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in The Three Amazing Vampires
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"The Cookout (Part 2)"
akascrubber commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Cookout (Part 2)"
Whose heart cannot melt when facing a young, handsome, very sexy and smiling Brad Pitt--mm? He would win hearts and willing partners. -
I am sorry your other books are not in libraries crvboy.org has several of your works listed alphabetically under authors. You are listed as Lyndon, Christopher
