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Brian was very smart and his new father , Enrico, is fully alerted. The Wolf is off balance. He has a new terrible complication to add to his standoff with the authorities. Alex and Kenny are melding as a good team. The have a plan to take on the Wolf at the dam. Alex with infiltrate and Kenny will use the rifle to harass the enemy. It turns out he is a very good shot and Alex is impressed. I can see they will cause lots of trouble for Wolf and his men who might focus on them and not other external threats that might be approaching.
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The mess gets messier. Sarah kidnapped Ned and he is not aware of his role and real father yet. She and her RCMP guys are hiding him for now. Silas was made aware of her actions and can use Ned when he decides what is useful to him. Will has been trying to stitch together a coalition government and his efforts seem to be working. The Conservatives are seen to be infected by the Order are considered out of line till they purge the diseased Order. The new Conservative leader is not known yet. Brad Lapointe is working with the Order. He is leaking dirt on West to the press to hurt him and his usefulness to Andrew and Will. He thinks he is helping Sarah take down the government.
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Good--They finally did something sexually--mutual masturbation. This was the first time anyone touched Joel's dick. They both will want more.The next time they share a bed, they will be prepared to not leave evidence after they explore more ways to get off. I will assume some evidence will be left behind. Celia likely will be discrete and not say anything unless they become obvious to others. I can see the birthday party opening a can of worms touching on why Joel is here with new people in the mix asking questions.
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So, Will thanks Preston has a crush on him and would not like to be around Travis. Preston cancelled on the Hawaii trip. On the fight back to California, Travis seemed distant. Will had to force him to tell him why he was upset, In one word: Preston. Travis was jealous of him and how positive he spoke about him, Will was floored. He offered to stop seeing Preston if Travis wanted him to stop. Travis asked him to cut off Preston, Will felt sad but agreed to stop seeing Preston The meeting of the males at Escorial changed minds. It turned out Petrovic was most likely lying to them. The flash drive had spyware and viruses. It would show the location of the reader when it was opened. This could be used to hurt them and show they had the data. In addition, Will offered that Petrovic could not have a gay boyfriend without being hurt in his crime family. He had to not be telling the truth about the boyfriend and maybe lots more. Paying Petrovic's supposed boyfriend would tie those in Escorial to what must be an emerging problem. It was considered that they are being set up and they do not know yet why. They are going to think more about this changed dynamic and reconvene.
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The game just got more interesting. Two fighters are outside wanting to rescue their friends. The enemy inside will not expect the fierce fight they are going to face. Up to now, the takeover of the dam was smooth and resistance was stopped with no problems. Now, the situation will be different. It will be fascinating to see what Alex will undertake with Kenny. For now, perhaps, the two young men are not at the top of worry list for those inside. They want something of value from authorities since they control the dam. The enemy inside needs to be wary of any impending major military force that will arrive to retake the dam. They are on the clock and they have given the authorities a time limit. Do they have an escape plan? Could Alex and Kenny trip up their plans?
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A brilliant and clean victory. What a fascinating description of an attack by a new type heavy drone that totally destroyed the Order's drone factory stopping an impending huge drone attack that was intended to wreck the Canadian government and cause its fall turning control over to the military. Checkmate. The General and is team did not see this coming and he does not know that his role as an Order asset is known by CSIS. Andrew expects the Order to panic. Let us see. Their one Order ace in the hole is controlling Ned, Will's lost son. The young man may be held by the missing Sarah. We do not know yet. The Order may use Ned to try to blackmail Will for its own purposes.
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The Word That Changed Everything
akascrubber commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in The Word That Changed Everything
What an unsettling encounter ! Caleb, Noah's friend, just met Shiloh and turned and left. It appears Shiloh bothered him , but he gave no clue why? Shiloh did not tell Noah what was going on. But touching Shilo, a voice sprang forth saying Shiloh needed to learn the family secret. Is a ghost speaking to him? Did the same ghost speak to Caleb? -
Wow--The murders are 5 years apart. The killer has to be patient or nursing a serious grudge or has been away till recently, I suspect Martin and Rick promised to not have anal sex till they were both ready. If Martin was killed after anal sex, did he willingly agree? There are issues to explore. Maybe once the LiveJournal account is read, Rick will know more that can help. He has too much guilt that needs to be removed.
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Alex and Kenny --Keep your eye on the ball. Move to the dam to find Brian and Steve and who ever took them. Alex will be careful and disciplined Was Brian able to call CSIS and did Alex's father listen in? Alex and Brian have the element of surprise at the dam, but they are going to face too many skilled killers. Will Briand and Steve be disposed of after they are interrogated? Will they be kept as hostages since it is likely known they were not alone? How long are the killers going to stay at the dam? They have to know eventually a large military force will be attacking the dam, but it will take time.
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The General and Silas had more power to prevent Andrew from carrying out his plan and get real proof. Heck, He was relying on a satellite with military connections and Silas had worked for the CIA. The Order was able to block Andrew and CSIS. Sarah is off grid and she is aware that she is now known to be a mole. There are other moles. Andrew is going to fiercely try to find out what went wrong. He needs to find Ed or Ned. I cannot believe Sarah told them the boy was in India! It is encouraging to find out things will turn around in the next chapter, Hooray!
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Will Ivas spoil the escape plan for Danae and the three boys?
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Hmm--so the coyote --Enrico--will make the wolf seem to be a much smaller being, a chihuahua. Good!
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Ok--The title of the story is "Coyote vs the Water Wolf " So, our author has signaled that the two sides will tussle and compete and maybe meet face to face. If the water wolf is on top of his game, he may quickly realize who Alex and his father are. He may not want to get on the bad side of the father. We will see!
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The Right Kind of Pain
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Right Kind of Pain
I was surprised to learn that Alexander said he had previously had anal sex in the past--with a woman Alexander seemed to be carefully and sensitively trying to prepare Lyn for enjoyable anal sex. He knew what to do to Lyn. Lyn's encouragement and even demands requesting for Alexander to be more aggressive and less hesitant surprised him. Lyn had made up his mind to be fucked and he wanted to be fucked now. Alexander has a long and thick cock and he was aware he could hurt Lyn if he was not careful. Well, Alexander tried his best to prepare Lyn and used lots of lube. Lyn was stunned at the true joy Alexander gave him as he orgasmed inside him. Lyn wanted to keep it inside himself which surprised Alexander. Lyn was cautioned that his ass will hurt for a few days. This was unexpected new to Lyn.. I hope this tenderness will not be obvious to others and cause problems.- 38 comments
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The movie " Cruising" was about a serial killer targeting gay men in New York City. The deaths were violent. Is this plot turning into a serial killer also targeting gay men in Australia? "Cruising is a 1980 crime thriller written and directed by William Friedkin, and starring Al Pacino, Paul Sorvino and Karen Allen. It is loosely based on the novel by The New York Times reporter Gerald Walker about a serial killer targeting gay men, particularly the men associated with the leather scene in the late 1970s. The title is a double entendre, for "cruising" can describe both police officers on patrol and men who are cruising for sex. It was an international co-production between West Germany and the United States. Poorly received by critics when released, Cruising performed moderately at the box office. Pacino subsequently called the film "exploitative". The shooting and promotion were dogged by gay rights protesters who believed that the film stigmatized them. The film's open-ended finale was criticized by Robin Wood and Bill Krohn as further complicating what they felt were the director's incoherent changes to the rough cut and synopsis, as well as other production issues"
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Sergeant MacIntyre became the Gary Powers of the Order. When Powers and his U2 was shot down over Russia he spilled his guts and he knew everything. After wards the US set up specially compartmented intelligence and divided key data into separated closed out fields, Sergeant MacIntyre blew the conspiracy wide open and unmasked Abernathy, the General, the new huge drone threat and the plans that would lead to the takeover of the government. It was shocking and totally unexpected, Andrew began to plan and devise solutions. But, Sarah, the mole, was in the critical meeting. She heard what Andrew wants to happen without all the details. She was given the task to find and help secure Ed Rawlins This is beginning to look like Andrew will lead a colossal failure. Sarah will inform Abernathy of the plans. He will thwart Andrew. She will find Ed, now Ned, and turn him over to the Order to control Will and force him to resign. It could happen fast. Andrew at the end of the last book thought Sarah was likely a mole. Is he misleading her now and keeping watch on her or is he forgetting she might be a mole? This is scary......
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Alex and crew now know a well-trained group of military forces are operating nearby. They are hidden for now. Brian has confessed that CSIS blackmailed him to get them to this location. They do not know why the enemy military forces are here and what their mission is. Alex had called his father earlier and a vehicle was just airdropped to them. I assume the vehicle is intended to help them escape. But, the airdrop was easily seen by the enemy forces who should be racing to the scene of the drop. I bet they find the boys who will need time to get the vehicle out of the water and capture them. Will they be killed or taken as prisoner to the dam to be interrogated?
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The Right Kind of Pain
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Right Kind of Pain
A joyous perfect fucking for Lyn and Alexander. What a graphic and exciting time.- 38 comments
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Rick viewed the file and the pic of Alexis, It rocked him badly. The injuries were similar to those of Martin, it appears. Rick threw up. He needs to come clean with Helen. Is someone targeting him and males close to him? What should Rick do now? He needs to be very observant as a minimum.
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Alex said Brian led them into a live op. He asked Brian how they could get away. I assume the truth is more troubling than Alex expects. Are the people arriving shortly part of the force that attacked the dam or Canadian military/CSIS forces trying to stop those who took over the dam? The timing here seems out of line? Did someone know about the attack before it happened?
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Faith, Forgiveness and The Kiss of Eternal Drama
akascrubber commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Faith, Forgiveness and The Kiss of Eternal Drama
Father Matthew wisely counseled Sky and gave him peace and coinviction. He is looking ahead more confidently--and going to mass next week. His mother was advised Sky was fine and not damned to hell. Looking forward to finding out how Ryan and Sky related now and hopefully become more honest. -
"Audacity, more audacity, always audacity." Sounds like something a winning, lucky general of Napolean would say before a battle I do hope and pray Will is going to win--for the sake of the country
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So, the sidelined for now lawyer or a new Order connected lawyer might push for access to the RCMP prisoner and upset Andrew's plans to keep him isolated and in despair. There must be time limits on keeping a lawyer away or at least the lawyer could get a court order granting access right now. Andrew could be vulnerable for his actions hiding the prisoner away.
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Brilliant move Andrew Carter--You nailed Sergeant MacIntyre , the formerly secret pedophile. He knows he is in serious trouble. His lawyer refused to represent him. His only choice is to cooperate with Andrew Carter and tell him all he knows about the Order. Andrew needs to make sure this man stays alive. Andrew's work will begin to get harder as he tries to avoid any military entanglements,
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It will still be fascinating and great fun to read how you carry out this story. The enemy is despicable and unworthy and is going to cause great anxiety. They deserve to get all the punishment you devise. Plus, I expect you to show us heroes to arise to make a different.
