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  1. From a promising start , it all went downhill after they got into Danny's apartment. Danny misunderstood Ryder's request and thought he was a hustler. After some painful discussion, Danny realized Ryder wanted to pay him to let him sleep in his place. Sadly, it devolved into Danny letting him stay at no cost and not expected any sex in payment, It looks like it will be a sexless night. But, Ryder got naked to take a shower and his body and large cock turned Dany on. When they sleep in in the bed, nature may take its course and the two might have consenual sex. I bet Danny will be stunned by how wondeful a lover Ryder is and will want more sex. Ryder needs a backup plan if it looks like it will take longer to get in front of his mate. Now,I hope soon Danny figures out why he is being called Joe. He might see Ryder's naiete as beguiling and a sweet attribute. He could see Ryder needs his help adapting to the big city.
  2. akascrubber

    'Promesa'

    Good News Raffa got his wonderful blow job with Gray's head under the sheet. He did not seen the male nurse come in and leave quietly. Raffa wants another one, too. Gray told Raffa--after really thinking about it-- he loved him and Raffa told him he loved him no matter what his condition. The accident has brought them together and they are happy .
  3. Qana is traing Richter to fight other powerful psychics. Richter is being tested and is growing in skill. He is unsettled and worried. Qana implies he will not be present to help Richter and has equipment in that case set aside. Richter goes along and does not question Qana or even his brother.
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 23

    The military battles have been won. Peace was secured and the political decisions were made in Marc's favor. There is an enormus amount of money to be distributed, Marc' has control of a large area and hgs a large military force. He is now the governor 5 star admiral. He has appointed good individuals to run the components. Now he neeeds time to heal and decompress. Adam was sent away and will be busy. In the passage of time, Marc has to decide if he and Adam can be compatible
  5. akascrubber

    Thor Comes Out

    Travis found out that his director wants to fuck him. I expect the Director did not know Travis was gay and only thought he was hot and vulnerable. Travis spoke openly to Will who offered to interject himself and his family into the fray to protect him. Travis said he could handle it on his own. As for the director .... “No, he’s actually pretty hot,” Travis said, then sighed. “I can probably handle it without messing up my psyche; it’s just a bummer to be cornered into doing it.” Let us hope this is a one time session. Will, though, has taught Travis to be a great lover. Wil knew about the Hollywood casting couch. Not until 2017 when Harvey Weinstein was fired and 80 women brought charges on him did things change.
  6. Richter thinks Qana knows who was behind the attack and killed the bloodhound to hide the culprit. This worries Richter but he decides to trust Qana. Than he talks to Aether and just realizes the one that got away was a brown. Arther becomes cautious and say they cannot say more on an unsecured line, Richter becomes worried. He thinks matters will turn very challenging soon. What is going to happen? Richter should tell Qana about the missing brown.
  7. akascrubber

    Thor Comes Out

    So much went down I want to focus on two positive matters Jeremy reached out to Will for help and Will is going to back him. Will will support Jeremy by attending his next fashion event. Will is going to back Jeremy's request at the family foundation to help establish a new replacement site to host new artists hurt when the airport site was lost by Jeremy set off the alarms Will was asked by Thor to attend his family meeting. Thor came out. Will acted as a friendly advocate for him. As it turned out after relection , Thor's whole family backed him and said they love him and accepted him. It was a wonderful transition
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    Chapter 22

    -The battle was joined with the main ships targeted first. They were destroyed and the other enemy ships were systematically next attacked until destroyed. The hold outs will be pursued until they were blown up or gave up. Marc was brilliant, nimble and aggressive.He employed his forces with skill as the battle flowed. A surprise souce at an enemy base who said he was a pirate slavereached out to Marc for help. He offered to help Marc capture his base and the details were worked out. Marine s landed and fought inside the based until it was fully controlled. It will important to help the slaves on the base and to make use of the intelligence obtained
  9. I have tended to focus on Thayer, but CO could be a surprise sexual star with new opportunities should they be offered to him. He is a novice at gay sex. CO keeps meeting young guys and being turned on without any fulfilling sex --Thayer, Ozzie, etc But CO really dreams of being taken and used by several older, burley and bearded men. The author can develop CO's desire into reality if it fits his voice--expecially if CO cannot get with a younger guy. Will he and Ron connect? They had a video sex effort. Will they seek out a meeting next? .Shamus fits CO's desired type body and age. The draft of his current book has a relationship between and younger guy and older man.
  10. The man who killed Cornish is a mob hit man. This description mostly fits when given .He left a signature $500 bill each behind on the bodies of Cornish and OK.He knew Cornish was an arsonist who could impair property sales. OK was working for a rival bidder. Further, the mob hit man earlier told Deck he could not take the Ghost's deal or the sky will fall.He made his point by shooting a bullet through Deck's seat.
  11. I think they should have more sex. It could help them become or comfortable with each other and drown out negative voices. They are liking the sex they are having. Cottontail is learning to be a better sex partner. Jamie is enjoying what Cottontail is doing. If they stop, they will miss each other. Cottontail..." was telling Jamie to be wild and free. It looked like he was better at taking his own advice, because for a moment or two there, he felt as if he was no longer touching the ground and was only soaring."
  12. One theme I see is the battle for the island and the mob wants it over. I can see the mob will go after CO's father to pressure Clark. I am not certain that the mob leadership knows about the Ghost. But, I think he was the guy who killed Cornish --we might find out soon--and should be ID'ed when the police connect with the tape see by the monitoring firm in India who called in the alert twice. It will be hard to get definitive evidence he was the killer, but his defense team might tie Dinwiddie into the mess. If the killer is not the Ghost, then he is connected to the mob and is likely going to be easily found and arrested. A second theme relates to the title of the story. Thayer wanted to give his virginity up to CO, but CO could not leave his home. So Thayer went out with Romey and got naked and was jacked off. Thayer was surprised that Romey turned him on. His cock got hard and Romey played with his nipples and body and unexpected loved it. Romey stripped himself and jacked off himself. It was a one way exercise but each guy received wonderful pleasure. I did not sense Thayer afterwards was more attracted to Romey. I can see Thayer is better ready to have a passionate time with CO and I hope it happens.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 43

    The bed news--Raffa might be in the hospital 5-6 weeks if the feeling comes back in his legs. It will be longer if the feeling does not return. The good news--he wants a blow job from Gray tomorrow when his catheter comes out. This is wonderful news about Raffa being able to enjoy sex even at this point. Gray will give him a bj and will be careful. He started to dream and to practice jacking at home and had to stop when his mom and Olly came home. Frustrated he began a shower and blasted out lots of cum just as Olly came inside the bathroom. He saw the explosion and Gray shooted to get out. Fray was shocked and embarrassed.Olly ran away and then Gray had to find him and to have the jacking off conversation with him. At 10, Olly cannot cannot create sperm but liked learning what would happen when he did. He was happy and lookin toward it. Gray noted ...."He grinned at me when I told him that. Then he said he could hardly wait." Let us hope Raffa has a rewarding bj tomorrow-----
  14. akascrubber

    Déjà Vu

    The Phantom is dead. Richter feels guilty . Luther is his besmittened younger lover Wow!
  15. The most conseqential development is that the mob or Dino knows about Dinwiddie an has decided things need to be simplified and a final deal needs to be made. Either Clark Berg and Dinwiddie join them or he and maybe his local man? will be taken out--killed, The local lawyer is CO's father. CO could be in danger, if the decision is made to kill his father.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    The challenges, tests and dangers kep coming and coming. The potential benefits are quite high. I felt they were acting like they were in Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom. Will anyone die along the way? I hope not.
  17. Jamie decided to not be concerned by what the company was doing to him. He saw posiive comments about his music which he liked.--wre they faked by the show staff? Cottontail sees Jamie being poorly labeled Tonight he wanted to have sex with Cottontail. He arranged a real dinner with wine. Then he stripped Cotontal---naked but for his mask. They bantered and vebally jousted going over the same old themes. Each kept their protective postures thinking the other will get tired and give up on their partner. Cottontail is more defensive but Jamie seems to failing for him. As Cottontail gave him an improved, outstanding blow job, Jamie was sad that after being trained Cottontail will please others--when he leaves him. Jamie do not realize Cottontail is getting his first real sexual experience and still has a low oppinion of himself. Cottontail was flooded with Jamie's cum and was entranched by it and certainly will want to eat additional cum. Is making love bareback next? They are on the way to a stronger connection and who knows what more?
  18. Ismail. a double agent, manipulated Alex into moving to Kill Rashid whom he hated. I expect Alex was wary anD not naieve. Alex focused on his tatget no mater the underying motive. Alex now in Beruit was contacted by the CIA, He was asked to give Rahid's locayion for a drone strike. Alex secretly moved into the compound and found Rashid. The drone strike blew up the building and Rashid. But, this strike did not stop the impending attack on Israel. As it turns out Alex was identified by enemy soldiers and is in grave danger. How will he survive?
  19. Piqsirpoq---"I will change this world, liberating everyone from these irrational shackles." A startling goal for the wolf when he becomes emperor. Richter says he will support him. But, for now both are delayed undergoing dialysis. Piqsirpoq is missing the Selection. Will they find out who was behind the attack?
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    Chapter 21

    Has the damn broken and Danae finlly seem merit in Darren after hearing him sing?Bartos has decided to see the local governor to ask about his missing father. It is time to try to find answer.
  21. Ray is saved by the wolf and he was guided by the wolf to a cave. There was a warm fire and clothes inside a cave.The wolf fed him and he fell asleep. He felt a warm, muscled masculine body hold him tightly and he liked it. He was not sure if this was a dream or not. He will hold off judgment till he wakes up. The clues suggest Ray was saved by a werewolf who sees him as a partner. How will Ray react when he understands what is going on? We know he likes being held by a harry person.
  22. So, Ray has been saved by a big, friendly wolf--Or he he just a wolf? I am ready to read more, please....
  23. JLynch--you commented--Just wondering if it would have been helpful to re-describe each character as they are used in each chapter…or perhaps providing a key or chart at the beginning…or, just continuing to work this through, perhaps a character summary at the end of each chapter. I have trouble knowing the identity of everyone who is speaking. I would not mind a plot summery or state of progress every few chapters or so,
  24. I guess you can say Ozzie has no filter. He loves sex and loves showing off. He poses erotically naked the pool with his soon to be luncheon partner while the gardener stares. He speaks suggestively and seductively to his server while his luncheon partner fumes. Ozzie is oblivious to any concerns . He offers that they could have a threesome.
  25. Akex is now traveling to a new country to take out Rashid. He is told the Americans want to kill him ,too. How truthful is his information? Alex needs to be very wary. Since Rashid is working sometimes with Russia against Israel who have very credible spies. Alex need to be on the lookout for two more opposing dangerous actors. He efforts are not yet detected,
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