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It's a standoff. Brian's life for the key. I assume he will hand over the key for Brian's life after making a copy for later use,' The Harvest Guard not being stupid will burn the house down to destroy any copies. Alex and Julian will be searched to find any more copies.
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There is not enough coffee to solve this problem quickly
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I think Sarah is with West checking out Julien at the PM's residence --they flew by helicoper--and likely trying to figure out how much he knows and if he could compromise the Order. She was not mentioned concerning the attack on the killers. I assume Andrew will not let Sarah know about the takedown and anyone spilling his guts.
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The government needs to keep acting fast. The Order will move to hide and destroy links. Will Carter's forceful speech to the nation told everyone including the Order that Bob Hesston's killers were found and justice was served. Will was powerful and conveyed how serious he and the government are going to insure all those involved will be found and also brought to justice
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Awesome--The ex-military killers were found fast and three were taken down and the final one who was the intel element was captured with his comm/spy material. He promised to tell what he knew when captured. Let us hope Yuri, the killer team intel expert, has vital, insightful information. Normally, information is compartmented so one group only knows the minimum necessary to function. The military calls this "operational security." We will find out if Yuri knows too much and the government can develop real intel to go after the Order.
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What Do You Call a Big Reveal?
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What Do You Call a Big Reveal?
Lots of interesting conjecture about motives and actions around the key blow job and fucking. Some, I think are on point., I hope our dear writer will give us more direct thoughts from the four on what has been transpiring.- 47 comments
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Of course, Sarah will let Silas know what she learned from Julien and they will set traps for CSIS, not knowing Andrew is onto them. Andrew is not going to be willingly caught. I hope Silas is instead caught leading the spy effort and will at some point mistakenly reveal the other key players. Maybe, Yani can get into his communications system and listen into him. He might also hear that Silas was behind the killing of Jane. She also gave out details about the Father's parents radio or secure phone system when she was in their home when she was in Louisiana..There could be enough possibilities for Yani to crack the Order's electronic wall.
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Where will help for Brian and Alex be found? Any new support will be unexpected , very surprising and needed soon. My initial hope was that that the RCMP in force will arrive after being alerted by their source in the high school. The other possibility is that that the text Alex sent before things got really bad would result in more effective fighting forces from his father to defeat the Harvest Guard.
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What Do You Call a Big Reveal?
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What Do You Call a Big Reveal?
Cane 23 The blow job Luke gave Brad was a defining and clarifying moment. I find your interpretations of the actions and motivations of Brad, Lyn, Luke and Alexander are very convincing -
"Andrew nodded at her, leaning in. “Let’s see if our little piece of cheese draws out our little mouse.” His eyes swept over the Command Center, as the careful eyes of the Internal Affairs agents watched as well. While Operation: Fancy Feast unfurled, Operation Whack-a-mole was lurking, ready to pounce on the spy inside." So, Andrew is hoping Lefevre 's unexpected and volunteered actions will activate Sarah who will see him soon and she will by her following reporting will reveal to them more about the Father's network. She, hopefully, might feel a need to contact and warn Silas and give away operational details and priorities. I am still concerned that key vulnerabilities about Will might be leaked to Sarah by Lefevre.
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What heart throbbing action ! Brian and Alex took Julian Lawson with them as they escaped from the Harvest Guard thugs/killers. They used the Ranger to flee in traffic until they had to run into a construction site to hide. But just as it seemed they would be found, Brian said it would stay behind and take the three on so Alex and Julian could flee. Alex left with Julian and put him in a cab, but returned to help Brian, This situation looks hopeless. Three huge well-trained brutes against a hockey goalie and a soft, probably not well trained to fight high school student. They are going to need to be rescued, or they are facing great bodily harm. Where are the Mounties when you need them?
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A new crisis or opportunity. RCMP Julien admitted to Peter he knew dirt on Will and had for weeks but had not told anyone. He found he liked Will and his family and could not hurt them. Peter contacted West at CSIS HQ who is arriving by helicopter to question West in the hopes of turning him and getting eyes into the Father's operation. The only problem is that Sarah the political threats person is with him and is going to be soon with Julien. Will she hear about Will's mental health issues? Sarah isa hard core mole for the Father and Silas. How are West and Andrew going to handle getting information from Julien while not having Sarah destroy their operation? Are they going to assume she is the mole inside CSIS and feed her false plans?
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What Do You Call a Big Reveal?
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What Do You Call a Big Reveal?
It was shocking--Lyn was taking a run looking for Luke and found him giving a blowjob to Brad who was enjoying it. This is what Lyn dreamed of doing to Brad in college and now Luke got to do it Lyn was very upset and returned to his room and took a shower while trying to hit the walls hurting himself. He was confused and hurt. Alexander asked him what was wrong. Lyn thinking more made a decision. He asked Alexander to fuck him raw. Brad and Luke enabled Lyn to be ready to take the next step with Alexander- 47 comments
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Helen and Rick met Shane, the injured prostitute beat up by Jarvis, in his hospital room. They offered to help him, but he was resistant and feared retaliation by Jarvis who said he had friends in high places. Shane was told by who he thought were two cops who visited him earlier that he was in trouble. Helen assured him he was not. Rick sat next to Shane and made the pitch that they could help him and with his testimony and one from another young man , then Jarvis could be put away. Shane agreed at the end to help. He also is going to need protection. Helen is going to be checking out who was getting into her case. It was troubling.
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OMG--Brian and Alex fought the snow, broke away from their attackers with a car ride from Kyle and eventually ended up in an Ottawa bus station finding the lost youth who was fleeing to Toronto. But, as Alex went after him, two menacing hulks appeared on the opposite p[latform looking for Julian Lawson. They were going after the target. What can Alex do? Julian sees the evil men and is scared. Time for some luck and a distraction?
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Note: It seems the plans Silas announced earlier---in the Prologue--have changed. Hesston was to have a natural looking death. The Order would not be connected. The funeral would be used to identify the new youthful conservative party leader. Prologue--"Silas walked to the phone, his gaze distant, already orchestrating the logistics. "Start drawing up the guest list and the security manifest. I will ensure the death is quiet, definitive, and seemingly natural. The Lion of Winter falls quickly, clearing the path for the new Conservative champion."
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OMG--The brutality and direct kills so efficiently done revealing it was an assassination was shocking, This terrible act will have a powerful impact on the political leadership, the media and the public. The Order has become a terrorist organization. The two RCMP officers guarding Bob Hesston were quickly killed by men moving around the fishing boat. Bob Hesston stood tall and faced his killers as he was shot. He was confident and did not back down. He was a true hero This attacked was meant to convey a message-"The timing on the heels of his public defense of Prime Minister Carter. The messaging is clear, Director. This is retaliation. It has all the hallmarks of a reprisal execution. The objective is to terrorize the political spectrum into compliance with the Order's agenda." Andrew is directing the investigation. It was clear the assassins had military-like skills and possible experience. It will be a matter to be included in the ongoing CSIS analysis The government's political leadership was secured and protected assuming danger is still possible. Will was taken to his official residence and went to the three boys. He moved close to Tommy and sensitively and compassionately told Tommy that his grandfather had died. Jacob supported Tommy. All three boys are a solid team that will support each other. Will was a perfect healer
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Calm before the storm? Noah and Shi are getting closer and they like it.
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Sarah McDermot headed the Father's recovery operation to find and keep track of Ned Sanderson who was born as Ed Rawlins. "The threat is not the man; it is the unsecured vulnerability. Operation: CROWN FALL is green." Ned will be a pawn to threaten and force Will to do what the Father or Silas orders. I assume he will be directed to resign as the title of the operation suggests. "Ned felt the familiar, private shield snap into place. He liked his small life. He knew he was adopted, knew his birth parents had vanished, and he embraced the freedom of anonymity. He had no history, no burdens, and no grand expectations. He was Ned Sanderson, and that was all he needed to be." Ned saw the news about the new PM, Will Carter. He was bored and did not react. He may not know the assumption that by some others assume that he was the son of Will Carter nor have any reason to think anyone would be looking for him. He will not be on the lookout for threats or kidnapping efforts. Sarah was a traitor to Will Carter and the current government and is hide Ned's data from Will and violate her duty in the CSIS threat analysis. If Andrew and CSIS find Ned and she learns about it, then she could alert Silas who could order Ned kidnapped
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I hope Will's select team looks at those whom are connected to Will and his office. Outside Will's inner circle hides a threat who could find a key flaw in Will's armor that could be revealed at a critical time, McLeod, S.E., BG Dr: Status: PCO Chief Medical Officer/Task Force Authorization lays in wait to research the vulnerabilities of Will and his key staff. If McLeod can gain access to the therapist's files who knows about Will's and Jacob's mental health problems, the situation could turn disastrous.
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The violence and destruction caused by the several men and their machines has to be noticed at some point by the local police and/or the RCMP. It could be hard to prevent others from noticing rooming suspicious vehicles and a menacing acting fake police car . Agridyne has overstepped and, yet, is not finished aggressively going after Alex and Brian, I believe. The massive scale of the assaults so far must be beyond the ability of local police forces who might need soon to call for more help
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OMG--Agridyne has committed extra forces and vehicles to do Alex and Brian in as they left the school. The car chase was scary, brutal, thrilling and ultimately a disaster for their car. They were rammed and pushed deep in the woods. Brian was forced to drive it into a snow bank so they could escape, They are now on foot with the enemy looking for them. This is Brian's territory and he must be able to find their way to a safe place eventually if they are not discovered. The enemy still thinks Brian is the son of the fleeing scientist.
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Will's formal PM office is up and running ready to face the pressures. Hooray! His inner staff held no moles. Peter is taking charge of the PM's home kitchen and has endured talking to Julien and being leered by him. No worries so far. But the highlight of the day was the new hockey/ice rink. Matt brought ground staff and volunteers together to create a solid workable rink that all could appreciate. The three boys will be able to play and improve their skills.
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Change cars Alex and hide your fast car, please. You have been warned
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The Dynamics of Attraction
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Dynamics of Attraction
Finally, the wicked witch, Cassandra, is dead Theo, Vince and Jack are safe. They are given short term housing by Ryder's pack Now what do the three do? Mate? Fight? Figure out where to go next?- 17 comments
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