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I like a long story--Plese do not go off base as Dr. Who has gone. It has lost its fan base.
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They need to flee and find that spot in New York. Hopefully, they can find two people who willingly give up their watches. Reed knows they must leave this time and is helping them as long as they leave. I have used the Colt M1911 as my side arm in the US Army. It useful at close range carving out body parts and not accurate at longer ranges. It does make a scary loud sound. It is a carnage weapon. It was developed to destroy Huk rebel forces in the Philippines in the early 1900's--hence the Colt as named 1911--who would he hopped up on drugs and stage attacks on US soldiers. The old US revolver had no effect on people in mass attacks. If Stoker shot Reed's body at a close range he would die within a short time.
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What an interesting date. They both gave their all and really began learning about each other and liking each other. Jimmy is very thoughtful and open about their developing friendship. Sex was not the end game this first date. They would last for a long time. "Just know that there was love there, and it came not in a rush of clothes and hurried passion. It would never have survived that. Wil and I discussed that the other night, had we jumped into bed, we’d have never lasted the week. It was a slow burn, intellectual, calm, and intense, like he was."
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Jimmy did work his magic and convinced a straight guy to give him a date and they must have clicked. There is something special about the evolving Jimmy. What a happy transition for Will and Jimmy !
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The empowered Stoker can stand up to Agent Reed in close quarters, I expect. Reed does not know yet about Stoker's new abilities
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Wow--J Edgar Hoover wanted them and had them arrested at the Smithsonian. The were placed in a cell in the FBI building. When agents appeared to take them to Hover. Stoker decided to take his Aggregate which gave him highly skilled fighting abilities. Stroker knocked out both agents and they fled the building with Hugo knowing its internal plans. Reed found them leaving the building and offered them a ride. He decided at this time not to kill them. Stoker's new abilities should continue to come in helpful.
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Please write with the dynamic covering your friends and partners you feel bests helps us understand you as you develop.
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What a charming story full of learning, growth and goodwill. Hugo is fascinating and more than an athlete. He really saw Jimmy as he is and wanted him and then to fully enjoy gay sex. They were splendid and brilliant and surprising. Finding out they separated on good terms is the best news. Jimmy is so young, and he needed Hugo as a good friend and best type of caring role model. "Hugo was the direct path to Wil. Without him guiding Jimmy to something better, Jimmy would probably still be lost. Gratitude for that crazy, geeky-jock boy—well, Jimmy never forgot." Now, please let us find out about Will.
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Act III - Holding Out For A Hero
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Holding Out For A Hero
Amazing--Lord Valerius has been overruled. Ray, Gabriel., Ariadne and Renato left the Castle and vanished. Their power joined together to stop Mother and Lord Valerius from controlling them. These four are heroes. The stage is set. Lord Valerius has oirder3d all his troop to move and attacked the witches and wolf shifters. This final battle should be violent and conclusive. -
Act III - Holding Out For A Hero
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Holding Out For A Hero
OK--I love the title, I remember Bonnie Tyler singing the sing for the hit movie "Footloose". Kevin Bacon was portrayed--but did not do the real dancing--as the hero to the youth in his new small town who are held back. You have set the stage and raised expectations. Will your story fulfill the hopes you have raised? -
Stoker and Hugo realize they might be trapped and seen as too valuable. The President wants to keep them to extract lots of information. Dottie will not protest. But knowledge of these two as gay men could be a weapon against the President. Stoker a is worried that Hugo will be hurt and transformed when he unloads information. Dottie warned Stoker about Reed but did not give a full account. He has traveled in the time streams for 200 years and advised three Presidents, He is worried about giving out too much information that could turn the President into a benevolent dictator. Will he kill Hugo? Will he find a way to give them their watches back so they can flee this time.
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A Wolfshifter Meant Only for Me
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Wolfshifter Meant Only for Me
Things are floating along without real resolution about the characters and definite roles for all key individuals. We know now Vince is a guardian and he was Danny's guardian. Danny is a healer. Ryder and Theo have to resolve their issues. Will Theo start his pack now? What is Jack going to do? I assume there will be a pack wide meeting to explain things that are now settled.- 18 comments
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Hugo was brave as you relate. But, you had to be something thrilling yet safe while approachable, sexy and compelling to influence him and see new possibilities.
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Jimmy was a ball of nerves only settled by the great Mike. Hugo, Jimmy's date it turns out was also a ball of nerves when he met Jimmy for their first date I love that Hugo brought Jimmy muffins as a gift, I like this very personal touch. I bring my famous banana bread as a gift when I meet people for the first time. The date went very well. They talked and talked easily and stayed beyond closing, Hugo was captivated by Jimmy and saw none of his flaws. This straight boy was taking Jimmy home for great sex and his first time for male to male sex. I have read they will keep on dating and Hugo will transform Jimmy into knowing what could happen, Hugo is going to open Jimmy's mind in good ways. Hooray!
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Wow--Dottie brough Hugo and Alec to meet President Eisenhower and his top security people. They had to give up their watches Eisenhower wanted to know how to deal with Senator McCarthy who was causing him great trouble, Hugo reached into his Aggregate and took a break told the group intimate details about McCarthy's plans and the key vulnerabilities of his key gay lawyer. Stoker was upset at the pressure placed on Hugo and they were given a break. Hugo and Stoker are in serious trouble. With what Hugo has reported, the President and his staff will not let them leave this time frame. They are too valuable to let them go in a week. They will be trapped unless they can find a way to leave. They cannot expect Dottie to help them.
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I agree with PrivateTim. Will should call a war council and they should decide what to do with Coughlin, Arroyo, and Fellowes. Will wants Travis focusing on his career for now and not worry Serious action is needed. We heard the trust still has lots of money and at least two major disruptions are mandated a year. Travis may have a breather for a while. Maybe the nasty records in the safe holding Big hostage should be liberated from the law firm safe so Big can no longer be blackmailed I want to hear what JP, Stef, Brad and Jake will devise to take down the three.
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What Are You Afraid Of?
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What Are You Afraid Of?
What a surprising turn of events, Alexande says what he wants upfront. Aa they play, it is clear Lyn is a afraid of real intimacy and even can't begin to express he loved being rimmed by Alexander. Alexander is very good at rimming and wanted to play with Lyn's ass. Alexander told Lyn he would be fucking him a some point. But, Lyn either was in sensory overload or just ignored Alexander' promise. These two are going to learn much more about each other.- 39 comments
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Mike sounds like a guy I and many others would have loved to know and be friends with. You are very fortunate to be friends with him.
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Jimmy is fitting into Ottawa very comfortably. He has joined a complicated, role playing game and stating new friendships. On impulse he held hands with a straight guy who slowly accepted his hand holding. He even set up a date soon with Jimmy. Jimmy is making waves in his own way.
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What can Hugo really contribute? He does not know the real issues of the 1950's--like the fear of the nuclear bomb. Is Dottie setting them up for a disaster? Even hand holding walking through the Smithsonian will be looked upon severely. The 1950's were the height of sexual prudery, anti-communism and fear of foreigners who might be dangerous in the US. Gay sex was forbidden. In Britain the distinguished computer scientist, Alan Turning, who cracked the Nazi German enigma code system was jailed for a very long time for making advances on a man after the war.
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Trace with Colt's help knew what happened to his busted hand. Colt was impressed that Johnny did not get in a shot at Joel. Trace advised Joel to get Celia on his side with the truth. Colt realized he needed to rethink his approach and knew life was no longer as simple as his old life. Joel thought...".I knew now that three counties away wasn’t nearly far enough."
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Richter learned more and more about himself. "It's okay," Dawn stepped closer and embraced me. "You're no longer a pawn the Senate can control." I could feel her lightly patting my head. "You will become something beyond what ordinary minds can imagine--a pioneer of unparalleled greatness." Talking to his half-brother, the future Emperor, he ..."{ exactly what it felt like to be a wolf whose mere existence was deemed wrong." But, Richter would chart his own path.
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The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
akascrubber commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
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Jimmy has good friends who care for him and are helping him. His new location in Ottawa with Mike sounds like heaven to Jimmy. I love knowing things are going to improve for jimmy with shortfalls along the way, of course.
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So Madam Woo, the geisha , is also Sinjin. Stoker first noticed it and was very confused, Hugo held back and played the diplomat acting like Madam Woo was actually a female. She told them they would be taken to their room Stoker and Hugo talked about a man playing a women, Stoker was perplexed. he said if anyone in their relation wore a dress, it would be Hugo. Stoker does being brutally honest and graphic. I am glad they ended getting ready for sex--rough sex-with Stoker taking charge. What a pleasant interlude ! They deserve some peace and time for great sex.
