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Marc and Adam met and things worked out wonderfully. They agreed to be bonded mates and have started making love for their first kids. The started discussing 3-4 kids and even talked having up to 10 kids. Adam will be tested in this birthing process. Meanwhile the two are having private time and their clones are acting for the couple in ship and corporation meetings. Marc expects interference from his grandfather and told the clones if pressured, they could leave. I am sure Marc and Adam can handle any problems
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Jamie took his time and fucked Cottontail bare hard and paasionately.This was a first for Jammie. Cottontail got what he wanted and was fucked bare and was flooded with cum. They both were pleased but Jamie regretted that Cottontail had not cummed They have to practice more! They are becoming closer really enjoying kissing and lowering their shields a bit more.
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Zal and Mel are going to the Misty Isles to learn mor about the red shooting star. They have been told it is a sign of great conflict and upcoming attacks by dredders. Faceles is spying on Zal and wants to know to whom he sending mail. So far, no mail has been sent by Zal. Faceless turned into a large eagle and killed the postmaster who cannot report that someone wants information on Zal.
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‘Cásate conmigo’ (Marry Me)
akascrubber commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in ‘Cásate conmigo’ (Marry Me)
It has almost been 5 years and Gray and Raffa are very happy. They work together and have great sex. Gray thinks they might take the next step and get married. He encourages his mother and others to plan a happy celebration of 5 years. No mention is made yet of a wedding, He arranges a wonderful short stay at a welcoming place and askes Raffa to marry him at dinner. He easily and lovingly agrees. Now they quietly making plans for the marriage which is and only announced being kept as a surpriseto the attenddes to just before the ceremony. This is very romantic. -
Richter is starting his academy training. All is so new. His senior mentor is a beta level psychic named Kotetsu. Qana was an alpha level psychic. His roommate is a deer who does not know what to make of him. Richter has a sword and he does not. Richter is now going off to his assessment to find out his appropriate courses of instruction. Richter is upbeat and excited to begin his training.
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Marc loves secrecy and planned a deception operation with a two people seeming to replicate him and Adam.The other couple traveled on his new flagship over two days while Marc road a shuttle and arrived at Adam's location in 6 hours. Marc will surprise Adam. They have lots to discuss in private without anyone knowing what was happening.. I hope they will agree to bonding. Later , a family dinner is arranged. Marc and Adam can tell when then what is on their hearts.
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I am thinking "The Jerk Off" title is meant to gain readership and not embody a defining and frequent activity of the key participants. I am looking forward to what eventually happens as the story ends. The story and main characters still keep my interest. It remains a mystery to me.
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Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
Ownership of the small island is not of suffcient merit and does not raise a constitutional issue to be accepted by SCOTUS. I think Dinwiddie will get the island either from a court ordered auction or after the family members re-sell their parts to Dinwiddie. The family members might be in financial distress , if they are ordered to return the purchase funds given by the mob -
Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
It may be up to the court to decide ownership? It might take a while to get a decision. -
Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
The story is not marked completed so I can see that there will be at least one more chapter. CO and Thayer are set to camp out and explore sexual activities. I hope Romy and CO's parents do not cockblock them. As for the island's ownership , I suggest in the short term the mob owns it. But, the FBI should soon learn who owns the island and will use it as evidence against the mob. Will the FBI act soon enough to capture those behind the final deal? Eventually, The goverment might auction off the island.Long term, I bet Dinwiddie will have the big money to buy it and develop it. -
Our dear author asked--"Anyone taking bets on whether it goes further?" My initial guess was that this was a one-off exercise in dominance. Travis said the director was hot so he could have other options for sex. A Harvey Weinstein was not a handsome man who likely needed to use his power to get sex. But, I would add some qualifiers. Did Travis turn out to be a good lay who turned the director on and made him want more sex with Travis until his time on the soap opera role ends ?Will Travis be offered an extended role--He is now a likely a short time cast member. If he is asked to stay longer, is Travis going to be asked for more sex? He could turn the director down but need protection from being bad mouthed by the director. BTW, what happened to the stalker?
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Listening to Richter talk and think I thought he sounded like a god with the power of creation. He has limits, though.He was trying to teach Luther but Luther was failing. Richter's solution is to move him through out the ship so he would see and therefore know what needed to be created Sadly, he found out that Luther had beed tortured and badly scared in the past. Richter was angered vowed revenge, But Luther told him he kept his pain hidden to not start a war.Richter said he would not attack honoring Luther's wish. Lutherhad to get medical advice and treatment. They talked about retirement and heritages. Richter just hinted at issues with Luther. Will Richter need to end up being a sacrifice? He has not told Luther he was his successor as admiral . Luther was told the Empire's Heart--the fleet under a good admiral--would keep the peace between the factions. Richter has so much to do. He has a good teacher in Qana to guide him.
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Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
Wow--The deal for the island so easily was completed Gopnik was working for the mob and told them about Dinwiddie. Clark agreed to be bought out for a fee. The Mob liked Dinwiddie's plan to develop the island into high end properties with a club house. The Ghost was pickeed up by Stuart Church--or Elliot?-and taken to Tony, the mob--and told he lost he deal. But, the mob wanted to hire him to make the local land and construction deaks. The Ghost knew Gretchen, a local county commisioner. The Ghost would be handling all the corruption. Who knows, maybe even Deck would make a fortune developing and building on his own island now owned by the mob. There are loose ends. Elliot or Stuart is not captured by the police. Freddie might be thrown out by his wife. CO and Thayer have not met and camped out and had sex -
Marc has skillfully managed his takeover and expansion. He has ambitious plans and it seems all his opponents are destroyed or sidelined or kept in the dark. He is going to secretly go directly to Adam and spend time alone with him. After they work things out they will move to Marc's home base and could have a private bonding ceremony with only select invitees. I hope all goes well without a hitch. Adam and Marc should make a wonderful couple after they have a meeting of the minds. I am looking forward to seeing what happens
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Stef is the major investor in the turnaround plan for Anders Hayes. Will knows this since Stef brought him along to educate him about negotiations, Travis is a hot looking stud who has learned from Will how to be a great lover. He might tone down his passion to not make the director want return trips to his body--Like George Granger did to the Russian Czarina--I think Travis would be wise to ask for help if the director invited or almost pushed him to go to large entertainment parties where sex and drugs where going to be involved. Will knows about these parties in Hollywood and has been there. PDiddy had a long streak of sex parties that began in 1998. Young people were preyed upon. He was arrested in 2024.
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Nuestro primer año (Our first year)
akascrubber commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Nuestro primer año (Our first year)
Thank you for a rather full and well rounded story of the first year. Raffa endured pain an struggled but finally was released after 6 weeks.He was not addicted to his pain meds. Gray moved in with him and took care of him after work. The eventually both topped and Raffa realized he was able to return to work. Animal's trial was delayed but he finally was tried and received 8 years jail time. Raffa and Gray will need to be careful when he gets out. Luckily, Raffa and Gray were supported by their families and friends, Only, Mike disappeared Gray remarked....."Raffa and I are as happy as we have ever been. Life is good, but I’m sure that it can get even better." You left us feeling very good about the Raff and Gray and their close associates. They suffered but have come out stronger. I hope to read more about their lives. -
Success--They worked through all the dangers and traps and reached thr grimoire. They felt something change inside themselves but did not know what happened. When they took the book outside they found that sunlight no longer threatened them They were so happy. Back home Remy was offered the chance to join their family, They jointly underwent many tests an learned more about him and liked what they found. Remy took some time and decided to give up being alone agent and joined their family. They are now enjoying being together and savoring the city and its cultural offerings.
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Qana ,his beloved teacher , gave him his last words of advice and his sword and Richter stepped into a transmitting wormhole. Richter will have 6 years of training before his deployment. He will be changed. What a new story ahead!
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You gave us an encouraging outline of Marc's growth and path onto wellness. He indicated he is close to want to see Adam. He has friends to support him and many tasks to keep him busy The busineses were on track to be highly productive. The defense requirements are fulfiled so that the areas are very secure. He worked on developing his empire and kept isolated from the business and other family matters Now, his sisters and parents and in-laws have shown up unexpected and Marc did not blow up. They are going to have a big dinner. Let us see what happens.
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Chapter 23 Tomorrow (Today)
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 23 Tomorrow (Today)
Dear author you asked a good question. What happened to Elliot? He is missing and not at work. The police are looking for him since he appears to look like the killer, Stuart Churchill. However, the images are vague. Elliot has appeared frequently as a handsome youth who had sex with Freddie, an older man, and was caught having sex with Ozzie. He was last seen in Freddie's pool house having sex with Freddie this morning at 1 AM. He wanted to leave the area and asked Freddie to go away with him. Freddie could not leave his wife. So, for now Elliot has vanished. Well, Elliot is mysterious. He said he made up a bio about himself for Freddie when asked and his interior dialogue commented he was telling a story. Elliot told Freddie he was 19--he liked that age--and was a college student at St Thomas with public school teachers as his parents from WI. Elliot never indicated he was anything other than a highly sexed college student working at jobs during the summer. Is this his real personality or is he an experienced killer disguised as a summer worker? This posibilty was indirectly provoked by the author. Maybe the police will find both Elliot and Stuart and solve the dilemma. Time to keep an open mind. BTW, if Elliot is the killer and has vanished, who will the mob get to kill the Ghost?, -
OMG--Richter was drawn out searching for his troubled brother and foud a new group. He met "They--" the ones really in charge --the Council and was tested and had to defend/display his power. He surprisingly bested a Council member who thought little of him. The leader, a very large dragon, wecolmed Richter and his brother into their program. They will meet tomorrow for more training. Master Qana will bring them. Will Qana explain to him what is happening?
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Chapter 23 Tomorrow (Today)
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 23 Tomorrow (Today)
Things are slowly comming to a head. I have some thoughs about next steps. I hope some are correct. The mob ended up with the island propery owned by Deck and Dickie Lee. Neither sellers were happy. Plus the mob arranged a 99 year lease on the cult portion. The Ghost pressured Linnie Lee and bought her out. Now two different groups were set to battle probably to the death when the sides became fully known. Neither side does not yet know about the other's property purchases. I do not knoq how tey canshare or come to a deal that either wants. The mob hired an internaional killer, aka Stuart Churchill and other names, who is very elusive. He is likely to go after the Ghost when he knows about him. Meanwhile, law enforcement is acting like the keystone cops and misidentifed Elliot as Stuart Churchill,, They are searching for him and contacted Ozzie just after he performed for several old men. The dead brother's funeral is in the afternoon. I can expect the Ghost will show up to try to buy the other brothers out. He might need to follow them to have a private conversation. Will Churchill be looking out for his competitor? Willl any of the brothers return to the island to clean out their cabin? The Ghost may try to visit them and Chuechilll might follow him. CO and Thayer are going to camp out on the island to have sex. Will they get caught up in the conflict? -
Thank you for an interesting tale of spies, dangers and near misses.Alex working under great danger seemed to always be hunted and on the run. He had a useful network of contacts who helped him move about, meet resources and apply his special skills.He ws able to feret out the intel to stop a war the world by showing to the right intel people that Russia was behind the threat . He survived in this volatile area to keep on applying his trade acting a a ghost.
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Chapter 22 That’s The Way She Goes
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 22 That’s The Way She Goes
The mob killer left a $500 bill behind on each body. Any such bill will be rare. Anyone in the lake area found with one or more $500 bills will stand out. FYI--The largest bill printed since 1969 has been a $100 bill. Any older larger denominations printed before 1969 can still be used. -
What Misunderstanding?
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What Misunderstanding?
I agree with the evidence and reasoning expressed by Al Norris and seconded by drpaladin. Bravo. I think you have found what will be the Ariadne Thread through the plot puzzle. Danny and Ryder , I suggest, have to connect fully mentally and physically--make love-to know they are fated. It looks like they both are too far apart and will have to struggle to finally come to realize they are in love and a couple. Then the challenge will be how Danny handles being with a werewolf and the option/need for him to be one.
