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A restless young man, Sam, meets a at knight at the front door of the home of his parents. I can see an adventure beginning....

Hope the right chapter sequence is posted ASAP

So Skylar and Gabriel ended up passionately kissing and bare ass grabbing in public with Ryan seeing them. Skylar got into physically connecting seriously more than he expected, Now Gabriel was driving him home. Still more play mighty happen. Gabriel listened to Skylar's concerns about just being out and needing figuring out. His response to Skylar wound up was perfect--he said he was willing to do more when Skylar wanted to do more. Plus, during the beach party Ryan had essentially ignored him Now, let's see what happens and if Skylar's Greek gods trust him differently during the next week. Will Gabriel become more touchy and leave open a possibility of a future date? Will Ryan stop the tutor sessions or delay them? When they meet for tutoring will Ryan become more physically attentive during knowing he has competition? Or will Ryan reinforce he is going to be a straight male and stop hinting at Skylar?

The spy, CPO Miller, in the sub is operating easily and is considered part of the team by his mate. No one considers him as not a regularly trained sailor Enrico waited for Ezra at the train station, But before they meet, Enrico sees two security operatives who know him . He understands they are following Ezra and know something has been compromised. If they see Ezra meeting Enrico, then the spy will be compromised and seen as an enemy and no longer supporting Sinclair. Acting fast on the move, Enrico uses body language to direct Ezra to a restroom for a non-public meeting. Enrico and Erza hide in a closed stall. Sinclair's two operatives search the restroom but cannot find them. Alejandro tells Ezra he is a spy named Enrico and these two men want him. Ezra is stunned. Enrico gets them to change clothes. He asks Ezra to take a cab and go to his place., Erza is given his key. Enrico promises to tell Ezra what is happening when they meet next, Enrico lures the two operatives away and kills them in an alley with his bares hands. He is a deadly opponent. We earn Enrico hates America. He considers the CIA set up and ruined his father. Moreover, he hates the conservative American leaders, especially Trump. He wants to hurt and embarrass America. So, now we know his motivation and deep hatred of America that is guiding him. But what is Enrico going to say and do with Ezza? There is a potential for lots of loose ends. He needs a convincing back story. If he cannot convince and win over Ezra, he may have to kill him. Ezra knows where he lives if other people convince Ezra that he has been told a fable ,he could spills the beans on Enrico. When Sinclair's men do not report in, I expect someone will follow up and from the reports filed check out Ezra.

Good Luck with your revision. You are a good and compelling writer. I have appreciated your later works as I have read. I can now see you have grown. I will want to read this fully revised story. You might try to republish in some form with an updated title so it will show up in this time period and not be seen as an older work and get little attention. If this type approach is allowed by this site?

The original main problem has been solved. Ryder convinced Pembroke or Theo to go to his Pinemoor pack to take care of the clairvoyant who ruined his pack before she might go after him. The story ends with a cliffhanger. As Theo's plane approaches Pinemoor with them, they can sense her power and it must be very strong, Can she be defeated? Along the way, we learn Danny is more than human by Theo's judgment and Jack is a skilled clairvoyant. Jack did not reveal all he predicted about Pinemoor and is this a real problem?We learn Theo might be able to rebuild his pack. The next chapter should be explosive and consequential!

Lex Tailionis remained as the top ship on its destructive course. The weaken Polian gunship without a proper crew fumbled along trusting in hope. It was no threat to the Lex Tailionis .Lauren was almost stressed to the max By luck and a fluke, Firlotte found the jump drives and Polian gunship was transported very far away. " "On the Orion border so it's actually declared neutral space..." Things are turning up. Lauren and her crew are safe.

The evil, cruel bastards got the unexpected shock and pain that they deserved from magical beings. Things did turn out well. The hot victors ending up hugging and tickling each other. Hooray !!

The inn and airplane service are operating with talented staff and growing. Love making is verry robust and fulfilling. Randy and Maverick have gotten married and begun their honeymoon. “CAVU,” I whispered. Randy smiled over at me, with eyebrows raised in question. “Ceiling And Visibility Unlimited. A good way to start the first day of our new lives.” I am looking forward to part II. Thank you for a fascinating story.

Jacob has sepsis. Will is told by sprogs doctor ..." the next 24 to 48 hours are critical. We need to see how he responds to the antibiotics and supportive measures." Will feels useless and is very worried. His good friend Jared McMillian is by his side. Hopefully, a silent communication interruption is effective and Jared will not be identified at the hopsital. Andrew has used his identity at the Swiss bank to gain access to Finch's data. The Swiss bank operation and copying of Finch's files seemed to be carried out without raising any knowledge by the bank. Andrew operated efficiently with MI^s help. The Canadian "cousin" succeeded. Enrico arrived before Andrew and completed his takeover of Finch's money. This could be fortunate, Now, Andrew and MI6/MI5 will have the ciurrent and best financial details . Enrico is unaware of what Andrew has done and must feel safe, His actions controlling Finch's former assets can be tracked. Let us hope Andrew's identity as Jared is not found out or his picture is not taken by the photographers with Will and Andrew at the hospital in London. Andrew is now viewed and a worried spouse and parent, not a spy. Andrew and Will have 24-48 of crisis ahead hoping Jacob pulls through without complications. Enrico could have problems if his now overseen control of Finch's money begins to impair his use and shows who is involved, including himself.

Lyn was moved by how Brad touched him and was worried he revealed too much about his feelings for Brad. "Was this closeness what he truly wanted? Obviously, Brad was aloof, blind, as Alexander said, and Lyn worried that he had already given himself away too much." Whereas Alexander's home was old money upper class and his grandfather was openly hostile to Lyn as a "charity case." Lyn was incapable in seeing beyond his preconceptions about Alexander who was touched by Lyn's expression of friendship. But, Lyn did not realize that Alexander was impressed ....“I’m not going to tell you. You’re too entertaining by being so dense to ruin it by telling it to you straight.”

The attack on the huge Asmus fleet with the hunter killers fighting in pairs has begun with the first wave of combat. Sephradon on the Asmus flag bridge is upset at the losses with their losses. The rechristened upgraded Raptor EW ships have effectively blinded the fleet. The losses so far are not heavy and the fleet size remains enormous . Katz and his DEW officer, Alessandro have effectively destroyed the key fleet EW ships. The are being attacked but still remain effective. The hunter killers have fallen back but will return to attack the fleet. This is the fog of war. Much remains unknown. It is likely that the raptor and hunter killers will not survive but , they are hoping and praying they will have a negative on this fleet and may raise concerns from other Asmus forces that thought they had a free hand to attack the Sentinel. I want to see what happens next!

Sky, Ryan and Gabriel can get into such much mischief on the beach wearing swimsuits and t-shirts. Will Sky have to make a painful choice on which one to choose? Gab as the most likely gay man who wants him could have the best shot at removing Sky's barriers and acting more intimate with him. Ryan should come with Madison. Ryan and Sky have agreed to be bro's on the down low. But Seeing Gab make passes and touch Sky could possibly make Ryan jealous and he might get more touchy and physical at their next tutor session.

The battle has been joined after the governor's nephew was saved. The Governor will back the Noirs. The priest will back them from his pulpit. “I will stand with you, Esteban. Not just as your friend, but as the senior priest of this parish. It is time the Church in this city was represented by faith, not by fear. And I will not cede the definition of faith to him.” The Governor showed support for the Noirs. Brother Mathias's chapel was delayed, His supporters lost government contracts. The changes and support by the senior priest were noted by the people, Brother Mathias listened. He is not giving up. He is going to study the ways of the witch to destroy her. I bet he will fail.

This is an encouraging story of a loner gay guy who goes on an African safari that begins his willingness to explore his sex life and adopt attitudes and eventually find a good partner in the US. He finds good males along the way and is willing to try new things and grow,

Things turned out well for a transformed gay man. A loner Vic went on an African safari and lucked into a gay guide who taught the joys of gay sex over two weeks. Vic returned to the US and wanted a new look, a new hairstyle along with a more confident outlook. He next lucked into a hot, compatible guy, Jason who spent the night with him . They continued dating but Vic did not want to commit exclusively to him. After a break, Vic called Jason up for a date and Jason turned him down. He wanted to be with a guy who will commit to him Vic was in turmoil and did not want to lose Jason. He drove to his place and asked him to be the one for him. Jason accepted. He wanted Vic to decide and thought shock therapy was a real test for them. Now, they are together and very happy. It is always uplifting to read a happily ever after story. Guys can learn and grow and find a good partner.

I love alll the happy tickling, Each guy knows just where to touch their friend/partner to set them off and make them feel amazing. They are living more encouraging, fulfilling relationships, Trouble, though, is on the horizon.

What delightful torment ! The emotional handwringing moments are priceless Sky meets another handsome, hot stud by running into him, Gabriel is a dream come true and as it turns out is in many of his classes. and wants to be seen with him, He likes Sky. Gab agrees to go to the gay club meeting and wants to attend the senior beach party and says he hopes Sky will attend. Gabriels meets Ryan after the club and is told Sky is tutoring him. Gab and Sky exchange phone numbers, Ryan takes Sky home and meets his sister before they go to his bedroom for tutoring. He needs more help from Sky. and he gets it. Ryan tells Sky in confidence he is intending to breakup with Madison after the junior prom since she wants to win it. Next another gay theme--Ryan asks Sky if he is seeing anyone. Sky says he has eyes on someone and does not know if he is available. Ryan says is also crushing on someone, but they do not know it. Ryan thinks he should go for it. Sky thinks he is straight and does not even think he is being hit on, Ryan told Sky he should go to the beach party. He is going-with Madison ? He does tell Sky if he breaks up with Madison, he still wants to be tutored by him. They say goodbye at the door, Sloame thinks he is into him and wants to see him in shorts. Sky blows her opinion off. Now, Sky will have two rocking hot guys at beach party. One , Gab, is likely gay and one may be in the closet after him--or maybe he is misreading Ryan, He is messed up. Confusion and more pain to follow......

Mason sent Eli contrary signals and then later deflected his opinion away “Besides,” he added, grinning down at me, “you’re cuter than half the girls in there.” Eli was shocked and dismayed after visiting a club to see Casper and a beautiful girl so into each other--kissing and moving their hands over their bodies. " I couldn’t shake the feeling that I’d let something happen to me that meant nothing to him. Like I’d volunteered for a role he hadn’t even cast.. After several days off, Eli was requested to attend another session with Casper, Eventually, Eli got on his knees stripped and sucked Casper off . He was not allowed to jack off until he brought Casper to an orgasm. Eli's following orgasm was his most powerful ever. Eli was in the sub role and fully controlled by Casper. Eli is lost and does not know what he is to Casper. He asks the same question and has no answer. " Me? I didn’t even know if I was a warm-up. A tool. A fucking receptacle." When will Casper tell Eli what his role is? If Eli is given a sexual role he might well agree. But, he is so confused and worked up if Mason gave him any encouragement and the possibility of affection, he might follow through with Mason. I am not sure if they are cooperating or competing to be a dom for Eli as a sub.

Poor Jacob is sick. His tummy hurts badly at school. His RCMP bodyguard is taking him to the school nurse. How seriou is his condition? Will he need to go to the hospital? Andrew has identified that Finch's resources are still being used, He gained the permission of his superiors to work with the difficult MI6. An effort needs to penetrate a Swiss bank to track the key server in Geneva, A chance meeting at Heathrow connected Enrico Alvarez--the spy handling Finch's money transfer--and Andrew who is working with MI6 to try to find the new person handling Finch's money. Andrew does not know Enrico is the one he wants. He is the mysterious "Al". Enrico thinks Andrew is a diplomat's husband and does not know he is a spy who eventually wants him. It will be interesting to see how soon the disguises are removed and the real actors are revealed.

There was so much going on during this meal and afterwards and it turned out much differently than I expected. The initial main negative dynamic revolved around Amber. She had sexually moved through the straight males and was seated next to John and across from Claire. Other males flirted with her like Zach which annoyed Tayor. Will was really bothered, At the end, Amber decided to leave early and Jack agreed to help her pack and take her to the airport. John , his son, was so incensed by John's flirting with this nurse in front of his mother, Claire, that he had to be held back from hitting him. Jack said his father was dead to him. Marie gave John no support and he was almost isolated by his actions with Amber. I wonder if Travis is going to fire Amber as his nurse when he returns? So the original expected blowup was not with Grandmaman who did not become vocal, but she did not apologize. I turns out Claire apologized to Will for improper statements and he accepted it. It seemed to be a true Thanksgiving moment.

BTW--- Bran should have kept Kyle's socks after he took them off. They would have captured his wonderful male feet fragrance. He can always give then back later when the fragrance has disappeared.

Danger--Ray, Renato--Danger! They found that the Queen and Gabriel are in the vampire lord's castle, Gabiel is chained to his bed and kept drugged. The queen has a weak agreement with the vampire lord and wasn't to control Ray who will be trained for their purposes to channel his power. Ray is the real prize, Gabriel knows they all are being held to bring Ray come to the vampire lord. Ray and Renato feel the ground shaking. The vampire lord may have found them and is now acting to capture them! I cannot wait to the next chapter to find out what Ray and Renato will do.

Love Bran's public skilled feet and toe tickling of Kyle. They are so compatible and want to please each other. Kile remarked...."Totally! I can't believe you bared my feet, and tickled me like that in public." "You once told me about how exciting and even a bit humiliating it would be for you to get tickled in front of others, so when the moment presented itself, I just couldn't resist."

So Taine and Edward had rough conversations. Edward called an asshole, Taine said Edward lied to him. Edward said he did it for his own good. "Stop," Darien said, shaking his head, "You brought me here for a reason, so give up the pretences. You had me unleash Lex Talionis, why? You brought me here, why? The Polian almost killed me but didn't, why?" "Darien," Edward said, reaching out to tough the scars on his cheek, "We're all being manipulated in one way or another, you just need to open your eyes to see that. The point is, how do you stop it?" Will they stay where they are protected on a floating island or will they face danger and leave on an agreed upon mission?