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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    Wow--You have taken this story to the end for Andrew--All seems lost for him and the sub crew All Andrew's skills could not stop the explosion and his injuries. He is deep within the bowels of the sinking sub So, now will you let them die or find a deus ex machina type solution to bring Andrew and others back to life?
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    Chapter 56

    I love the battle detail and the flow of combat. Marc had a wel thought out la, He was able to meet up with Adam and Hunter and Martin. The new areas were subdued. They saw they were lost. Adam is helping integrate new areas. Marc is going after the pirates More please...
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    I love the scenes of the two groups having sex and enjoying being tickled. The first one with three males including a half fairy who uses magic to add spice and the second on with two males earning big bucks online was stunning. Everyone was pleased and so comfortable within their groups.
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    Chapter 18

    Things are getting set up. An expedition planned to destroy the Amsus ships as they refuel, Lauren thinks t is too easy and a trap, but she is overridden. Edward and others are trying to repair the Excaliber and adapt it to alien technology.
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    Chapter 19

    Just a thought.... Will someone at MI5 stand back from the weeds and ask why someone wanted the files on the nuclear mine? They might consider that some enemy wants to make one and use it on their enemy that includes the UK. This dangerous idea should inspire new investigations around this threat.
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    Chapter 19

    I can see death all around. Things are going to happen no one in the government or intel services yet expects. The fighting on the sub should be brutal, intense and deadly. The invaders expect to die and will be merciless. They need the element of surprise and lots of luck. I hope the sailors respond fiercely. It will take time to get over the shots and killing to try to stop the attackers, It will be time soon to give Andrew a weapon, I do not see a path for Ezra to stay alive. Enrico or someone else will see him as excess baggage at some point while the mission is underway. Loose ends will be terminated. In fact, Enrico might be killed by the people he is working with, if the mission succeeds or not. The Chinese spy seeing Ezra and Enrico's apartment would tell her he has a weakness and poor judgment. The expected uproar and serious investigation from a real or attempted nuclear explosion and sub attack/destruction would lead the backers to eliminate any vulnerabilities or ties to them.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    Joel met the family and friends. The had taco's and burritos for a meal. Joel seemed to be awkward, but he was made to be part of the group. They were all comfortable and easy with each other. With some care he picked out a room and his boxes were placed inside. Joel became emotional as he helped open his boxes because this made things seem final. Ceclia hugged him and knew he was hurting. He did not tell her why he needed to move. Celia said...“He just told me that it was something we could handle and that you would tell me in time.” Joel is just beginning to understand the fabric of his new life. There are no sharp edges or anyone who opposes his move. It is up to him to adapt and grow and reveal his past problems. I hope he is supported as the truth is revealed.
  8. Travis has messed up siblings. He and others saw that they each got $50 million or the life insurance value Both still wanted to ruin him. Taylor thought her father was going to make her richer and Travis stole her bounty. She did not know her dad was going to screw her and make sure he won everything. Taylor talked it through with Travis and apparently saw the error in her thinking We do not know fully why Big hates Travis. I can expect his father spoke nastily about Travis, lied and poisoned the well about Travis. Big , I do not think, expressed any hatred of Travis when they talked after the father died.
  9. Lyn gave Alexander a surprisingly great blow job, It was only fair since Alexander gave Lyn one last night, Lyn thought..."Alexander looked like temptation incarnate." Lyn was taken by how hot Alexander looked and smelled. Alexander also has a wonderful large cock Lyn appreciated, . But Lyn was uncertain what Alexander really wanted. The volleyball game Alexander and Lyn won set some unexpected things in motion. Brad acted jealous of Lyn and Alexander' closeness. Luke in action was a desirable sexy guy. If he showed any receptivity to gay sex, Lyn might go after him should he get mad at Alexander. Is not Luke more like Lyn's target guy?
  10. So why is big or Trevor Buck going after Travis? He may not give up trying to hurt Travis? At least Travis is not facing his sister Taylor anymore, Jake and Brad need to talk.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    Taine has gotten things organized and focused. Lauren is going to take her ship to find the Rock of Braal. Also, Taine is working to bring the Excaliber into tip top shape. The young emperor is on board as his lover and now chief engineer Edward had a plea for Taine. Taine agreed to his request...... "The Matriarch, you, the highlord Kardiac and Walker can stop what is going to happen; only you four can. If you don't, they are going to..." He swallowed, "Promise me you'll do this." "You have my word." Darien said with a nod.
  12. akascrubber

    Good Evening

    Luther and Richter are being very intimate. They easily act so it seems normal. Bu.t Luther mentions seeing Richter's collar which has his scent on it. Now Luther imagines he can dominate Richter and maybe see that he likes wearing he collar. Richter must have kept the collar from Kotetsu when in school.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    The stage is set for the hunt and reveal. The captain has been told the whole story, so Andrew's role is clear. The three new arrivals are targeted for interrogation. Andrew is going to have to study the three men to find one that does not fit and who really is not a seasoned sailor. Reza is going to blend in and try not to stand out and put the spotlight on someone else. I am looking forward to learning how Andrew goes about his craft. He survived the terror of the helicopter flight and can focus on his mission. Is someone else diagnosing the sub's computer problems with an eye for repairs?
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    The stuxnet virus has to be seen as the culprit before a solution can be applied. This is a huge hurdle to cross over. It might even suggest Iran was involved since the virus was first applied in Iran. There is a stuxnet removal kit. "Siemens has released a detection and removal tool for Stuxnet. Siemens recommends contacting customer support if an infection is detected and advises installing Microsoft updates for security vulnerabilities and prohibiting the use of third-party USB flash drives. Siemens also advises immediately upgrading password access codes."
  15. Wow--Jamie met his parents and showed no emotion. This was his game plan and then Jamie left But, Angus spun it into a hurtful matter after he left and added comments on LiveFeed. Jamie was called hurtful and uncaring. Boy, did Jamie get mad. He was going to return and felt the needed to hit someone-like Angus If Jamie does hit someone, he will find Angus and his crew ready with cameras to film his anger and further degrade Jamie's image and make him the total bad guy Can Jamie cool off in time?
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    The mysterious supremely powerful Sephradon was outplayed. She laid a trap for her attackers which they did not take. Thinking Katz's raptor was guided by Taine she focused on killing his crew and then would kill him at the end. She was wrong. Taine is not on that raptor. Katz survived. Meanwhile, the Imperial fleet attacked the Asmus fleet from the rear and incurred severe damage. Several Imperial ships were able to engage their jump drives and flee to safety. Sephradon is left incensed.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    It seems most likely that the knight has been disfigured and knows his injured body and repel others when seen. Sam and his parents have not figured out why the night does not fully reveal himself. The knight is going to stay for a few days or more. There may be a few chances to see the knight's hidden body parts. Sam is enthralled by the knight and the possibility of becoming his squire. Sam wishes could come true. He might take any concerns about the knight as less important than the mission.
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    What a horrible experience ! Attackers burned the house down trying to kill them. Taihan, now a healer and former lover of Zal , lost everything but their lives were saved by hiding in the cellar. Taihan cured the very sick Zal and when recovered he knew Renn turned them in. Zal took the others to find Renn and the group. Zal will seek justice.
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    What a ness! I am not sure what Carter can do when he reaches the ship assuming the high wire transfer goes well. Even if he or someone on the crew realizes a virus has laid the sub low, how will the get rid of the virus? I can see most of the crew be evacuated since the sub is not useable and some experts brought on board to diagnose and correct any problems, The material hidden in the wrong guy's kit could alert the ship what was done and hide the identity of the true culprit, Andrew will need to be on top of the matter if he is to find the real bad guy. Can he figure out that the Faslane attack was done to enable a replacement sailor to be substituted? Reza is an Iranian. His actions will hurt and embarrass an enemy as a minimum, Maybe the sub will be turned into an unusable asset. Iran might also get the mine tech.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    What a crafty , hurtful person. Rikard met up with the young emperor in time loops meant to evaluate his power. He knew he was more powerful thgan him Rikard called the young man a third generation transcendet and a creation who is serving is purposes."Your existence, your resurrection, serve my purposes. You exist for a destiny, one that I have created you for. You could say, as your creator, and as the man that controls your destiny, I am God's God." His broad smile grew even more amused as he mulled on that thought." Across time and space he had a crewman shoot Taine twice. The young emperor immediately moved to save Taine and leave Rikard to his own devices. Rikard learned enough about the young emperor. He can be defeated, and he will tell Caldone how to do it,
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    The hospital picture and story of Will's grief viewing his ill son has gone viral in Canada and won sympathy from the political parties. Will was upset that this would be exploited and became mad and very vocal. Lisa his smart aide helped him climb down. Will agreed to her recommendation on how he could quiet the hubbub and make a proper response. Andrew and Templeman went to Aegis Defense Systems to follow up what was found about the attack. Andrew was to play the good guy lawyer and Templeman was to play the bad guy. Ezra was identified and his mother was known to be a senior scientist at the company. When they met with the company corporate lawyers they were told the company had an internal security problem and it was being handled internally. MOD has not been notified. The lawyers Andrew and Templeman faced a non-cooperative wall. Andrew as good guy kept saying Canadian security cannot be compromised and not everything could be revealed. Templeman acted stressed. Andrew's role playing worked. The head corporate lawyer asked Andrew to follow her to discuss the matter further. Templeman was left behind in the conference room. It turns out Andrew was taken to meet Sinclair would was impressed by him and knew Will was his husband, He did not think Will played for his team or on his side. Let us hope Sinclair says more than he should and discloses the real security concerns he has. Maybe he has other assets looking for Ezra. Will he tell Andrew about the man Ezra was going to meet?
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 55

    Mec and Adam have long term plans. They have a huge force expansion is underway. The regional vote passed with over 90% of the vote. Marc was ready and had Adam's support for this current effort. . Fleets are already dispatched and control of key areas has been established. Overwhelming miliary force will push the expansion and deadly force if necessary. The 5 sectors will now be 13 sectors Marc thinks it will take a minimum of 5 and up to 10 years to transform the 13 sectors in appropriate ways.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    Darien returns mystically to Excalibur. He understands Rikard's deception. He is really seeking Peligia. How can the Excalibur in its present state and lack of knowledge beat Rikard to Peligia? Darien and crews have some clues to decipher. They will try their best. "And you think this has something to do with the puzzle?" Galadriel asked thoughtfully. "The Rock of Braal, the logs, this..." she held up the disk, "and now the music... It's a complicated one. Do you think we're going to figure it out?"
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    JJ is outed giving a fellow high school classmate a blow job. He faces threat and ridicule when classes re-start. Two friends protect him and a high school teacher befriends him. Right now, life is going to be tough for JJ. I am looking forward to finding out how JJ and this story evolve.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    Jacob is going to recover--but "it hurts." He understands two committed dads to support and protect him nearby. This change in his health status is a welcomed relief after a long vigil. Andrew is away from his position at work not analyzing the present situation. Meanwhile, the Finch accounts are being studied and the raw data is available to be analyzed. Key connections remain to be found. But, new information has arisen upon the notice of the murder of two individuals connected to a defense industry project now being tested. The is one more item for this puzzle. Sinclair will also be notified. Will he tell MI5 about the phone report on Ezra he was given? The name Alejando could be seen as related to the mysterious "Al." Enrico and Ezra meet in Enrico's apartment. Ezra has found evidence on Erico's hidden life as a spy. He is unsure and worried. Enrico shows up bloodied and bruised. Ezra immediately gives him first aide. Enrico tells him the men seeking them had to be stopped. The rush of danger and Erico's obvious pain took over Ezra's concerns, The feel to the couch becoming more physical. This was cathartic and needed. Will Ezra and Enrico face new concerns as the situation evolves. Ezra needs to be kept in the dark about Enrico's real mission and that Enrico killed the two men and that the project connected to his mother has been sabotaged. We can expect Ezra will not be told about classified matters. Will Sinclair tell MI 5 about the tailing of Ezra by his men to find a leak? If Ezra is made a target for the Uk/CSIS , he will be pursued and sought as best can be? His mother will know he is missing. Enrico might at some point need to figure out how he can handle his involvement with Ezra as the situation becomes more uncertain and dangerous. Being seen with Ezra could be problematic. Is he even thinking of giving up his life as a spy and no longer seeking to destroy America? What will he have to do with Ezra?
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