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This being has an active fantasy life and so many questions.He wants to leave and visit a new planet for answers. Will he get his wish?
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Marc's kindness to not kill William and to deport and ban him is surprising and may come back to haunt him and Adam We will see. Marc used his power and connections to assert control his new area. He is going to help Alex survive and then be a useful source of intel for him.
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Richter is the object of curiosity. He unusally had an adamntine weapon. He knows only it was forged by Qana and maybe by another unknown forger. His roommate touched it while he was away and luckily was not killed. Now his roommate is staying quiet and maybe thinking .
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Marc and Adam are finishing up their vaaction. Ameila is acting cooperatively and several goodwill meetings/meals will complete the final taskes Marc and Adam received a surprise offer for a meger to save a blacklisted house, Marc refused and would only agree to a buyout.The leading family was not favored by Marc and was advised to take the money and start over far away. Marc's terms were accepted with pain. Now the challenge will be to integrate the new resources and maybe take on any opposing forces. Marc has the firepower to win any battles.
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Author's Footnotes
akascrubber commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Author's Footnotes
Thank you. I really appreciate knowing about the real life background of this story. I also, like others, appreciate the positive spin you gave to it. It is sad to learn the real life Raffa died in an accident. I am sorry you did not find your Raffa, too. I am encot=raged to learn you have another story in line and that sometime Olly will have his own story. Gray and Raffe will be good role models for him.- 20 comments
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Vladimir and Constantin reflected on their lives to this point ion Parisand those good friends ho jioned them and made them all very happy and proud. It has turned out very well for these close, very powerful vampires. Thank you for a good tale. Your descriptive powers are amazing. I am looking forward to book 2.
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I encourage you to read this tale of hot sex, crime, corruption, killing, mystery and twists and turns. The main characters are well described over time and should interest you. Keep an open mind and expect to be surprised and entertained.
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‘Felices para siempre’ (Happily Ever After)
akascrubber commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in ‘Felices para siempre’ (Happily Ever After)
They kept the wedding secret almost to the end. The marriage was a happy event. I expect they will live happily ever after. Thsnk you for a wonderful story of two males finding love supported by those who care for them. -
Chapter 26 Maybe I’ll Join You
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 26 Maybe I’ll Join You
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Chapter 26 Maybe I’ll Join You
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 26 Maybe I’ll Join You
What a surprise ! Stuart and Elliott are identical twins and worked the Ledecker deal together. They got away scott free. Now ,Stuart said we--not just Stuart- an offer from the FBI to investigate a blackgammon tournament in Monte Carlo. They are leaving soon. So the upper echelons of the FBI know about the twins and their deadly skills and did not telll the locals He finally know about the existence of the twins. They got away. Thank you are a very interesting, compelling story I have already made a positive recommendtion. -
To Have Lost vs. Not At All
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in To Have Lost vs. Not At All
I can't get no satisfaction as the song goes. Sex is off the night for now. Well, at least they clarified the situation about Average Joe and the flippant request for sex So,Danny is letting Ryder sleep in his bed with him and is letting him nuzzle his neck because Ryder asked. He thinks Danny smells great. Ryder , I assume, will not initiate any sex. It will be up for Danny to agree and ask. Will he be so turned on feeling Ryder's hard cock in the morning to ask? Maybe not and both might be frustrated--We will see.... Maybe, he will suggest Ryder come back if he is going to stay longer in the city than he originally thought. If so, Danny will be so turned on the next night that he will want now to have sex with Ryder.- 27 comments
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Red Moon--Good Luck with the repair of your computer. I hope the problem is not serious and the repair can be handled easily. I really enjoy your writing and will miss your efforts.
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Stefan Schools the Class
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Stefan Schools the Class
Here in California one city--Stockton--nearly went under because it had so many homes with 100%, no down payment, no equity loans, I remember hearing ads on the radio offering by a major bank--B of America-low interest, essentialy no credit check, no proof of citizenship mortgages--so it would not discrimnate loans. The banks were pushed by federal regulators to let people with high credit risks and requiring no downpayments borrow. The feds arranged for the mortages to be bought from the banks. When things got tough and people could not pay, many walked away and abandoned their home. Stockton had too many abandoned homes Many of these low interest loans lasted for 5 years when the interest rate jumped. The reasoning behind these so call good deals for buyers and loaners turned out to be wrong on a grand scale when the housing market fell apart almost everywhere.The banks assumed people would renegoiate or sell their homes before the huge payments began. They knew people moved and many did not stay in a home 5 years. For those that stayed, they were severely stressed. People struggled to pay much higher mortgate payments after 5 years or defaulted on their mortgages and left just assuming they paid rent for 5 years. They had no skin in the game--no down payment and no equity to lose -
‘Buen día’ (Good Morning)
akascrubber commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in ‘Buen día’ (Good Morning)
So far, so good. The wedding planning is coming together very easily. Several planning tasks are completed. It is still a secret and the ceremeny is supposed to happen before the barbeque lunch. Olly is kept in the dark so far since he likely cannot keep a secret. The guys are loving this. So, is anything going to trip them up and how will they handle it? -
So Richter passed his test. H as one of just 10 alpha level psychics who could blow apart the adamantine cube and the only one besides its creator who could put it back together. Richter will be sought by several factions. His roommate ws astounded by touching Gray Snow, Richter's sword. He saw a monster. Richter was not upset or worried by this. Now his training will begin.
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Stefan Schools the Class
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Stefan Schools the Class
BTW--If Will holds Facebook/Meta and Tesla to the present day he will substantially beat the S&P 500 and be worth many $ billions. He could lower his return if he just sold some part of those stocks. I assume if he listened to the conventional wisdom he would sell and lower his ownership at some point or contribute some stock to a foundation or non-profit to avoid capial gains taxes and support a charitable mission he favors. -
Marc and Adam are working through their personal and business issues very efficiently with good will and optimism. They continue to be very horny and Marc loves fucking Adam. Mike and Taylor are being integrted into their relationship and sexual pairings The near fight with Grandpa Alexander let Marc state his terms and expectations if the breakup happens, Sides are being picked. Marc and Adam would come out with the bigger enterprise and with the important contacts. The bonding ceremony is not yet set but Marc expects it will be huge and epic.
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Stefan Schools the Class
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Stefan Schools the Class
Will has Jeremy down pat. He thinks he really needs to change bsides being modified by his helpful drugs. Will does not know what he wants to see but he is going to keep on trying. His trip to see Jeremy and Travis next week will be a testing and learning experience. Will has not shut the door on improving their relationship. The classroom experience was enlightening. Stef made a good case for indicating the Efficient Market Hypothosis was not fully accurate. He made his $ billions on the assumption that the market was not efficient. In the end the professor asked Stef to return sometime to his class with JP and then come to dinner. I bet some in the class will take Stef's cautions to heart. It was nice to see Will was praised by his professor.- 41 comments
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Chapter 25 He’s Gay! He’s Gay! He’s Gay!
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 25 He’s Gay! He’s Gay! He’s Gay!
Sorry for not being clear HEA is shorthand for Happily Ever After -
Chapter 25 He’s Gay! He’s Gay! He’s Gay!
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 25 He’s Gay! He’s Gay! He’s Gay!
I am glad you will give us more definitive answers. I am interested in seeing what you say. I do think you can develop a new story or two from these characers I do like HEA stories, but they are best fairy tale like in my opinion , and such a simple ending leading us to dream is expected. The author Laura Fox usually has HEA ending stories after lots of challenges and mysteries. . I enjoy reading on the Harry Potter Fan Fiction site which contains many, many variants of the HP story -
Chapter 25 He’s Gay! He’s Gay! He’s Gay!
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 25 He’s Gay! He’s Gay! He’s Gay!
Wow--I apologize for jumping the gun and too many typo's Now, I an eagerly waiting to see what you have in store for us Maybe one or more of these ideas will apply--You will tell us Stuart Churchill gets caught--Is Stuart really Elliot?--Romy accepts Cuties' advances--Shamus continues to get more ideas and gives Ozzie more blow jobs till he goes to Brown--We learn how it happened and who benefited from the island's high end property development---Will Vern and Ethel live on the island ?-Is Freddie kicked out and divorced ?--and whatever else you think is amazing and fulfilling . -
Chapter 25 He’s Gay! He’s Gay! He’s Gay!
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 25 He’s Gay! He’s Gay! He’s Gay!
Amazing--The mob and Dinwiddie were identified and the key players were arrested. It turns out Vern owned the island due to a provision of the will. Vern needed to take care of his girlfriend, Ethel. Later, the island was developed into high end property like Dinwiddie envisioned. CI and Thyer had sex, CO fucked thayer and gave him a BJ. Cutie caught them in the tent and ws crushed. She then turned to considering Romy as her intended husband Shamus was enthralled by Ozzie and asked him for stories of his sexual escaped. Ozzie complied, but needed to get naked. His has cock attracted Shamus who got so close to it that he should have proceeded to give him a blow job. Stuart Churchill got way. His final payment ws madeshould be room for part 2, if the author decideds What a terrific ending closing many parts. There should be room for a part 2, if the author decides. -
Amazing--- Rituals were performed and knowledge from the book was gained. Then the book was burned and destroyed. No one else could learn the dark secrets from it. Now what?
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What happened? The world exploded. Is Richter alright? Did he pass or fail the test?
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Is it time to better explain how two males can have kids?
