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  1. Another curve ball in the plot to hurt Travis--It is now thought that Petrovic will be killed by unknown enemies and replaced with Fellowes. This indicates a big vulnerability if it can be exploited. But, any enemy of Petrovic will be killed or be killed themselves. How can the mob's problems be used to destroy the law firm that is going after Travis? Can Fellowes be discredited and can he made to look incompetent to Petrovic in the process? They need to do more strategizing, but another family problem has come up. Jack has taken a leave of absence from his job and disappeared. Will Jake or someone he designates try to find Jack? This effort by Jack was planned since he clearly left his job letting his employer know.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    10 years--10 years Hugo kept returning weekly and knew the characters in detail. Hugo was at peace with his efforts and not mind numbed out of sorts like Dottie thought he would be. She just saw one week passing and did not see Hugo's repeated trips back learning more each time.. They were at a stalemate and Dottie was very upset at her inability to win. She ordered Miller to follow Hugo back when he time travels and hurt him very badly so he will give in when he returns to Dottie. Stoker was incensed. I expect he will tell Hugo what Dottie's sick plan is when they next talk by the mirror. I hope Stoker can reach Hugo in time. We still do not know what Hugo's strategy is to save Stoker.
  3. Alexander agreed to go to Bella's party to meet her friends who want to see him. Alexander told Lyn he will get his pond of flesh and fuck him, He also told Lyn he will stay until Lyn makes a decision--but Lyn does not know what Alexander is meaning Bella askes Lyn to talk to her brother about becoming a lawyer. It is a lost cause. Luke does not want to go into law. Bella just wants him to do something that will make her and friends be impressed. Brad comes out and wants them to go swimming. Lyn objects thinking Bella will be mad. But,Aalexander sees them and finds out they are going swimming. Brad and Alexander have a starring contest and Aleander decides to join them leaving Bella in the lurch. Once again, Lyn is oblivious to the power dynamics I can see a silent to vicious contest going on between Brad and Alexander over Lyn. However, Alexander can feel assured he will ultimately win when he gets Lyn in bed. Brad is not going offer Lyn sex, I bet.
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    I had to look up...Baby No-No Moustache Man So in a TikTok video a baby cries when seeing his dad without a beard he used to wear. The shock of a surprising bare face was stunning and fearful So---Hugo will have to shoot first before Dottie realizes he is present. I hope he can find a way to surprise her. We will see what you have actually conceived as a way for Hugo to win.
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    Say--Could Hugo shoot to kill Dottie and then her agents will fade away?
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    And the strip tease and connected action would have been on tape for viewing over and over....to distract the agents from being bored watching Stoker just sitting around not being interesting.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    I am just blown away by Duncan's strength and determination. Jimmy was his true focus. He knew he was going to die and wanted to live his final days/week/ moments with Jimmy. Richard was there and Jimmy thought Richard put Duncan's ex-wife up to the birthday party to hurt Jimmy--unknown to Duncan-but was thwarted by Duncan's decision to make Jimmy his priority. What a statement....."....Jimmy remembering a man that had changed everything for him and wasn’t afraid."
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    So it will be time for both of them to jack o... as Hugo becomes naked ? How does this action help them figure out how to defeat Dottie?
  9. akascrubber

    Epilogue

    Maybe we might find out about some of the strong characters in later stories , but longer located at SunnyHill.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    I like your ideas drpaladin. You are changing the paradigm of a simple standoff with Dottie having overwhelming force. To go along with your chaos ideas--Hugo can wear a protective mask can set devices that force out through the ventilation system a great deal of a powerful sleeping gas to disable Dottie and her crew. Hugo would know how to use the ventilation system from his abilities.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    It is clear Joel is not going to make any intimate move on Davin. If Davin wants Joel to be more that a basic friend, I think Davin is going to do more than randomly touch him. Davin might start by again massaging his sore shoulder and let his hands wander to see how Joel reacts
  12. akascrubber

    Spouse

    But, Richter had a wife as required by his society. Will we find out more about her?
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    Oh My--Duncan and Jimmy connected intimately. Duncan wanted to protect Jimmy, but he was sick and dying of some not disclosed illness, Jimmy tells this story candidly and clearly to Will who is deeply touched and they kiss. Will learns about Duncan, Richard's controlling behavior and Jimmy's bastard dad who had him committed at 13 because he wanted him out of his new and better family. It is no wonder jimmy has valid problems and needs real, supportive friends.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    Hugo is going to learn how to fire the Glock. But, he will need a strategy to defeat Dottie. He needs to find one. Can he study past gun fights or combat instances or spy novels to get ideas?
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    Joel kept his secrets. Nothing happened to push him to be more open and he was very conscious of not drinking too much beer and losing control. Davin did not puh for answers. Joel was aware of every touch Davin made. It all seemed innocent. The only suggestion Joel got was to come to their school and leave his old one. Joel knew his move would raise questions he needed to answer. Gavin left to be with his girl. Davin and he spent some time in the hot tub and then fell asleep at the movie started. Joel might as well have stayed with Trace and Celia. He did learn about the lonely family life of Davin and Gavin. Their absent parents were only home 3 or 4 times a year. They really did not know their kids, Davin cannot wait to leave, I can see Joel sharing that feeling.
  16. Mix a hot gay boy with an online sex activity who wants to be really known as a musician who begins to have passionate sex with a guy who has such low self-esteem that he can only become intimate with this well-regarded sexy stud when he wears a bunny costume hiding his face and some body parts. Read on to learn about their sexual exploits, their misunderstandings, what roadblocks develop and enough surprises to win your attention. Laura Fox, as usual, deserves high marks for compelling story.
  17. akascrubber

    Epilogue

    Three years and they are still together and happily in love. Jamie and Hearst are a great couple. Jamie is still a drummer with Melinda's group. He told Rusty Parker about his boyfriend who asked him not to lie. What a pleasant ending. Thank you, Anytime you want to continue this story, I will gladly read it.
  18. Stunning--But Convincing and Affirming ! It came down to a battle of champion--Valerius chose his blood , Renato Rafael did not choose his son Gabe and instead chose Big Paws, Ray Suddenly Ray began to grow in bulk and power. He became clearly the dominant being. Renato would lose to him. Valerius tried to withdraw but Ray said No! Valerius conceded and his vampires left the field Ray's growth extended to the shifters and witches. They all became energized and strong Ray sought out his mate , Gab, and they united Great Chapter
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    Oh My--Richard is a cunt, certifiable. Leaving Jimmy with no way to get back in the snow. At least Jimmy took it in stride and accepted Richard's nasty, self-centered behavior Duncan offered to put him up and take him back to Toronto and he accepted. Now we must find out why Duncan was dying and what Richard does when jimmy returns Jimmy wants Duncan. Will Duncan give in since he has little to lose? Will Jimmy stay in contact with Duncan until he dies?
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    So, is the fix in and assumptions made that Hugo will win with enough repeat practice and that not one of the fifty with rifles will not fire in advance to wound? I am expected to be fascinated to see how this plays out. Will Murphy's Law not prevail? If anything can go wrong, it will. I wonder what precautions Hugo will add or learn from his groundhog experiences to save the day?
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    Dottie with 50 gun carrying agent. One holding a gun over Stoker's head. How can Hugo get Stoker away safely? Hugo has an unsolvable puzzle. Even repeated attempt will burn out his sole and he will still lose.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Doctor Krisa--I am impressed by your educational achievement
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    When you return after a well earned rest, I hope will find out that the supposed trap Dottie has sprung on Hugo by seeing Alec hanging from his noose will fail. Hugo and the Bride will have travelled multiple times and can arrive before Alec tried to put his neck in the noose and flee. We may also find out what Dottie and Hugo have done to Dottie and her agents so they cannot stop Hugo.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    Please do relax and find peace. You have been exceptionally productive and busy. We all will understand your need for a break,
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    So as you say...."But it's a story about what Trauma does to a person. And those moments, however short, that give us connection." This is a tough read. Jimmy has lived through so many problems and problematic guys. Richard in Toronto was a horrible abuser and predator who lasted too long. He captured Jimmy and Marty found Jimmy and saved him. But, Ben saved him from being broken in Ottawa. Their relationship could not be normal. They kissed passionately, but wonderful Ben stayed a virgin and Jimmy did not give him up. This relationship is worth more development, please.
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