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  1. No one yet knows two outside sides are trying to buy the island.The two potential buyers do not know about each other. I can see the local reps will easily murder the other side. Law enforcement might decide one side is guilty and miss the other at this point. Dinwiddie-Shamus is connecting the dots and found out about Dinwiddie and how it uses very dirty tricks to buy property, He does not know why Dinwiddie wanrts the island.The Ghost was in the area and missed finding out about the mob's guy and then about the mob's interest. The Ghost found out that some firm bought part of the island from the missing brother. He called someone and talked about Deck and guy is going to pressure his bank, Uhhappily for him, Ghost's conversation was overheard and relayed to some else. He is now on someone's radar screen. The Mob--The FBI is going after the Mob but not one local knows this. The FBI does not know why the Mob wants the island. Itnis only a small part of the FBI investigation. One island property is bought and recorded. The other three sibblings are being pursued. Only Deck is not yet cornered. Deck needs money badly and owes his bank lots.The Mob seems to have better local informaion and is much farther along buying the island than the Ghost.
  2. The situation is very murky. He left Greece by reaching out to an old friend who was his only hope. He is being hunted and is searching for clues. Alex learns there has been a mole and has a name. He is moving to find a man who operates like a shaddow in Beruit. I expect there will be great danger. He is immersed in a world of lies and intrigue and shifting allegiances.
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    The Marshall ordered selected people arrested who he claimed were guilty of treason. He would send them to the camps He ignored any mention of the Dreathbringer or past uphevals and the Age of Oblivion and dredders. The Marshal is living in his own world with hatreds and past slights and prejudices. He believes more notables can be arrested if necessary. He dispises the Shaddow Cross and is taking action. Interestingly, his young aide is a Montielon.
  4. akascrubber

    Terminal 5

    I can see the photo publcity for Travis will make him a hot, appealing person. He will look spectacular. He is handsome and an ideal surfer archtype. His career on the soap opera should get a major boost.
  5. akascrubber

    Terminal 5

    Two mysteries---How does Jeremy recover from Doorgate? He feels his mistake opening a door and exposing the huge security risk will ruin his coming out event. We will find out. I wonder what Belona thinks. She might back Jeremy since his action exposed a huge security risk. Secondly --What is CAWS? Did not Will earlier accept an offer to invest in Tesla and wanted one of the first electric cars? Is CAWS connected to him? If so, Brad and Stef will be miffed. He beat them on Facebook and now Tesla. He has the right connections and instincts.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 35

    Now, the two have to worry about Animal who they just saw. They had a great change in attutude from the relief in missing hitting a chain and Raffa giving Gray a winning blow job. They need to be very wary.
  7. Ok--more revealed and more hidden. Like life there are main players and minor ones and some have their own motivations unrelated to the big issue of island ownership. We learned that the mob or outfit is behind the cult that has part ownership of the island. The ultimate plan is to develop it into a religious retreat that makes big money--tax free--charging at least $295 a day. Unknown to the master of the cult it will be a sexual retreat. The mob will soon have control of two parcels--the dead brother's part whose sale document to the Ghost was stolen at night and is being forged to the mob and the pending sale by the sister. Only the two older brothers remain to be bought or .......and the final matters are expected to be handled soon. The interest in the island by the Ghost or Dinwiddie Partners is not yet know. The mob also does not know the FBI is paying attention. There are at two others paying attention on the island's purchase who are not yet named publicly. We now know the fires have been caused by a local arsonist wo. wants to scare people off. Unfortunately the young love effort has flamed out. CO and Thayer did remain unhappy after sharing one orgasm. CO does not know what went wrong. Thayer was uneasy and not sure why. Well, CO later met Ozzie and was excited by him. Maybe they will connect soon.
  8. Two parts Qana ran Richter through a series of outdoor live fire challenges. Richter chased after him at ultra fast speed and was hit by a series of surprising deadly attacks he had to defend against at a moments notice. He survived but had cracked ribs which Qana helped repair. Richter knows he has problem areas he needs to correct. Then Qama showed him the trials his brother faced in the selection process. He beat 7 opponents and at one point fought with a exceptionally powerful sword. He clearly used a psychic stance. Some one or more has secretly added this weapon to the mix which worried Qana. Was the selection being sabbotaged?
  9. Thank you for letting me better understand you , the challenges you have faced and the way you go about writing with the help of a good team. I think your unsual long record and compelling, substanial characters, interesting plots and interactions with your readers help you stand out. Anything you write I want to read and know you will make me think. I first became addicted to your work as I read the exploits of Midshipman George Granger. I had loved reading about Horatio Hornblower. Later, I was happy to see you added him as a character in one of your series. You are a gem and very creative author.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    In a small village along the way to Vienna, Constantine found and created his newly made vampire mate or true love. Alexi. Vladimir supported his investigation and decision. The 4 vampires continued along their journey.
  11. Richter is wisely being counseled and taught by Qana. Interestingly, Qana infered Richter is joining him as part of the highest ranked psychics. He was surprised to find out Richter blocked a control effort by an high ranked psychic which indicated he was more powerful. Qana informed Richter that his black wolf Nyx "friend" was as of yet an unrevealed psychic. Quana thought Richter was more than just a friend since psychics are attracting to each other. But, Richter has not indicated he was seeking a sexual relationship.
  12. Was that a thought by Shamus a Freudian slip and worry by the author! Do we need more butt fucking in this story?
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 34

    OMG--what a [ptential disaster after a good weekend ! I hope Raffa was not seriously hurt running into a chain in the work parking lot? Gray is very worried and chasing after him. We will find out next chapter.
  14. I like knowing more about the disparate actors. There is much more to know. So, now we have found out that the FBI at the highest levels is investigating the Barzini mob family. It has many parts and one connects our story. The twin cities connection involves a turned scumbag ,Tookie, who was caught wearing a dresss , a wig and makeup. Tookie is squealing The sex trafficking and island purchase will come out. The Barzini mob family is not aware of its FBI risk. Meanwhile, Dickie Lee has bought out Linnie Lee for $450,000. The money will arrive tomorrow and he is having a party tonight with young men provided by Zoov( the sex business) .He thinks it is being funded by Zoov to create a sex company on the island. He does not know the mob is behind the deal . The downer is that CO and Thayer finally meet on a small island. The passionately kiss but as it turns neither has been with a guy before, CO partially strips and feels Thayer's hot body. They both realize that the only step is for CO to jack him off. But, they are not relieved or do or want more. I hope they meet again . We are left knowing the two sexually turned on young men are observed by someone--the Ghost-from the nearby cabin whose original purpose is to see what is happening on Ledecker Island. He so far does not know why Dickie Lee is celebrating. Dinwiddie partners is not identified by the law as a player, yet.
  15. Richter while a great swordsman seems very innocent about the way they way things work in his larger universe and asks insightful, maybe unsettling questions. Qana tells him he will explain more when others are not able to listen. He is being a teacher to his student, Richter. BTW, it is interesting that Richter believes Qana considers him the son he never had.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    The fleet has begun its new month lomg trip. The ships and men have trained in preparation and are continuing training exercises . Marc and Adam are working together well and are applying their different abilities. Adam is impresssed by Marc's decision making habits and sees he thinks long term to create a more powerful combined corporation. This trip is a test for the new, united business empire. Both men are aiming for it to be very successful.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    Are you going to continue this story? I hope so......
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 33

    What a happy, enjoyable night bowling and being open about each other , Gray and Raffa were so comfortable talking and moving about and then making love later. It all seemed to fit and they are growing together so well. No disconcerting thoughts or scary events took then away from having a good time. But, life goes on and maybe complications will arise. Gray and Raffa will be able to support each other.
  19. BTW, payback is sweet for Freddie. Remember, Deck caught Freddie having sex with Elliott at an earlier time and took pictures. Freddie then blackmailed Freddie and set a $25,000 price for the pics. Freddie was scared and did not want his wife who had the money in the marriage to know about his gay sex efforts. Fredde continued to have sex with Ellliott. Ruining the construction equipment of Deck's business with Hershey’s Chocolate Syrup had to make Freddie feel very good. I bet Deck is going to get more pressure and find out he will get a firm offer for his island parcel he cannot refuse.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    The three are leaving Budapest on the way to Vienna and then Paris. New adventures await. Vlad has been deeply hurt by the loss of Robert who left him. Robert realized their fights hurt them both and he needed to leave.
  21. Seems like young males are so desirable to older guys and keeping them happy. Fred loves Elliot's body and chocolate and must have damaged Deck's equipment so his crew cannot work. Is Deck finally getting the message to sell out and in turn help the mob buy the island? Dinwiddie has lost ground and its purchase plan is in ruins. The Ghost was double crossed by Louie Lee who took the money and stole the sale documents. The sibling intended to return to Bay Lake and thought he would not face any problems. Louie Lee's future was cut short by his death when a psyho pushed him in front of a train. What does the will say when one sibling dies? Is the Ghost going to come back ready to get violent and bring more resources?
  22. Cottontail finally got across to Jamie what really be going on his show and his bad position.He has smart opponents and a producer with unkind ideas/roles for him, He was given the chance by Cottontail to present his own position and nature and he liked it. This was a start and then they began misunderstanding each other. Cottontail provoked Jamie. It is the same routine... Now, they need to have lots of sex. Will Jamie learn anything from this session?
  23. So the wolves did not always live in segragated areas. But, some unknown incident caused the shift Richter is going to try to find a safe home at a school for two black wolves. He decided to care and try to make a difference.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    How long can Zdain keep his secret from Josel? The longer he remains quiet, the more Zdain will feel guilty. and open to more pain.
  25. Alex is in serious trouble--alone and being chased. He has to leave the country, but for now is not certain what to do. He needs help.
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