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Dave led them to the heart. The Dave and Grey spoke to it in a language they inately knew and asked for help. An opening in the heart appeared with blinding light inside. .Now are they going into the opening? They seek answers and Mark. As of now,the three are insync and supportive of each other. Grey knows Davd is more powerful and in tune with the labyrinth and the heart. Seeing a bear sized heart had to be mindblowing. Clara is the wise one that can advise them They will need to be flexible and ready for surprises ahead.
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I like learning more about life in the UK. My cable channel in my California city shows the crime show Midsommer Murders. Gosh, there are lots of gruesome muders in that part of England. Luckily, Chief Inspector Barnaby always brings the killers to justice. Mr Morris-Walker would fit right in with the unpleasant, superior acting members of the nobility and gentry who populate the Midsommer area.
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Nathan had a tough time adjusting as he hid away from the road, He feel asleep but had a brutal, gruesome nightmare. Brohm heard him and woke him up, They had a heartfelt, honest conversation. Nathan told Brohm why he did not want him to be with him--he would be killed. Nathan said he was paid to kll a guy but his identity as Hemsley's son was not revealed. Nathan did not research to find out on his own who he was asked to kill. A man he loved was killed in error and he was the real target. Bohm rejected Nathan's claim and said they would be safer together. Luckily, Nathan began to agree with him as they talked. He is developing feelings for Brohm.. They are leaving tomorrow for the farm of Brohm's father. I hope they do not stay long. Will not the farm be a clear target for Lord Hemsley's men to search ?
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I just loved this guideline when Jamie remarked....“Let me introduce you to the ABC of policing, Minister. Assume nothing, Believe nobody, and Check everything.” Follow that advice Jamie and you will succeed, I bet
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Winkler..." had watched Granger’s relationship with Calvert over the years and had seen Granger reach his happiest when they were doing well, and his saddest when they were estranged. He hoped that this time, they would find a way to be together without such stormy ups and downs." So do I, but I can see future naval duties and battles will interrupt and separate them. When they can meet again, I am sure they want to replicate the love they felt and what happened in Granger's waterfront home.
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Deus ex machina (/ˌdeɪəs ɛks ˈmækɪnə, ˈmɑːk-/ DAY-əs ex-MA(H)K-in-ə,[1] Latin: [ˈdɛ.ʊs ɛks ˈmaːkʰɪnaː]; plural: dei ex machina; English "god from the machine")[2][3] is a plot device whereby a seemingly unsolvable problem in a story is suddenly or abruptly resolved by an unexpected and unlikely occurrence.[4][5] Its function is generally to resolve an otherwise irresolvable plot situation, to surprise the audience, to bring the tale to a happy ending....
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So the new men are going to provide a slution to help Ian and Keith be able to take Joseph legally to the UK. It as to be a sort of Deus Ex Machina solution--a fake but seemingly real set of papers. It sure helps to have the right friends operating in the background. Jacob is a godsend and point man to connect and protect Ian, Keith and Joseph. I wonder what new information and documentation will be created. Let us hope the boys keep up their spirits.
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Fred found out he was beginning to love Mo through their sexual acts But life became troubled. Fred;s lawyer offered to make an appeal but on a waek point he should have brought up at the trial. He told the lawyer to not come back unless he had powerdul ideas and a much better basis for an appeal. Mo wrangled with a guard who wanted to fuck him. Things are going to get messy. Neither guy is backing down.
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Jamie is thrown curve balls and adapts. He faced a unhappy boss and fellow police officers, an over eager secretary who wanted to see him as a boyfriend, a supercilous minister and a drasitic change in plans. He fond ways to move on and not cause too many problems. The issue now is to focus on the entity who has attacked his minister. His boss wants to touch the entity so he can discover who sent him. It must be his special ability. Jamie needs to find a way to help his minister.
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What a heavenly interlude---Granger and Calvert spending private time at Granger's home on the Isle of Wight. They made love again and again--and it was truly an expression of love. Winkler safeguarded and took care of them graciously. Jacobs is taking care of Calvert. “You have fulfilled my greatest fantasies,” Calvert said lovingly, and kissed Granger. “We have coupled, and we have bathed.” This should be a wonderful memory for them, Plus Granger made sure Calvert received new, better uniforms made by his tailor and promised to help him find a suitable wife. George will look after Calvert Tomorow, Granger will guide his ship and pick up Lord St Vincent who wants to visit with the King. I wonder what is going to happen.? Granger and Calvert should be in good moods and ready to handle the irascible man.
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jJ and Kris spoke honestly to each other and melded. No Drama, No shouting, They found they were great together. They are going to be a happy couple with some rocky moments,for sure. JJ commented---“I understand why you felt that way, that we meshed together perfectly,” I said. “I felt the same way; I just didn’t really figure it out until now.” Will is in Greece massively missing Travis. He wants to go back early and knows it will be hell living so far away from Travis when he is at Harvard. But, he meets and is charmed by the great swimmer Ian Thorpe. Some chemistry is building. Will has told him he is gay, too. I love Will suggesting to Ian that Michael Phelps is not well endowed. I guess a speedo can be very revealing. Will and Ian will meet again at least at a party hosted by Nick Politis who Will met in Australia. Maybe, Ian can be a new male interest for Will and begin his transtion away from a dependency on Travis and a better life balance,
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Nathan could have been kept in the dark or mislead about his target by the guy who hired him to kill the Lord's son. The guy who hired Nathan might have been an enemy or rival of Lord Hemsley. Lord Hemsley is an unlikable, mean bastard who many others must dislike. Samuel did not know the connection. Nathan did not know he killed Lord Hemsley's son and I bet he would have said no to the job if he knew.
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drpaladin, I agree with you Helmsley will want his men to kill Brohm, too. They are more vulnerable by being alone. They can watch out for each other when together.
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Nathan is totally distraught. He is fleeing Lord Hemsley's men and learns people he cared about have been killed. Nathan feels to his core he was responsible for their deaths and does not want to see his friend Brohm killed in retribution. He pushes Brohm away and goes on his own. Brohm does not understand his action. Will Brohm follow him? Lord Helmsley's men will still be looking primarily for Nathan. Danger lies all around Nathan until it seems he is seen as dead. How can he fake his death?
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Getting To Know Joseph Part 1
akascrubber commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Getting To Know Joseph Part 1
They all had good times shopping and seeing tourist type sites. The young ones really loved the petting zoo. The drivers/security guards are really fitting in and being accepted . The phones with GPS abilities are very good safety protections. Issac has to review the legal papers to work out any concerns tomorrow. But, Ian thinks he has a solution to help them get Joseph to the UK. He is going to dicuss it with Kevin. I wonder what Ian thinks will help? -
Jamie and Mike were both tested during this brutal course. Their relationship survived and deepened. Jamie found new things about himself and could handle Mike being in control. But, now in his new role as as a graduate, he faced others who felt superior and elite, Will he become the same as his new peers? When will he meet his MP?
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Simon and the serpent preist has intense sex. But, they were fully aware of what was happening and Simon reported his total past, his rapes and capture by a demon and being restoredby a demon. Zolgrim listened and counseling him. He had heard of the seeded one. Siom was gfiven a book that mentioned the seeded one. They both wanted to be intertwined. Zolgrim's forked tongue was magic. Simon's cum revitalized Zolgrim. His two cocks entered Simon and he unloaded in him. This was mindblowing and beyond belief, They kept going over the night. Both wanting thir shared pleasure. In the morning, it seems they will wake up and go on their wn ways, but with a deep knowledge of each other. Simon should be even more empowered. Zolgrim will find peace. Simon has more to consider about his future and role. Zolgrim told him he can make his own decisions and he should not feel guilty
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The Verdict, Sentence, and Off to Rosharon
akascrubber commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Verdict, Sentence, and Off to Rosharon
5-10 years in prison. Fred is devastated,. Bully is happy.Fred adapts to prison lfe. No word from his lawyer so far----- Fred be comes the bitch of the huge "president" of his block, Mo. Now he has to service just one guy and not a gang Mo has done this before and he step wise leads Fred into sexual acts, Mo also tells Fred he is gay and gives him a blow job, Fred cannot tell anyone if he wants to live. He has no desire to gab anyway. Fred is Mo's first gay partner in prison. I wonder if they begin to have feelings for each other--real feelings-- and not just a survival and transactional relationship. The story tile is very suggestive----- -
Is Norm the kiler? Does he have a partner in crime. More people are being killed in jail. Now they are supposed to be staying with a buddy for protection. Maybe, Norm is not on a fishing trip, but around causing mayhem.
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BTW--Jamie was done in by a social media post announcing his new duty before he could tell Mike. Jamie should start following his notices in social media--to see if anything is revealed and to be ready with an answer and to keep Mike in the loop so Mike will not be surprised, again.
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Wow--that was an ordeal. Dave was tuned into a werewolf by Grey to bring him back to life. Dave had to stumble and learn what was happening to him, The outcome was not certain. Clara in the beginning was mad at Grey for turning Dave. But, Dave slowly grew into his wolf man with Grey and ran through the passageways, The doors and traps did not stop them. They felt welcomed. Dave's wolf is Aten and the mate of Grey. Things are looking up. They are held back inside the labyrinth/ Clara accepts his new side and has reached out to other druids for help. BTW--it is nice to know Dave has grown when naked and Grey likes this change--lol.
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After some terrible troubles, Joseph was rescued by honorable, caring people who respected Manny. Joseph is now living in a good home with young kids who adore him. His home life is sound and healthy. He has a solid, welcoming foundation upon which to build his life if and when he moves to the UK. Joseph really likes his new older brothers. So the preconditions are very healthy for his possible transition. He does need help. Ian and Keith have gotten excellent legal help to begin their eventual adpotion. I am sure the process is complicated and full of fits and stops. Unknown to them, their driver is part of their security acquired by the Major. They will have safety help if needed. Ian and Keith and Joseph have good reasons to be upbeat and hopeful.
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Keith has his own place he can afford thanks to Bart and Greg. Now he and Thomas can get together and have privacy. Their intimate moments will expand. I hope they both enjoy it. Slowly, Keith is opening up about his sexual nature. He went into more detail with Jaz at the building supply place, He thinks his mate Hughie might suspect, but the topic was not covered
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Take nothing at face value-like the reasons given by the MP and Chief Inspector. Jamie you are getting deeper into trouble and being used. You are having to lie too often. If lieing about a sudden transfer upset your partner, then lieing about your powers when revealed could be catastrophic to your relationship, You will be in the bullseye of attention. You could be seen at some point as one of the special matters that has caused the MP to be investigati. I can see social media following you if you begin to be active protecting the MP. Will your partner forgive you and be able to handle a long separation? Will others in the Protection Service be resentful of your sudden entry into their elite ranks? Can you keep your powers hidden during your intense training? When you get on the job with the MP, maybe he will tell you what he sees as his real threat. At least, you got the MP to begin to change his public opinion about gays.
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Watson for the Defense
akascrubber commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Watson for the Defense
It is OK to take artistic license with the fine details of the plot. I see it all the time on mystery shows on TV. I have read that police hate the CSI shows which pretend that evidence is easily available with precision and no shades of grey, DNA identified in days-instead of months or years, etc. My hope is that new information comes out before he spends 20 years in prison and might be able to leave with his partner
