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Part Two. Chapter Eleven.
akascrubber commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part Two. Chapter Eleven.
I hope and pray the kids will accept Perry and Kyan loving each other. They will talk it through. Maybe, they will simply say yes. They do not want to see Perry go away again.- 163 comments
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Part Two. Chapter Eleven.
akascrubber commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part Two. Chapter Eleven.
Perfect line-- "Kyan smiled, so bright it lit up the living room. “You’re right. I knew what I wanted. I think I’ve known for a while.”- 163 comments
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A trap was set at Sam's house. Micco fell into it. Sadly, someone arrived their first and hit Micco and got away undetected. Micco argued with Chase who Micco thinks wants to make him the bad guy and killer, Sam wrote Micco some painful letters showing he missed him. Micco never saw them but the authorities think this is evidence to use against hm. But, it would make a rival for Sam's love feel anger and jealousy and hatred for Micco. We learned Sam was broke and he owed people, some drug dealers, money. He could not pay them back. So, there are other potential suspects now !
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Not all wishes come true. Harlan took a chance and lucked out. He did not find his father. At least he was not harmed, only scared.
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It is your story--your choice of pics of your stars rules. Half of the enjoyment of your story comes from reading what you write outright and the other half derives from the interplay from the comments. You make your story more significant by maintaining a conversation and letting us think and dream with you. I love the humor.
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His new employer knows him well. His most painful , searing experience was pushed back into his face to see how malevolent and cruel or maybe still broken he could be. Two values --his family or his well being and metal health-- were put in the balance. He likely could not have faced his family if he raped the old man. He saw he had no choice. Now, what did this final test mean and why was he pushed to the extreme like this? He engaged in kinky, uncommon sex acts as ordered. He showed he had limits and was not mean spirited.
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Greg was forced to relive the most serious trauma of his life--being raped. He was destroyed and left the police force over it, Now his anonymous director ordered him--if he wanted to see his family again-- to rape his driver--He was an old man who looked like he was just released from a hospital in a weakened condition, Greg almost did it but stopped and refused to rape the old man when pushed aggressively. It was wrong. He was told his refusal meant he passed his final test. WTF? Greg is shocked and does not know what to make of his director and firm employing him. What happens next ?
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Allan and Mark have found out that they need each other. They trust each other, too. Mark could be hunted by others but needs training as a powerful empath. Allan complements his abilities and will see he is protected and training. He will ground Mark. He cannot lie to Mark who can read any deception. They have agreed to be a long term, supportive couple. Life ahead will be challenging. BTW--I would love to read more about them.
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The former ruler of North Korea, Kim Jong Il, was called Dear Leader.
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I hope Caleb is able to find out in Montana who and how he was poisoned. It would bring closure on those key points. Maybe Sebastian and Asa can help the investigation.
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James has powerful insights about the tomb and its artifacts. The adults barely listen to him. He can see that the disk shows a map with writing on it. He feels lost and not believed. He asked Winston to follow him where he thinks the map will lead. Winston agrees to help him. The adults will be surprised.
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No, kbois will not kill Asa off? It would be unthinkable. He has too much to do and is needed to be Caleb's mate. He will be a major part of the story.
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Let us hope Asa can repair the bodies of the hybrid pups. He is very hopeful. Caleb's sense of guilt will be eased, too. He can bring a cure to them. The pups will still need psychological help and counselling to ease the mental and sexual trauma they faced. Being young now surrounded by loving family members and friends should aid their recovery.
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This seems to be a race to the bottom at first to tag the story, but the answers changed it all. Now a cure for the hybrids sounds fantastic! Asa says he can cure them. It is a physical problem. They called Sebastian and will be on the way to Montana. Caleb is going to feel much better and should remove his guilt. His mate will cure the pups!
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Cousin David & the cabin
akascrubber commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Cousin David & the cabin
Wow, serious changes ahead. Jasper wants to move away and maybe go overseas. He was Diedre to go with them without Toby. Jasper wants a better job, if that is possible. The poor boy will be crushed. He likes regularity. He will miss his mom, but not Jasper. Brian will tell Toby. I expect drama will ensue.- 13 comments
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Beckett, alive as a burring fire mage has finally captured the star, He felt no pian from the electrical sparks given off by the star. Now he has to find and save Valrinda and kill more golems. He might even find who stole the star and be very surprised . Beckett, clueless, is very powerful and a fierce combatant.
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drpaladin commented-"One clue from Mablin musing about the one armed merchant indicates we are likely in Kandric's time frame and it is one of much unrest and change." I am hoping to find out soon what role Kandric is playing now--a student, a basic dragon killer, a premier with multiple dragon kills leading Alphar and Garm forces?
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Mpre bonding and growing over fishing. It looks like a new home is going to be built in Albany. Pierre is becoming stronger learning English. Marcel's passing touched many people. His legacy remains with them and stays in their warm memories.
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Lew was full educated about the Seandran group by Malichi. The real surprise was Lew being told can shape shift. He has not realized the implication for his group: dragons live inside the group! The dinner hosted by Mablin also resulted in new bold statements that shocked Mablin and his group. They will need more time to fully understand what they are being told. Aegir is happy to find out he is trainable to be a spirit warrior. Garnet is to be his mentor. There is to be a meeting at dinner tomorrow. Thane is taking the request for his group to consider. They are asked to protect the caravan and travel to Silverton. I hope Xavier agrees to join the caravan and learn more about the area and possibilities. They will be drawn to a city that has ties to Lucas. More is revealed as the youths learn about this new area. They open up and shock others. They need wise counselors.
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The March of the Wretched, Part 1
akascrubber commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in The March of the Wretched, Part 1
If I would guess, I think Fran can only throw his support to Edith. The Duke gave up on him as well as the ambassadors. The Duke did not seek help from Gustave and his forces located nearby. Fran clearly does not matter to the Duke, Fran might try to fade away, but his best hope for a title lies with helping Edith to be the regent. I think he can try , using a faked letter from Gustave, to direct Gustaves's forces to aid Edith. Fran would be very grateful to Fran. The forces will be well received by Edith and Ed. -
The March of the Wretched, Part 1
akascrubber commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in The March of the Wretched, Part 1
It looks like Edith is at a severe disadvantage in her first big battle--outnumbered and not holding the high ground. She needs more troops. Fran decides to take a great risk and face alone the attacking rebels surrounding the estate. He actually does not want to save his superiors, but intends to turn over Gustave and the Imperial Ambassador. Will his hated superiors trust him with their lives and instead try to escape? If Fran lives amd Gustave is killed, will he under the guise of being directed by Gustave order his troops to support Edith? -
I am worried about the meeting on the 24th, Travis has Will and his family in his corner. His brother and sister have been taught by his father to hate him,, Thinking about how George Granger was surprised at a dinner to find out his father and brother wanted him to give the each one third of his inheritance from Lady Kendal, will Travis find out his mother and siblings have ready a joint request for substantial gifts from him ? Today such gifts would require huge gift tax payments and reduce any amounts by one half. Travis can say no and gain further ill will from his family, Curtis would love this. We will see how things transpire.
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Sorry about your vertigo Hope you can rest and recover
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I hope and pray that Travis is not killed.
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What a strange workplace and offerings Blow jobs at suit fittings-- Barely wearing clothes-- Dick measuring contests, etc. Any normal office would face sex harassment charges. At least, Gordon and Brian worked out safe practices for Toby. I am glad Brian and Gordon are fitting in.
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