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It has all now come into sad focus for the dominated and weakened Somon. Lord Crusnik has completed his control of Simon through adding blood to his wine and constant fucking. He has been taken to a land of ice and snow and the home of Lord Crusnik who calls Simon his pet Lord Crusnik introduces him in his home castle to his good friend Master Akar , Vicar General to the Order of Belthemid . Oh no.....Simon is serious trouble and without his friends and without Yidian. Simon is a fuck toy. He has others to serve now and no hope for any betterment from anyone who are too far away as of now. At least Connor met the Orcs who were with Simon. They all were rejected and sent out of the brothel. Now, what are the three to do?

Well, they made it to Tampa and Julie's house. Connor was very apptrehensive. As it turns out he and M and Jack were accepted and given a place to stay. Julie is helping him to find a job. She is working a computer to find job opening. Her family life is not great, but at least as Connor said Julie's husband-- greg-- did not hit his only son when he said his gf was pregnant. Greg shouted loudly, though. Connor walked Jack outside and at some point seemed to be controlled and tormented by a being who spoke in his mind and said--"do not trust him." Is the him actually M ?. Why is the statement so cryptic? I bet the man in black is not giving up. Connor saw another sign of someting he cannot understand---"He watched the waves swell, watched the way they tugged on the pale reflection of the moon. Then a shimmering beam of light shot out from above the house. It flew over the water, ascending rapidly, before it zoomed off at an incredible speed and disappeared." Is this an indication of an alien presence tracking M? Connor is not comprehening that if he shows up legally and posts his details--like filling out forms to be hired--he can be connected to any police alerts and be arrested.I do also worry about the upcoming block party which might stress M in new ways. Will the man in black return? Yes, he will and should cause more trouble.

Blue has serious problems--hearing voices, problems with his dad he will not talk about, missing gaps in his memory, failed trips to counselors and talking about himself being crazy. Going for him is change of location to the UK, a loving, caring mother and a good counselor this time. Interesting start....

Ok--another layer is slowly building. Danae, the young 15 year old rebel, is being sent to Paidos, which is seen as the hinterlands from civilized society, to reform herself and grow up as a more complacent lady. I do not think this plan will work.

Thye grand scope and potential for the country retreat has now become apparent. Oscar will have some serious thinking to undertake and has the time to plan and learn as he grows.I hope his need for couseling ends with him in a well balanced situation. Will his parents present a problem to him at some point? The retreat might be something they want to control --especially if his grandparents die. too soon before Oscar becomes an adult.

We see Keith and Thomas living happy, non-controversial lives as a couple. The mechanical art work remains the focus of their discussions. It seems it will take a long time through a complicated process to see if is approved to be modernized and fixed up and a long time to actually fix it if approved. Keith finds his mates act normally around him and things seem very even keeled. Life is pleasant.

They are on the road nearing Tampa and Connor's mother. But Connor feels he had a run in with the or a man in black who wants M. Connor though wakes up and is puzzled. Is the man in black human? Connor feels they are being targeted where they are now. He is disoriented. The road trip had them go through a range of emotions and attitudes about each other. They did give each other blow jobs and Connor rimmed M and finger fucked M to an orgasm. Two situations or comments stood out. After having his first orgasm he went silent and distant and went through a sudden break and would not tell Connor what he was experience or thinking. Ws M talking to someone else? Also when Connor described oceans and all the water covering the planett--M made a freudian slip which Connor seems not to notice. Connor is under lots of pressure and is not able to properly focus. Connor quirked a brow. “What looks blue?” “The Earth. From far away.” Parts of the puzzle are starting to form---

Finley is still an enigma. Emmet was perplexed and very intrigued by him. Time passed and Finley came into the tattoo shop. Finley cannot sleep and wants a magical tattoo to help him sleep and fully rest. He decides after a careful review on a design and a date is set soon for the tattoo. Emmet considers more possible options for Finley;s true nature.. Should he be encouraged or worried? Is Finley really a killer? Emmet suddenly has a realization as things are progressing----"it was absolute idiocy to help a dangerous creature so that it could attack you with renewed strength." Let us hope a rested up Finley is not really going to attack Emmet .

Ok--so we now know this is a high powered smuggling operation that has been hidden from the authorities. Ethan is a pawn. The idiot who kiddnapped Ethan did not look for the disc. He turned Ethan over to Mystofelles who could tell who he was by his voice. The magician asked Ethan for his disc and hit him repeatedly. Ethan refused to tell him where the disc is, So, now a dagger is clearly shown and threatens Ethan. Gulp! But, the captured Cameron can be used and now both can be forced to speak Unfortunately. Ethan's rescue is not happening, His trail was found and lost. His trackers got upset with each other and take out their anger at losing the trail on each other. They need to focus on their rescue goal and hope/search for new clues.

So Horrible--the deliveryman was disemblowled and left a gory mess. What a horrible site for Ken to find. These kidnappers are vengeful and without any limits to cover their tracks. At least the boys connected with their fathers and the cases connected. Ken and Joe drove to see their sons in Binghamton and investigate the two cases. Ahmed is a ghost in class so far, but he has arranged a dinner date with one clueless girl. The four found out about the date. They will be watching and tracking Ahmed and the girl. Fortunately, the dads have the financial ability to hire more compotent men to assist them. They are hoping to see where Ahmed is hiding the other girls. They should be ready to handle the men who are vicious and deadly.

What a disaster--Quigley's home and neighborhood was blasted away by the destroyer End Vision. His friends were killed. They will need to find and create a new and safer, hidden home. Will he seek retribution? Meanwhile, Captain Suoki is looking for Lyoth and Stawren in a borrowed ship and cannot find them. What will he do next?

Oscar is seeing the area sights in detail and adjusting to his new life with his grandparents. It seems he will be seeing the grand reveal of the new prpoerty and underground retreat. It seems lots of money is being spent under the advice and management of his grandparents. Shortly, he will better see its purpose and uses for him and others.

Good News! Syth is an enchanted archer. He can help Xavier, a shaman, if they agree and work things out. Xavier and Syth seem intrigued at the possibilities from the story.

Hontel is asleep and Olpha suggested he rest and stay in his tent for another day to fully rest up.He might not see and any dragons if there is a fight. His bed rest is a good thing for the others. Will they find a way to get ride of Hontel before they leave for the City of Lucas the Lost? It will be harder to keep the Sand Dragon presence hidden as they act to investigate the area and find any connection to Lucas , grandson of Greysac. Hontel should feel he has to report the Sand Dragon presence to the Watch. Xavier and his friends do want the Watch alerted,

The dragon rider tale was very interesting and compelling. It opened up new ideas, especially for Xavier and Syth. What worries me is that Mablin, Garnet and Xavier went to sleep and conveyed no special concerns. A capable guard was set for the first watch. But, they were not warned of a possible green dragon hiding among the new caravan individuals Grandon just brought who set up camp nearby. If a green dragon is present disguised in a different skin will he strike and kill others in their sleep? Might he instead wait until he can find out where the horns or horn of the killed dragon are. If he learns a horn was sent to Prince Mablin in retribution he might pick good targets to kill when he can see and assess the members of the caravan. He does not know that two sand dragons are present. What a cliffhanger!

OMG--a tragedy of epic proportions, Finally, all the grand schemes are revealed and they are sickening and interlocking. In the endthe Basilius survives stronger and his arch enemy is blocked--but at the cost of the Sura Clan and Raith's love life. The clam was made the unwitting pawn and was wrongly given the blame for the stolen ore. What a farce.The clan's chief and members in the capital are tortured and burned. Azula and his sister fled the capital to rebuild the cland and survive without the empire on their island.. Azula spoke badly with great pain and anger to Raith who had promised to protect him and his clan . He said Raith should keep the blades he made--but they will now be bades of ashes--because of the Sura Clan who had died wrong here in the capital. Raith was forced to marry the daughter of the arch enemy of the emperor and could not tell Azula of the deal, Both Raith and Azuka will have their hearts broken and very upset at being handled by cruel forces beyond their wills. Thank you for clearing things up and then revealing the extent of the great tragedy. How long will these set of deals keep the peace?

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Your pitches should be entertaining. Anyone from Portland starts out in a good place in my mind. I grew up near Vancouver, WA but have moved away. I do really enjoy your stories.

There could be a danger that those in the cult left behind if mama was kidnapped or killed might commit mass suicide!

You will like this story if you stick with it. There are some twists and turns and enough terrible situations that you cannot be certain of the conclusion and who will survive. Magic fouls things up and might contrubute to a solution if things work out. You will enjoy the fighting skills, bravery, ability to spring back, good and bad luck, friendship and evolving love. Brohm and Nathan find out who they can depend upon.

I agree with all the supportive comments of this story so far. The story and the characters are interesting and you can picture them in your mind. They are true to type as they plot unfolds in surprising, plot twisting ways. Some make you want to grind your teeth. Our hero Jamie grows, handles his tests and become much more capable while finding ways to carefully discuss his supernatural activites with his boyfriend, Mike. The boyfriends have lots of terrific sex and stay committed.The last chapter ends showing ways that more came be written and enjoyed. What is past can be prologue as Shakespeare wrote.

Thank you for a well done conclusion to this adventure of Brohm and Nathan. They survived many tests and pains and created a new and better life that fit them. They are very happy having lots of great sex with enough gold to undwrite their future. They are somewhat like in the witness protection program with new identities and appearances with the help of the witch Morgan. I appreciate the great adventure you composed and that the two men found each other and became stronger and happier together.I liked knowing the demon killed his temporary master.

Dan is getting drawn in deeper to his rish boss. He commando reqiring suits is a step aong a path of other liberties he may be asked to allow. Vaughan are keeping up a healthy relatonship and filfillin sex life and learning lots more about Dan;s boss. His paties are what the expected, Dan;s guys are not being forced but induced in ways they accept and need. to attend and participate at the parties. Mr Heyward seems to be overlevceraged and is rumored to be seeking out additional sources of capital from less respectable sources. The photos of his parties are not encouraging In the US a wealthy man was know to have sex parties with underage girls in his New York townhouse and on his private island. His rooms were full of hidden cameras and vids were made and saved, He had lots of blackmail material to use of share with the right people who wanted to know more about his guests. This key man was friends with some of the most important people in the US including the head of the CIA. Heyward could also use his parties to win friends but also might gather blackmail material and gather intel for people who wanted to know more about the likes and weaknesses of certain people. BTW, that wealthy US guy was eventually arrested and put in jail where is supposedly committed suicide. Others thought he know too much to live and tell tales to the police. Info from his mountain of vids showing acts with underage girls and famous men has never been revealed. The coverup continues.

Good--they recovered Nunta the young daughter of Alihte from the cult. I hope they are on the way to safety, Wonderfully, a drunken foul mouthed Mama was punched out by Starwen in the rescue.

So Finley scared Emmet away when he lowered his shields for a tattoo repair. The power of Finley's dragon became apparent. Guess (?) he is not meant to be close to Finley. Who is Emmet? Finley does not know but has learned he is the nephew of Tony who is a witch.