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Great conclusion--all thngs a were tied at in the present time. Jamie, now Leon, is happy with his new life, better job, welcoming team mates and potential ?) husband. Lots of room for more, I think. You like the characters. Thank you for a fun, surprising ride and compelling story.
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They have a goal--to bring back Mark. They are sharing knowledge and a good meal growing closer and feeling stronger. Sebastian and Grey with others have to act and return Mark to them on what could be a treacherous path. I can see they will need to be careful and united.
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To The Medical Center We Go
akascrubber commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in To The Medical Center We Go
After tense moves and skilled help the badly injured made it to the hospital and trusted mdical help. Friends and families assembled and comforted each other as they waited. The focus is rightly on those hurt. Later. Linda should make the first move to apologize for her actions when the time is right. She being a welcoming mother now and that is most helpful. -
Chapter 31 - Escape
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 31 - Escape
Yes, a very lucky and unerxpected rescue by fascinating persons who fulfilled a promise to a person who saved them earlier. They were on the verge of being captured and killed. Now they are safe and their ship is going to be repaired. Lady Talula and her mechanical associate are unusual and kind hearted and effective saviors -
At this stage, the situation has lots of clues and mysteries, It is best to remain open and not be fixed one one avenue or option and to watch out for dead-ends and red herrings. The two sides might meet soon. They are not aware yet of each other. It appears bad guy with the name Ahmed is connected to the missing girls and that guy is connected to the apartment that probably held the missing girls. Ahmed could be one guy or many guys and be part of a larger operation. The girls seem to have left the apartment recently. The food delivery man is missing and he may have reported the missing girls. I can see the guys on campus investigating who Ahmed really is. He suposedly is in one class with Tom but he does not remember a handsome Saudi guy in his class. Is the guy real or fake or does he not really attend classes and uses his enrollment to snag girls.The Police can follow up on forensic evidence and travel options and the delivery man.. Could the girls have been moved to a new partment in the city since this one was compromised? I hope someone reaches out to campus sources. If this is a human trafficking operation, it could be dangerous with criminal masterminds willing to take out any one who tries to find them
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It is over.The ritual was stopped with a fifle shot. People died. Mwangi took charge at the end and quized Jamie and Morris-Walker. The minister had not be forthcoming to Jamie and omitted key facts and past activities. Mwangi pulled it out of him for Jamie's benefit. The scene was sanitized by Mwangi's men. Jamie is being transfered to Mwangi's operation and it will be high risk. He moves away from the boss and divison that did not fit him well. Jamie made a late night call to Mike and gave him a safe description which was not fully truthful. Jamie asked and Mike agreed to make a cake for his new work mates. Is this the end of Jamies tussle with evil beings? Has he seen the last of Morris-Walker? Who knows? Jamie deserves some peace of mind and lots of great sex with Mike in the meantime.
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Things worked out very well among the lives of rich and famous...., Of course there were the usual bad feelings and misunderstandings at the beginning ,but the parties mended well and becme happy with each other as time progressed. Kris won his visitors over and he seemed to be a great partner for JJ who clearly liked him deeply. Will and Travis had another fight and made up and worked out a plan for more fun and maybe some added sexual spice before they flew away. Kris charmed them all and his sophisticated grace and beauty stunned them. Brad realized how happy JJ was and JJ said he was the happiest he had been in a long while. Brad after his mood swings became closer to JJ and Jake and also so pleased and happy with Jake. Will and Travis had a fight over a new email from Taylor. He thought Will coached her what to say in response to his worries. Will did not and reminded him he was on Team Travis.They both blew up at each other. Will left alone with both badges to go to party.Will met Ian Thorpe and suggested a twosome or threesome. He asked Ian to let hin know later. Will returned to his place and talked things out with Travis. They made love. Travis wants to take a plane and see several cities. Will suggested a way to get a private plane to use. They are very happy. Will discussed his Ian offer to Travis hoping he would not mad. Travis jumped at it and accepted the offer. The cliffhanger at the end is a phone cali from Ian. What will Ian do?
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Great, interesting start. Danger , but masked. Who is he?
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Josel found out he was a pinhead.He dated the daughter of his archenemy and did not know it. Now Jolanda is part ot the crew who is after Zdain and him. He at first after hearing Jolanda got up ready to speak to her not realizing who she was. Zdain pulled him down. Joesl was used by Jolanda. Zdain and Josel had to knock out a guard and then, run and run away. Will they escape? Will they find another dreader who now they know are real and not a fantasy. How did Curtus know about the dreader who killed him?
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Ok--there are on the run. Meeting his drunk, abusive dad. Connor borrows his truck and is drving to Tampa to see his mother. M is acting strange. Jack is there to be a protector. Connor begins to really regret what he is doing. He begins to doubt himself and M and sees him as the one that has caused him to be guilty of murder, too. Meanwhile a light seems to find them, but moves away fast. M was distracted by the light in the crummy motel room. Unfortunately, Connor had a terrible nightmare. Next stop on the road, a Walmart to eat and use the restroom. At this pace, they may not reach Floriad without a blow up and severe argument. Is M's mother going to save them?
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What a mess-- Luckily the injured Troy was found and Maddox was not able to rape him as he wanted to do. Jaycen and others took Troy away to be treated. Maddox hid so no one knew he was the guy who hurt Troy. We learned Maddox tried to rape Troy years ago in the showers after a high school swim meet and was stopped by Jaycen. Maddox is a ticking time bomb for both brothers and he will not give up with his devilish plans for them. Lev and Brandon stop after a drive and get gas. Lev says Linda was a social worker who investigated a false claim of child abuse made by a teacher on his male guardians. While nothing wrong was found, she recommened that the boys be taken away and be placed with a straight couple and have no contact with their male guardians. It was so cruel. Brandon felt this did not sound like the mother he knew. He wanted Lev to talk to her and be open to forgive her. He reluctantly agreed to be open to forgiving her. But, they saw a robbery happening at the gas station. Brandon called the sheriff and Lev want to stop the robber and tried to disable the car. A fight ensued between Lev and the robber when he left the store and saw Lev messing this his car. Unfortunately Lev was mistakenly shot in the chest by the store worker. Lev is on the way to the hospital. Will Troy be taken to the same hospital? Everyone might meet and hopefully begin to reconcile as their loved ones recover.
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"The Articles Of Faith" (Part 1)
akascrubber commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Articles Of Faith" (Part 1)
OMG--is Aziel alive? Why does ( Father)Daniel think he is alive? Daniel, then his young lover, saw him killed years ago. He seemed like an angel in the chapel . Daniel has returned to the restored chapel and town where Aziel was shot by Arthur. He is motivated by the warm thoughts he has of Aziel. Does Aziel have any connection to Adam? -
Well, meet the relatives turned out to be a learning, questioning experience. Keith survived the direct questioning by Caroline and answered all her questions honestly and took no offense, You can tell she wants the best for Nate's brother. It turns out neither Keither not Thomas have had a long time proper gay relationship as she described it and she understood they would learn by doing-like she did with Nate. It seems that they are very normal people taking small steps and being conventional . Tha artist kept coming up in discussions. It sounds like Keith will be getting more updating information about the artist and the work he might repair. I hope it helps him carry out his tasks and not stop him from touching it.
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Oscar's grandparents are assembling more land for the grandkids. It is interesting to see how they proceed. Oscar has found iems of interest off the coast that we have learned belongs to Australia. But, later if he gains the skills and permission they might be worthy scuba diving places. At least, he is learning interesting facts about the land and sea near his grandarents property. His grandparents may try to conserve some of the land as a private nature preserve and keep it from commercial development. Oscar is getting an education in land buying and working with other pwners.
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Chapter 30 - Through the Forest
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 30 - Through the Forest
What a mess--wait till it is so late and the 19 year old is loopy on drugs and hopefully take her away quietly so as to not alert others. The person should not want to leave since she is a permier acolyte. She sounds like a true believer who will resist leaving if she is able . Our heroes are in danger of being discovered. What else has Alihte not revealed that might be compromising their mission? I expect they will receive a distress call that urges them to leave the planet and save their friends. -
Please no--The Braveheart punishment and solution?? This should not be necessary
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Chapter 29 - End Vision
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 29 - End Vision
Fonith is being medically treated after her torture at a special ship. Meanwhile, Captain Suoki reaches Phentrom to say their ship was underfire. She asked Phentrom to reach Lyoth to come and help them. What a terrible situation. Can Quigley and Suoki survive and last out the attack? Can Lyoth arrive in time to save them from the massive ship? -
Wow--sex slaves if this is true, the story is scary . I hope Ken reaches the place in time to save the girls. Heck, even if he finds them, the campus is not safe. Other girls might be kidnapped to make up for the ones saved. But, first let us see what Ken discovers. He might be spending time on the Binghamton campus, if he is needed.
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Come clean Linda. Tell the others. Lev will be telling Brandon soon as he drives away, I bet. Troy is badly hurt by Maddox. I hope he does not kill Troy. Will the sound of the shot and horse running away attract others? I cannot wait for the next chapter when all will be revealed.
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OMG What a Sh.. Show ! Hannah got fully disgusted with Connor and M and threw them out to find their way home. Connor and M tried to play sexually but M kept having seiizures, They did each have orgasms The man in b;ack showed up while Connor was at work. M killed him leaving lots of blood in the trailer and on his body.M arrives at Pizza Hut covered in blood. The staff freakes out. Connor takes M home and his boss calls the police. Connor gets M home and sees the body and blood. He finds a document that says the man in black is an agent--a government agent? Connor buries him in the swamp. They flee using his car an $200 from his work. Connor does not know where to go. They are likely going to be wanted by the police and maybe considered murder suspects. The bloody shirt and blood in the trailer will be daming evidence.This looks hopeless for them. They might be caught very soon. Willl Mother step in at least to save M?
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What a scary escape and the end seem near just as they moved through tunnel that way the way out. They felt they were almost caught by the guards but the person behind Nathan was stopped. Now they have to find the gear and necklace hidden by Brohm and move onto Morgana. Luckily, Brohm had been stationed at the military base and knew the passageways and an escape hole in the walll plus had a friendly inn keeper who let them sleep safely. Will they be pursued?
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Chapter 28 - Alihte
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Alihte
Is Alihte going to be a problem? She asked to leave but she is wedded to Mama Goddess as speaking the truth. Where can Alihte be dropped off? Will she want to go back? -
Chapter 28 - Alihte
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Alihte
I thought the answer to the meaning of life was 42. "Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy" -
It all comes down to Jamie killing the ritual's victim before the ghosts do it. Did Jamie succeed?
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One more friend to help--patch up-- and then maybe, River will look to creating and enjoying his own happiness.This focus would be a first for him....a healthy first. Now the challenge is how to find his happiness. Will Kenji be his answer?? " I loved my friends, but it was starting to feel like I was patching up their tears and holes with pieces of myself. I’d been doing it all my life. It was one of the first things my mother taught me. How to give and give to make sure everyone around me was happy. My own happiness wasn’t important to her at the time, so it’d stopped being a priority of mine as well. That was something I should really address."
