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Why were thugs trying to get ownership of the cottage from Pierre? Why is it that important? Ritchie and Ronnie saved Pierre at the hotel and brought him home. We will find out more the next morning, This crisis is very strange and shocking--but Pierre is safe now,
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Southport was to destroyed once the city was lost with pre-planned magical explosions by the rebel holders to deny Lord Byron its use. The magical golem giving him the ability to break through and enter the city was powerless to stop the chaos. Aurem was totally surprised. Lord Byron was incensed but so many defenders were sacrificed. Many rebels fled in ships. What happened to Amos and Dagon? When will Simon and Yidian appear?
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We find out that Charlie and Michael have fallen into a well-balanced, loving family who happen to be gay. The examples the familiy members give will give them confidence and helpful guides. Charlie is still very emotionally tender and needs the boys and adults supporting him to help him recover. Life is looking up. It looks like Stacy has found Charlie a training opportnity as mechanic, More people show up to provide clothes for Charlie and Michael. Charlie finding clothes gains a guy who is fully taken with him. Brad, the store manager, is smitten with Charlie. What wonderful possibilities ! Thank you for this upbeat holiday treat
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Good chapter--You thankfully didnot leave us with a cliffie Connor and Dakota finally found each other and opened up. They are mates, Dakota will stabilize Connor.They boy have much to learn and this will be interesting to follow.
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Good and encouraging intro to the hybrids in Germany No outside threats appear and no cliffies so far We are left with hope and good feelings . The readers are ready for the holiday time tomorrow = . No problems seen looking over the health records. The hybrid repair will start soon and take maybe 2-21./2 weeks Thank you for the good news. Happy Thanksgiving
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Colin is waking up and being more assertive and seeing his mom and co-workers in new, more discerning lights. Owain has made him very happy by helping him enjoy new and wonderful sexual activities, They have a shared love of music and regular actiities They fit together very well. Colin has found a guy he really likes. They are focused at Owain's home ,mostly. The longer they stay together and show how close they have become, the more Coiln has the potential to be outed as they move around in public.What will Colin do? Owain will support him to be his true self.
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A Different Kind Of Family
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Different Kind Of Family
No to Rusty Han selling bathwater or cum rags or worn socks Yes to selling singing songs in exciting gear and costumes on line This was a true joy showing good people live and prosper and are full of love Dear author you outdid yourself A perfect chapter to celebrate Thanksgiving ! -
Adga and crew stepped up and successfuly destroyed the babdit force attacking the caravan. They refused to stay by while the bandits attacked.The fighting was intense and was described realistically as brutal and deadly. Lord Kandahar arrived with his forces and welcomed the caravan and was very impressed by Adga . The nobles on the quests were told they are on the way to succeed .The Lord stated he will need this patrol for many uses to help in the recovery of the city and to protect future caravans. They will be fully employed for many months. Adga and his patrol looks forward to the new opportunties.The destruction from the deadly storm will be massive and take every able hand. Lord Kandahar has seen these type storms before and knows what to to to survive and how to lead the recovery . Adga and his patrol should be tested in new and bold ways. I am sure they will learn and adapt.
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The Good News--Vincent is not a suspect--for now. This is the third similar murder. The police think they have a serial killer. It is the guy who was put in jail years ago for raping women? More Good News-Kept inside under police protection, the two boys are still going to have sex . James's father approves. In fact he got into bed with the two and pressed his hard cock next to his son who did not mind the attention. Now what is Vincent going to do in bed and will he play with both kids? I suspect the boys will want to play detective and will be exposed to danger.
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The story ended on a good note--realistic and empowering Seth survived a beating at school that brought him closer to his mother and boy friends. Seth realized he could not stay with his restricting dad and that his mother was changing for the good. Stacy was being controlled and was no longer going to dominate him. He could live with his mother now. Seth said..."I think I’m now better prepared to face any chaos that comes my way." He is ready. Thank you for a compelling and challenging story.
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Nothing better describes Armand than when he says--"I was surrounded by kids, and I loved it."
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Peter , you call Grandpa Buck a sexual predator who married off the woman who birthed Jake and raped Miranda , his son's wife. We know Miranda raped Jake and Curtis Buck raped a under.age girl. The adults in the Buck family are messed up worthy of a cable TV soap opera. We now understand that Thomas Buck set up a large trust fot Travis because he was his son. Curtis and the others would have been very well off if Curtis has not badly handled his company I wonder if the lawyer has anything to add about Thomas Buck's responsibiities to Jake . Maybe not? We have not been told that Jake or his mother were not helped out financially earlier. What will Curtis and Taylor and Big say as the dinner progresses about the actions of Thomas Buck and the efforts to kill Travis? Do Curtis and Taylor still want to kill Travis ? This next part of the meeting could be fascinating--unless the revelations about the father of Jake and Travis are so shocking that people leave.
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Heavenward, Unbound
akascrubber commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in Heavenward, Unbound
Thank you for your understanding of the real or most hopeful ending of this tale. My reactions to your report----- I am glad Ed will live out a good , love filled and safe, hidden life far away from the Masters of the Realm As for the Fiend in the mirror that is Fran, I can see that he was transformed by his overlord and master who enslaved him, humiliated him as a former noble, severely tormented him and raped him repeatedly without mercy. His innocence was ripped from his soul. He essentially lost his mind and was transformed in order to survive. Ed saw this. He was being forcefully bred and painfully subjucated so that when he could break free he would seek revenge and need to stop being powerless and to prosper. Everything to him now in the snake pit of the court would be a transaction for gain or power. He could not love nor give it or seek it, as it is sadly turning out. -
Getting to know you 2
akascrubber commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Getting to know you 2
Colin and Owain became much friendlier and happier together. They decided to make some positive changes. Neither one wanted a one-off and wanted to stay together . What that ultimately means was left open, They found they had things in common and could add to their building relationships.Owain loved his cooking skills. They both enjoyed sex and Coiln was freed. Staying over was a new practice for Colin and he was pleased at the transition. Owain suggested ways they could get together at his place and be intimate and Colin agreed with him Their closer relationship and increasing liking for each other will be found out eventually as they leave Owain's home. Colin has not yet thought it through what he willl do or say. He may find himself in a crisis and have to decisions to make quickly.- 18 comments
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Heavenward, Unbound
akascrubber commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in Heavenward, Unbound
Wow--What surprising outcomes, I did not envision Edward was saved by Lothar. When he met Fran, he was very upset at not dying along with the others he fought with. He forcefully rejected Fran. He clained too much had happened and they were unlike and had no love. He rode away and disappeared. We do not know if he still lives. Ed was not reported captured Fran made a new life. He is more powerful and successful. He followed up and took care of Lothar and Luthar. Fran created a marriage of convenience with a willing lady who bore a child he would claim as his own, He now had a heir to tutor and help grow into his role, Fran became the Lord Justicar. Now he is working on an overseas exploration deal to male money and earn more power I guess there can always be potential problems on the horizon. Fran heard of a rumor that Edith bore a child. What is Ed doing ? He could be a formidible opponent. Oh well, these matters might be some fodder for a future story. -
What a mess--sex and a knife in the chest. Vincent will be the number one suspect with lots of evidence connecting him to the cook. Might Jim and Claude play detective to save Vincent? Could they be needed to take up the defense to save him unless he is guilty?
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My heart sank as Chase explained why he left Micco. They talked past each other . He heard that Micco was saying they could only be friends, not sexual sexual partners, It hurt too much. Case felt rejected. Chase yold Micco why he left.. “I’m sorry I hurt you. So, so sorry. But you made your feelings clear, and leaving was the only way I knew how to deal with them.” Chase left and did contact Micco until now, Meanwhile, Micco was oblivous that what he said pishef Chase away. They talked past each other and stayed hurt and very sad. But, tonight, they both missed spealing plainly and then really listening to each other probing what they meant. Will they grow-up togther or stay sad and alone?
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Well--it appears things have the potential to be dangerous in Germany. Huntington is unpredictable and the fae world cannot send protectors. I feel a sense of impending disaster with the three isolated from their US packs. They will be open to treachery in Germany with people they do not know. Huntington is amassing a large army and could send a segment to Germany. It will be a key spot to transform the hybrids so Huntington's enemies will be present. . Plus, the leadership in Germany helped stop him. He will want them to suffer, I bet, Huntington could have spies, He also will want to kill Caleb and Corbin and the one who recovers his hybrids, Asa. He might not want his creations to be cured. He might want to make more at some point. Deaths of his enemies in Germany would show how powerful and dangerous he could be, It could be like a terrorist attack on the shifter world.
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Damn--Caleb is topped and expresses his intense feelings so hotlly in terms new to me--wow "Holy fucking Christ, on a goddamn Ritz cracker with Cheez Whiz! What was that? A bolt of lightning shot through his body from head to toe"
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Armand is wonderful with his kinds and grandkids. Love abounds, He know how ro comfort and refresh anyone with soup and simple food. His use of soup brings back good memories from my childhood. Thanks.
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Colin is a coward. He has to make a choice. Does he fess up to Owain and try to live thruthfully or make a break with him and live a life of quiet desparation? He has made his own hell hole. I hope we find out which path Colin takes next time?
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The chapter ends with Travis traumatized and Will extremely concerned about him. Thomas Buck is the father of Travis and Travis is shocked to his core at this stunning discovery that his real father was the man he thought was his grandfather. Will saw it clearly. "I sensed how completely rudderless he was, and how whatever was in that letter had totally altered his worldview." What can be done to strengthen Travis and give hm a rudder? Can his mother help him understand what happened and how he became a half-brother to Curtis? Curtis has to respond to the news. His siblings also have to be shocked and disoriented. Jake has learned he has a different biological father and now clearly has a half-brother, too. This is so mxed up. and new. Will and his family wll be there to support and counsel and love Travis. He is fortunate to have them.
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Toby has the better deal than Noah: his parents are more supportive and involved in enrichng his life and even personally creating more enjoyable food. Noah lives in a big house. Both of his parents work full time outside the house.His parents are open and non-judgmental so far about Brian and Gordon and their sometimes exotic jobs. They do not know Noah and Toby are experimenting, getting naked and kissing, Noah seems more informed but wants to stay in the closet. Brian and Gordon have figured out that Noah and Toby are becoming itimate and are not concerned so far. Can Noah's sexual playfulness stay hidden from his parents ?
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I can see all eyes turn to Miranda.I think Miranda Buck has a lot to explain during next part of the dinner. Will she flee? Will she remain and be fully truthful about her sexual activities with Thomas Buck and then Jake ? Jake might respond strongly to any false charges she makes about him Curtis thought Jake raped Miranda and was the father of Travis. Why ? Did she tell Curtis she was raped by Jake? How did he find out about Jake who was an minor young worker at the spa, if not from Miranda? Maybe, Curtis had her watched and did not trust her. At least Travis is known not to be Jake's son. They are half-brothers. But the false claim Jake raped Miranda has to be addressed. Will Miranda own up to her actions? Her honesty or lack of honesty will impact the relationship she has with Travis and the rest of her family.
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The Baxter boys found wonderful, caring good samaritans--just in time, They needed some good luck for a change. They could have a much better and happier future. Time will tell. This should be fascinating and a good read, Thanks
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