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Connor's plan to hurt Rybalt was lame and doomed to fail. Heck, Xpress laughed him off, Rusty could not be Rybalt--lol- So, Connor will have to trap Rusty in the act. Will Rusty be tracked? Maybe Connor or someone finding Rusty with August at some point will flip the narrative and make August Rusty's girl and mother of his fictious child. Rusty better come clean to Matty about his trip with August or Matty will be deeply hurt when the rumors of Rusty's hidden girlfriend spread.
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I think it may already too late for Curtis to access the funds established for Travis. Gaining proof of death--since Travis is in hiding- and settling an estate takes time and Curtis does not have time. Travis promised he would leave evidence blaming his father for his death and this would complicate accessing any of the funds held for Travis. Will maybe at risk for capture by Curtis's minions at the beginning of the month and the trips planned will confuse the matter. I hope they take bodyguards on their trips. It is reasonable for Curtis, like Miranda, to assume after the week they shared in Hawaii that Will knows what Travis is doing. no mater his protests. However, Travis has not told anyone about his plans. It is as if he has gone into the witness protection program. If he has something more complicated than hiding underway, it should be a surprise. and. I bet, hurt Curtis. Also, Travis does not know of the details of Will's plan for the next 30 days. Ah, the joys of having a private plane. Will just added a NY trip segment. Grand just added new items to their itinerary in Europe. It would be difficult for him to link up with Will. If Travis at some point asked for help confusing his dad or If Stef wanted to add spice to the yacht trip and also help Travis stay hidden , he could add a crew member who looked in disguise for a while like Travis from a distance. But I think adding a red herring faux Travis person would be too risky and attract unwanted attention, unless the situation is so grave. But for now, I think Will is going to have an awesome time in Europe. It could be the highlight of his Gap year with Grand--and Stef--adding depth and make it also a grand tour type experience. Will can always find hot males wherever he goes to enrich his educational studies.
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Chapter 7 - Lonklam & Ronging
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Lonklam & Ronging
Lonklam's burning desire for a photonova gland drove him to search out and kill the young son to harvest his precious gland. He did not care about the misery he was causing. Let us see if they reach the dead part of the forest and die. Unadi can stand up to them -
Is Tomas now the protector of his people ( Twn) and not able to be with Henry ? “Twn the strong will forever watch over his people!” Someone very powerful has destroyed the nmblings who were killing the plainsrunners.
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Travis's absence is shaking up people. His mother visited Escorial to ask Will where Travis was. She appeared clueless to his danger and the potential bankruptcy on the family business. What chilled me was her belief that Curtis will take action and might threaten Will. She thinks Curtis blames Will and expects Will must know where Travis is. Could Will be chased and kidnapped ? Could Curtis get so worked up to step over the line Grand stated. Grand said “If something were to happen to Travis, or if actions are taken against Will, it is no longer something we will ignore.”
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Chapter 6 - Unadi & Olona, Part One
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Unadi & Olona, Part One
We hope it works and Unadi loses its photonova gland's power. If not, they must regroup and think of what to do next. Do not give up ! BTW, did you notice that a history of America was included in the reading material. It appears this society has distant roots in America which collapsed for some unknown reason. -
BTW, Lady Kendal in her note concerning her estate, wished that George would be on his way to establish his own dynasty with her added wealth. His new home will be a visible sign of his independence and enhanced position in society. His current city home was a wedding present from his wife's grandfather who loves him. This new home will result from his noble actions and the favor of a sovereign. I am sure John Nash who is becoming one of the foremost architects of the era will create a high-class home that will be attuned to George's interests.
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Chapter 5 - Ilya, Part One
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Ilya, Part One
Ilya is a saint. Everyone is a friend and ever problem can be solved. I hope she has not taken on too big a challenge with Unadi. She is in danger and so would anyone who comes with her to see Unadi. Unadi isolates herself since she sucks the life and power of everything near her. Can her mantis gland be turned off? Two questions-- How does she maintain the caring, decent attitude that she has shown? .How does she sustain herself if everything she touches dies? -
A nice, pleasant short transition to America and a new world that will open up for Charles. Armand kept his privacy secure, I am sure, to not complicate his trip experience. He made a friend with the steward who helped him pass the time on the plane flight. Everyone is glad to be home.
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The mess --the damn mess--all the lies are exposed Seth was right. They should not have gone to the after party. Craig was a powder keg ready to explode. He wanted Seth and when given the chance wanted him sexually. Stacy finally caught on when she was given direct evidence, Craig was sucking Seth off--not the other way around. She is furious and will likely go nuclear and blast Seth and Craig. She will tell everyone--including her Aunt and Uncle and Mother. Craig knows his rep is ruined and cannot handle it. He is paralyzed. He cannot think beyond the moment. Hde made need professional help and intervention. Seth, I think, is the one in more serious jeopardy. Stacy will explode and attack him and likely make up things to prejudice her Mother. Will Seth be kicked out of his home?
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Part One. Chapter Twelve.
akascrubber commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
No wake up fight or disagreement after bad or non-passionate fast sex. Both apologized for nor doing well. Kyan was not at fault for the speed, it seems Perry is setting the terms of their expanded relationship. It is just sex without meaning. It is a physical release .Perry wants it to be that way. This is new to Kyan Perry says friends with benefits never works-in his experience, He does not want to lose the frendship he has so he is slowing down the pace of sexual activities, He is saying no right now and wants to pace any action. He might add Max as a partner--or not. He will not close out seeing Max. "Kyan. It’s all you. It’s us. It’s not letting the best part of us disappear because of sex. Trust me, friends with benefits never works out in the long run. And you and I? We can’t exactly walk away from each other, so as much as it pains me, we have to tread lightly.” But, can they tread lightly?- 108 comments
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Chapter 4 - Kosephaji, Relliduna, & Pelipi; Part Two
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Kosephaji, Relliduna, & Pelipi; Part Two
So, the three are childhood friends. Duna is still hurt and Kosephaji is not able to fully help. The captain knows and supports the three who want to leave Xin. Duna confirms that there are thee in his group. He and the captain become friends. They are leaving Xin openly and safely now. They are not aware of what is ahead on their journey. -
Chapter 3 - Kosephaji, Relliduna, & Pelipi; Part One
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Kosephaji, Relliduna, & Pelipi; Part One
In due course, the captain will discover the three and find uses for them. The captain is not fooled. I hope Duna will be healed. The three needed to leave that town. -
I can imagine Davinia will be livid and full of envy and spite when she learns of George's magnificent gift worthy of a Czar. He has the Kendal estate which he did not share and now this prized land and expensive house. She might even turn to Caroline to gang up on George to injure him, weaken him and blackmail him( she tried before) to get money or,,,,?. I think George should be very wary of Davinia. I can imagine she would meet with Caroline and wind her up , tell her about Georges new wealth and stop her from understanding her true situation and becoming as realistic as George thought she might. She might want more now that George has become wealthier. George had decided to not respond to Caroline. "He would let her ponder her words and finally comprehend her true situation. Until she did that, any contact he had with her would only be similar to this vindictive and spiteful letter. "
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Simon willingly mated with a werewolf--twice. Will he become one? How will the werewolf seed change him? Yidian is guiding him clearly. He wants more seed. Simon realizes he has a potential addiction..."He feared this need for more power, it could easily become an addictive obsession."
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A Court of Ghosts, Part 1
akascrubber commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in A Court of Ghosts, Part 1
Gustave did not get the opening of trade he wanted from the king. Now it is the Imperial ambassadors turn to make his requests. Will he overplay his hand? The king is coming into his own and is learning. Will he go to speakers square and hear real complaints? What can be made of the king's interest in Francis Gray? -
Beckett is at a crossroads' He is in the town with Valrinda but he has no clue what to do next or where to go. He rejected advice from the human in the cage with the beast. Valrinda and Beckett are both staying in the stable. Beckett got his needed bath. I guess they are staying together for safety and Valrinda wants to protect Beckett. Will they get new information soon?
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Part One. Chapter Eleven.
akascrubber commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
Right now, Kyan is not concerned about how clean his sheets are, He thinks he failed as a lover and that to him has to be the reason for the awkward situation between Perry and himself. " He took a deep breath and vowed to be better because it felt terrible to not know what the hell was going on." The path they could follow to be honest and trusting and compatible could be rocky and painful. What happens in the morning will set the tone. They both have preconceptions that are guiding and limiting them. -
I agree with Samjones1 , but am not optimistic she will recover her sanity and balance soon. "Caroline has clearly shown herself incapable of fully appreciating her situation and how she arrived there." Her letter was very revealing about her thinking. She is likely filled with hate and listening to aggrieved women and citing role models for having affairs that are not welcomed in regular polite society to justify her transgressions. Caroline seems to be missing female or even male companions who can help her balance her emotions and think up a reasonable plan for her life and a realistic, mutually agreeable arrangement with George. I do not know how she will get to that situation. She does not realize how stronger George's position has become. George does. Her position in society is weaker than his. This letter was written before he was made an earl with the name of the estate she wants which is the source of his title. The advancement using the estate title might make her even madder. The more he succeeds and prospers, the more she will likely envy him. Further, she is apparently going to seek out new male partners that might win approval of her current so-called friends but will only reinforce how out of step and mistaken she is. George can only gain sympathy by her public affairs and support for their separation. For now, George can relax and think about good friends and opportunities. He has a new house to plan and a great architect in mind.
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The viper has attacked and Granger took her threats in stride and was not concerned. She wants money and the estate from her dowry and maybe more. He will not respond. I am sure he will think about what he will do. It is the summer. It is time to leave London to enjoy the break from the social season and court activities. He has a basic plan for the summer and places he needs to see. I am impressed with the calm George is showing and how in control he feels. His friends will support and strengthen him.
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Chapter 2 - Thech & Jzuna, Part Two
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Thech & Jzuna, Part Two
This is so sad. Lonklam sought out the photonova glands and ended up killing the mother of the young bio-shifts. He and Ronging were thrown far, far away in response. The kind owner of the shop. Bivon, gathered Junza and Thech, the new orphans , and began a journey to Teshon City. Bivon wants to find her other bio-shifts to care for her young charges. Right now, they are all very sad and depressed. -
Lord Byron and Abbott Qualls are pure evil. They are bringing death and destruction.
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The Abbott is using Simon for his purposes and sent him on a journey to meet the wizards. Will Simon survive? Westwood is attacked and is savaged by Goblins and the Order. Amos and others are fleeing but he seeks out Gregor to tell him he loves him. Amos fights his way to a badly injured Simon. He tries to save him and others. But all seems lost as soldiers of the Order pound on the door separating them. Suddenly a powerful force destroys the bad soldiers. Amos and Gregor and others are being saved by a female with magic. Good Magic. True Magic. Now, all is not lost. What is next?
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Chapter 1 - Thech & Jzuna, Part One
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Thech & Jzuna, Part One
Wow--what a dramatic change--Ronging and Lonklam are at the edge of the patio. Lonklam seems to need to be fed and wants two bio shift children and maybe their mother. Who will eat whom? Might they become allies instead? -
Prologue - Aftermath of the Massacre
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Prologue - Aftermath of the Massacre
oh my--Lonklam is a thinking creature and now he controls Ronging. All is lost to Lonklam and it looks he is going to consume Ronging who is not aware of his danger.
