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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    This eventually turned out to be a very good night. One rough patch was taken care of after a hassel. Harry started out helping Charlie and Michael by giving them some money to enjoy the fair and rides. He had to insist and they gratefully took the assisiance. They later returned home to him very pleased. The group went happily to the big event but Liam was stopped at the entrance by a supercilious prig who woul not let him come in with his crutches. How ridiculous and upsetting. He needed them to get around. Max shouted at the guard and attacted attention. A supervisor came and apologized and offered a wheelchair when needed. One was provided later when Liam became very tired. They all enjoyed the rides and prizes were won at the skills contests. The fireworks at the end of the event were spectatcular and entertaining. Returning home they ate a delightful meal of chilli and baked potatoes-- mmmmm. Stacy and Brad ploted about Charlie's birthday party and added Michaels to the mix since his is also nearby in time. The two boys should be surprised. What a great change for Charlie and Michael in just a few weeks . They are pleased and happy by all this. They have a comfortable family and friends, a gramps, and a home. They will both be employed soon. Life is looking up. Thank you for a wonderful story. It makes the season seem upbeat and encouraging. Good things can happen when people truly care and lives can be made better.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    What turmoil--- It looks like Cahoun has figured out Micco's problem and connects to why he is guilty---“Michael,” Calhoun says, “Is it possible you are suffering a relapse of your dissociative identity disorder? Is it possible you have lost time recently, and simply don’t recall some of the behavior Ms. Landis and Ms. Higgins are describing? Micco denies it and all hell breaks loose soon after--But Officer Burke enters and stops the interrogation. He is incensed at Calhoun for questioning Micco and hears why he allowd it.He says stop. They will split up to address the animals in the refuge and other issues from the incoming hurricane. Micco and Chase move into an area and become very personally close and sexually interested in each other again. They have brought back their feelings Suddenly, Rory shows up and wants to confess and meets with Calhoun. What is said? Is Micco exonerated or made more guilty? Calhoun comes out and says he needs to talk to Chase as a result of what has just been said by Rory. The hurricane is confusing and stressing the situation. Will the legal investigation be stopped or cut short leaving Micco at risk? I am sorry you have gotten covid. I hope it is not a painful version and your recovery is not delayed. Good Luck!
  3. Gordon and Brian are acting as a real family--meeting people together, dealing with Toby and planning things together. While Dierdre's life is going down a different path uncertain in her mind, they are becoming more committed to each other in love and planning to marry. They are being very considerate of Toby and his interests. Toby will see their stability and know who is more dedicated to him. They can and will do things as a happy encouraging family that will nurture Toby. The ball is in Dierdre's couty to mantain contct with Toby. With some emails and maybe a call or two she can encourage Toby. If she ignores him, then Toby will be hurt but may slowly see he needs to accept Jasper is the center of her life. By the way, if things falls apart with Jasper , she could become a very bitter, even more unpleasant person and mess up Toby's world. Gordon grinned, “Nothing like a good holiday to knock the gilt off the gingerbread.” But , Brian and Gordon and Toby should live their lives the way they want looking to their better futures. They are building something which can withstand turbulence , I believe. Merry Christmas. Your interesting, thoughtful contributions are helping me to better enjoy the season. I like seeing a family grow and love and handle life well.
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 102

    PrivateTim What is the impact of the Sheriffs dept investigating the case on Travis? You suggested this is important. Is one more serious and professional?
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    I vote for Saturday. Thanks for asking.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    David is getting the best of both worlds during his explorations. He is learning to make sense of what he finds from a wise old Indian or Native American and from trusted books his father nominated to him. It soulds like one of his trips yielded rocks with gold like that found by the two men who funded the university. The gold rush in California started in 1849 and many sought to make their fortune. Having help start a college was a good, lasting investment alternative.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    Great fireworks are ahead. I have good memories of the displays. The TV also has shows . I have been seeing them in person since my childhood half-way across the US. My neighborhood now has them for the regular and Chinese New Years. Fireworks can be legally sold in the US and their is , I am told, a decent black market from Mexico. I like knowing that Michael is going to work for a friendly, happy place. He is set to learn on the job and soon at college. Life continues to look up.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 102

    “Last night, Curtis Buck was shot in his home in Pacific Palisades,” the reporter said. “Reliable sources indicate the police are trying to determine if he was murdered or if it was self-inflicted.” Why did the police think it could be suicide? Was it his gun? Did the scene look like he shot himself? A serious investigation could tell if it was staged and not a real suicide. Let us hear what the police say when they interview Travis.
  9. Cum hungry Simon cannot get enough seed from the orc king who soon died by having too much sex with Simon. Now Simon has to fuck a guard before he can flee imprisonment--or maybe he is not able to escape. The next chapter might show what Simon's new status is.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 102

    It is messy. The police have to be thorough. This is a high visibility case. The TV news report on the murder featured Travis as the person who faulted his dad on destroying Buck Industries. He might be the number one suspect for the police--especially since he visited the home earlier. Being innocent is not enough to keep Travis safe. I think Will is right that the murderer might try to pin the blame on Travis. Taylor hates him and may blame him for the sad shape she and Curtis are in. She could make wild charges even if she killed Curtis to get back at Travis. I hope the lawyer for Travis is good and he listens to her. I also hope Jake's beating of Curtis was not discovered.
  11. I visited IKEA two days ago in Sacramento, CA. I purchased some meatballs and lingonberry jam and a Santa hat and two planters to hold some herbs I am to bring inside. It has some neat things for the Christmas holidays which are now on sale. I am going to return later to buy some plants that are just right to live indoors . The boys can add items that will make a house a home. They can dream up new living arrangements.
  12. They have a case with the way the trust or estate was handled. It is all in the details, but not giving them what they are due for 20 years sounds like a serious problem and they could be owed a great deal of money. Assuming the guilty party can pay. I like Owain and Mhari looking up their family history. They might find out information that can help them grow and feel better. They need to know more than the limited and restricted life experiences their dad and mother taught them.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 24

    Vann will get his pony and a dad. Caleb and Asa will gain three boys and a swimming pool for a larger home. He and Asa will have a good family raised right as Caleb promised Silas. You brought people and the shifters together to celebrate and mourn and healthfully move on. Thank you.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 30

    Beckett is now on his own to petition the mage council. The portal is broken. Valrinda cannot go inside the city. The entrance to the castle blocked by a huge golem who wants to know if he has an appointment. He is at an impass. I bet he can find a way in. He can make a sce and attract a mage. I am sorry you were very sick. I hope things are much improved for you and you can really enjoy the holiday season.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    I like how Charlie and Michael are growing and becoming more confident. They have insecurities and friends work together and help them adapt. Charlie is on the way to having a boyfriend. Michael might be a singing star and employed. The future looks up for two boys who were recently homeless.
  16. akascrubber

    Naked meeting

    I like that they have become honest with each other and are eventually able to set limits in a friendly way. Russ takes criticism well and learns from it. He is even learning how better to deal with Toby who he genuinely likes.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    This is excellent news Al Norris. I am really looking forward to more and new chapters being posted here. I have read the original ones with great interest and can understand how compelling new chapters will be. Thank you for the update.
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    Adga and her crew fought a serious,prolonged series of fights to control the underground space and capture bandits. At the end Adga and the leader of the remaining bandits came to an understanding and a stalemate. They all will stay underground in place as the death storms prevent movement. Now they have to figure out how to eat, secure enough water and get healthy. Several are still injured from the fighting. Adga is worried to face her new position of greater authority with two slaves granted by Lord Kandahar and the expectation of a higher rank and command. She is told she could be, if all goes well in Scorpion Falls, to be in line to wage battles that will earn her great spoils beyond what she thought was possible. She cannot yet accept this bright future. Others by her are supporting the reality of her greater opportunities.It will take time for Adga to grow into this new light.
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 101

    Zach has lost Taylor as a sexual partner. He made a play for Will and was rebuffed. I can see Zach working on Travis once Will is 3000 miles away at Harvard and Travis is tensed up starting his acting career. Who knows? Resolving the Curtis Buck murder should clear the field and set up any new interpersonal dynamics.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 33

    You ended this chapter with the mother of all cliffhangers that changes nearly everything. It is so shocking. Afterdusk spoke to confirm the until now hidden powerful and scary battle ahead! We learn from the deadly dying green dragon that green dragons are revealing themselves to behind the problems facing King Wyhrem. They claim to be numerous and to know how to use the old magic. They want their homeland back from the king after thousands of years of denial. They know how to assume a second shape to remain undiscovered as they plot against their enemies and this ability is not limited to only royal green dragons. King Wyhrem faces a seious hidden enemy not caused by the actions of Premier Kandric. Kandric is in the way of the green dragons. He and his brothers are needed to help Wyhrem save this kingdom. Wyhrem and Kandric's upcoming meeting should take on a new , less contested meaning and might perhaps suggest a need for a joint fighting command and strategy to fight the green dragons who are behind the Rolling Dale mess. We will anxiously want to know what you say next. The enemies Kandic and all face are much more varied, numerous, hidden and extra powerful. It is called a "mortal spectacle." Wyhrem heard proclaimed...."As the Green Dragon Death exploded outward, the voice of Afterdusk entered the great hall. “Now, mortals, you start to understand what you face. This is becoming quite the mortal spectacle!”
  21. Change starts when one person takes responsibility and acts properly. But, we also saw that two people with good intentions can reinforce what they think and help them realize what matters at the important time of the year. No preaching or appeals to guilt. Love for your fellow man matters.
  22. The four are meshing much better together. They talked easily. Colin cooks and is going to teach Owain and maybe Joe since he will need survival skills when he is on his own. This was all said so effortlessly and congenially. It seems Owain is going to join a choir and join Colin in the endeavor. Mhari did not know that Owain had enjoyed singing in a choir when he was on his own. She still accepted her father's guidance that hobbies were a waste of time. She missed on on so much and is seeing in others the value of a hobby now. Mhari has not yet found a hobby, but I think she is unwinding and opening up and will find one or more. The three adults are encouraging each other and are supportive of Joe's acting training. Joe will have an improved family environment to help him grow and become a better young man. Any large inheritance is still a distant and non-earth shaking possibility.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 23

    Wow, Double Wow Bravo! The battles were well fought and prolonged. Just when all seemed lost--Cassiel and the Goddess of War and Kage intervened. Huntington was toast and all his remaining forces were killed. Huntington badly misjudged and caused his own destruction by violating what was allowed. You did it and tied it all up in one glorious, fulfilling chapter. Thank you dear author.
  24. akascrubber

    Epilog

    Well Done--a truly happy ending with many marriage ceremonies ahead orchestrated by Francine. Matt, Rusty, Maddox and Jonathan are so happy and ready to move on And you left the identity of Xpress still unknown. Hmm--something to discover in any future story. Thank you
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    One of those two girls helping out at the Boot could be a potential girl friend for Michael, I bet. Hearing him sing could make a star and boyfriend material.
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