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Chapter 32: Pride Goes Before
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 32: Pride Goes Before
Merrick has three sons as his legacy. Only one, Tarquin, was he able to dominate and manipulate by using his dogs according to this story. He would be his trained monster. The police and maybe CSIS could go after Levesque so he would not be able to take revenge on Merrick's family and assets. -
Chapter 32: Pride Goes Before
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 32: Pride Goes Before
:Perfect,, terrifying retribution--Robert Avery and Andrew Highmore looked on Merrick made his pitch to buy the shares of the 3 CanAm board members. They accepted and then he called his person to send the cash. However, he was informed his accounts were frozen. Merrick realized he was in danger.Levesque would kill him. He had to flee right out of Canada Andrew met him by the elevator and told him he was done. Merrick knew Andrew did him in. This had to feel glorious for Andrew Merrick left he building and fell on the ground dying from a stroke, Andrew's pill switch worked in time. -
Be prepared to be surprised and enchanted with a delightful story involving a high school boy, an ancient vampire and werewolf packs and twists. The world is turned upside down, Lucas, the high school student, controls , Andy, a vampire student, who is the willing bottom. They become a couple and meet werewolves at school. Traditional supernatural enemies become friends. But, this arrangement does not stay static. New threats emerge. Who will face death? Will the various groups respond effectively to fight off new enemies. I think you will enjoy the characters, the plot evolution and want to know who wins and who loses.
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Part 9: Invitation to the party
akascrubber commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 9: Invitation to the party
Is this the time to end all pretense ?Adrian feels connected to Matteo who has kept him distant. At this party he seems to want to be close to boyfriend. Will they be honest with each other? -
Parents Weekend, Book Four of Five
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Parents Weekend, Book Four of Five
Matt does it again. Running he finds two willing sex partners, They want him to fuck them and he does. The experience is wonderful and the two grad students invite him back, At breakfast he notices Hayden eyeing him. Will he advance Hayden's knowledge of male sex and influence what could happen in his son's dorm room? -
Will correctly knows what is happening with Kendo. Travis told him they only exchanged bow jobs and handjobs. Will is flying out Memorial Day weekend to see/confront Travis Kendo crossed a line. He gave Travis and he willingly took GHB and directed Travis to fuck him and he did multiple times. You can expect Kendo to give him more GHB. Travis will be an emotional and physical mess The stage is set for a huge explosion. Travis might need serious medical intervention. Will should rethink how he can help Travis. As a minimum he needs to end Kendo from being near Travis and may have to put the fear of God in him.
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Julian is adapting well, growing and actively seeking knowledge. The captain recognizes his uncommon ready willingness to be part of the ship and salutes him. Julian playing the piano impresses him. Julian surprisingly is thinking ahead about coffee distribution, and the captain will discuss it further with him later. Julian is taking charge of his life and wants to be successful. His relationship with Sam has become intimate with kisses exchanged. I hope that the experience they share in his cabin tonight is very rewarding for both. It will become known throughout the ship. Julian's education continues to grow in unexpected ways
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Well done. What a very satisfying ending. Andy is made part of the family and feels the joy of freedom. Andy and Lucas are in love and they share qualities that assure them long compatible lives. The BBQ was a wonderful victory celebration Thank you !
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Two comments on the cars. These thoroughbreds require regular, intensive maintenance. They will need special care. Also, there is an opinion around that males with excessively showy cars maybe compensating for an inadequate physical capability.
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Chapter 31: The Battle of Ontario
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 31: The Battle of Ontario
This is depressing. There are no happy people here. Their lives are unfolding apart. Things eventually will work out and the 4 main characters will lead fulfilling lives. They are going to be surprised, -
Chapter 31: The Battle of Ontario
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 31: The Battle of Ontario
I agree with drpaladin. Will and Peter have each other upstairs. They are losing the boyfriends they love and cannot prevent it Jason and Andrew know they are considered outcasts. Yes, they are "two exiles sat silently in the shadows, waiting out the storm. " -
Ali described thusly...."Bastien, who’s like a cat, always needing affection but never asking for it.” Lawrenc learned there were three fast cars at the school. Bastien drives a Porsche and offered to have Lawrence ride with him.
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Poor Felix, an OCD ruled student, finds his ordered world turned up safe down when the star student he follows disappears. Things begin to turn his favor as he given the choice benefits of the star and Felix feels guilty and does not think he should not benefit Into this perceived catastrophe, a messy, irrelevant Ryder essentially captured his opposite Felix saying he has hexed others to rule. He kept up close to Felix in a potentially more than intimate scenario. The school gossip caught them and thought they had become a couple. The rumor quickly ran through the school. Felix was mortified. Felix and Ryder do not have an easy time. Read on to learn about their struggles and find out if they actually become a happy couple.
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Act 2 and 3 : The other bit
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Act 2 and 3 : The other bit
Ryder was ready at the right time. He led Felix to the Master's office and fucked him The next morning Frelix realized Croft was back so his lucked ended and he thought his old routine would return Wonderfully, Ryder sat next to felix and gave him s joyous pudding. A new pattern was established. Felix and Ryder were a firm couple. Things have turned out much better than first expected .. -
Act I: The Cosmic Glitch
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Act I: The Cosmic Glitch
Felix is not having a lucky day. His lodestar is missing. Ryder thinks Ferlix is responsible and goes after him. Felix is very unnerved. Ryder wants to see Felix crack and dominates him in the library acting controlling. Someone's reputation might get maligned, if another person thought they were acting like a tragic couple. Oh wait, it is going to happen -
This was a total victory. Andy is now identified as the Trickster and freed Andy from his lab torment. Marcus and the werewolf pack overwhelmed and ruled the security guards. The werewolf scouts were adorable. BTW, Andy is now safer since he has the magic ring protecting him from daylight. He does not know Lucas is also the trickster.
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Will saw Andrew returning in his tactical gear." He was offering a profound, heartbreaking compromise born of absolute, unconditional love. "'I won't ask, if it means you have to lie to me.'" Andrew hugging Will in bed realized the consequences of his CSIS life at this time. "I'm going to let you go, Andrew thought, as the exhaustion finally pulled him down into the dark. So you can finally be safe." These are two defining moments in their relationship at this time. Will is not going to find out about Andrew's CSIS service much later when he is a Member of Parliament.
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Mile's trust is set up wisely with a phased release of control of money. He does not get it all at 18. There are lots of stories of lottery winners going broke after a year. They could not handle a large infusion of cash spent it all.
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Things have turned out unexpectedly positive for Miles. Mr Riggs is now his guardian. Miles also is now wealthy. His uncle's will left him $14.7 million from winning the lottery A local Wyoming law firm will handle the money. Miles is going back to Troy and the ranch. I am sure they will talk about his good fortune. Miles is not able now to consider what options are open to him.
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Andy has to be saved. The corporation is removing from his body what lets him live. Esca did not care if he lived. The irony is now Esca is dead and the corporation has no CEO to direct it. There is a huge rescue mission underway. Batholomew is leading it. The scientists are going to be very surprised and scared.
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OMG--Lucas tricked Esca to free him from the mage's trap. Then, he shook Esca's hand and secretly removed his magical ring that allowed him to live in daylight. The morning sun came up and Esca turned into ash. Wow! Lucass turned into a coyote! He fled the house to save Andy. Lucas unnaturally was very aware and knew exactly what to do to defeat Esca. So was this really Lucas , the huskie werewolf, or was he Loki in disguise? We will find out soon, I bet.
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Chapter 29: The Reckoning
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Reckoning
You have created an amazing, very interesting and compelling body of work. Thank you. -
Chapter 29: The Reckoning
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Reckoning
Peter is a force of nature. He intimidated the medical staff and left the facility with Jason who was out of it from the drugs Marcus gave him He kept his head and found a way out and got on the train to find a phone to call home. He did not give up and solved the problems they faced in tough winter weather Her acted heroically. He saved Jason. -
Chapter 29: The Reckoning
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Reckoning
Jared's phone call saved Will from being a killer. The police are arriving and they might have arrested Will They know where Peter and a drugged-up Jason are. Marcus is even more trouble now.
