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    The Bargain

    The mayor is a right bastard. He made Simon his cocksucker and it is only the start of his degradation
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    Prologue

    Two solid stories from which to blend into a compelling narrative. Good Luck --I am along for the ride.
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    Chapter 186

    Ha, ha--interesting filler.... I liked this line-- "When you are busy time moves on but you hardly notice it. The children remind you as they grow older but you never relate that to yourself. " Colin and Armand are turning 50. They still love life and all the kids with their different personalities in their extended family. They are the bedrock from which a healthy , loving family can grow.
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    Chapter 8

    Now, that did not go well at all. Ludwig was stunned and horrified to see Julius. He did not realize that Julius created him as a vampire and thought he was his master. Julus wanted them to carry on as lovers from 1000 years ago. Ludwig was way over him. Julius threw the insignificant humans, Sam and Caden, around as only worth food stock and hurt them. It is time for Ludwig to stand up to Julius and educate him on what he is thinking now, Ludwig should defend the humans from further injury. Now Julius will be shocked and disoriented.
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    Chapter 2

    Liam is going to finally meet Alex. He is nervous and worried about what he will say/Alex stayed in control and mysterious. He would not send a pic of himself. But got Liam to send several pics. He liked how Liam looked. I hope Alec is much more open when they meet.
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    Chapter 7

    Agree, now the plot thickens. No pretense, or subterfuges by Julius. It should all come out. He is bold and feels superior--even to a former king. I can see Julius telling Ludwig proudly that he turned him into a vampire without his permission and left him thinking he was dead. He did not think it was probable but he not care enough to fully investigate Ludwig after he supposedly died. He was a human plaything who he really did no care about so why seriously study him or follow up. Now that Ludwig is alive--so to speak-Julius thinks he can assume that they will be lovers once again with subservient humans to feed them like the minions they are. Ludwig should be shocked and ,when he recovers , very upset at Julius . Ludwig has no use for Julius. He has Caden. He will not hold back from his criticism of Julius. Now, what does Julius do? Fight. Scream. Shout. Forcibly argue. Throw things. Etc......
  7. These deceptions and disguises are worthy of Shakespeare, Let us see--Rusty knows about Slicky and wants to tease Matty. Matty knows about Rybalt and is confused why Matty needed a character. The unwinding should be great fun. Rusty---"Hmm, he so wanted to see Matty give himself away and then tease him to no end. But such things required finesse and good timing. Rusty was all for delayed gratification, especially since he was delaying none of it. " I hope John and Connor suffer badly for their evil actions.
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    Chapter 6

    I can see Ludwig having a very heated argument with Julius for turning him without notice! Cadem may have to calm them down.
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    Chapter 1

    There isa lots to flesh out--it could be a romance or tragedy. We will see.
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    Chapter 185

    Armand and Colin created a warm, sincere family environment. GG helped. Best Armand comment I read -- "Is my destiny to provide an intimate home for the most hurt or needy child. With these thoughts running through my head, I heard the creak of a rocker"
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    Chapter 8

    Roni is very perceptive. Seth is now fully warned about Craig and what might happen. Seth will be blamed. Who is the woman Seth calls his mother? She sounds so reasonable and is not blaming Seth. The hickey is going to keep on causing Seth problems. Can he really help Blake.? Craig will get in the way, I bet.
  12. Nothing is simple and easy. The plans of the good guys are turned over unexpectedly. The evil being has seriously damaged the plane. The Emperor did not learn his lesson from the dreams. The battles upcoming will be violent and hard fought. The good guys will need to be alert and improvise.
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