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  1. The three had a great, relaxing time on the island. They needed a peaceful break. They ate to their hearts content and two got nicely drunk. Mama was a delight. But they had to leave since a storm was arriving. They must have more to experience and learn on their voyage.
  2. They are naked willingly and intoxicated with each other. Hudson is in heat and so is Otis. I loved the oral sex experiences. They have lots more to experience and it will be amazing. Anything cruel or evil is not tainting them now. The future is another story.
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 25

    Valrinda is still missing and Beckett realizes he needs him as a companion. He wants them to stay together. Stressed and pushed about and hungry, Beckett now in a weaken state assumes that Valrinda is hiding in the tunnels under the desert city. Beckett does not know what else is under the city and what dangers he will face underground. But, for now he is stopped by a ugly beast who is guarding the tunnel entrance. It is never easy for Beckett. He has to come up with a new plan to get into the tunnels, Can the wisps cause a distraction to direct the ugly beast away long enough to let Beckett enter the tunnel in search of Valrinda?
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    I add my vote to others. This interesting tale is worth continuing. The two boys have lots of more to fun to enjoy. Terry can grow up to be a cook, maybe for Halan III. You have a fertile field for more enjoyable chapters
  5. akascrubber

    Drive

    Thanks for unraveling some mysteries Novo is the key and he will be needed more in the future as he fulfils the prophecy while aiding his fraternity brothers. Nice use of a Gatorade bottle, too. Hope life stays less complicated for you, but you must follow your own interests.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 211

    What a glorious, fun filled fishing trip, All the boys caught fish, Enough shrimp and lobster were caught to make paella twice. The hot dog cart was a good addition and was well received. Colin is planning on making the next trip an even better one. Pierre was very happy fishing. He is a bit naive and inexperienced. His time in America will help him grow up
  7. " Perry would be Kyan’s all-you-can-eat-buffet. He was going to tick every one of Kyan’s unchecked boxes." The sweet, honest joy of these two exploring great sex is fabulous and heartwarming. Henry's sickness will just slightly put off their exploration. They are taking things in stride and not getting upset,
  8. Will and Stillingford are going to be martyrs eventually. Their death is meant to take the force out of their backers. The Constable wanted them dead and spread lies to the King so he was willing for them to die. Ed believes the Sheriff was behind the attacks at Speakers Square. The King does not like the Duke. That is good news to learn and see in action He wants Gustave along with Fran to meet with him and his council to review options for new revenue if a hated tax is cancelled. I assume the King will infuriate the Duke ,if he charts his own path for revenue. Fran and Ed have more reasons to work against those who hurt their friends. Fran hopes to kill Gustave when the time is right.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 210

    It is hard to proofread your own work. Things blur or you read what you want into a sentence.
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    Chapter 210

    Interesting--Christain is arriving in 3-4 weeks and Pierre's status will be decided. Pierre could stay in the US with a large loving family and a dad he adores--or go back. Armand will support either choice. I think the fun and new things Pierre is experiencing will make him want to stay. The fishing trip should be a wonderful time. He seems to crave attention and love.
  11. akascrubber

    Wrap Up

    Well done, A complex, fascinating tale with interesting characters and a robust plot with amazing action with twists and turns and much violence and bold magic and confirming deep love. Thank you. These characters hopefully will live on in some form.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 86

    Assume the Evensong meeting is trap and Travis's guards know Will is going to be present to take Travis away. They read and control his emails and text messages. Maybe they might set up a plan to shoot and kill Travis and Will and place the gun in Will's hands so he seen as the killer. They might assume Will is going to be alone and not able to protect himself. With the filed lawsuit Travis is no longer needed and could rat out his lawyer for acting without his permission Stef and Will are going to need security and armed men to handle the kidnappers. They could ask Jake or Lord Granger for a way to hire some ex-SAS guys to help them save Travis. They should be ready for a firefight and have an escape plan to flee London. They should update him on what has happened and find out if he authorized the lawsuit . I bet he did not . Travis still needs a safe haven until his birthday. Someone with a great amount of money is behind this plot. I doubt Fellowes is that wealthy to bid on Buck Industries. He must be really working for this person, not Travis. Fellowes might show up to bid on the company so the real source of the money is hidden. But, I bet man with the money will be in the room when the bids are made and Brad can figure out who is the backer by his looks and moves when Brad wins the bid.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 86

    Wow--What a mess, but Will and his family are going to help Travis. Someone, possibly his lawyer, is trying to hold him hostage and maybe take over Buck Industries. They want Travis to be a pawn who loses. Brad is going to lead the bid for the company for Travis and smokeout who is the person behind the plot to against Travis Travis asked Will for help and gave him a location. They are developing a plan to save Travis and get him away from being arrested. I hope Will and Stef save Travis and his father buys Buck Industries, It will not be easy.The bad guys will not give up without a fight. Stef and Will should get serious protection.
  14. Interesting tale about Goober, drpaladin Andy Griffin played a good old boy in several roles. In fact, later in life he said he hated them and was politically left of center and looked down on country guys.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Justin4Fun said 'Before this book ends, someone will die. Let the bookies begin...." Maybe, that is why this is called Re-birth And someone returns from the dead
  16. akascrubber

    The Falling

    Things are not looking good at least in the short term I hope Rusty's mom wakes up. Rusty might get to see his dad as they discuss his mom's health. Is she due for nursing home care? Rusty is in no position to think about Matty or now telling him why he brought August, instead of him. He has to be thinking about his mom and his guilt. Matty is jealous and does not know why August was with Rusty. I hope he lets Rusty unwind and return to a better place in his mind before he gets too emotional and expresses his worry about August. They could exchange heated words and say things they will regret later. Maybe Jonathan and Maddox can play the conciliating role and try to calm things down when both guys have time to decompress. I hope so.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    I bet the three will be totally embarrassed when Scott opens the door to find them naked with Greg and Brian hugging. How do they explain that? Will Scott accept that they were innocently exploring? Will Scott get naked and join in and spend the night?
  18. BTW--Kyan's blow job experience is even more extreme than the joke I was told by a straight guy. Why is the bride at the wedding smiling as she walks down the aisle ? Answer: She knows she has given her last blow job.
  19. What a surprise ! The parents are paying for Kyan and the kids, not Perry. And they want to do it. Kyan and his in-laws had a serious, open conversation. He accepted their help and valued it without regret. Now, Kyan is able and willing to get very close to Perry and spend the nigt with him. He dream since he was 15 was fulfilled : his first blow job. His wife apparently did not give him one before or during their marriage. Perry gave him what turned out to be an amazing, soul touching, mind expanding blowjob. Kyan wants more from Perry. They are on track for the next step: saying they love each other.
  20. akascrubber

    Trust

    Wait till Jackie sees the choker. He will want Otis even more and lay a trap for him.
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Are we on a waystation on the road for more chaos or ????? Short term the situation is mostly uncertain. Blake looks like his home life will be calm. He is going to move in with Aunt Marie and Uncle Steve. Craig is being taken by an adult to meet his parents at his home. Seth may later go to his home tonight or in the next morning. We do not know how the parents will react. We know Stacy wants to kill Seth. Her overaction may cause her to lose the support of their mother Both boys are scared after being outed and want to run away. If they are rejected when they return home, I bet they will runaway.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    All's well that ends well. They are together at last. Henry finds Tomas and takes a great risk and asked that they bond. The ceremony was glorious and the follow on was astounding. Twn is protecting the plainsrunners and well loved by Henry Thank you for an interesting story which is follows a new path.
  23. akascrubber

    Trust

    Otis and Hudson are perfect for each other. Otis trusts Hudson and opens up to his desires and wears a choker. He seems so vulnerable and yearning. He strips and becomes naked as Hudson requests. Hudon takes pics of Otis that reveal his beauty and all of his body. Unlike the pics Hudson took earlier, this session was voluntary and encouraging. No one was hurt. Hudson tells Otis he is very handsome and appealing. The story ends with both kissing. I wonder what else they are going to do ? The photo session between Otis and Hudson was very descriptive and hot. I could feel myself being there. Heck, I want copies of the pics.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 24

    Beckett lost in the city is found by the wisps. They think they have founded the star which is protected by magic. Beckett feels he needs Valrinda to fight magic. Is Becket being deceived by the wisps? Can he find his dragon? Is he really safe in the meantime?
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    Chapter 209

    The trip was a success. People were reunited. Plans were laid. Arnaud found more love and Saint Michael. He died satisfied and at peace. Armand and Colin reached Arnaud in time to talk to him and comfort him. His son, Christian, was very pleased to see them. Armand and Colin took Christian's son with them to America. He is going to see Armand paint another angel and certainly be treated as a close family member. I think he will be thrilled. And the Italian children arrive soon so the lives here will be very busy and happy.
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