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Henry and Tomas transitioned to their world. Tomas slowly but fully recovered from his injuries. Henry was ecstatic and learned much happily from Tomas. They found and joined a group of plainsrunners with novices and senior members who were going to a large settlement to be trained. Henry was told this would be a good move for him by Tomas.Tomas joined the senior leader members away from Henry who joined the novices. They all ran, slept, and sang. Henry was accepted well. As Tomas had advised him, Henry did not reveal he was from another world. He said he was from a smaller distant settlement. Two major changes took place after several runs: Tomas left not explaining why to Henry and Henry was going to be invited to join the group. Henry was worried and felt very alone. He is going to have to grow up fast, I hope Tomas returns. Henry also learned that powerful but slower beings sought out plainrunners to eat them and absorb their powers. His group felt safe since they had larger numbers and were not traveling in an area the enemy normally occupied.
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Beckett has found one being who does not like him. Valrinda saves the day, Beckett and the wisps. The flying creature wanted to feed on wisps and Beckett was in the way. The wisps knew their enemy and dug into the sand to hide. Valrinda fought hard and won. Now, the creature was stopped, injured by Valrinda and flew away. The wisps should have a new respect for Valrinda and want her nearby. They might even be uncommonly thankful.
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Jamie and crew have not discussed how to destroy the ship and station. They are focusing on Lodda. Yes, he must be stopped. However, they must take away his power and destroy his tools. They have to prevent the ship and station from being activated and brought to life which will notify others and call upon them to attack the planet and destroy the inhabitants.
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Now we see the endgame--it was not what was thought---A crazy Lodda could destroy this world by letting enemies come back to destroy it :Garvin took a deep breath of surprise then. "He means to reopen it. He means to open the way to the stars again!" Porvus pressed his hand against his forehead, and nodded. "I think that is his goal. And if he does reopen the gate, it will mean that those forces from other worlds will return here, to complete the job they failed to do before!" They must come up with a plan and stop/kill Lodda. Then, Jamie and crew must fight Porvus.
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I think Travis is making plans for his protection during his phone calls. Will can help him with good advice later tonight and during the week. Brad freaking out as Travis explained his precarious situation told me this is more serious than others are considering. Brad can help Travis get to any place he might want to use as a hide-away.
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Oh So Dreadful Catch-22
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Oh So Dreadful Catch-22
Rusty wants to find Matty his perfect boyfriend, He does not see Matt has fallen for him and Matty won't say he wants Rusty for his own. They have agreed to e friends forever--but not boyfriends forever. They are having great sex without a commitment. This is so painful and need to change--but how will they finally realize they are meant for each other?- 50 comments
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Lots of assumptions being made. They are considering the nature of magic and found out that the planet gave the travelers magic. Working through trial and error they are close to being ready to fight the remaining evil mages. I am sure they will find the right answers. Not knowing the outcome of the upcoming battle, Jamie and Garvin traveled to see the Prince and restore him to his normal self. His cock is now full size. He and his friends are very pleased.
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Part One. Chapter Four.
akascrubber commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Four.
I agree--some hints and signals about possible growing closer but now everything is innocent. Maybe they both do not know where their friendship is progressing into. They are helping each other on a male, mutual support friendship level. Perry likes him and his kids strongly. Kyan finally realizes Perry is into him and the kids. They are open to touching and spooning in bed with no sexual overtones--for now. Let's see if they start to touch each other during the day and share bed again soon.- 104 comments
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I can see Craig telling Stacy that Seth is hanging around with a gay guy and it could hurt her reputation. He could propose to put a cock cage on Seth to stop his gay sex play. Then he could get Stacy to join him and force Seth to wear a cock cage, Craig cold keep the key. What sweet revenge by Craig. Just saying--it is one idea.
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What a touching episode. Armand was able to say goodbye to Grandmere. GG was with her. It seems Grandmere was in great pain but did not complain. Her grace and composure helped make her greatly loved. Once again, Amand added an angel to a place of merit--the entrance to Grandmere's mausoleum.
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Jamie and crew fought a huge battle with Urvan and his evil mags. The blue lance appeared used by a terrible machine. Lots of explosions and lightning strikes. Jamie defeat Urvan and took his knack away in order to find the magic that is impairing the Prince. He has the right magic now. The crew is going to recover and find new solutions. Jamie is close to finding the source for magic that he needs to defeat the head mage. Jamie still has a good soul and is taking Urvan to a better place to be paced in his death. I hope this does not come back to hurt him
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Things could get overheated tonight, Seth and Stacy's mother is gone. Craig could hurt Seth and make up a story so Stacy would agree to him hurting Seth. Stacy would love to have Craig over for her benefit.
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Guesses about the future are just that--the author won't give away any clues so it is a one-sided expression--- If I were to guess, Hudson will need to make more than one trip to the club and he will need time to photograph the top hot guys for great marketing material. I also bet Jackie sees Missy as cock blocking him and his try to get Otis to come out on a real date with him. I would not put it past him at some point to give Otis a date rape drug to get in his pants. Otis would not remember the sex. If his boss sees Otis as a sale item because of seeing him at Hudson's and with Jackie--then he might ask Jackie to bring Otis in for pics under the guise of making him a model for a fake agency. Hudson will be shocked.
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The battles lines are drawn. I thought the mom's rigid rules would cause an explosion. But no--Blake and Seth kiss iin the pool and Craigs sees them. He is furious. I expect Craig will hurt both guys. Seth has to avoid Blake for their own good.
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Matters are heating up. Urvan escaped from Jamie by mean of a globe powered by science and not magic. He translocated to Cotrin in a desert where the mages are planning to unleash mass destruction. Now Jamie and the others are going to interrogate Lautan to find out more what the evil mages want to do. With new information will Jamie and the others translocate to Methuwan or Cotrin??
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Then fates are aligning. Hudson is at the same club as Otis but not connecting or aware of each other. Hudson has been accepted into the hard core sex part of the club. He is to be the photographer for the club business to take pics of the 20 or so top sex performer boys so they can be marketed. His contacts are a mid level guy, Mr Watkins, and his assistant, Jackie. Hudson does not yet know who is in charge . He also has heard the sex performer boys eventually" graduate" and leave the club. This transition is mysterious and could be where the boys are trafficked to high dollar clients. I wonder if they also find ways to take or kidnap other boys who are not on stage but might appeal to a special type of buyer. Hudson's pics could help identify and connect local and maybe foreign clients with boys at any time. He should learn more as he takes pics. Jackie has taken Otis and Missy to the club. He is working to get closer to Otis--maybe for his romantic purposes or maybe to eventually be a target for Mr. Watkins. Otis is way over his head and even MIssy does not know what danger could be in store. Right now Otis has agreed to try a cosmo and thinks one drink cannot be bad. But he does not really drink. I hope practices restraint. I do not think Jackie will get very bold this trip with Missy along. If he gets Otis alone on a real date , then Jackie could take advantage of Otis in unexpected ways.
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Another step towards the star, it seems. Beckett was very impaired and freezing riding on his dragon at a high altitude and had to land to recover. I assume he will not try to move ahead so high off the ground again. Once on the ground, he was surrounded by small , strange creatures who said they were meant to help him find the star. They knew of his journey and goal. They called hm the "Seeker of the Star." Only they are known thieves who steal shiny objects. Will they steal his star? “Nothing good ever comes from consorting with wisps!” Valrinda is worried and knows their untrustworthy reputation. Only Beckett sees them as apt partners. very impaired and He is following his vision. He expects they can help him in his quest. Is he too trusting and has made major error? Has the intense cold addled his thinking? He needs to be wary.
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Why was not Serri compelled to join the mages. Is a witch considered too inferior? Could she secretly have been compelled to find Jamie after her memory was erased? She could reveal Jamie and his impending attack when given a trigger word. Is this too outlandish to consider Seeri is unwitting spy?
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They added a witch to their group. Seeii , a relative of Wanda Pegfoot, has killed two grey mages who pursued her, Now . she can add her knowledge of her past with Urvan and Porvus to the group. I expect her magic will be upgraded. The future is more defined and very dangerous
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I can see at least three challenges or tests or skills that Jamie and his crew for now have to master. Find a way to electronically decapitate the machines built by the ancients and now controlled by the senior mages. The machines would be rendered inert and powerless. If the face machines soon Jamie might find a way to stop them by trying various methods. Then find a way to stop the gray mages from being compelled. Once freed they might run away not wanting to take part in a mass destruction event and also might flee when they see Jamie and crew be effective fighters and stopping the machines,too, Jamie knows from Kundun that he has to stop the mages from using their magic. But how? Will he have to wait till he faces Urvan in battle before he knows how to handle him?
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Used clothing and second hand stores are popular in the US. Goodwill operates stores in over 4200 locations in the US plus others in 16 more countries. Non-profits connected to religious denominations-like St Vincent DePaul and Deseret Industries-operate thrift store, too. `The thrift store concept can work in many places-I can see a town without one would be a good market. I have worked at a Goodwill in CA. Halloween was our biggest sales time. People sought out costumes.
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"Kundun watched him silently a moment, and then smiled. "Your gift for magicks is sure, Jamie. But it is your intuition and intelligence that makes your knack the giant it has become." Jamie was surprised that he was now a master. He had to build upon his knowledge and work with others in his group to be better prepared. Kundun helped give a much stronger defense magic which could be a good safeguard application until he could devise am appropriate response. Kundun gave Jamie a challenge--" I put to you that the best defense against magicks is to find a way to deny them the ability to propagate in the first place." Janie is going to ponder this and I am sure he will find a solution.
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This surprising victory over vastly superior forces will be welcomed new during a critical period. The authorities have been placed on alert for an expected overthrow of the government which was predicated on the fleet losing.Then during the recrimination over the serious loss , new leadership was ready take charge and rule over the regularly installed officials. We learned in a previous chapter an assassinated women informed a friendly reporter by delayed email after her death of the conspiracy.--"For the next ten minutes, Marion laid out her case, referring to attachments and public databases, and laid out Bishop Keilor’s plan to engineer a military disaster to flip Parliament and for his friends to put him in a seat on the Executive Committee." Things are going to be so messed up. It could take time to bring order and punish the offenders. The fleet's victory will be important beyond the military result.
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Part One. Chapter Three.
akascrubber commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Three.
Kyan is overwhelmed and seriously depressed. He got almost to his breaking point. Jessica and Perry intervened, and it seems progress is being made. Perry listened and Kyan unloaded. He explained all his fears and thoughts about missing his wife to feeling he was not a good father. He felt better. Kyan has more to do and understand but with good friends he likely will made it. Kyan gains strength from Perry. He senses Perry wants only to help a good friend in need. I noted this interaction earlier---" Perry’s muscular arms wrapped around him, making Kyan feel safe. At six feet, they were essentially the same height, but Perry had twenty pounds on him. Kyan had always been unassuming in his build. Even when he worked out, he only ever looked average. But it was more than Perry’s build that made Kyan feel safe, it was the warmth and comfort he radiated."- 110 comments
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What a bloody, destructive final battle. The enemy is defeated for now. Time to repair and recover and try to exploit the enemy tech. Expect surprises and more danger. The report of the stunning victory will scramble the assumptions of those in the HQ. Will anyone pay for the mission misalignment?
