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He discussed this with Snave, who was in agreement. "We are part of something greater that is occurring in the world, I think," the gargoyle said. "There are forces building here that need time to ripen on both sides. On our side, they would seem to be positive forces as we learn and grow. On the side of the enemy? Who knows? Something - some rift, perhaps - that also needs time to grow. I believe as you do, Jamie, that our arrival at Methuwan will happen in its own time. We have the right perspective now. These individuals learn and grow when faced with troubled times. The danger gets more intense, and Jamie and others respond and survive beating the evil forces. I hope they are totally ready when they face the evil mages in person.
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In a good world, the ending of this story would only be the beginning. The situation is ripe with possibilities.
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Oh Yes--I wanted to eat the paella that James made. Will he give up the secret to how he made his version better? It can be made in many different ways. I saw a food show on TV where the dish was made with snails along with other proteins. I would love to hear what James did. Now, GG is going to help Armand figure out what to paint for his new children. They can fully bond now.
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The journey has gotten more perilous with fierce creatures and biting cold. They had no good options on this leg of the trip. Beckett is now on Valrinda's back almost too higb in the sky and enduring severely cold temps and tough winds. Let's hope they stay safe and make it to their next step in decent health.
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Well, I did not see that coming. Julius is thrown off the island after 2 months. It will b no longer function as a resort. Julius and Ludwig were not compatible and Calen hated him. Sam agreed to follow Julius. Julius realizes Sam makes him feel good and he is becoming attached to him. He offers to take Sam to bed and fuck him seriously. They have done nothing sexually so far. I am surprised. Sam feels him he does not want that since he is asexual. Julius is flummoxed but tells Sam that will still go to him bedroom and he will spank Sam. Surprisingly, Sam likes the idea. I guess he also can get orgasms from being banked. Sam might evenly seek to help Julius get off since he has been helped. Things could modify or not ?
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They found and defeated three killer mages who know Urvan, Powerful, but not powerful enough, for Jamie and crew. Their abilities and skills were superior to the evil mages who had killed the Lachness. Jamie had to accept it was kill or be killed. He could not hesitate to fight and kill. His opponents showed they lacked mercy. Now they have added confidence and resolve and a new mate, a mage Lachness. I think the trip grows even more dangerous. The evil mages should be missed. Someone might come looking for them.
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Now possible real danger lies ahead After a series of learning and growing situations along the way, the enhanced mages are facing trouble and might need to apply their skills. They now are near a dead body--a recently dead body smelling from decomposing They are wary and careful as they advance --shields up and invisible Any one present will be surprised-- Who and what will they find?
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I am following Geron Kees story with great interest. He has written the story out completely and is publishing a chapter a day. The chapters are 10,000 words or so. But, I do not know of any other writer here on GA who is publishing daily. Are there others who publish daily ?
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"Zachary stared at him. "I'm the guy who gets shot!" "I don't think so," Zachary said. "I don't think that ever really happened. I think it was an illusion. I think at lot of these shifts or rifts are fake. Hamilton said it himself, smoke and mirrors." Then at the end of this shift, Zachary realized he was the key. The others did not exist outside of his mind. He would cause change. All was white and , it appears, Zachary is born in a new place/reality as a new baby. Things might start over without him being aware of his past. Worthy of a Twilight Zone episode. What a ride!
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We have the pathos. You have laid the groundwork. The kids are cute. Each adult character seems good and troubled and better together. But, Kyan is a mess in so many ways. He needs help. It looks like a plan is going to be formulated. I am interested. Like the cliche, I hope this is darkness before the dawn.
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Fishing, food and good times all the time Love reigns in this extended family. The paintings will memorialize these activities well. Armand and Colin are very good fathers.
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They pondered their situation and came to the conclusion they not just one or two were key, but all contributed to their success. You and Garvin are a bond of incredible chance. I feel it is the combination of your knacks, somehow, that has brought us this far." Garvin's eyes widened. "I have done so little, compared to my Jamie." "I think you underestimate your contribution," the gargoyle returned. "I think the pairing of the two of you has somehow bolstered each of your knacks." "It may even go farther than that," Dorf said quietly. "It may extend to the entire group. And even beyond that, for others have contributed to our well-being on this journey." Jamie is taking them into the nether to learn more and gain new abilities. They will be united. They need to be able to face Urvan and other powerful mages and not lose. They will have to stop their attacks and return to destroy them--even though they have 100' s of years of practice and study on them.
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Where should Will and Marie go to College?
akascrubber replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Topics
Was it not too cold for Will's tastes when he arrived early in the year to visit Harvard ? He had sex with Peter Thiel and made an investment that will pay off handsomely in the future. By going to Harvard, he is closer to JJ, Patrick, Fashion Week and related people, and the hot guy running Stef's NY venture capital office.There is something to be said about the benefits of spreading your wings and moving away from home to go to college. He can get back to Palo Alta when he needs, I bet. -
The know the point when things got out of hand. Now, they--the good guys--have the box that can switch things. Lowerstoff knows things will change at random, but they have one goal--- Zachary told him, "not anymore. What matters is fixing the rift, mending the quantum shift and preventing total annihilation!" Can they be that lucky ? I hope so--Pasteur, the famous scientist, said opportunity favors the prepared mind. They are prepared.
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A jealous Caden over reacts and attacked Sam's room and body looking for Julius. Newly turnned vampires are volatile and cranky. Caden fits this description. He thinks Ludwig is cheating on him and having sex with Julius. They spend lots of time together. He can think of only one reason, and it is not good. Before Caden really hurts Sam, both senior vampires appear. Ludwig explains to Caden he is spending time with him leaning to deal with a newly turned vampire and that he loves him not Jullius. Caden accepts he explanation and quicky becomes passionate. The fight ends fast. They leave. Sam is still very scared. Julius tries of comfort Sam, He continues to be very shaken up. He is going to need more help and guidance by Julius. He should better explain Caden's behavior to Sam. At least for now, Caden will no longer trouble Sam.
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Travis and Will had a textured, back and forth, sometimes heated discussion about the kind of relationship they wanted. They got to the end agreeing to think more. Will is the one with many sexual partners, Travis is so new to having a real gay partner/ He wanted them to be exclusive without thinking about their upcoming college location differences. Will they be exclusive? Will they be committed but have multiple partners? Can they stay true to each other with many partners. Will thinks he can continue as he has been acting with Travis as his central guy. Travis is uncertain. Now a new uncertainty has been added. Marie is not going to Harvard with Will. She is going to attend Stanford or Cal-Berkeley. Where will Travis attend college? Could their choices influence Will? He has been admitted to Stanford and Cal-Berkeley like Marie. My best is that he will still go to Harvard.
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It feels like impending doom. She could be killed. The Russians are not forgiving. Zachary would find it hard to forgive his father for placing his mother in the risky situation--if and when he finds out.
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The Kind of Neighbors that Kiss
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Kind of Neighbors that Kiss
Oh my--Otis is so clueless and needy and hopeful. He is painfully innocent. As long as he is around good hearted people, he should be OK. A mean or deceitful one can really confuse and hurt him/ I am impressed by Hudson. He really likes Otis, He could be boyfriend material. Actually, they both could be boyfriend material I am hopeful we can find out about his forehead scare and the drunken, hateful person who verbally abused him years ago. -
Jamie shook his head. "No. We are duty-bound to assist Sedwick, both as our prince and as our friend. But the goal of finding a way to reverse his problem may be only a part of our end game here." They are facing a huge problem which is not yet defined. Special vehicles are being used for transport in the tunnels. They are astounding--maybe mag-lev powered. One tower has been inspected and they are on their way to inspect another. They now have a map. Jamie will sleep tonight and seek to solve another defense need. But, I fear Jamie and the others need to make a huge or quantum leap to be able to wield more enriched and capable magic. The beings they are going to find with Urvan must be on scale of terror and awesome strength beyond what Jamie has yet dreamed of facing. Time for the lens and nether to come through for Jamie. So far they have been safe and not hurt. Can this continue?
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I did not expect this outcome--love between two former very different enemies or rather two who hated each other . When I saw the term pet, I thought he would eventually be a sexual slave. The human was not worthy to be more. But, it turned out the chief and human grew to fall in love and the human grew to love Orc culture and their way of life. He was rejected by his village people and by being a partner of the chief and showing his skills he was accepted by the Orcs. The human expressed no regrets. This is an interesting and uncommon tale of bonds formed by very different souls.
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The challenges increased significantly. The forest is many, many times larger than first estimated. The number of locations built by the ancients and number occupied by other beings are enormous. Urvan could be located in one of hundreds of locations. The search could take a long time. Maybe, Urvan will seek them out when they become better known. They gained a slight increase in magical capability. They will be able to be guided by small dragonettes who have great eyesight in the dark, They are working through traveling in the deep underground tunnels built to last by the ancients. They figured out how to use a car to move along a tunnel. It will not take them long to reach their next goal. They have building blocks for future safe travel. As they find more things built by the ancients, maybe they will find out what happened to them or led to their demise.
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Bizzzare. Matty outed Rusty to John who does not believe him, But John crushed on Matty and they end up on the floor connected. John is so sexually frustrated. He has the hots for Matty and must have had a thing for Connor who has now rejected him. It seems the Cat Boy suit was seen in Zoey's closet by another person. She is now seen as on the cat boy's side by Connor and his crew. John who brought Zoey to the group is suspect also. Zoey and John joined a large Connor meeting as were accused of being traitors and held hostage, Matty received a message from Zoey's phone asking for help. He ran to Rusty. Rusty was with his whole group and they were all incensed and left to free Matty's friends. Dex broke the dorr to Connor's meeting down. They stared down Connor and friends and rescued John and Zoey. Dex was crushed by Zoey who ended up holding him and thanking him for saving her, She has a secret crush of /Dex, It seems Conor is going to complain to the Dean. Jonathan will protest Connor's actions to the Dean also. Xpress has joined in against Connor. The Dean will have a mess to resolve.
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They all were transported to the ship and were in the room with Hamiliton. They were too late. The missiles were just launched and the torpedoes were identified as soon to hit the ship. Zachary did not kill Hamilition. Touma's note said to kill Lowerstoff. Neither did what their notes said. Things moved differently. Most woke up in their last place with wired attached. Zachary found himself with his parents in the gallery being pursued and running, He jumped off a railing as his father suggested and expected to de after a long fall. But , he awoke in Paris in 1975 and all the crew were present. Will they recycle again or have they reached a stopping point? The next chapter will guide us.
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Hmmm so from the Kandic universe . Jamie could be helped perhaps by a legendary or highest ranked shaman, ruinseeker, mind reader, great Sand Dragon with a molten sand breath weapon. Prince Xavier would be very easy to work with as a half-elf until he changed into a huge dragon with enhanced magical power. However , as I see Jamie growing and maturing and training others, I think he and his friends are well placed to surprise and fight their enemies with help from the nether.
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It is fascinating to see Jamie go into the nether . Then he learns and applies and shares the skills and magic. They have exactly what the need for their next challenges. They are more powerful and less vulnerable. Taking on the monsters fighting the humanoids was heroic and successful. They save the humanoids and they are grateful. They have new friends and another safe place to stay. So far they are always making progress. I hope they are ready to fight the mages and other associated with them.
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