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Stag, Part Three of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Stag, Part Three of Three
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Stag, Part Three of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Stag, Part Three of Three
They had to satisfy the goddess and Pan, Carl fucked Steve and as they got into it, they both received enormous pleasure. Carl was the real actor and was able to convince the goddess. They left and promised not to come back. Carl will be open to more male sex, but not Steve. He will later marry Tiffany who will continue to use large dildos in his ass and dominate him. -
Mickey needs to give the Gremlin lots of snacks for that he did destroying the weapon of the too powerful ship. I bet the spire cannot be repaired by the crew and will no longer be a threat to Mickey and his crew.
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The Turkish doctor saved Lloyd aas requested by Darien, Wylan did not interact with the doctor and will not be able to report on him to Ishan's brothers, Drarien promised to save the doctor and take him safely to the gates of Antioch. Darien wanted no more senseless killing Rashid knows Ishan is not inside his body. He will let him live and not be tortured, if he tells the sultan's interrogators that the fault for the loss of life was Khalid's. Rashid wants his other brother punished and maybe killed. Ishan/Wylan needs to re-switch bodies but his connection is very thin. Can he work to improve the connection? Can Wylan/Ishan in the crusader camp relook at the sacred book to find a way to strengthen their connection?
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What great luck--Pure luck Mickey demanded the return of the god emperor and the gremlin--The Lord Quar refused and charged their killer weapon. It looks like Mickey and Dimitri are going to die. The bluff is going to fail, it appears. About that time Jesse and Isaiah and the gremlin were attacking the reactor core of the spire fighting off the guards. The gremlin got inside and just pulled wires and broke the core and weapon. The power failed. Lord Quar surrendered to Mickey and was told to return his crew within 10 minutes This is so improbable and crazy--but things fell into place without any solid reason. Mickey and his crew will be reunited. They should flee and need to find a place for Jesse. He is not getting his bounty this time, I hope,
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Do not forget how scary and troubling the actual Grimm fairy tales are.
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I think from Wylan/Ishan report he knows the doctor and maybe some tasty gossip. When the doctor is brought to the tent Wylan/Ishan will introduce himself as a person who can talk to Prince Ishan mentally and he has been told some disturbing info about the doctor. He thinks the doctor would not want what he has been told later repeated to the Turks with him. Ishan/Wylan can blackmail the doctor, I bet.
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Shiloh is bothered being told Noah and he will break up more than once and still get togehter in the end. He did not like knowing they would break up just once. He is saddened. Noah and he will need to talk things through and keep openly talking.
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The Gremlin should not give up. He will take the camcorder with him to catch then have sex another time when they are not as careful.
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The people are getting adjusted to the remote lakeside location. Changes were made to improving their lifestyle needs.Brant and Sky are fitting in, working out and taking long walks enjoying each others' company. They are staying faithful to being celibate when not filming, Can they maintain this separation when they start fucking or as it was said using "strong" method acting?
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A World Without Karsa
akascrubber commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in A World Without Karsa
What an elaborate painful plan. Karsa's lover and moter were killed and he was tormented. He needed a powerful defense. Karsa as Warden devised a plan to deceive an unsuspecting human and use him to lead attacking humans into a deadly trap and end the human invasion of elf lands. Karsa's plan worked. John Longsword was deceived and returned to his human forces to confuse and lead the humans and hated priest astray. The humans were destroyed. The priest who killed his mother was killed. There would be no more desire to invade elf lands. Sacred burial places were made to Karsa's mother and his lover. Jiohn was mentally enfeebled and distraught. Finally, the full concept of what Kars was doing now became evident, He got the justice he wanted after his loved ones died, He has successfully protected the elf lands. Well done! -
Thev arbiter was given the antidote and was much improved, She realized she had been decived. She is going to be part of a plan to take down theHerald tomorrow night. The saw proof on hid name change. He has reasons to hate the enemy and his home country.
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Stag, Part Two of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Stag, Part Two of Three
Forced into it both guys while new to male oral sex grew to love it. They needed to show affirmation and to spill their seed. Kissing really excited them Things are heating up. Steve is sucking Carl deep showing no gag reflex. Carl is going to stick two wet fingers in Steve's ass. Steve likes it when his girl friend does it. So. will fucking be required next? Steve's ass is being prepared to be fucked. -
*”You are not keeping a Colonial Navy Battlecruiser.”* “I’m already renaming it Vega Vixen V in my head.” Mickey is going to talk to them, If Dimitri comes along, his white outfit might scare the bad guys and disorient them Will Jesse's efforts to save Isaiah complicate matters and mess both the efforts of Mickey and Jesse? Or, might they both link up and return to Mickey's new ship and flee the Father?
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Ishan spoke about matters Wylan should not know. But now Darien will lead a party to get food and a physician. I hope they find the healer and bring him back. Ishah/Wylan might be needed to get the healer to treat Lloyd. This intervention will make others question who this Wylan really is, The mind switch must really happen soon. But so far, Ishan/Wylan has been very helpful.
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Bruce made an apt point to Johnny “Sometimes people spend so long chasing something, they don’t realize they were meant to find something else entirely.” Jonny is not sure about his future anymore and Bruce is destabilzing him. His touches shakes Jonny up. I want to see what happens to Johnny and what role, if any, that Bruces plays in Johnny's new life.
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Stag, Part One of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Stag, Part One of Three
Steve and Carl angered a god who was known to Steve who has a Greek background. They had taken part in hunt to kill a very large magnificent stag. A shot was fired at the stag. The ground erupted and many beings pummeled them to the ground and a tall being who had to be a god appeared ready to see them dead. She told them she wanted blood. Their clothes were removed and a large satyr tattoo was evident on Carl. The action stopped and Pan, a satyr, appeared. After a back and forth, Carl agreed to let Pan represent him in the argument with the goddess. Both the goddess and Pan meet to decide. The chapter ends as Pan is going to tell Carl and Steve what will be their fate. I cannot wait for the next chapter. What a very interesting beginning. -
'[The whole theme of how I’d treated him since Thanksgiving was “zero effort.” So, Travis decided to care and gave Will much better presents and a welcoming mood of goodwill and lots of hotsex arose until.....The temperature dropped. Travis on the way to the plane landing in Boston mentioned he was jealous of Austin and this unwound their arguments about unequal treatment of male friends--Kendo vs Austin. They separated at the landing no longer in good moods which is not giving hope for their recent plans to work on being closer. They are on a rocky path.
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Yes, what is Rashid doing? Was he injured? We see Khalid is acting like a leader and devising a task for Wylan/Ishan. Rashid might be even more looking for opportunities to have Ishan killed in the earthquake turmoil Wylan/Ishan has to be more worried about Rashid.
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The Princeps’s Inner Sanctum
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Princeps’s Inner Sanctum
Will someone go after Lawrence and try to win him away sexually or emotionally from Bastien in order to destroy him or show he is not trustworthy to Bastien? Now if this is like an Agatha Christie mystery should not we experience strategically placed, misleading red herrings to hide the culprit, often finding the least likely person to be the killer? We will see.- 29 comments
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Sky is losing his perspective and resolve. Plus it is only yjr first night at the lake Brant does not know what his words are doing to Sky...."Your name will always remind me of this moment.” What tender, loving words! My resolve to not let myself fall for him felt as if it was about to shatter. How could my heart resist such blatant romanticism? Such sweetness? Oh, God, he turns me on so much!" How can Sky hold up his feelings after two months of great sex? Will they have a chance to disagree?
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Her is the essential plan "Yes, but that storm has to be in court. We want to avoid a riot," said Tysalin. "We must defeat him legally through the Arbiter of Law, not a violent mob, or our people will not know peace. Ayrin is going to insure guards not supporting the Herald will be by him when he faces the court.
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I love Dimitri. He did not know he could not do things, so he did things.--like shoot the cultists and help them escape. A 9 year old mastermind saved the day and they fled the Father. Boy, were they lucky and the two are a great team. Isaiah is on a strange ship that is hollow. The leader has stolen the ship and the crew is also strange. He is assumed to be like the old god emperor. I hope he can work his way to Mickey's ship when he appears. Dimitri is dressed as a cultist and a god emperor clone so he can be a distraction
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The two and their key adults survived the earthquakes, All around them seems broken and is disorienting. Ishan as Wylan gave an inspiring message to the crusaders. He was the right person at that time to turn things around. Darien is there to help the three reunite when they can The one who is more at risk is Wylan as Ishan. He brother, Khalid, knows something is off and his younger brother is not himself. He tells his Ishan to rest and to try later to find his connection to the blind boy. I hope the Wylan can find his Ishan and re-switch minds. Khalid will kill him , if he thinks his brother is not near him. It would solve his problem twice over. He would get rid of two adversaries right now.
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The Princeps’s Inner Sanctum
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Princeps’s Inner Sanctum
Lawrence should take Bastien's comment to heart as he searches for the killer. "Bastien didn’t wait for his answer. “This place isn’t kind,” he added, his smile fading just as the color fled from his cheeks."
