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Will's plan is working. Biden has withdrawn. Harris will not run. He is the candidate now to take ion The stage is set for his big speech at the Atlanta State Farm Arena Mitchel advises him to think he is addressing a congregation and present himself as the sovereign who can make thing happen Will does not like the sovereign term but will now think about with his new situation He walks out to the crowd that is energized and vocal. The ysupport him He speaks without notes and wins the crowd over. He is the sovereign now that will help them “My name,” he said, and the arena, as one, hushed, “i=s William Carter.” A beat of perfect silence. “And I am here to tell you that the long American winter… is over.” He electrizes the crowd Trump watches him on TV and is shocked at how good Carter is. He begins to get concerned This is going to be a fascinating race as the campaigns move ahead.
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What a wonderful first story from this author who is " launching a story not just of falling in love, but of a connection tested by time." A poor waiter, Hudson, provides service to a handsome, known to be hard to handle A list actor , Liam, and they ultimately connect. What happens later is the stuff of dreams, nightmares, awesome sex, broken lives, fighting a corrupt system and seeking to be a revolutionary. Will they grow and stay together or fall apart and be broken? The writing is excellent and engages your mind. You not see any easy answers. You will despise the evil system that is revealed. You will want changes to be made. Look to find out what Pluto and Arizona mean. You will hope and pray Hudson and Liam remain a loving couple. Reading this could have a great impact on you. Please stay the course.
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Yes, drsawzall you raised a very important point The Herald was a key figure in the last chapter praising Fenn. Why is he not mentioned now? The Herald does not show up in this chapter on the planning and attack. Like that Sherlock story plot--He is the dog that did not bark. With victory assured will he show up to lead the celebration bast in the glory ? President John Kennedy said--“Victory has a thousand fathers, but defeat is an orphan."
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Combat never seems to go as expected. Ain took Fenn and several other magic holders to one side to outflank the main attack with the goal of finding the generals in the rear area and killing them. They were discovered and had to fight through. At one point, Yarima was helping the attack and deflected Fenn by sending him of the save Ain. Instead he found Petre and saved him from a burning building, Fenn moved quickly to find Ain. He found him and they sought out and killed the generals. But, then they had to stop the battle now. Ain sent his burning light out and terrified the soldiers. Fenn helped killing more using his shadow powers. Once again Ain began another high-power light attack on the enemy forces and now they heard the enemy begin the retreat in fear. They won. Let us hope they make it back to their side. Yarima still out there,
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"Will It Always Be Like This?"
akascrubber commented on Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro's story chapter in "Will It Always Be Like This?"
Liam won another Oscar and spoke honestly to the audience, He received a standing ovation, "Hudson's gaze flicked to the Oscar, then back to Liam's face. His expression softened into something fierce and proud. "You finally won something on your own," Hudson said quietly." They knew they were a solid couple, 'Hudson smiled. They could both feel it, how their relationship had shifted over the years into something whole. Not perfect. Not untouched. But balanced. Built. Centered. Hudson wasn't an accessory hidden behind curtains anymore. He was the axis Liam revolved around." Liam's birthday party was a real surprise. It was full of child actors and their parents. The expressed their satisfaction at what Liam had done and the careful, honest services his agency had provided. He had time to talk with his lawyers who told him Marina was finished, She had tried to re-start her firm and crashed and burned. She is finished. Good. On the way home. Hudson has the car stopped and leads Liam to a restaurant he bought, It was the one where they first met. He took Liam to the same private both and made him French fries to ea. He selected the same sing i=on the juke box, It was a very romantic experience. "Hudson smiled back and gently let his head fall on Liam's chest. "I love you, Pluto." "I love you, Arizona." -
Will surprised The Democrats who offered him the Democrat nomination. He said no. They were told....“He forged four parties into a unity government in Canada on sheer force of will alone. Experience of that caliber, in this kind of race, speaks to a maturity that’s absent right now in the divisive populist politics of today.” Will walked back to the window. "So, that’s the offer. You don't endorse me officially—that would hurt me. But you stop the attacks. You call off the dogs. You let the machine idle. And when I win, we build a government that actually functions." This is very bold. I am betting after reflecting Biden will see his only choice is to agree with Will's plan. If Biden decides now to release evidence of Trump ordering the death of Andrew Carter from the Whie House , Trump gets knocked back and Will gets a major boost.
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The training for the Rangers to sabotage Newfoundland military targets seems unnecessary and maybe was a cover for something else like assassination. Missiles from an American Aegis cruiser could destroy the military capability of the island in a few minutes without any US loss of life. The US would have photo intel to find and target all key sites. This missile attack would only happen with orders from the National Command Authority after a decision to expand the combat to threaten NATO allies. Decapitation or killing off the head of the enemy is common military option when officially authorized. Killing off family members is not. Killing Admiral Carter would be logical. Carter has a predictable movement pattern that a sniper will use. If approved by the President, instead a drone could be used guided from a US Navy ship to blow him up. The Ranger leader could only assume if he was sent with orders and fully trained on a wider killing mission , it was authorized. He might also expect that his team might not make to their boats after being captured or killed. As mentioned earlier, this whole Ranger mission is one huge risky war crime . It is not properly authorized. It intends to kill civilians. The Rangers are not wearing US gear. They can be shot as spies.
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Two gut wrenching moments---Peter taking care of a scared, hurt Jason and Gary ‘Brick’ MacReady announcing to Andrew that he was watching Jason who will face his real crisis after the court acts. Brick reeks of arrogance and assumed malignant power. You laid out Peter's decency and innate nature to care for others who are hurt. Four years of helping a pained Will taught him what to do. He kept his good nature and positive outlook and has not turned cynical. Jason will be better off. The only helpful result of the warning from Brick is that it was announced as planned. Andrew and others are not going to be surprised. I expect Andrew will talk with others to get advice and help. He needs to understand the extent and nature of the enemy he is facing.
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The Rangers are on an illegal mission. It was not authorized from the top. It cannot be shown to be officially sanctioned and they would be denied as authorized . if they were captured. Biden, if notified, would be enraged. Will is going to be enraged, also. Little mistakes can become larger problems. So far the young boy's report to his mother and then to an unconcerned French officer seems to not raise any concerns. There will be lots of time for the meeting incident and American accent story to be retold to others in the village who might want to also express worry to officials. The French report might be read by someone who sees a problem and passes the concern on to higher authorities. The right people will be looking for something unusual. Let us see if the Ohio accent mistake becomes critical. If the multinational command structure finds out about an American force in that general location, it would not be hard to figure out it was sent to kill Admiral Carter, but not dream it was going to kill Peter and Ned. Adding the two family members as targets makes this a war crime. Will Admiral Carter be notified in time to change his routine as a military force is sent to search for the US forces?
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Wow--Leo and Caleb saw the raven that told them Silas was nearby. He will act on his own time. Leo read the message Silas left for him and Leo snuck away to meet him hoping to kill Silas when he was in human form Leo met Silas and found out he was damaged, worn out goods. Leo wanted innocent, young Jamie and left magically to take over Jamie. Leo cannot return in time. Silas convinced Caleb to flee to find and save Leo. Silas made Sarah go into a dream state. No one was left to stop him from lying to Jamie. Silas showed up and took over Jamie's mind and took him to another place to have sex. Silas is too powerful to be stopped.
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Biden kept the evidence of Trump ordering Andrew killed back from the upcoming release on Andrew's record. What could make him release the assassination data on Trump? Is Biden waiting on what he learns from his upcoming talk with Lisa or maybe a future call to Will? Does he want him to run as a Democrat? What does Biden want? If Biden can get comfortable with Will, then Biden might release the killing order to crush Trump who he truly hates and thinks will be unfit to be President.
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Ain overreacted to the Herald's efforts to complement Fenn and be so supportive, When the Herald kissed Fenn's cheek Ain lost his cool in front of a crowd. " Ain sighed. He'd really made a mess of things. And he couldn't help but think Varilik had done it on purpose, too—set him up to get angry and possessive in front of a crowd. Blighted misborn." I bet the Herald knew what he was doing. He wanted to anger Ain and have him act poorly in front of a crowd to start the process of him losing popularity He may want to drive a wedge between Ain and Fenn. He cannot control Ain. The Herald might think he can control Fenn. Ain needs to pay attention to the upcoming battle plan and see how the story is written about their expected successes. Will Ain be put in more risky situations that have the potential to really hurt and impair/kill him? Will Ain start first and Fenn follow-on later? After the battle, will the Herald give the main credit for the victory to Fenn and not show it was a team effort using both their skills ? He could continue his plan to anger Ain and split the couple apart. Ain needs to keep his temper.
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They lost the sandcastle building contest but they were not disappointed. Leo and Noah got together afterward. Leo looked Noah over and said he thought they were on the same page. Leo leaned over and kissed Noah. The world just changed for them. Now what will they say! Will they feel pleased? Will they be scared?
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So, any bad guys better watch out and not underestimate Yani and Peter.
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BTW--Will we see Peter learn and use his legendary Tiger Claw move in this book?
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I hope Peter can use his knowledge well. I suspect the killers coming are deadly I did look up Tiger Claw The tiger claw is a fundamental Kung Fu technique (often Dan Fu Jaw or Fu Jow Pai) characterized by an open hand with fingers slightly curled to mimic a tiger's paw, targeting soft tissues like the eyes, throat, and groin to rip, tear, or strike. It relies on a strong, conditioned palm for impact and hooked fingers for grabbing, often used for close-quarters self-defense.
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We naturally turn to studying what Will and Andrew are going to do in the face of political and military issues. But you have told us to look elsewhere for solutions and victories and so I will pay attention to your words. "I do like that this is Peter, Tommy and Yani's book, our softer characters demonstrating that they can be strong and heroes too"
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The mustang now united them and is developing relationships. "They were no longer just three lost boys drowning in a too-big house. They were a crew. They had a monster to build." You did not leave things simple. An unholy terror of two evil, hateful people is watching them with the intention of getting revenge on them at the right time.
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I am hoping Yani will get news of a leaked intercept warning of an assassination plot against Andrew and his family. He might have a backdoor way to warn Andrew Or, maybe any strangers on the island will stand out and be watched to see what they do. If they seem dangerous, they will be jailed or killed.
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Biden got the unredacted report on Andrew Carter. He was impressed by his heroism and upset that Trump ordered his death. He was given a USB drive that contains Trump's verbal order to have Andrew killed. He could release it and give Will a great public boost and hurt Trump. Biden decided for now to not release the execution info to the public. He did ask that the good material on Andrew--not killing Abernathy---be released and Andrew's reputation will soar. Biden is calling Lisa in Will's campaign. Biden thinks he cannot win and his donors are backing off. He knows Harris will fail. So what does he want to cover with Lisa? Trump is greatly worked up and is thinking about his death. He just survived the bullets in Pennsylvania. Trump is now fixed on Andrew Carter killing him. He knows he killed Silas Abernathy in the CIA HQ. He thinks Andrew will come after him . Miller says he can take care of him by blockading Newfoundland. It will be starved to death. Trump likes his plan and expects to hear he succeeded . Miller returned to this office and faced a hard verbal attack from a retired US General and top adviser to Trump. The general was upset because he had heard about the two plans to cut off Newfoundland. Yani's efforts to publicize the plans destroyed them and caused a firestorm. He was asked how can a campaign order a US military action? This approach is now off the table. Miller decided to take a new option. He messaged an asset he controlled and told it to kill the Carter's on Newfoundland. I hope Andrew has good security. I can see a mercenary team arrive and take steps to kill Andrew and Ned.
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Wow--Noah is in the hospital IV connected and getting good medical care. Grandma spoke to Noah. The crash had to be an inside job with two dump trucks involved forcing the attacks., Noah's security guards were pushed off the road by a dump truck into a tree and died. They are looking at who inside her organization is working with her enemies and likely the Senator. Shiloh is missing. Noah is worried. Little B left to try to help Shiloh. He found two older family members whom he will join. We learned... so two ghosts and one little boy are going after Shiloh's captures." Little B wants blood.
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The Herald wants Fenn ( and Ain)to go with him over a week to the border where an attack is expected soon. He thinsk having Fenn with him can boost his reputation even more. People will know Fenn helped repel the enemy attack, Fenn and Ain finally got into having sex but in the way Fenn expected. Ain likes to bottom, be told what to do and likes being tied up. So they slowly moved ahead until the end when Fenn had 4 fingers in Ain's ass and then drove his cock deep into Ain's body. They had a fully rousing sex session. Both were pleased and enthusiastic. They should be a great couple after this event.
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Life is good. The three hit it off. They told each other about their sex interests. They told Jody that their group of guys who like sex with guys is approximately 20 and Jody will be introduced to them. Jody told them about his experiences with friends and his baseball team, they were blown asway by his stamina and number of sex activities. They visited several monuments and museums and had a fun meal. Jody picked up two fleet enemas. They returned to their hotel room and had a energetic, rigorous session of hot anal and oral sex. Jody was spit roasted. All three loved using his ass and mouth. Jody has been welcomed and valued. He is going to have lots more sex from now on at his current assignment.
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This story is very intriguing. It is fascinating to see how people we have known well in their later years have matured and grown from their past. They are going to make defining choices. You focus in your intro on Andrew...."the gentle law student must become the ruthless strategist his father once was, forging a dangerous alliance to dismantle an empire of hate." It will be exciting to follow Andrew.
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Yani stopped the infrastructure/cable cutting plots. Can he do something to modify or erase records showing Andrew as a killer in CIA headquarters?
