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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Simon asked the right questions. Chloe was being too restrained "He's enchanting the food supply," Simon said patiently, as if explaining to a child. "That's not accusation. That's observation. The question is how, and why, and what we do about it."
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    So Wylan was given a book to understand magic. I first thought it was a holy book of Islam. He has started to understand the book. I think Darien is misguided. Lord Haskal should set him straight. He will want Wylan to harness magic for the crusaders. The heat they are facing is beyond exhausting and over the top painful. Then , at night the desert is terribly cold. They are being worn out.
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    Absolute power corrupts absolutely--The Herald now has drugged and controls the council and will demand all citizens comply or be considered rebels. He will demand the rebels be rounded up or killed before the country marches on its natural enemy. Mhalyn is aghast at what the Herald has sone and now sees him as a manipulative psychopath. She finds Petre and tells him what has happened, He could counter the drug but needs a sample to prepare an antidote. Mhalyn will try to get a sample and it is dangerous. She will take a tonic from Petre to induce sleep in the Herald and Fenn and find the drug controlling others. It seems to be the only hope to stop the Herald. Will her efforts work or will she be found out and killed?
  4. akascrubber

    Halloween

    Som the bets are on that will is going to get several modelling contracts. He is now pegged to be the "It" boy We will see Jeremy dressed him as a barely costumed gladiator and Will won the best dressed outfitted person and you could see his bare ass if you looked closely. He only wore a jock strap underneath. Will avoided having sex with anyone at the party. I admire his restraint. But now he is going back to be fucked by Travis and they both will be very happy. Will paparazzi show up at Harvard to take pics of Will?
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 22

    Soon it will clear that the enemy Wynthorpe will face is Prince Louis. King John is near death and not able to attack. Prince Louis might want to find out if a major force arises from John's army. Wynthorpe's destruction might be a second priority at this time. The men of the keep and marshes will be ready.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    Is Charlie the father of Cecil, the coming dark lord--the new Ton Riddle? Who is the mother of Cecil? You have given a new book theme and set the stage for the conflict in this book--an evil poisonous butcher, Taine now beginning to see he is going to live forever and Tyler staring to realize all is not well between him and Taine. The evil plant should shock them.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    I expect the Saracen will return to meet Wylan again. The Crusade leaders will get into trouble when they do not listen to Wylan,
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Only the Bulwark knew what was happening, but Fenn was too far gone and enthralled by the Herald who now will control the leadership Things are not looking good. Only the Herald can think clearly. The others are unable to think fast or clearly or able to provide sound advice in a dangerous situation. They will need to be drugged regularly.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    I noticed the Hogwarts reference. I am glad this Umbridge was not related to the pink toad Deloris who tormented her charge Harry Potter with a painful blood quill. Simon would have been shocked and traumatized if he had to use a blood quill--even if it could be color coded red.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Yes, I agree that this act of real trust should bring them closer together. Sam is a kind hearted soul who might help his knight feel better. Things between them can improve based on real knowledge and not fear. I expect there are other parts of his knight's body that Sam could grow to admire and treasure. I hope they can be open to exploration. We will see....
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Oh boy--Simon went through his version of hell and contained a werewolf which has not yet returned to his other state The irony and humor of Simon being made prefect was awesome No one yet knows Edgar was behind the transformation--He wants proof of what has happened--What will he do next? Will he try to get others to trandsform?
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    Hooray--Darien beat the overconfident bastard count. Longswords on foot in the mud went to Darien's advantage and past ways of fighting. He lured the count into a trap and hit him when the count was overextended. The count fell and was pounded and pounded and yielded. Darien won all of the count's holdings from his horses, wagon, gear, food, tent, etc. The King was pleased he bet on Darien and made a killing. He was proud of Darien and Wylan. He will back them and Wylan heritage from now on Victory was sweet.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    So Ain has been captured and is in a coma for now. When he wakes up Katya will experiment in him. It will be painful and he should scream. Katya loves torturing her victims and hopes to take away his power and stop his ability to hurt Orinovo soldiers Yarima does not like torture and wants to take Ain away, Neven will not help her stop Katya. Yarima hopes Neven will intercede once he hears Ain scream-- They need a plan and do not have one yet,
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Tyler thought they were going to be married. Their impending break up will shock and distort them both.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 46

    Book 2 ends with Mhalyn realizing how corrupt and manipulative the Herald is. He was drugged Fenn who has no independent ideas and is fully subservient to the Herald. She has found Petre and will help the rebels. He wants to rescue Ain. Will this rescue happen soon? I am looking forward to reading the next book.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    I did not see this happening. Tyler who sacrificed all for Taine will be hurt and become the odd man out of the trio. He is going to be crushed when decisions finally have to be made. Taine realized he did not love Tyler. This is so painful and it is being drawn out. Taine and Charlie will be paired up and are fighting their attraction until they cannot. Chloe knows.
  17. akascrubber

    Prologue

    Edgar is hosting a surprise carnivorous plant that no one suspects will consume people. It is its nature to eat to survive. No one will expect a butcher to enable his customers to be feed stock for a plant on display--a kind of venus flytrap! How will our demon hunters find out about the plant? Will they miss someone?
  18. akascrubber

    The Truth

    This is so confusing Noah is back after talking with his dad and Silas. His mother has been stopped from hurting him. Can Noah straighten things out between multiple realities? Noah knows he has to make some apologies. He has reason to not be angry any more Will Shiloh believe him ? He needs to give him the bracelet Silas gave him and have an honest talk with him
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    Wylan is going to learn how to better battle his enemies and consider misdirection and spreading rumors secretly when he can. Lord Haskal should give him more advice. He needs this kind of high level advice before taking action. I do not expect an angry Count Guy to fight fairly and just fight one on one. Darien might be able to get him even more upset so the Count makes mistakes and thinks he can easily kill a low level bodyguard. I hope Darien will not hold back and kill the count when he can. If the Count lives, he will return to kill him again. The Count's men might arrive early to kill Julian and maybe Wylan. Julian is going to be guarded by Lord Haskal's men Maybe Wylan will be protected from an early surprise attack by Val and a fierce Bran. I am worried.....
  20. Six months later the crew is back as a Demon Hunting Squad taking on a coven of witches who are planning a love eternal project that that will transform all of their town,.You can expect that simple plans assume by the guard and witches fall apart. Learn about possession by 6000 year old beings and a surprising, powerful and all consuming love goddess who attempts to control the area that will rock your socks off. The original cast will be shocked and stressed and pushed about by conflicting feelings about each other and love. The new demons and goddess keep you off balance. Who will survive? How will the forces of darkness be defeated? Who become the key heroes? You will develop favorites and want to cheer them on Enjoy fully!
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 21

    Prince Louis tries mightily but is unable to capture Dover Castle which resists his many efforts. Louis grows very mad at this resistance and still remembers Wynthorpe. He will attack that keep next after taking Dover Castle. King John is in the run becoming sicker and sicker, He looks terrible as September begins. Death may not be far away. If he dies, it is not certain what will happen next. Who might succeed King John? Will Prince louis become more powerful? Kaylen knows Louis has not yet captured Dover Castle and expects his keep to be a victorious Louis' next target. Kaylen begins the training of young men to be archers. Bows and a great number of arrows are stockpiled. These archers will be needed if Prince Louis attacks. French knights in future wars will convincingly learn how effective English bowmen can be at Agincourt and Crecy.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 45

    Oh My--this is next to the end of this story. War seemed near and Ain is lost. The Herald brewed a powerful tea that took over Fenn's mind and caused him to forget his support of Ain and desire to go after him and feel comforted by the Herald "You are mine forever, Fenn," Daryan said sweetly, kissing the top of his head, making Fennrin's previous thoughts disappear. He couldn't really focus on thoughts in general. He just felt nice and relaxed next to Daryan, bothered by nothing. "And you are mine?" Fennrin smiled, nuzzling Daryan who hummed in agreement." The Herald told him to forget Ain. He was already likely dead Fenn will wake up and follow the directions he is given by the Herald unaware he was manipulated. I am looking forward to finding out how the next story transpires
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    I put my vote in for Tyler to take charge, He could introduce Taine and Charlie into the practice of menage a trois. The three could be a happy, satisfied three- way sexual friendship.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 21

    I hope you will be able to finish this excellent story after you have completed your current projects.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    In the US this absurdity would have been a story in Hogan's Heroes which portrayed bumbling Nazi's in a POW camp run really by Allied prisoners. Wylan is now assumed to be a Lord because of errors and Darien is his knight. The King has spoken so it is true Paris Hilton was mentioned as a reference for Wylan as a person who was famous for being famous. Do not forget her huge push into prominence was the distribution of a vid of her giving a skilled and passionate blow job to a guy. Oh, and she was seen going about and bending over without wearing any underwear. She was clean shaven, BTW. Will Wylan create any scandalous sexual stories?
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