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    Chapter 28

    They found Ain and began to take him out. The guards attacked them. Nev was hit in his shoulder with an arrow. Still he labored forth carrying Ain to freedom. Eventually they found Fenn who was taking them to their hidden shelter, Fenn hurt Ain when he touched him and was very worried, Yarima said they could work the problem out soon. Nev and Yarima are injured. Only Fenn is a full strength and able to forcefully defend them. They are still in danger.
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    Chapter 13

    Raithion and Azula met at the shore. Azula was angry and threatening. However, Rathion's plea to save his son was answered. Raithion and his medic/coroner were taken to a healer's area and Yulin was on the way to be treated for Silver Malice poisoning. We will find out how long the treatment takes At some point, the matter of renewed relations and answers to questions will come up. Will Azula be i open to listening to Raithion?
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    Chapter 5

    Facing disaster they went back to the abandoned ship and took it over. It was larger, cleaner and more powerful, Mickey wants to dump the bodies of the dead crew. They were killed by microwaves. They are going back to Port Talon to claim the ship. Hughie the AI was transferred to this different ship What can of worms did they open? Will they have a target on their backs?
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    Chapter 15

    I saw in a movie that cute young guys get adopted by an older male protector in prison. If Lee makes his guy mad, his teeth will be broken and taken out so he can give good blow job.
  5. What a scary, exciting tale focusing on Kier's sidekick Riley and the monster, Ben. Keir has run away with Lee, Ben was his project, Kier, back He is his architect and he wants him back. Ben finds Riley and is disoriented by the chaos he creates, He is going to use Riley as bait to get Kier back. "I am not 'sweet'," Ben snarled, leaning his weight against Riley. "I am his architect. I am the one who made him. And you... you are nothing. You are the dirt he scraped off his shoe." He takes Riley to his home. Riley is not sure he is going to live or not. This mystery expands and revises Ben's assumptions and eventually draws in a 4 main characters. You will be amazed how people grow and warp and have new wants. This will almost conclude with a life and death struggle. This does not appear to be set up for Happily Ever After ending. Do not put this down!
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    Chapter 15

    Thank you. Lee has fled and the police are after him. Kier just melded away in the ether. Ben was lucky and is saved and has begun resting with Riley as he caregiver. Ben want to explore sex with Riley when his body recovers "I see you," Ben confirmed. "And what I see is not a tool, or a variable, or a project. What I see is a person I am unwilling to lose. A person I am learning to... care for. In whatever way I am capable." "That's love, Ben."
  7. Noah and Leo are slowly trying to figure out everything from labels to sexual positions. The are still keeping their relationship secret which led to a smell fight going out with Fabian How soon will they forgive each other?
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    Chapter 4

    His mother wants a daughter to take over her business. I guess she will find a surrogate using his sperm Mickey's three children are Jeremy 3, Arlo 5, and Dimitri 9
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    Chapter 29

    Rebel forces are surrendering. Louis is sitting in his reinforced London cage. His last hope is a new fleet with men , money, supplies and siege. engines. The English feet is preparing to take the French fllet on. This victory could decide who finally will be king.
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    Chapter 27

    Staslav , her mother's greatest magical creation, stood in their way to save Ain. He had so many awful powers. Yarima sent Nev to gather Ain while she fought Staslav.He kept winning in his attacks and Yarima was injured, Unti the end, when Yarima concentrated her power to destabilize Staslav. Yarima was able to get close and killed him thrusting her dagger into her heart. Now, they had to win. The queen will know she was involved They still need to find Ain and take him back past more guards.
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    Chapter 4

    Mickey soon needs to start on that cup of semen for his mother. Is that right? Will he finally get Isaiah to help him? I hope he shoots lots so he can fill up the cup before it spoils.
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    Chapter 14

    You say you have not written the final chapter, so you have not decided the outcome yet. If Ben and Riley knew they were going to be targeted to be killed, then why did they not have any weapons? Did you set them up to lose or die? Do you want this to be hopeful or a tragedy? I push for hopeful along with other, but.... You have just enabled the four to get on the same page with no misconceptions, Will you kill off Ben and let Riley turn feral? Keir and Lee seem now to be irrelevant. You can end the whole story on a tragic note. The siren, though, offers a possible medical solution.
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    Chapter 14

    "He is not the bait, Kieran," Ben stated, delivering the final, ironclad truth. "He is the replacement. He is the evolution of my design. He survived you, and in doing so, he taught me how to open doors instead of building walls." Ben Shocked Keir. The Lee found them and used his crossbolt to shoot Ben in the shoulder who fell to the ground in great pain Keir and Lee ran away and found the Audi and drove away, Riley found Ben. He will not pull the bolt out. Riley is staying with Ben not knowing how to get help worrying that Ben is slowly fading. Maybe, help is on the way. The chapter ends as a siren is heard. Is it coming foe Ben or is it going elsewhere?
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    Chapter 8

    I find it amazing how methodical, repetitive and well prepared the practice for the movie scenes were. Sky had to teach Brant and the director about anal sex penetration and they welcomed his tutoring. I wonder if Brant to be very capable by the end of the movie. Of course, realism matters. Sky's father recovered eventually after seeing his son in a simulated gay sex act. Things are falling into place nicely.
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    Chapter 13

    Yeah--it is a primitive time versus today. Searching was cumbersome, Microsoft just put out its useful browser in 96. I was addicted searching the web and the first night I got online I stayed up past 3:00 AM Would Kier be smart enough to effectively hide his spying?
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    Chapter 13

    If there are cameras outside. Ben can check the feed tomorrow morning and will be aware they are being watched. I do not know if the cameras are good enough to catch faces clearly. At least, Ben is warned.
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    Chapter 11

    Sam was not careful. The men have him and they might want to play with him and his body. The armor and knife made him a matter of concern. Is his knight tacking him and will he arrive in time to save Sam. While a prisoner he may learn useful information about the ash and who makes it.
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    Chapter 13

    You know many of us want a happily ever after type ending. But, I can see you ending with an unhappy result blowing up all the main relationships with lots of unnecessary violence. Ben, Riley, Kier and Lee are flawed. They could lose the trust they have and get mean with some being really hurt and some running away
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    Chapter 26

    Training in the dark is going slow and bothersome. Neven is upset and Lashes out at Fenn. Yarima surprisingly comes to Fenn's defense They are not yet ready to save Ain.
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    Chapter 3

    Some progress==Mickey while drunk tried to kiss him 7 times and at least once touched his chin.
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    Chapter 3

    Mickey is going to have two members of his crew who are fleeing the Father. He will have a mark on his back. So, what's new!
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    Chapter 13

    Are Ben and Riley being lured to Leeds to be stuffed and hidden away? “And Northern Transit specializes in secure, unchecked cargo to the Scottish borders. If Kieran wanted to disappear...." or to disappear Ben and Riley....
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    Chapter 2

    Reading about Taine and Kyr fighting the evil bugs really is exciting--even if is a comicbook
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    Chapter 13

    Ben and Riley dismantled Montague before his father and mother. He was shouted out of the house by Ben's mother. They now knew the plan was a fraud. Montague fled fearing his creditors. Will he find a way to get back at Ben? Ben and Riley were in great moods. Ben got Riley his driver's license and bought him a small Jag. Riley said You love me." and meant it, At home they got in bed and got close. Ben asked to do more, He touched Riley and really kissed him. They were so outside or at least someone watching his house into each other, Meanwhile, Ben has missed Kier watching his house. He focused on Riley and not his neighborhood. He found an electronic record that suggests Kier is in Leeds. Riley and Ben will travel to Leeds tomorrow. Ben has not considered the record was a false one. Kier would assume Ben will track him and he will mislead Ben and send him away. Why?
  25. Noah was not the target, Uncle Matt Two husband and wife doctors were jealous of his promotion and wanted him ded. The bad male doctor was caught on camera messing with Uncle Matt's car. Both doctors were arrested but released on their own recognizance. They returned to the hospital to kidnap Noah. Security guards stopped them. Little B stayed with Noah and made sure the door would not open for the kidnappers. Noah is safe for now. But, he has to tell Shiloh and the bracelet he was wearing, More trouble ahead....
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