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If you are open to a suggestion--Maybe compose a small tale about a powerful mage called Kandric
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Ain did not like the attention he received for his action destroying the enemy attack-and sadly killing his friend-- He told the large crowd celebrating his victory that they now have a better reason to celebrate now--" This is a completely new chapter in Lys-Akkaria's history where a lightweaver and a shadowforger are working together in defense of their nation. And Orinovo won't stand a chance."-- Let us see the reactions from the Herald and the Bulwark Ain has made his military views known. Now he has to have an honest talk with Fenn.
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Caldur, the Prince, walking down the hall of his palace is surprised with painful attacks and falls down. Will , a young page saves the Prince as he fell. A wizard healer is called and he realizes what has happened, He is shocked to realize the two are wizards and have bonded There bond is requiring them to stay close. They can only separate with more training and time. The two are taken to the Prince's room and placed on his bed. Now the hard part Hostility may spring forth when the Prince brings a lower class page along to his meetings. The Prime Minister could object and cause problems. The King is gone for a month and he cannot backup the Prince Lots of open issues. I wish Will and Caldur Good Luck!
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Finn listened to Tarquin in the jail. He heard the options Tarquin gave him--long term prison time with Orel destroyed or being a kept mechanic working on historic cars at the Merrick mansion and residing there with Orel He would come back in the morning to hear his response. So. Tarquin has a way to free Finn from the charges? Hmmmm Here is the pregnant sentence which may suggest an out for Finn.... "I'll give you until morning. I'll be with Orel, explaining the options. I'm sure he'll want to discuss it with you. He's so... logical." Is our author implying that Orel will examine the charges and evidence and find a logical out. I cannot wait to hear what Orel says. Maybe, he could talk to Lydia and Ms Patel with his idea?
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So far, Jody is handling his sexual urges with fantasies and jacking off. He is not turning to online porn , subsituting fetishes for relief or visiting a gay glub that might risk disclosure. Young, in shape males with their bad, short haircuts near military bases are not hard to spot as being in the military, I would be most wary of the MP officer.
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Graves thinks he is charge and without a challenge to his rule in his little fiefdom By his deal with West, he has given surveillance over to the resistance. The capture of Enrico and Ned will be known and Graves will also blurt it out to Peter to have leverage over him for now I suspect Graves is insuring his own demise. West will want to free the prisoners and kill him. Also, Madam Xue will realize the plane was lost and might visit or at least try to contact West to find the passengers....
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Talk about a solution out of the blue! What power.. Time was reset. A new judge was given the case and it was dismissed with prejudice. “Time for the bad news,” Grandma said lightly. “Your mother, grandfather, stepfather, uncle, their lawyer, and the corrupt judge are meeting a… sticky fate today.” However, the Senator is still alive and able to cause trouble. Noah was aware of the time switch and now is looking forward to his upcoming date with Shiloh.
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OK--I hope to see how Orel can save Finn. It should be fascinating to see how he comes up with a solution.
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Ok--So you are counting on exceptional luck. There are lots of counter examples of passenger losses I understand for the sake of the narrative, they both had to live I do think your other improbable assumption is that the US at this time ,2021-22, is heavily invested in using drones in combat operations. The US and Nato learned the combat value of drones as war in Ukraine continued and not at the beginning. In 2025 and later the media is full of drone stories . You can read now about US Army drone units and drone types. If you want to be ahistorical and jump ahead in time , I will give you a pass again for the sake of your narrative
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Finn needs an intervention. The news of his arrest will spread, Garret and Kyle know and and understand the evidence was planted. They can contact Lydia who will get Ms Patel on the case right away. Let us hope Garret's firm has cameras which would be a standard security policy. Maybe, they can get the evidence to show the material was planted or that Finn did not leave his garage when the crimes were committed. Let us see.... Further, how will Tarquin get Finn off? If he has stolen items, he will be brought before a court and sent to prison. Can Tarquin stop the legal process?
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Sorry for the text mess-up. But, you left us with am improbable air crash survivor tale in the end Somehow Enrico and Ned end up in the clutches of Graves who thinks he won the lottery Graves thinks he now has leverage--I assume not over Will Carter. but over Peter He will keep the two with him long enough to get what he wants from Peter before sending them off to Ottawa I expect West will see to the demise of Graves and rescue Enrico and Ned
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What an interesting tale! Prince Justin, a very powerful mindmaster, attended to his court duty and found a young man, Ethan, innocent of the charge that he raped a noble youth he had been tutoring. In reading Ethan's mind he triggered a life connection inadvertently. They will be linked and must stay close until Ethan;s mind skill are fully trained. If they become too separated, they both will die, Justin realizes Ethan has to be his Prince Consort to keep them healthy. Justin brings Ethan to meet his father. After explaining what happened, the King agrees with what Justin has decided. Life is only going to get more complicated for these two.
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Jody is fitting in and has found several hot, handsome guys to feed his spank bank. He is on his way to finding friends and he is being very careful to not reveal his gay sexual nature
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Ain drunk and very sad remembering having killed his best friend unburdened his soul and romantic feelings to Fenn. The news distressed Fenn, not because he felt romantically towards Ain, but because Ain was drunk and could feel differently when he was sober. He needed Ain to tell him what he felt when sober, Ain did ask Fenn to stay with him in his bed just hugging, They need to talk in the morning and clear the air, hopefully.
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Fun, Fun, Fun was widely popular. This was the first song the boys sung at Escorial that night, The Beach Boys' 1964 hit "Fun, Fun, Fun" peaked at number 5 on the U.S. Billboard Hot 100 chart. Released in February 1964, the song reached this peak position in March, maintained by strong competition from Beatles singles at the top. It also reached #6 in Canada and #6 in Australia.
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Breaking Hearts Ain't What It Used To Be
akascrubber commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Breaking Hearts Ain't What It Used To Be
BTW, Hunter complains about how land the local food is. Cannot he find some ground peppers or hot sauce to take with him to add spice to his food? Since he makes this complaint often, why does not take care to bring things with him to flavor his food? Heck, when I served in the US Army and served in the field eating combat rations which I knew were bland, I took Tabasco sauce with me in my gear to add to my rations -
Just to be clear--according to Google "In slang and general usage, "coquet" (or the more common feminine "coquette") means someone who flirts playfully or tries to attract attention without serious romantic intent..." So Gabriel is flirting without a romantic intent--for now
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The Kind Worth Saving
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Kind Worth Saving
Some horrible evil being captured Jack and wanted him to forget the others. The fog seemed to be everywhere, Jack refused toobey and follow this witch Meanwhile, Theo and Vince walked and climbed through the fog to find Jack. Theo sometimes sensed Jack nearby. The witch was upset at Jack and dropped him, possibly to his death. But, Theo showed up and with great difficulty caught Jack falling into his arms Jack is now safe. Theo and Vince will soon be reunited with him, I expect The nasty witch must still be around. The three are not yet safe. -
Will Finn be able to navigate a real French restaurant? Orel asked him to be his guide. Or, can Garret or Kyle know what to do and how to use all the silverware and instruct their table? I hope the meal will not be a fiasco. Showing up wearing a pizza delivery outfit should make the staff cringe and begin the service on the wrong foot.
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I think Oliver need a real boyfriend. I hope he finds one soon.
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An early morning runner falls and is found and treated by a security guard driving his SUV. They find they have things in common and correct their misunderstandings. They begin to develop an attraction for each other. Read on the find out what these two do and if their attractions blossom into something more.
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Andy carries out his usual early morning run and again encounters a zoo security guard, Sean, driving a white marked SUV. The have assumptions about each other that turn out to be wrong. Andy falls and hurts his leg, Sean brings into his SUV for treatment, Sean is a handsome, powerful guy. Andy is a good looking, lithe runner. Each likes how the other looks. Sean is an EMT in training. They hit it off unexpectedly, One things leads to another and they get naked and have full on sex which they both enjoy. Andy carefully walks home, Sean, it turns out, follows him home. He is going to meet Andy tomorrow when he is free. They are beginning a beautiful relationship, I guess.
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Talking with Tabby and Alvin, Oliver found a new path and it was frightening "I can't stop him from falling," Oliver said, the realization settling over him like a coat. "No," Tabby agreed. "You can't. You can only choose not to be underneath him when he lands." Oliver nodded. He felt lighter. Terrified, yes. The storm was coming, and he knew it. But for the first time, he realized he didn't have to be the lightning rod." What actually will Oliver do and not do? I hope he saves some money. Tarquin likely will continue being arrogant and hurtful, not realizing he is causing his own downfall.
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Blind Willem has been the Dark Lord Septimus's prisoner and forecaster for years. He has just told Septimus that the man he seeks is coming to him. When the going gets tough, will Wiilem lie to Septimus to help take him down?
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Why in the blazes are they going to a fancy French restaurant which has to be pretentious and judgmental? They are setting themselves up to be very uncomfortable. They should be going to Steve's Steakhouse which must have vegetarian options.
