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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    Kaylen's title has been restored by the Baron and he was named his heir. Sir Kaylen is educating his squires in their new duties. He notes they should be careful to act properly and always do what is right. Eyes will be in them because of Sir Kaylen's new role. They will later accompany him on a tour of the lands to assess and learn. He believes the territory has not been well managed and needs improvement. He will give up his duty at the keep and expects a new leader will arrive in 3-4 weeks.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    The characters are getting better defined and beginning to blend and show how they will stand out. They have histories that give them a basis to relate, Peter and Bobby are opposite, but loving brothers. Slowly recovering. injured Jason is not as angry and finding he likes admiring Peter's half-naked body. Andrew has come alive after losing Will. He has a glorious Mustang to restore and drive.
  3. akascrubber

    Prologue

    Three hurting broken souls who are lost and living now in the same place, I am looking forward to seeing how they blend together and hopefully help each other and somehow grow.
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 28

    Two people are really making an impact. Ned confessed to Peter he felt dirty after Graves sexually assaulted him Peter comforted hm and told him about his rebelling when Will took him in. He was a terror and Will would not give up on him. Peter sad Ned was a Carter, and the family takes care of its own. Yani showed his technical skill. He found out about an attack planned on Newfoundland, He took steps on line to disrupt the plan and to alert people who would not like it;---CIA IG's, a certain staff officer in other command and the Washington Post, Yani acted also as a good teacher helping Tommy understand what he is doing, Tommy is fascinated.
  5. akascrubber

    Aftershock

    Driving back from relaxing at a park, Noah's care was hit from the back and driven into a barrier. The airbags exploded Noah later was pulled from the car. No fire had started luckily. But, Shiloh was missing and Noah was distraught. Who hit the car and who took Shiloh? Why had the security detailed failed to protect them and was the detail not close behind them?
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Fenn continues to have a low self-concept. He was very concerned about visiting Ain's five parents. When he met them, he found three of the five supported his relationship were very encouraging. The other two seemed cool and not openly positive. Ain continued his support and kept kissing his cheek, Snowflake, his cat, was liked by Ain's parents. Ain's lieutenant told Fenn he saw that he made Ain very happy and he did want to find out Fenn ever hurt him. Wow! Let us see how the rest of the visit goes....
  7. The beginning of the end--"The court further finds, based on the evidence presented, that Ms. Velutto's role created a conflict of interest that undermined her claimed fiduciary posture." She was cut off from Liam and would be not touched by anyone in Hollywood Hudson and Liam finally got their own place. They talked about what they were thinking about them as a couple. They support and love each other deeply Hudson's said. "But you do take away the worst part." Liam swallowed. "What's the worst part?" Hudson's answer came quietly. "Feeling alone in it." They are holding up and growing, Hudson suggested to Gabriel that changes were needed in their restaurant to survive. They are turning away too many people and they will get upset. Gabe listened and asked Hudson to give him a plan. Hudson is so happy and asked for a raise. Liam went ahead on acting in the movie "What Remains." He begins to expand his interests in more than acting. He is good--really good at what he does He eventually thinks about directing and producing. It turns out this movie has won several award s , including his second Oscar. The final segment returns to the interview set. This time seems more relaxed, and the interviewer is clearly on Liam's side finding good quotes to add. Teo arrives during a break. He is now Liam's manager and they delightfully tease each other to the set's enjoyment. Liam tells Teo he is suspicious about a surprise being planned. Teo denies anything is planned. However, Liam says it is his 30th birthday and he expects a surprise party. Teo says he has done nothing . Liam looks at someone behind the camera on the phone--Hudson-- and remains convinced he is being given a party. Life has turned out very good for Liam, Hudson and Mateo. They faced great hardships but have not given up and have grown into better roles and responsibilities. Liam and Hudson are great, happy lovers. A town that eats people up did not drag them down
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    Chapter 27

    Andrew has a new critical mission for his campaign and Andrew. The Pentagon is lying to Biden and Trump through the PresidentialnDaily Briefing. It claims the US ship suffered catastrophic engine failure after an unprovoked attack by the Halifax. No mention was that the US ship rammed the Canadian ship or fired first or that the Halifax took on 85 Us sailors from a sinking ship that caught fire. When the media gets this , the public will be very upset. The Pentagon can justify actions to restrict access for Newfoundland. Yani thought Will had to find the right time and place to preset the counter evidence he brought. I hope Will also talks to Caleb for advice The CIA gave will the document that sowed the Pentagon is lying. Will asked Yani ..... "Why would Keene give me this? If they’re lying?" "Because Keene knows the difference," Yani said. "She knows the Pentagon is lying to the President. She can’t bypass the Joint Chiefs, but she can leak the discrepancy to you. She’s betting on you, Will. She thinks you’re the only one chaotic enough to stop this train wreck." Will must carefully consider what to do to stop the " train wreck." He now knows the Pentagon's charges are false. This military engagement could cause a firestorm. The media cycle is very fast He needs to act in order to save his campaign and show Andrew acted responsibly and did not attack first. The presence of 85 Us sailors aided in a humanitarian effort should be a sign of good faith
  9. Three brothers are united and stressed by family ties, The leader, Tarquin, is dominant and arrogant. The middle brother ,Oliver, keeps things together and the youngest one, Orel, appears to be the reclusive, shy youth who hides a terrible secret. Finn returns to town and rekindles his past connection with Orel and the two helps change lives in good ways. You will read about pain and shame and see people struggle and join with others to take helpful actions. Things are not going to be the same in Merrickville. Enjoy the ride and learn about fascinating good and bad people,
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 23

    The take down was painful, public and shocking. Tarquin was taken away quietly by Sgt McCormick to a stunned audience. Tarquin later left after being evicted and was not seen. He was severed from the estate funds. However, a civil lawsuit continued contesting the financial charges against him. I assume he had other money hidden away to support his need The world turned away from noticing Tarquin and his needs. His shadow was gone. These main characters are ready to move on. Orel and Finn became a happily married couple who owned a Delorean. Grady Manor will be put to better uses. Their network friends were now living positive, encouraging lives. Oliver is taking the Ottawa job. Lydia is managing Orel's money and moved his free cash to "ethical" high tech firms I see there will be a follow-on story that will cover issues created from this story. Good. Many of these people are very likable with interesting lives. There is at least one very bad guy around to stir up a hornet's nest Thank you.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 27

    This was definitely a Yani chapter I was surprised he landed at Atlanta and left Newfoundland. He was met by a CIA official he knew who gave him an offer to a new job when he leaves Will or Andrew and a secure tablet for Will that will have the Presidential Daily Brief on it. Allegedly Biden wanted Will to have it. The CIA wanted a way to keep better track of Will. Yani already caught that the Pentagon was lying to Biden. They are saying Andrew was at fault and the US did not attack first, Biden does not know Andrew saved 85 US sailors off the ship before it sank. Lisa, Caleb and others will need to have a psyop campaign ready to address the attack with real facts. It was suggested Will release some data at a future debate. Yani met Will and Lisa and was asked to stay and help him. Yani expected this request and agreed to help. He will be hidden in a section as a boring IT Tech, He will be with Caleb and Jacob. Jacob is going to shadow Yani and learn from him. Yani spent serious time improving and protecting the campaign's computers and com systems, He said they were an open nightmare that others have read them and which he will correct Yani is making a very critical addition to the campaign. He feels...."For the first time in three years, he wasn't just calculating odds or running scripts. He wasn't alone. He was home. And he had a family to protect."
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 27

    Given it was said in this chapter that Will was surprised at the attack and holding US Navy sailors You may want to take this passage connected texts from the previous chapter. It was said earlier Andrew messaged Will by encrypted text CONSTITUTION SUNK AFTER FIRING ON US. 85 SURVIVORS IN OUR BRIG/HOSPITAL. GETTYSBURG INBOUND WITH AEGIS LOCK. CABOT STRAIT IS A WARZONE. SEND THE LAWYERS. AND EVERY SHIP YOU HAVE.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    The tour of towns and villages is going forward with no real concerns. The real problem was expected to be visiting Fenn's town and seeing his parents When a guard at Fenn's hometown heard he was present, he told them his father had been singing his praises after the victory against the enemy. Ain was incensed at the hypocrisy. Fenn left and Ain traveled to the house the guard said belonged to Fenn's parents. It was the largest house in town, Once inside, Ain saw Fenn who knew a shortcut took the offense and told he father off for kicking out Fenn. His father got mad and told Ain he could not interfere in his family business, Ain already very mad at the guy, punched him in the face and knocked him back to the ground, Seeing a white, fluffy cat that had to be Fenn's childhood cat that he loved. Ain decided to take the cat from his parents for Fenn. Once outside, Fen saw his cat and initially was concerned, but came to want his cat without a doubt. He was overjoyed and kissed Ain and then they kissed each other repeatedly and happily The tour has not drawn and assassins nor has Fenn been training. He does need to prepare for the upcoming main battle.
  14. The three finally got together after being hurt and taken apart. They gathered in a small cave and lit a fire to keep warm overnight They talked about what just happened. Jack told of a horned witch who he thought told lies to tear them apart. Jack did not think the witch was very powerful since actually she it did not kill him. He was given a vision by her that he did not matter to Theodore. He was too weak to help. Theodore disputed what the witch said about Jack. “You are not useless at all,” he said. “You are important to me.” Jack is worried that pack's curse lives on in Theodore. Their journey continues. They are more united and realize they need to stay together to hold off the evil that awaits them.
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    Chapter 26

    As the chapter ended, it is not certain that the Halifax will make to its harbor and safety. It is being panted with fire control radar by the US. If the Americans acted too hastily without input from Andrew Carter like the cowboy captain of the Constitution acted, it might fire a missile in anger. I do not think the US will act in a hasty manner. The guided missile cruiser could wipe the Halifax with just one of its missiles. I am sure the US would not want to kill its own sailors on the Halifax now that it knows they have been rescued and on board. Andrew Carter has sent the evidence to show it was attacked first and fired upon first. “HMCS Halifax to USS Gettysburg. We have just concluded SAR operations following an unprovoked attack and collision with USS Constitution. We have 85 US Navy survivors aboard, including wounded. We are not hostile. We are requesting medical assistance and a safe corridor to St. John’s Harbour. We are transmitting our Rules of Engagement log, radar data, and gun camera footage on secure datalink. You will see that Constitution fired first.” Andrew sent a brief note to Will. He knows the US ship attacked first and that the fight was unprovoked. He will be worried to find out what happens next since Andrew said a US warship had a weapons lock on his ship. Let us hope cooler heads prevail and the war is not expanded
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 26

    Let us see if the US Navy does an honest after-action report/evaluation of the incident. It will have the radio communications showing the captain was aggressive, rammed the ship, demanded it surrender and told it to prepare to be boarded and fired first. Andrew only fired in response to save his ship. It was unfortunate for the US that the Littoral combat was lightweight and not able to take punishment. Only a fool would ram a much heavier, larger ship and fired first. The US Admiral should understand this situation. He is a pro and not a Trump fan. I imagine the hot dog, injured captain who is not able to speak and make incendiary claims about being attacked will help keep the temperature lowered
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    Chapter 26

    Yes, they likely can use Starlink. Yani has to know about it. Musk wanted it used everywhere to build its brand and attract a larger market. Yani's people can seed social media with their messages , combat radio traffic between the ships and vid/pics. Once these messages get on the net they can be copied and live forever. The US will be seen as the attacker and the Canadians eventually humanitarian. Russia was using Starlink to fight in the Ukraine for field communications and aiding targeting their aircraft, missiles and drones. It was vital and extensively used and needed. Musk just within the last few days cut off Russian access and cries for help from Russian forces in the Ukraine have reached the media
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    Chapter 22

    A Tarquin melt down after the facts are presented will show his true sentiments in front of the 400 worthies and will seriously hurt his reputation and future and tie him to crimes he committed. This Tarquin melt down would be so ironic since Tarquin is hoping to over stress Orel into have a public melt down to make his case for his Orel conservatorship.
  19. Travis expresses worry that Wil's medical immunity could make him irrelevant and he will consider others more favorably Will told him succinctly why he was mistaken....“Travis, I already have freedom to have sex with pretty much anyone I want, except Preston. Don’t you get it? Sex is just fun. It means nothing to me emotionally, because you are my soul mate.” Travis was comforted. Now we will see how Kendo tests their relationship with Travis being sought be another guy.
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    Flight

    Life has gotten more complicated and yet hope is around the corner. The enemy wants to capture Charles Johnson IV and attacked a group of ships. He was not in the expected ship. William Taylor captained a special ship that was transporting Charles to the planet where his father was governor, William activated his jump pods to flee the attack and took them to a far distant place, Unfortunately, they had bad luck and a battlecruiser was in this area and disabled William's ship and has taken them into its bay for later interrogation. He told Charles to say he was his second--for jump purposes-- and was his lover since a second was always the pilot's lover. It is very rare to find a jump pilot and the enemy will be surprised The battlecruiser apparently does not have a jump capable pilot. In the bay, William talked to the ships dormant AI which has not had anyone to talk to him for a long time. Will began to develop friendly relations with it. William must be seeking to hide Charle's identity and find a way to escape with the AI's help. Good Luck! What a intriguing situation. I regret you are not going to build upon it.
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    Chapter 22

    And we are told --tomorrow--"the tower will fall" The groundwork was laid perfectly--Orel met with Will Cater and told him about the abuse and manipulation by Tarquin. Will knew that story too well Will spoke clearly to Orel...."But survivors aren't shadows. We are the ones who actually know what the light is worth. I didn't get to this office by forgetting where I came from. I got here to make sure men like Tarquin Merrick never hold the leash again.” And Orel told him about the faked document and the plan to reveal it. Meanwhile Lisa Sternosti was given copies to read. She is going to brief Will as he reenters the room Will, Andrew and the protective consortium are looking forward to the take down. Some are ready to be more protective if Tarquin overreacts. Might he have a public breakdown like Jack Nicholson did in the courtroom in a Few Good Men?
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    Chapter 26

    What a mess--The littoral combat ship is a lightweight piece of crap and it is held in low regard by the US Navy. No sane senior Navy officer would try to take on that more powerful Canadian ship. When the US Admiral reviews the data and radio logs, he will see the US side had a real cowboy who made errors and was sadly arrogant. The US ship was outmatched and the US Captain was at fault. Andrew was a humanitarian and took the survivors on board to save them and give them medical care. If they make it to Newfoundland, they will be treated as POW's. It is up in the air now whether other US ships responding to the battle will reach the Halifax in time and request its sailors be returned. We will find out in next chapter. The presence of US sailors on board should stop any firing on Carter's ship. Andrew must be thinking of how to explain what happened to a wider world. He needs to get with his team when he returns. Statements need to be taken from the US sailors about what happened ASAP. The hot dog, pro-Trump ship captain is too injured to drive and bias the narrative his way. You showed Trump to be living in an excited dream world. He is not President. He cannot order air strikes. Miller knew how to play him. Will the plan to isolate and starve out Canada succeed? Will it be officially ordered? NATO allies can send needed material is the situation requires it. Biden would have to agree to any blockade the Navy would enforce, I bet he will listen to the US Navy to find out what happened. He will want to make a public statement. If he finds the US was at fault, he may want to make up a face saving story and talk about a collision due to weather problems and not enforce a blockade. He could show he is not like the warlike Trump. The US Navy in any even might not be told officially to enforce a blockade that involves NATO allies. As been suggested Yani is a powerhouse. Friends of Trump in the NSA can cause problems, but they cannot turn around the whole agency to destroy Newfoundland Will needs to respond. He can show regret for the weather caused collision and express thanks the US sailors were rescued and been given care. He will hope peace will remain.
  23. The scenes on the set were compelling. Travis lost his virginity to his female star. His acting father and nemesis brought out his hatred for his real dad. The director was proud of Travis but his role playing father complained as he left, He continues to hurt Travis. Will told Travis it would only bother him if he let it. Will established dominance of the production by telling everyone could hear him talking to the tough showrunner that his father owns the production company, Will is going to keep visiting the set At the end Will saw Kendo come and knew he will try to seduce Travis. Hey, it really is a soap opera
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    The Herald wants Fenn to go on a goodwill/PR tour across his country, Ain agreed to go with him. Ain will introduce Fenn to his 5 parents when they get to his hometown. Ann wants to meets the parents who threw Fenn out. He promised not to permanently hurt them. I can see some problems. Fenn needs to train not travel. Will he and Ain be easier targets for assassins? Will this tour help change deep seated prejudices?
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    Chapter 3

    Jody was terribly surprised, He and three Navy friends end up in a gay bar in DC. Brandon get close to him and asks him if he can kiss him. Jody says yes. They get back the hotel room and the 4 pair up. Jody gives Brandon a hot blow job and the Brandon fucks Jody. All four have exciting , passionate sex, They need to talk and clear the air the next morning. I bet they are all very pleased. They should want to repeat what just happened
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