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Second Times Are Sweeter
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Second Times Are Sweeter
I bet Bastien will get his fuck. The question is how long will it take for Larence to fuck him. -
Success--Denir's plan to play hostage that required the queen to negotiate worked. She showwed up with guards and after a fight and help from Denir's powers the soldiers were killed and the queen was overcome. Ain is very happy and thinks the overthrow action is nearly complete. Let us see if the transition to a new leader for the country goes smoothly, Will the queen be killed?
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Will had an uncommonly pleasant first class fight back over the Pacific and a quick, unhurried customs check. I envied him He traveled to a dealership and bought a new high powered Land Rover with very tinted windows. Travis will love it He drove the new vehicle to where Travis was filming. He obsetved him kn the set and was very impressed. He had become his charaacter and convey authenticity that made him a powerful actor. Travis took him to his trailer and Will gave him a blow job and jacked off Will fit in easily on the set. After the last scene for Travis, they went back to his trailer again to fulfill a fantasy for Travis. He fucked Will and is going to have this memory keeping him happy when he uses it again. Travis saw the Land Rover as they were leaving and was overjoyed. Will presented it to him as a gift. He loved the car, the color and the deeply tinted windows. Travis said he was now so recognized that he has trouble not being interrupted. The tinted windows will let him drive in peace. Will knows how to keep Travis calm, too. He sensed the Adderall Travis took was phasing out so he helped him smoke a marijuana cigarette to relax him. They are happy and very pleased with each other. Nothing they are talking about upsets each other. Good sex helps, too
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Second Times Are Sweeter
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Second Times Are Sweeter
I do not see Anton as any next dead person. He is top of my list as the killer. But, then if you want to really shake things up...... -
Chapter 8: GHOST SHIP
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8: GHOST SHIP
I miss reading what is next for Lukas He can be terrifying in his combat mode. The freighter commander should follow his orders unless she wants to face his weapons *"You are a terrifying person, Lukas."* "I am what I was programmed to be." -
The wedding was the event that connected Noah and Leo. They talked and opened up. Both agreed they made mistakes and they ended up kissing at their table in public. They then made their status known telling Noah's parents and then Jay. Noah and his parents will talk later, The two are reunited and happy. Now. let us she what happens afterwaeds.
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What an experience ! Johnny tried and endured this audition trial. He needs this job. He is short on money. If he does not get the small part, he will need to get a temp job. He has a good friend in Mr. Chen who helped him out with food when it was important.
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Second Times Are Sweeter
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Second Times Are Sweeter
Interesting worry Summerabbacat Another murder will really shake things up and even more focus Lawrence on finding the killer or killers. -
Thanks Topher--Now I am very scared. Fighting warlords, enormous egos, hidden danger around the corner.... I hope Darien and Ishan and Wylan can stay out of the mess outside the city and can let people go after each other in the city.
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Darien and Val got in. The rope ladder helped them. They proceeded to go their separate ways, Val with men to open a gate and let the crusaders into the city, Darien is going after Wylan, Julian,Steff and Ashot were sent to save the bloodied pariarch, They fought hard and rescued him Darien fought his way through guards and more guards, He would not give up. He reached Wylan with the frenzied Tafurs around him wanting to take him hostage for gold. Darien claimed him. The Tafurs considered it and left Wylan to Darien Khalid was at the main gate. Did he die or is he a prisoner? Rashid has not been seen. Was he captured or killed or had he escaped the city? Darien, Ishan and Wylan need to meet and hopefully the right minds can be switched.
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These two are growing much closer together now. Brand loved being a bottom for Sky But, really they have only carried out 5 of their 9 sex scenes. They will be inseparable at the end. The amount of passionate anal sex by one couple in this movie seems more than most R rated movies, Am I right?
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Ain and Fenn have escaped their jail cells. Ain is supposed to disguise himself as the new kapetan and take the queen away but really kidnap her, Denir met them and said their plan would not work. She knows her guards and the safe places. She will not trust Ain as the fake Kapetan, Denir said he had a better plan . What is his plan? Will it work?
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Second Times Are Sweeter
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Second Times Are Sweeter
So, Bastien came to Lawrence's room. They bantered, He told Larence a good fuck. What he got was a beginning kiss as a work in progress, Did Bastien not know how to passionately kiss? At least a sexual marker has been put down The next morning was fencing day. Lawrence was new to the sport. Ali met him at his room door and they are walking over to the fencing session. Lawrence must be getting a different view of the education at this school- 29 comments
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Chapter 8: GHOST SHIP
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8: GHOST SHIP
Thank you for the background Lukas now knows about Eriks painful relationship, unfair accusation of a crime and of Eriks hateful boyfriend. I hope they do no cross paths in the future. Lukas also know about his start and that he was the template for future constructs. He will see himself around again which he can use to his advantage. -
Chapter 8: GHOST SHIP
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8: GHOST SHIP
Lukas know he was the original from which other constructs were made, He was transferred to the longeity project. He was able and so skilled that he killed 12 versions of himself without remorse, He knew they would kill him and his friends, The copies were not as smart or aware as the original. Now he is chasing the transport and has just a short window to connect. His need for intimacy will cause him to breakdown if cannot find Eriks who he really cares about. -
Chapter 8: GHOST SHIP
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8: GHOST SHIP
Lukas now knows why he is being hunted Rikard said.... "You are too valuable to lose, Niklaus. You are the key to everything." --- -
Ashot has risen to the right moment. The constable under a flag of truce was murdered and this murder says the Turks will not negotiate or surrender. The crusaders need another option. Ashot is giving them one and tells Darien of his plan. Ashot sneaks into the city and find the armorer. The man agrees to lower a leather ladder at a certain spot to let the crusaders in. Ashot promises him gold and safety for himself and family. It looks like this plan will work for the crusaders. Let us hope they can act on it and find a way to open a gate to let more crusaders inside.
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Noah is crushed, Shiloh was upset that he did not tell him the full story, Tristan earlier let him know what had happened Shiloh left quickly. Noah cried and cried. They are no longer a couple. Shiloh decided to attend Penn State. His social media account said he was in a relationship. Noah is going to take a gap year. This sad turn of event concludes this story as the author tells us I will read the next book when it is written later.
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The plan has been revised. Fenn will not go to kill the queen. Ain and others will seek out the queen and kidnap her. Ain will disguise himself as a guard to take the queen away from apparent danger. Yarima will help. There must be more to it, but Ain did not reveal it. The Herald came to visit Ain's cell and gloat and him his friends will be executed He threw bread at Ain for his meal. Ain worked over the bread and found a key to his handcuffs. He was free now and building up his power. Soon, he will be able to melt his jail door and also free others, I wish them luck. Things always go wrong.
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Chapter 7: THE KILLING GROUND
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7: THE KILLING GROUND
Maybe, Dio can help Lukas create a vessel from the wrecks of the destroyed ships and get away to look for Eriks -
If Ishan has this level of power to control the weather, will he be asked to create more rain, fog, etc. to aid the crusaders and impair the Turks when they attack the city? The weather could help force the surrender. Will Rhasid and Khalid and Wylan/Ishan stay to the end? Will they all live and be hostages?
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Chapter 7: THE KILLING GROUND
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7: THE KILLING GROUND
Is Lukas gone after the CSC attack? It looks like it, but looks can be deceiving Will he be captured flying in space with Dio alongside? Lukas is being tracked, Are you creating a deus ex machina scenario rescue for Lucas? -
Wylan/Ishan's cry that the rain and ending of the heavy calvary charge was God's will had to unsettle and discourage Khalid and the Turks. No one considers he had anything to do with the weather disaster. The Turks knew that their last major offensive force was no longer effective and they had to see it will be inevitable that the crusaders will take the city. I do wonder what huge device the crusaders were erecting.
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A major event happened unexpectedly. The tide turned in favor of the crusaders A sudden rain shower disrupted a calvary charge lead by Khalid. His men and horses were mired in thick mud. The Turks were forced to retreat Darien headed the shield wall that was ready to face the charging horses, It would have been a horrible fight. Darien knew Wylan/Ishan created the storm. Wylan/Ishan did it to save Khalid and Darien The Turks must be upset and worried
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Raith and Azula finally meet. Yulin is healed. Raith told Azula what happened and went over his five years of hell fighting against the evil courtier while protecting the Sura Clan. He told him of his long terrible forced marriage and love lotions that gave him 2 children. Raith explained his wife and son were poisoned Azula heard about the offer of a full investigation that could clear his clan. Azula countered he wanted a meeting with Basileus Dio. A meeting will be held with the coucil tomorrow to see what happens next. This is going to be a very important meeting. Raith feels much better knowing Azula is not married. Azula seems still restrained and conflicted and not ready to forgive Raith. Let us see how they feel after all is revealed the next morning.
