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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    Raithion will move heaven and earth to save his dying poisoned son He has to travel to the isolated, outcast Sura clan and gain the help of the expert to make an antidote to the poison. This will not be an easy matter and will open up old wounds.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    I am expecting a bigger ship will be involved
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    Ben, a power bottom? I did not expect the younger Riley to top Ben. The experience will be life changing
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 24

    They made it through the tunnel maze to the tavern meeting room, Food was laid out to eat, Yarima met them, She has a route planned to take them into the palace where Ain is being tortured to reveal his lightweaver power source. Yarima told Fenn that Ain is calling out his name asking him to save him. Fenn is very saddened by this and wants to kill all he sees. Yarima asks him to be careful and not get them noticed. Fenn reluctantly agrees. I expect the scientist torturing in will be killed quickly.
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    BTW--there is mention of Mickey jacking off, but not Isaiah. Is the young man asexual and withdrawn sexually because of his cult experiences which might have forbidden sexual play between males? What will lead them, if anything might, to relate sexually? Hughie wants them to have sex.
  6. akascrubber

    Prologue

    Will Mickey bed Isiah soon? Or, will sexual tension remain a recurring theme?
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    Riley was on the edge. He told Ben he was not sure he will not kill him. Ben told him he trusted him and that was a first for him Montague weas identified as the big bad wolf that wanted to neutralize Ben, He was the guardian of his parents' money . Montague wanted Ben out of the way so he could deceive his parents and get them to invest in a fraud that would make them lose millions while he ran away with the money. Eiley proved his worth to Ben. He analyzed Montague's image in the charity's photos. He saw a fake expensive watch and put together fake expensive shoes. Riley thinks he is near broke and needs Ben's parents' money. So Riley being so easy going as he is, sits in Ben's lap and says they need to search a few spots to find who is selling the fake watch Montague is wearing. Riley thinks the seller might well be the guy that Montague needs to pay off Riley, thinking like a street guy, compliments Ben's skills very well. Riley is going to keep on living.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    The planning and preparation for the movie is going very well. Both sky and Brant are HIV free and do not have covid. The people behind the set will folllow safe spacing. Sky and Brant are becoming very comfortable with each other. They easily handle the practice runs. The director wanted them to discover their character's motivations, They both fleshed out their histories and motivations and why they loved each other, He liked what he heard them say. He advised them... "No matter which scene we’re in or what is going on, always try to keep the idea of a deeply committed love between the two of them. If you do that, I expect almost everything you do will be perceived by the audience as being genuine. And it will add a level of emotional investment from the audience." He was supported of them actually having sex and said it would really sell tickets
  9. Trouble in paradise --gets resoled finally The paparazzi were stopped. Brad hired toughs who broke the cameras of the offenders with bats. They were incensed but powerless. He was no longer followed Austin and Will broke up on the volleyball court with Will not taking Austins rationalizations Will would not play with him and might quit the team later. They were so far apart emotionally The disagreement quickly became called The Brokeback Breakup. Will being Will kept thinking about their pain and differences. Others gave him asdvice The impasse was broken by Will. He invited Austin to dinner and they had a serious conversation. Austin told he why the kiss upset him and made him think he cheated on his boyfriend. Will told him again about how he and Travis relate . Autin told will when he goes home for Thanksgiving, he will tell his boyfriend he wants an open relationship or they will breakup. the winning volleyball team will be back at full strength soon. Austin and Wil might be able to have sex after Thanksgiving bringing them closer.
  10. A demon baby, a custody battle, and one very dysfunctional family. Yeah, this is a messy story. Charlie and Taine are surprised to find Sabrina with her cambion baby breathing fire and emitting smoke puffs Sabrina is an ex of Charlie who is the father and says she is tired of caring for the baby. She thrusts the boy on them for good, wants child support and is running to a spa in Milan. They do not know what to do. Mrs Hartley sees the baby and is so happy to have a grandchild--even with horns. She names him Cecil Now the real fun, hard labor and extensive talents are needed as the investigation begins. Sabrina is lying , She has other, bigger plans. First, they need to defeat the lawsuit she filed and second, they have to handle the consequences of stopping her. It will be a full court press in the town and Milan, The Duke of Hell will get mad and demand payment. Hostages will be taken. Expect surprises and uncertainty This is a compelling read with wry humor loving participants and real angst. You will love Cecil and finding out who connects and wins. It will make sense in the end.
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  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    This was a great interchange that shows , I suggest, where they are ultimately headed. I am not sure who will top. Riley is more experienced "This is not the time for intercourse," Ben reminded Riley, though he didn’t move, aware of every scent, vibration, and the energy coming from the youth. It was almost intoxicating, and that was unsettling to Ben. Pheromones were something Ben had never had to deal with, and Riley’s were rather potent. “It’s always time for sex,” Riley countered, grinding back, feeling a shift in Ben’s posture.
  12. akascrubber

    Mezereon

    If Lawrence and another guy later wanted to have a liaison, Lawrence does have a single private room away from others. Just saying.....
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 28

    Victory and justice. The French were finally defeated in a bloody fight and the traitorous supporting citizens were punished and killed. This action broke Louis support in the north. The French fleeing Lincoln were attacked by citizens in their way south, Many did not make it. Louis waited for reinforcements and siege engine from France; A makeshift English royal fleet was assembled and attacked and destroyed the French fleet convincingly. Louis hopes to be King of England were ended, He sued for peace and safe passage back to France. Henry III will be the undisputed King. William Marshall appointed Kaylen to rule the broken Lincoln. He with Ronan and Tomas by his side saw wisely to the revival of the town and the improved well being of its citizen beginning with the poor. The market and merchant areas were brought back to life. The citizens saw the good examples and honest efforts of Kaylen and his two men and were grateful and supportive. Word of his successful efforts and popular support reached William Marshall. Kaylen was sent notice by Marshall and the King that Lincoln was being added to his lands and a new title were be given at a later date after the French are fully defeated. Kayle, Tomas and Ronan were very satisfied and at peace.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 23

    After really thinking about Fenn and his behavior , they finally told Fenn that Ain was alive. Fenn was animated and wanted to help save him. But, he thought Ain would not forgive him and they would not be a couple. We will see They found the hidden tunnel outside the capital walls and are on their way to see Yarima and rescue Ain. I hope Ain is not too injured to recover.
  15. A fully demonic story-Ellis was surprise Instrument that stopped the wedding and turned things back to their former state. The Duke of hell was not married and not that powerful. Ellis did recognize Cecil as a powerful lord. Later, Tyler and Taine agreed to be married. Charlie understands. He is the co-parent of Cecil and is going on to university. The group is knitted back together Thank you for a well told tale that captured my imagination and left me feeling very good. I am a Falcon Banner fan I first found you when I read the beginning of this series. I am looking forward to your next adventure with great interest.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    I am thinking Riley is becoming Liza Doolittle in Pygmalion or My Fair Lady. But, they are transforming each other unless a real crisis happens.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    Wow---Double Wow Riley attended a charity even with Ben and wore new camouflage. Ben's mother was delighted about seeing Riley and as Julian said began making wedding plans. Riley saw a guy who did not fit the crowd who held a knife f going towards Be, Riley intercepted a waiter and knocked over his tray soaking the supposed killer. Ben saw the odd gy and realized he had a knife. He knew Riley took care of the situation, Riley was observant. Driving home they decompressed and talked about the situation at home. Ben thinks there will be another attempt to kill him .The guy in charge wants him dead. He did not tell Riley who is the big bad wolf---yet. Riley and Ben went to their separate bedrooms but Riley moved to Ben's room. Ben thought the evening's distress upset him. Riley, balls to the wall, told Ben they needed to kiss. Ben accepted as a practical step and they kissed--getting much better as they continued. Ben seemed to like kissing, He asked Riley for two longer kissing sessions They are facing danger and Ben should be helping them to get ready. Riley has opened a crack in Ben's shell. I expect then will kep on practicing kissing that might lead to more physical touches. Ben is going to be surprised
  18. akascrubber

    Mezereon

    I think he should write his notes in ancient Greek. I suspect no normal student can read them and might assume they are study or practice materials
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    I think there are lots of shoes to fall. Do not forget, Pip is with the celestial police who must be ready to crash the wedding. They will not like Riccardo trying to marry beings who are already married--
  20. akascrubber

    Mezereon

    Lawrence gets a better understanding of the school and its students. Ali his, guide, clings to him and takes him to lunch. Bastine beguiles Lawrence in the dining hall. Ali, it seems, has had a fight with Bastion and may tell Lawrence about it later. Ali call Aton the Dark Eminence who has his hands on many activities. Bastion was called Rose Bud, Ali femarked...“Because that’s what his asshole looks like. Waiting to bloom,” Ali said promptly. Oh My....What a provocative label! Later walking around outside he examines an unusual plant which he later found out that its fruit is poisonous. Bastien got very, very close to him. Bastien called him Sir Gallahad for saving him. He looks upon Lawerence kindly and they had a very friendly chat. Bastien invited him to join him and friends in the library at 8PM. Lawrence is making unexpected quick connections and learning some of the social nuances. Now he is traveling on a high wire with increased visibility. He needs to keep learning and find out who opposes him and who is seeking to be his friend, I hope he can develop his emerging relationship with Bastien.
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 22

    Fenn may be their only option to rescue Ain. Ain will be overjoyed if a changed and loving Fenn rescued him. Ain should be in bad shape and Fenn could hide him and take an injured Ain to safety. I hope Fenn kills the scientist who experimented on Ain,
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    I see In America homeless persons steal shopping carts and do not return them. They carry their personal goods in the carts.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    "In Sam's case, yes, the draw to keep using it could grow, but as you'll soon discover, he's also cognizant that he doesn't want to be become reliant. It's a slippery slope, to be sure." This is very good news. I was afraid it was like cocaine or heroin and totally control Sam as took more ash..
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    Will not the marriage be invalid since Simon and Lynix are already married? The Duke needs a legal bride.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    “We can work on it, okay?” he whispered into the dark. "Ben didn’t answer. He just lay there, a beautiful, frozen monument in the moonlight. Finally, after a small eternity, he gave one slow, stiff nod. His fingers, under Riley’s, twitched once—not a rejection, but a tiny, seismic acknowledgment." Riley has permission to explore sexual intimacy in bed. This could go way off the tracks. Riley is being careful and sensitive to Ben's feelings and lack of knowledge, Ben has suppressed his sexual nature for so long, if he does open up, how will Ben adapt? Will he be restrained and limit his methods and orgasms? Will he want to try many things with Riley? We will find out.
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