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Sandro and Mark exploded and hit each other training on the soccer field, Sandro was incensed and wanted to keep on fighting. He was ready to fight some more. The coach sent them home. Mark was depressed and ended up in a ball on his bed in a darken room. At that moment in his pain he realized he loved Sandro. What will Mark do now? Stay depressed and quit the soccer team? Go to the party and tell Sandro he loves him and be prepared for Sandro to reject him after he outed himself? Had he earned Sandro's hatred and burned his bridges with him? He felt he needed to say what he honestly felt no matter what.
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Chapter 17: The Wages of Sin
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 17: The Wages of Sin
Is not Andrew part of CSIS? He was given the gun and was told it was legal and recorded. Andrew cannot tell Will at this time of his work with Tanaka, Darius was killed. Andrew cannot put a target on Will's back by telling him that he is going after Merrick. -
Chapter 17: The Wages of Sin
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 17: The Wages of Sin
Andrew is a very handsome man I am sorry the 7th anniversary of their snow accident that started them being together He turned out to be so bittersweet. They are at loggerheads. -
Chapter 17: The Wages of Sin
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 17: The Wages of Sin
Things have changed Andrew's firm is now helping Avery-Woods in a huge merger Will and Andrew are working on the merger. Will asked him what he was hiding and told him he found his gun. Andrew said he could not tell him in order to keep. Will refused to accept Andrew's position. They separated Will is going to see the merger through nevertheless. Darius was killed by Merrick's men it is assumed. Tanaka told him about Darius who did not make a meeting with him. He mailed the dirt on Marcus and the tough pictures to Tanaka. Merrik does not have the information. Now,Tanaka needs to tell Andrew what is in the files. He needs to know how much danger Jason is in. Andrew has a gun and he might have to use it sometime to save himself and Will. -
Kyle is a mess because the guy he loved is at Penn State. He is torn up an leaving thed thinks about him all the time Kyle is not happy with Danny and thinks he jokes too much. They could get into a fight at band camp since they will be roommate. We see that Danny has a terrible self concept and thinks he is worthless. He even considered leaving the band. No one seems to know about Danny's negative thoughts. He might crash under pressure. Could he turn into a suicide risk?
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The kiss sealed the feelings of Bastien and Lawrence.
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This is a happy, encouraging change from the Carter turmoil. I hope it helped you to better handle your stress
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Holmes and Watson? A proposed option....?
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Jake and Chad two long time enemies when stuck at night after work are surprised to learn they have several things in common they like. What looks like a sad compromise after work in Chad's apartment turns out as a path to their future. Read on to find out why their relationship changes to a happy pairing. Honesty helps them no longer miss opportunities. They are willing to let the past no longer hold them back to what now is possible.
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The two seem compatible and maybe open to being intimate. I hope they can explore each other's likes and hopes and not be reluctant to act on their feelings. I know you have a plan for them. I just hope they are not too timid to really learn about each other now and not miss acting in the near term..
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Chapter 16: The Prodigal’s Journey
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 16: The Prodigal’s Journey
We have not heard from Merrick recently. His drug operation partners want him to control the law firm for their uses. Is he going to add more pressure for results for his agents? -
Too late--The jacket is ruined and is a chew toy. Andy has Lucas down. "He does not have an off switch," Andy explained dryly, tapping the steering wheel. "He is a creature of constant motion and aggressive enthusiasm." Andy has two bitches. Ronan and Andy understand each other. Andy told Ronan to use lube. Lucas has an insatiable sex drive Declan and Andy talk. Declan needs help. His dad wants him to find a girl and produce pups. Declan wants a boy. Andy suggests he find a linebacker Andy thinks this is the new normal. He is mistaken. The stage is set for a hunter to capture or kill him. Lucas cannot keep his mouth shut.
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Chapter 16: The Prodigal’s Journey
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 16: The Prodigal’s Journey
You can feel the threads will converge and lead to real choices with potential harmful effects. How might Peter and Andrew handle the permission slip? What can they say that might change Jason's mind? Jason could be really damaged by this intensive retreat. Is Peter really the key? He sees Jason slipping under the control of Marcus. What might Tanaka and say to Darius? Might Darius come clean on Merrick's plan? What will Tanaka offer Darius? Darius needs a lifeline. Andrew could be harmed by the photos. What might Tanaka tell Andrew and indirectly Will? -
Chapter 15: The Writing on the Wall
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Writing on the Wall
The pressure is building. Time is has to be short to develop a path to handle the billions from the drug trade. I can see Merrick's partners might get anxious and want help soon. Might Merrick's step be too slow? I hope Andrew can get the right information to Tanaka to help prevent the criminal heads from succeeding -
Maybe, this emotional story will lead to Morgan hugging him and Troy hugging him back They might take some time to become romantic---or not!
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We do not know for sure that Morgan's evil uncle is dead. Morgan fled after he thought he killed him. Even if the uncle survived, Morgan can still be charged with a serious crime--attempted murder, assault and battery, etc. The uncle is mean enough to file charges, So, Morgan could be in legal trouble anyway.
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Maybe Troy needs a shower now after his emotional outburst Morgan can assist him, I bet
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So the internet postings of Lucas and Kevin could put a hunter's target on Andy. This town is going to in turmoil
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This could get messy. The short-term release might be mutually supportive in the short run, but troubling in the long run as others add more context. I could see a police notice on Morgan that would cause him to flee and maybe run to the cabin
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Wow==A supernatural horror story I am grateful you did not go off on that tangent, Thanks
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Really--only 5 vampires left. The number seems too low Anyway, Andy should be a prime target. Internet. AI searches could identify him. I bet no other vampire is protected by a werewolf pack. Hunters showing at the high school will be obvious
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Both young men have serious trauma issues that will stay with them. Troy was very forthcoming and brutally honest about his brother who called a sociopath who made sure their grandmother died by messing with her heart medication. Troy has guilt from his brother's death. Troy could have died, also. I cannot see others at the ranch blaming him. Tyson was clearly rotten and mentally disturbed and must have burned all his bridges Morgan should be fully supportive of Troy and say comforting words. I hope he stays cautious and does not respond with his "true" story of his final time with his uncle.
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Chapter 15: The Writing on the Wall
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Writing on the Wall
This is a surprisingly fascinating chapter, Darius's backstory is at first frightening, then hopeful and now potentially encouraging, The law firm's fixer looking at the pics of Will, Andre and Jason saw love. He came to a conclusion. "Because if he couldn't have love, maybe he could save it. Maybe that was enough." He does not want to hurt them. However, if he does not crush Will and Jason, Merrick will be very, very displeased with him with terrible consequences Tanaka now knows Darius is giving him info on Andrew and Jason. Tanaka should follow-up with Darius. Can he offer him a position? Tanaka needs Will and Andrew to be a couple and for the law firm seeing Avery-Woods as a client. Andrew is the inside man to track Gable and Merrick This is a volatile situation with $billions at risk from the drug trade. Merrick has to capture the law firm to help the drug partners . He is under pressure. -
"Mark was drowning in the loss, but pride and fear held his lips sealed." Mark is convinced he can ignore his oldest friend and not be hurt. I bet he is really going to be troubled--very troubled. Is he going to fall this school year>
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Husky's really shed fur.
