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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    Both young men have serious trauma issues that will stay with them. Troy was very forthcoming and brutally honest about his brother who called a sociopath who made sure their grandmother died by messing with her heart medication. Troy has guilt from his brother's death. Troy could have died, also. I cannot see others at the ranch blaming him. Tyson was clearly rotten and mentally disturbed and must have burned all his bridges Morgan should be fully supportive of Troy and say comforting words. I hope he stays cautious and does not respond with his "true" story of his final time with his uncle.
  2. This is a surprisingly fascinating chapter, Darius's backstory is at first frightening, then hopeful and now potentially encouraging, The law firm's fixer looking at the pics of Will, Andre and Jason saw love. He came to a conclusion. "Because if he couldn't have love, maybe he could save it. Maybe that was enough." He does not want to hurt them. However, if he does not crush Will and Jason, Merrick will be very, very displeased with him with terrible consequences Tanaka now knows Darius is giving him info on Andrew and Jason. Tanaka should follow-up with Darius. Can he offer him a position? Tanaka needs Will and Andrew to be a couple and for the law firm seeing Avery-Woods as a client. Andrew is the inside man to track Gable and Merrick This is a volatile situation with $billions at risk from the drug trade. Merrick has to capture the law firm to help the drug partners . He is under pressure.
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    "Mark was drowning in the loss, but pride and fear held his lips sealed." Mark is convinced he can ignore his oldest friend and not be hurt. I bet he is really going to be troubled--very troubled. Is he going to fall this school year>
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    Husky's really shed fur.
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Andy survived the change and turned into an omega and fluffy husky, not a wolf. He fucked Ronan and Andy and called them his bitches. Marcus is proud of Ronan and is taking him to the shamans. Does he want Andy to be made part of his pack now because of Ronan's help? There is lots more to work out after this event.
  6. This chapter shows how screwed up Andrew is. He has conflicting professional demands. He legal and security demands occupy his time . His private demands are ruining his mind. Jason and Will press him to be more aware and forward. Will and Jason need him to be clear and forceful. Tanaka should tell Andrew what new information he has about Merrill. Jason after the retreat may be changed for the worse and need more support from his family.
  7. Andrew has passed the test Merrick set for him on the property.He was ready with options and not wants a detailed proposal on an alternative site from Andrew. Kellerman told him to do his best and watch out. He mentioned things happen to people that disappoint Merick. Complicating matters, Merrick offered to help the young man--with Will. It is another test. Andrew cannot handle Will really liking Dylan, Peter has told him to man up and tell Will he loves him. Andrew cannot. His own issues stop him. Peter warned him to not fuck this up.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Dreaded Semen Backup
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    A total comedy all around--But Andy is fed and saved. He learned Lucas loved him and hated the two new werewolves. By luck and default. Marty and his pack invaded the blood bank and obtained the blood Andy needed. He was pack and the pack provided with help finally from Andy. Andy is now fed Kevin and his two mates tracked them and thought they had the caper on camera, but it was too old to work in the dark at night. They messed around the blood bank site and were caught by the police and were arrested. The sheriff refused to accept their claim that they were fighting a vampire and werewolves. He wanted them charged for low level crimes. He saw they were incompetent and losers. Now this crew has to take on the invading werewolves and have a very strong and menacing vampire in their corner to fight for them.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Now we know what happened and how Andro and Mark broke up. Mark said a gay slur and horrified Sandro who left. He never contacted him again. Mark never apologized. Mark sadly realized...."The terrifying truth was, the disgust had never been meant for Sandro at all—it was meant for himself." They never visited each other's houses after being joined at the hip for years. Strangely, Mark's parents have not seemed to notice their estrangement. This separation will likely be covered when the parents of Mark and Sandro have a dinner in two days. There will be a family meal and meeting this weekend when his sister arrives home from college. Mark better be prepared to defend himself.
  11. What highs and lows Andrew was called out by Peter. He is so handicapped and cannot create a life at home by himself. He realized Andrew was a " broken, beautiful, emotionally constipated man." He bare apartment is proof. Andrew is lucky that Peter will not give up on him Andrew is excelled in his legal challenges and doing very well when burdened. Kellerman is very pleased with what he has done and how he sees a bigger picture. He is undergoing on the side a near combat training set of tests learning hand to hand combat and shooting skills. He was given his own legal gun. Andrew was warned his real opponents are killers and will mean him deadly harm Tanaka was warned that a picture was taken showing Jason was hugging Andrew with a comment that it would be mistakenly showing an inappropriate relationship. He was also told Merrick's man Marcus was working to harm Jason without him knowing it yet. Tanaka now knows Merrick is surveilling Will's house and taking pics and Merrick is trying to cause/find problems in the household. I hope Tanaka is going to find a way to save his asset and protect Andrew. Jason is in the hands of Marcus who seems so benign. Jason is going on a retreat run by Marcus and more pressure will be placed on him to reform his lifestyle. Could he confess to things in a way to hurt Will and Andrew? I do not want to see how Jason turns out after the retreat.
  12. Yes, please--for a college sequel
  13. akascrubber

    Epilogue

    "Ok, now that's really the end. I have (finally) just finished my second draft, fixing all major plot inconsistencies. Maybe I should force myself to finish the editing by starting to finish and post the version I plan to publish?" I am interested in reading your revision or if you want to look ahead, I will gladly read your sequel. Thank you for publishing your ideas.
  14. Theo is running after Vince and Jack, a creature of the Moon. He will find the Wisdom Tree and answers The three have to work together. It is past time for answerd.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 22

    So now it begins. Azula is in the capital. Enemies will try to stop him and kill him. Raith loves him fiercely and will do everything in his power to protect him and help him succeed. “Fate has been kind and brought us all together again,” Azula said. “I, Azula Doriel, sailed from Sura Island to Lyria on a mission. I must clear our clan’s name, restore honor to those who died, and reclaim our standing in this kingdom. I do not know whether I will succeed, but I promise to keep fighting until the very end.”
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    I love this perspective better. The evolving contest is explained. The pack of three is trying to overtake Marty's pack and they do not know what they are really facing. Thee three are not clearly seen by Marty. The disguised teacher is the new pack's alpha. I am fascinated to see Lucas as a pawn before he is turned by the new moon. Andy is really torn and cannot believe he has lost Lucas. He is not going to give up. The gargoyle has watched the night maneuvers. He should report what he saw to Andy. With more info, Andy will be better ready to fight. The invading 3 individual pack is going to be very sorry. Will they eventually flee?
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    I do not think this will be a leather sex story no matter what the symbolism,
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    OMG--you changed the focus and tension of the story at warp speed Lucas is being turned into a werewolf after being bitten by a member of another pack There are srange new people at school that are destablizing their natural rhythm Lucas is marked and is drawn into a purity circle so there will no sex with Andy What is going on? Andy thinks it is a rogue werewolf Only after chasing the enemy at night and ending up tussling with Marty, they realize ..."They were being hunted by a coordinated, highly intelligent pack. And they were losing." Marty and Andy and te gargoyle need to ploy and devise a victory plan. They can figure out now who is the enemy at school.
  19. Fucking Dylan-could hurt Will with his HR duties and be a weak link. Dylan might tell his work buddy who might be taking money from Merrick to spy on him. Merrick must have spies at Avery-Woods. He wants dirt on Will and can spin it in a very bad light.
  20. Is Merrick behind Dylan? What is Merrick's plan" If Will brings Dylan home to fuck, Jason's mind is going to be blown. Jason is going to see Dylan is like him and see he has a chance with Will. So much pain could be ahead. Could Will continue to fuck Dylan on more days? Could Will Fucking Dylan at home with Jason aware of it cause Jason to turn to Marcus for help. Jason will tell Marcus about Dylan and Will. Marcus is going to tell Merrick. How will Marcus get some pics?
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Sounds like Mark gave up his long-term friend because he was gay."Dude... you really need to get over the fact that Sandro's gay. Nobody else gives a shit. Why do you?" Mark really needs to figure out why he was bothered. Others are not.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    But, there is no confirmation, yet that Lucas was bitten by a werewolf. I hope Lucas finds out soon. I
  23. akascrubber

    Reset

    Danny is living dangerously angering the quarterback and dating Jake's ex bf. Lots of drama lies ahead As a former hs and college marching band member in the Indiana, I enjoy the band dynamic
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Thank you. He is new to me. I will check him out later
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Dear weinerdog Who was the long absent author you cited? Thanks
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