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I could guess the captain or Sam might think Julian was going to the kingdom of Hawaii to make his fortune. Young men traveled for good opportunities. Many landing in San Francisco after gold was found left for the lure of the gold fields. Ships even lost crew members
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Julian is quickly adapting to his life at sea and is rapidly learning about the ship. Sam is a good teacher. They both easily become comfortable with each other. We will see how their relationship evolves over the next 10-12 days. Julian is showing he is a quick learner with a very good mind who wants to learn. Sam is helping him to pay attention to nature and the weather. I can see Julian use these insights growing crops on a large island.
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Andy is captured by men of the evil corporation. Will he be used for their scientific research purposes and killed? Esca thinks he captured Loki with the help of mages. Lucas said he was just a high school student. But Ecsca said they will find out and he intends to run Lucas through his tests and maybe do him great harm. But, Lucas is a husky werewolf ! Esca is not counting on any attack from a real werewolf pack and a mysterious coyote who might be Loki. The upcoming battle will be fierce.
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Chapter 28: The House of Healing
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 28: The House of Healing
The House of Healing has been fooled by Marcus to mistakenly treat the two boys But, Peter stands up and says "no" with reasoning and evidence. He is not a drug addict ! Peter is awesome and a righteous male. He demands to be heard. He sounds convincing. -
Chapter 28: The House of Healing
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 28: The House of Healing
Peter is exploding and putting the fear of God in Marcus and the medical staff who think he is a sad addict who needs help, not a kid kidnapped by a pedophile. Time has stopped for them while they handle Peter's outbursts, Will and Andrew are on the way and may arrive shortly." Will Carter was currently operating as a functional psychopath." I fear for those who oppose him. The CSIS clean up crew might have business. -
Chapter 27: The King of the North
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 27: The King of the North
I prefer the Reacher books. He is the perfect knight fighting evil. I have not seen the TV shows yet -
Chapter 27: The King of the North
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 27: The King of the North
Save critical data on a thumb drive or a similar device -
Andy has been crown King by the cub scouts and Barty Jr was the last scout standing. Troop 442 won! Will there be any dessert left after the werewolf scouts get through the buffet line?
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A perfect and very hot happy Boy Scout. I like his minimal uniform.
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Chapter 27: The King of the North
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 27: The King of the North
They did it. Will with the help of Andrew and a small team reconstructed the files on the merger." It was the exquisite, agonizing tragedy of two people who functioned perfectly together in the absolute chaos of a crisis, but who fundamentally could not figure out how to survive a single day in peacetime." Will called home and found out Peter and Jason are missing. Will and Andrew have to figure out what to do. It is time to suspect foul play! -
I do not hate either of them. I consider Travis weaker and by his horrible family life and more susceptible to manipulation. His career choice put in a place were drug use was common. He is more open to manipulation There will be a blow up. What happens afterwards to them is the real matter as I see it.
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I was a member of BSA Troo p 82 and loved camping. Although I earned my cooking merit badge, I was not a good cook. I later worked on the staff at a scout during high school . I am glad I did not meet a Chuck scoutmaster. I am very sorry I did not meet an Andy. These fantasy scout stories are fun. BTW, I loved canoeing, unlike Andy. Thank you.
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The Truth of the Prophecy
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Truth of the Prophecy
Theo ripped out the heart of the evil alpha and he commanded his pack to rise and they did. The Whiteflame pack has been restored Awesome action and result! -
You clearly reined in the speculation and what was, I think, helpfully considered some realism to solve Miles' situation. AI has enabled us to get information much easier. We can, with your statement, now understand that you are applying your artistic license to make the plot conform to your intent and timing.
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Chapter 26: The Confession
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 26: The Confession
Why do I feel very ominous things are going to happen, and the situation is going to get very unpleasant. -
Chapter 26: The Confession
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 26: The Confession
I appreciate seeing Andrew being formed into a new role that complements and selflessly protects Will to prevent the triumph of evil. He is going to do things in the dark that Will does and cannot know and so Will can move ahead confidently. -
Chapter 26: The Confession
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 26: The Confession
Lots of critical things are happening at specific times. It might get confusing. I can see lots of pressure forming from what is revealed and unexpected surprises disorienting the key people. Plans are going to fail, hopefully. There might be more deaths. We know Alistair survives to create his third son. Marcus is an obvious loose end. What is he going to do with the two boys? He could easily incur the anger of Andrew -
Chapter 26: The Confession
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 26: The Confession
BTW Nomarkmore Take it all Can also be found on YouTube --- -
Lucas smartly scared off the too macho Chuck who tried to bond with his Andy. I do not think Chuck will be back after sensing the intentions of Lucas. Lucas and Andy can have fun in the tent with ropes. Maybe Lucas will practice tying in private Andy up in various BDSM positions Poor Kyle is going to remain frustrated
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Chapter 26: The Confession
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 26: The Confession
Merrick is going to fail spectacularly, and Andrew is going to hurt him badly with Merrick's wife help. Andrew is going to destroy the sad , corrupted material in his safe. Will asserts..."I'm going to find his archive and burn it to the ground, and I will destroy everyone who touched it" Charles Levesque in turn will be furious when Merrick fails with his plot to control the law firm Tanaka has him keep silent about Dylan being controlled by Merrick and his death by crime goons. Merrick and Levesque do not know about the deaths and loss of faked material. Tanaka believed Will could be devastated if he learned he was used and made sick evidence in a cruel scheme. Andrew is going to protect Will. Is Andrew going to return to Will and comfort him as he handles his data loss and they learn Peter and Jason are missing? Andrew has more to do to save others. -
I am expecting Kendo to make his more aggressive sexual moves on Travis in the next chapter when Travis has him staying overnight. The blow jobs just began and excited his appetite for Travis. I bet their sexual tango will not turn out well after Travis recovers. Kendo is going set himself up for retribution and exquisite painful payback from Will
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I think it is normally best in life to be optimistic and not dwell on possible problems until they arise, but Miles could face complications, so he and Mr. Riggs need to be open minded and flexible enough to face any problems that arise head on. Mr. Riggs has contacted a lawyer so he wants professional help. Miles might need an understanding child welfare official and a helpful judge. I expect a legal decision will need to be made on the estate and the status of Miles.
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Well, Lucas is a far away from the Loki of Asgard who fights Thor in the Avenger movies, but Lucas definitely is a trickster with a great self-concept. Lucas did fool Esca so whatever he did actually won Andy to his polycule bed.
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The dad acted totally responsible and wanted nothing hidden. Morgan is now Miles from now on. The sheriff, a friend, would check on the Ohio situation. Miles would move into the house since he was 16 and Troy wanted him to share his bedroom. Miles would still work for the ranch. As it turns out, things Miles was not in trouble. His uncle's death was ruled an accident. There are legal matters to work through--settling his uncle's estate, reconnecting with Mile's inheritance and deciding the status of Miles as a 16 year old . He needs a guardian or foster parent. Mr Riggs is going back to Ohio with Miles. He is open to be his guardian and has contacted an Ohio lawyer. Things are up in the air. Hopefully, things go right for Miles and Troy and Mr Riggs
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Teenagers--got to love them! They both worked out their misunderstanding and realized they loved each other and were welcomed as a couple by their friends. Kisses sealed the deal. This was a delightful come to realize story with a wonderful, happy ending. Thank you
