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I hope and believe they will not stop at heavy tickling and gentle kissing. We will see.
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This critical electrifying action turned the battle decisively---The vanguard was failing and all could be lost soon Bishop...."Adhemar stood up in his stirrups, raising the rusted iron high above his head so it caught the midday sun. "Stand!" Adhemar’s voice boomed across the screaming battlefield, carrying the absolute, terrifying authority of the Voice of God. "Stand, soldiers of Christ! The Lord of Hosts rides with you! The Lance is with you! Deus Vult!" The effect was instantaneous and horrifying." This --"God Wills It "--- cry deserves to be remembered
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The chemistry these two showed was so encouraging and positive. The interviewer was overwhelmed by them and how theyninteracted Brant was very pleased and as open as he wanted to be----"Brant (grinning): Could this become a romance? It’s possible. We’ll let you know if it happens." He was not toying or being manipulative--People will want to know more. Now, let them both deal with the fallout from the interview, I am glad they are on set for a few more days and have time to talk with each other and the director to better understand the feedback they are given.
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Jace found Leo who had been alone working hard and focused in this lab for six hours. Leo could tell from his confident footfalls that Jace was coming to see him. Jace brought two cups of coffee and this was a useful strategy. Of course , he had ulterior motives. Jace listened to Leo and found reasons to massage his shoulders and move onto tickling his lower back and then ribs until Leo was totally unwound and felt run over and excited gloriously. Jace kiss his forehead and then lips. Are they going to do more?
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Johnny has really grown and kept going amid his difficulties being a server at a high-end restaurant, participating in acting classes and auditioning, He worked through his issues and real torments and disappointments and sought understanding and a healthy outlook. Bruce grounded him and gave him needed perspectives. "I thought about the actor whose excited voice had first ignited the fire. That actor spoke of certainty. I realized certainty wasn’t about knowing you’ll succeed; it was about knowing you will not stop trying until you do." He has developed a valuable grounding and maturity.
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Chapter 12 THE RED CARPET
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 12 THE RED CARPET
What a stunning, unbelievable total reversal of Shakespearean upheaval proportions Tripp is the real villain who just revealed his hidden agenda for total domination. He has taken control of the billions of constructs and will rule them Lukss is supposed to be his sexual playmate now. He sent Eriks away to his ship to watch and wallow in Tripp's victory and suffer unable to stop him Eriks changes the calculation. On the way to the ship, Eriks stuns Lukas and restrains him as he places him on the ship. They fly away and at this point, Lukas does not know that Eriks has Lukas. Eriks has to figure out how to turn Lukas around and free him or Lukas will fight/resist him Is Tripp smart enough to rule billions of constructs on different worlds? Will battles erupt to resist his control ? Eriks knows where he is fleeing is still the place to control the constructs. But,right now he lacks the skill to reverse the changes Tripp made, -
I Can't Give You My Number.
akascrubber commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in I Can't Give You My Number.
"Aled set the mug down on the bedside table and looked directly into Harry’s eyes. The contrast between them had never been more stark—the protected, open city boy and the hidden, rural lad.' The two boys are leading two very different lives, For now, they decide to live for the moment. I bet their sexual play will become much more advanced. -
Such intense combat and such soul crushing trials of endurance in heat, thirst, hunger and wet, never ending mud and unexpected heavenly upheavels "A blind boy hailed as a saint. A sorcerer-prince branded a monster. Bound by magic, divided by war, and caught in the crushing grip of the First Crusade...." give us the backdrop for this second book in the series You will read about treachery, twists and turns, horrible villains, butchery, charlatans, religious zealotry. people who know how to lead with good and convenient reasons and outright heroes. Pay attention to what happens to Wylan, Ishan and Darien. There are lots of fascinating characters and action to keep this story compelling
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Against all rational odds and overwhelming force, the crusader's won. Hunryr , bone tired men attacked out of the city into the mass of Turks.. The fighting was fierce and very bloody. They made movement against the enemy force and then the elite Turkish heavy calvary were unleashed and stated to break the vanguard, Suddenly, the Bishop appeared hoisting he holy lance and reignited the crusaders. They fought like mad men not attending to their injuries. They pressured forward. Allies saw what was happening and fled away from the crusaders. A beginning retreat turned into full scale falling back and leaving few to fight the crusaders. Ishan walked to the upper citadel and faced his brother and asked him to surrender to Baron Haskal who would let him and his men leave and not be killed. This prince was wise and helped save his brother's life. The contest was finally over. What a battle. What heroes.
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It has been agreed after some great worry that Prince Azula will go with his soldiers in a Sura Clan ship and accompany Raith to Lyria. "I seek the council’s permission to leave Sura Island and travel to Lyria to find out the fate of our people,” Azula said, his voice ringing through the hall." The Sura charges will be investigated and the missing Sura citizens will be sought and their status will be made known. Azula will meet the Baselius. The people are very worried about Azula's safety, Raith promised to safeguard him. Raith will need to be very wary since those who profited from the destruction of the Sura will not want to be found guilty. The planning on Sura will take a few days, Azula wants to humanize Raith and help his people not see him as an enemy. Raith will bring some shipmates and his two children to the island.
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A guy with a dirty mind could dream up some erotic exercises for twinks on a trampoline--mmm just saying--academically
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So caring and tenderly evocative of such good feelings about each other Harry acted first after Aled gave him permission by taking off his boxers. This was Aled's first handjob. "He looked totally satiated as he sank back down into the mattress, his muscles turning to jelly and a huge, dazed smile spreading across his face. Harry released his hand, letting out a breath of his own, and just lay there on his side, watching Aled bask in the absolute freedom of the moment" It was Harry's turn for a joyous orgasm. He moved to be on top of Aled and rubbed his cock over Aled's body frotting and released a sublime orgasm. These first acts are letting them begin to understand the wonderful possibilities they can share
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Epilogue II: The Queen, the Herald, and the Soldier
akascrubber commented on dragonthusiast's story chapter in Epilogue II: The Queen, the Herald, and the Soldier
Yarima , the queen, and Mhaly, the high herald, want to join Enlin in marriage. They would unite both countries. Enlin would have the purpose she craved. "If pampering Mhally and Yari could be considered a profession, then she just might have found her calling in life." -
Overtime in Engineering
akascrubber commented on chris191070's story chapter in Overtime in Engineering
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Chapter 11: THE SMILING FACE
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: THE SMILING FACE
Will Rikard have prepared formidable protections to this system that will stop them or act to repair what that attempted after they have left the scene? -
We will soon she how powerful faith can be for these crusaders.
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Overtime in Engineering
akascrubber commented on chris191070's story chapter in Overtime in Engineering
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Damn--their love making was portrayed so realistically--no romance novel subtlety. They went all out I believe the scenes on film will convey their real connections --emotionally and physically. Any outtakes will sizzle
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Chapter 11: THE SMILING FACE
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: THE SMILING FACE
They have decided to undertake a suicide mission with a 17% chance of success. It is that important "Tripp was already typing. "The node is at Nova Zarya. It's the control hub for the entire network. If we can get to it, I can rewrite the construct code. Upload a liberation protocol—something that tells every construct to reject future commands from the node. To be *free*." -
This is Memorial Day in the US. We honor those who died in military service protecting others.
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Who We Are, Who We Become
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Who We Are, Who We Become
This is mixed up. Theodore did not bring the flint back. His father is mad. The embercasting cannot happen. The furure for the pack is looking grim. How can Jack and Vince help rectify the situation and find a real solution/- 19 comments
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Epilogue I: Tea with the Naralyns
akascrubber commented on dragonthusiast's story chapter in Epilogue I: Tea with the Naralyns
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Two cookie demons end up fighting and Jonathan is saved when one demon decides to send some of his magic to Jonathan. Life is really getting much more interesting.
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Sky felt Valarie needed her confidence to be built up. He gave her reasons to be stronger and they grew to appreciate each other in greater depth They both have a person they feel attracted to and want their relationship to keep on growing and lasting. Sky spoke honestly-- “So, you and Brant. A future?” “Very good question, my dear. I’m not sure. Maybe. It depends on whether he’s gay enough or will revert to his old ways when we’re back in Lala land.” “I hope you don’t wind up with a broken heart.” “Me, too.” I paused and realized I had another worry. “Or him either.”
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Jace is going to tickle Leo while they are on duty examining a critical area. Leo cannot stop him. This tickling is risky if they are discovered. Jace is quite the playful devil.
