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Provocative start--This could go in many interesting directions. Thanks
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Edgar had been feeding the beast his meat for weeks, He was really enhanced and Tyler noticed his predator nature and too sharp teeth. He could tell the beast is not just human and is warned. Tyler is now in the fight for his life. He must creatively respond. Edgar has laid a trap for him Can Tyler's friends help him in anyway?
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Haskal knew how 200 men could take a city : Psyop warfare and true deception. Then Baldwin stole it from him because he had 10 times the men who would fight him to get the city from Haskal., Haskal listened to Wylan worrying and a large group of riders arriving by morning. He had his men leave and will let Baldwin handle the new force. Wylan is continuing to show he is needed. He is unable to talk about his last communication from the sorcerer
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Mhalyn saw the High Herald cloaked moving through fields destroying food crops. She ran to tell her rebel friends. It was thought the High Herald was going to cause a famine and would blame the rebels. Petre thought the people would turn on them and no place would be safe Petre thought they might have to flee to Orinovo. What a scary thought. The High Herald is showing how evil and cruel he can be.
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One supposed dead end and Gabiel still looks for shooters. He cannot figure out who he fought with earlier and Scott is no help. It looks like the Senator is going to be targeted at the concert by a sniper Scott breaks into the Hershey computer system and finds a message that was likely sent by Gabriel's old boss. He needs to call Gabriel to tell him who on the inside was contacted. So, who did Mehmet contact?
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Straight to the Morning, Part Two of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Straight to the Morning, Part Two of Three
That park was a place for gay hookups. Police in older times might be on the lookout for sexual play. I am sure they do not do it now. They let their desires go free when at Avery's home and there were in heaven, in sync, both experiencing glorious orgasms. But Dino's phone rang and he abruptly left without commenting. Avery was dumbfounded. He ran the likely reasons for Dino's actions and his thoughts got darker after not hearing from him for two days, Avery accepted the full time San Diego job. Nothing was keeping him here in Seattle. Dino showed up and explained why he left and why he was tied up. They both talked and now understood each other. Their sexual chemistry reignited. Dino went after Avery's body As a final fling--awesome. If they both wanted more, then real problems arise. They will be living in two far away towns They are going to need to talk. The final chapter has raised my expectations. Is this going to be a tragedy or a happily ever after story? -
Straight to the Morning, Part One of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Straight to the Morning, Part One of Three
It is substantial and slowly developing. I expect you are going to surprise us. -
Matt, Simon, Gareth and others--Please enjoy your growing friendship and romantic impulses as long as you can. Life gets in the way and shakes things up. Live for the moments you have.
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Oh No--John survived the perils of the confessor's interrogations and was put into the human army that was to invade the elf lands fearing death. But, he awoke to find the army turning on itself and the humans were fiercely killing each other with no other beings in sight. He mounted a horse and rode far away from the killing until he was engulfed in a thick fog. He was shocked to find Karsa, his former lover. But, this was not the same person. This Karsa hated him.“You…” He spat. “…You low-breed human filth.” Is this elf now going to kill John?
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Simon looks like Ed Sheeran
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Fenn has figured out he can create a shadow wolf and have it slash a tree. He will explore this power more and see what else he can direct a shadow being do as he orders. He wants more information and does not want to disappoint the Herald again
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Only 3 more chapters in this book and the crusaders continue on. It appears they will defeat the crown prince and his forces.
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"Rashid had killed him. Ishan knew it with a certainty that burned in his chest like a brand. Rashid had sent the assassin...." to kill his father and him and he would try again. His grandfather implied wrongly he orchestrated the killing of his father. Ishan could not put together the assassins. He was a sorcerer not a fierce warrior with ties to assassins like his older brother. Maybe, his grandfather really knew this but needed the crown prince to kill the crusaders. Ishan was expendable in his eyes. Ishan is now held captive in his quarters. His brother, the crown prince, was ordered by his grandfather to attack the crusaders. The crown prince, I expect, will be focusing on attacking and destroying the crusaders and to earn his grandfather's approval. Ishan will be killed after the crusaders are wiped out. Ishan reached out in his isolation for Wylan and could only expressed his grief. He is paralyzed. Islan needs to think about what he can do now. I think after reflecting to he will tell Wylan that a major attack is coming. He might be able to give him advice on how to prepare to fight and find his older brother so he is killed. His father's death needs to be avenged
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Let us find out what Wylan's sorcerer suggests as a next step now that water has been found
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Will is desperate for a solution and relief. I think he is going to hear Jeremy out and, if his ideas promise a way out, he might well follow Jermy's plan modified by his own ideas, too. Will knows the campus and how the students are acting and realizes a change is needed. He will want to know what could help him deflect attention away from himself. What is Jeremy's plan to help Will? Might he suggest Will begin a part time modelling contract with a reputable agency until a new "it" guy emerges?
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Jeremy is insanely jealous Will won the costumed contest, not him. He counselor turned his anger around and said he needed to take credit also for the win. He picked the costume. The paparazzi are driving Will crazy on campus. He is the "it" guy and the star. He does not know what to do. If he cannot find a solution he will transfer to Stanford Jeremy surprised him and attends his next volleyball game. He sat next to Marie who told him about the paparazzi hounding Will. Jeremy congratulates Will on winning his game and say he may have solution to help him handle the camera parasites. Will wants his help. We will find out what Jeremy has in the next chapter. A good plan could bring the brothers much closer together.
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Gloucester stood firm against limited French first attack. With no siege engines, Louis withdrew to regroup and prepare for fighting when Spring weather favors campaigns, Cardinal Guala lifted his staff. “And let no man’s heart fail. Henry’s cause is holy. The Charter is renewed. The realm gathereth to its king. Stand firm, and Heaven shall stand with thee.” The royalists will unite and prepare over the winter. Louis will be attacked
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Gabriel's nemesis is saved by Sean seeing them fight. Gabriel was prepared to kill him. Gabriel cannot remember him even when given clues. Both were wearing disguises. Next time, their meeting could turn deadly.
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I am reminded of Quote the raven "Nevermore ." Poe said the raven is meant to symbolize "Mournful and Never-ending Remembrance".
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Insightful, powerful images that have inspired thoughtful , well earned praise
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Simon needs a conjugal visit. Pips is showing Charlie he maters and They get to savor continued sexual bliss Is not Edgar unaware of what the crew and their lawyers are doing? He is not trying to stop or oppose what his adversaries are doing, Once safe and having lots more sex, they will need to attack Edgar, I think
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Ain is hallucinating. He is at the total mercy of his torturer She wants him to live until she can extract and use his power. This will not end well. Ain going to die or be turned into a crippled wreck discarded to a dank, dark cell. Maybe he can regenerate if he is exposed to enough light.
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We understand the two boys now.... *You get me*, Wylan had promised. *Whenever you want. Whenever you need to not be alone.* It was a promise he wasn't sure he could keep. It was a promise he wasn't sure he wanted to. But it was the only thing he had to give.: Ishan wants to meet Wylan in person and I assume they eventually will meet
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Scott solved the puzzle. Mehmet wanted Gabriel killed after he failed the Tokyo Killing. The hit was planned a while ago and Mehmet knew where Gabriel lived so he could be targeted unrelated to the Senator or the same killer would go after both of them. Scott is going to deepen his research. Gabriel is adding a disguise and will be looking for the Senator's potential killer. Gabriel and Lonnie had a candid talk after fighting. Lonnie will try to keep the band safe. There are a loose number of killers, including a mysterious one who thinks Gabriel is going to kill the Senator. Is he a Homeland Security agent or a former Army/CIA team mate of Gabriel? I can see things fall apart fast. Gabriel may be called upon to save Sean and he will.
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Lawrence seems to be temperamentally and intellectually suited to fit in at this school, He is not seeking friends and will not be put out by condescending attitudes, He is not from money and old money has rules and boundaries. He will be observing and he no greater goal. Will Bastien begin to shake him up more? I expected Larence's standoff manner might intrigue him. He has to watch out for Anton. If I was to start a longer list of potential killers, I would add Antoon to the list. He seems the jealous type.
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