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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    Sam, Justin and Tim were wrecked and broken by the game. Only Ben is keeping it together and holding on to a exploded Tim who vandalized the school. Tim and Ben are hiding out. Something new or not expected has to take place if the old pattern is not reinstalled with the GM in charge Hoping is a terrible strategy, isn't it?
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    Ardent

    sean and Gabriel kept thinking about each other and were distracted Returning to his place Gabriel revealed his hidden panic room to Scott and Scott was upset at being kept in the dak Sean moved back to his car and in the garage learned something was off. Then, he was being shot by a guy with a rifle. Sean heard a scuffle and sounds. He ran to the sound and saw his friend on the ground with the rifle next to him Is Tom one of his intended killers? Or, was Tom set up? Who took Tom down? What does Gabrie do now?
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    Chapter 18

    Kaylen with his two squires followed the battles between the French forces and King's forces. London fell to the French prince and large parts of England are held by the French prince, Dover is besiged and has held out for a long time Kaylen , Tomas and Ronan have returned to their keep. The squires rre-started teir sword practice. At some point the three will have to decide which side to support, They will make a life changing decision As a historical note--King John is sick and will die on Oct 19, 1216 from dysentery. After his death, the English nobles will join forces and oust Prince Louis I hope our 3 heroes picked the right side when they finally decided. The easy choice at first glance might be Prince Louis since he had a powerful experienced army and the English lords were just beginning to fight and would be untested
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    Chapter 2

    Taine nodded. "Demons are capable of genuine emotion. They're just not very good at expressing it in healthy ways." "Like repressed gay teenagers?" So Lynix and Lilith are demons. How are they going to express their sexual feelings in healthy ways? Is Lynix going to move Simon to play with Matt? Wil Lilth do more that just kiss Charlie?
  5. Will and Austin performed an all-out volleyball studs beating their opposing house players by large margins in two separate sets of games. The attracted a large following and received notice by a supportive Harvard Crimson story. They showed they did not just spend time in the library. We saw Will rational for his open relationship--I wonder id this cause Austin to think about it and what he is doing? Will told him whatb learned from Grand when Stef played with others....."He told me that it didn’t, because while those other guys had Stef’s body, he had his soul.” “And that’s where we’re at,” Travis said, beaming at me as he did."
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    Chapter 14

    What is Tim going to do? Will he go to the debate and follow to direction of the GM? Will he rebel and hurt his female debate partner? Can Tim could up with a different alternative? I hope so--I bet, though, this game will continue to destroy the pieces unless some new, unexpected variable enters the game. It is time to burn the entire high school down ? Justin is in jail so he cannot be charged. It might suggest another person was behind the arson.
  7. Jeremy has a gladiator costume for Will to wear at his table at the big Halloween gala and Will agreed to wear it. Travis will look like James Dean. My question---Is Will going to wear any underwear with his costume? I hope not.
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    Chapter 2

    Oh Charlie--You have a very unflappable, caring mother. I bet this dinner with Lilith will be shocking an eye opening. Tyler said he wanted to suplex a witch since it was on his bucket list. The image of him putting a wrestling move on a witch is stunning and has to be impossible unless he surprises her. "A suplex is a high-impact wrestling throw where an offensive wrestler lifts their opponent and arches backward to slam them onto their back, often executed as a German, belly-to-belly, or gutwrench variation. It is dangerous due to potential for serious head, neck, and spinal injuries. The move is used in amateur and professional wrestling for high points."
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    Chapter 34

    The Herald is not fully supported by his peers. Half the army will be brought back for crowd control. Y This reduction in force will encourage the enemy quee, She will likely reb=new her efforts to steal Ain. Ahe will want to weaken them Fenn is failing harder into the Herald's traps, I bet the tonic, maybe the salve and certainly the bracelet are charmed or created to control and entice Fenn into the Herald's bed. Fenn is oblivious. If he does overhear the Herald talk about his plans and underhanded ways he controls Fenn, then Fenn will be shocked. It will take hard evidence to change Fenn's mind, I believe. It would be interesting to hear what the herald really thinks about Fenn and their relationship.
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    Chapter 14

    Sam's suicide failed. Ben arranged for Sam to be taken away and hidden by his aunt,' The suicide failure meant Pink failed, too. Pink was made a piece and ordered to admit to serious academic frsaud. Justin was to be destroyed and punished completely. He was unfairly link to a fire and was seen as an arsonist. More lives are mercilessly ruined. There seems to be no way out for the pieces. The higher ups in the games are brutal and know what to do to control and hurt the pieces. Tim and the others only have a very weak insight into the real powers. Will mistakes be made by the higher ups that can help Tim better plan?
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    Chapter 1

    I hope Liilth does not drain him dry and wear out his cock and give him a rough, worn bleeding cock shaft and cock head She must drive him to make love to her often and everywhere with and without clothes in private and public Let us see how she controls and dominates him
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    Chapter 33

    What a mess . Yarima and Oretski sought now to capture and take the daybreaker back to the queen But Fenn found them and might kill Yarima,=. But Oretski hit Fenn and knocked him out,' Yarima and Oretski are going back without a prisoner. They could not find Ain. Will they be sent back to get Ain this time?
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    Chapter 1

    Wow-- emotionally unavailable Charlie ran away from his new family and found the Pump House area. He . met Lilith. Lynix's sister,.They talked and agreed to be friends and soon were making out. So Lilith has her own spy and she is ready to battle her brother. Will she take over Charlie's body?
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    Prologue

    But, they had to save love crazed, cursed Simon! How can they do it?
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    Prologue

    Awesome , hard body torso--mmm==Those short look so easy to run a hand up inside to find a great cock--to jack or suck off
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    Chapter 13

    Sam--he is so fragile and just 14, He has been pushed in new ways to his extreme limits Has Sam committed suicide? Will Justin call 911? If he is dead or near death, the other guys need to get revenge with no limits of Pink and anyone else like her.
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    Chapter 12

    So, Goodwill comes to the rescue. It is an excellent operation, and I know a bit about it because I worked at one for a few years
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    Chapter 13

    OMG--A fifth book in this new series! You mind is so creative and you are so ambitious in your literary goals that are way above most of the writers in this site
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    Chapter 32

    Petre brought the injured, whipped Ain to safety and to recover. He pressed him to forget his attraction to Fenn. He told Ain Fenn is an adult and has made his decision. Fenn, according to Petre, will not listen to Ain. Ain was told that the people were not happy with his punishment and rioted. Ain felt he had to stop the fighting, He sought the rioters out although still in pain and bleeding. He found them in the square with the Herald's assistant ready to be whipped. She was not hiding behind the palace barriers like others. Ain stopped her from being hurt and chastised the rebels, He took the assistant to some place guards to return her to safety. Fenn materialized nearby saying he was getting ready to save the assistant. Fenn and Ain argued. Fenn sounded like he still was a puppet of the Herald. They parted unhappily. Maybe the other high-ranking officials hiding in the palace are upset with the Herald for causing problems. But, what can they do? Will an attack from the enemy shake them up?
  20. The author moved out of his comfort zone and began a supernatural mystery with a surprising love story. He liked the concept and so far has proposed at least three more books in a connected series. Mix a frustrated demon, a 73 year old philosophy professor who will not help the demon out, a 17 year old punk who delights in tormenting the old man and an uprooting body switch with a deadline. The 17 year old is moved into the professor's declining body with death soon happening. The professor takes over the 17 year old body with his problems of too many angry girlfriends, too high a loan debt due soon to a bad guy and a new gay attraction to a hot , well-built son of his father's political opponent. Unexpected alliances will be built, and new problems will be faced. People will need to face up to new realities or things will fall apart. I bet you will be fascinated and entertained as you read this story, Enjoy!
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    Chapter 13

    Ghostbusters? Are they going to act somewhat like the characters in that movie fighting demons? I am very glad you like his next book. It definitely should be worth reading.
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    Chapter 12

    I am betting there is a book two. It would be so cruel to let them think they beat the bastards and destroyed the game only to find out it restarts
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    Chapter 12

    Was Marc or Blue ordered to give Tim money or did he do it on his own? Tim existence or livelihood is very fragile right now. Did only Marc care? If the Director owns Maya's admission file, the Director is a school administrator? Can that person be discovered? Can rumors start about that person having sex with a student to ruin their career?
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    Chapter 11

    I did not realize Tim was 18. The police recognized the situation as a domestic dispute. A willing lawyer would help Tim sue on charges he thinks applies, if the father has money and might even settle to not face public awareness
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    Chapter 17

    King John's weakness lay evident. His fleet to fight off the French and an invasion was destroyed by intense storms. The nation is vulnerable. Lords speak of treason. Kaylen and Ronan and Tomas will be tested. The upcoming fights are going to be defining and hard fought.Will they survive?
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