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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    Oh My---The two talked. It was hard and clumsy at first. But they let each other know they really like each other. Fenn was worried he would be another conquest for Ain as the Bulwark suggested he would be. Ain said he felt much stronger about him as a fling. Ain and Fenn went after the palace assassins who fled a town identified by the knife welder after Ain tortured him. The enemy denied a soundsmith was part of his forces. They were directed to a vacant bordered up house. The best action it seems was to knock the door in and be ready to kill the ones inside. Fenn led the charge and moved inside after the door has handled. He found two dead bodies and the soundsmith inside. Now what.... Can he disable or win a fight with the soundsmith? Why did the magical being kill the assassins?
  2. Caleb brought his sister to the Citadel to be harvested. She forgave him and expressed her total love for him. Her sincere loving thoughts gave Caleb and Leo a way out from this demonic place and they took it bringing down the citadel. They left Silas , the demon lord, behind for a human life on earth Caleb found his much younger brother. The four of them drove for hours and began a new human life. Caleb and Leo took entry level jobs as a watchman and night shift janitor. They took care of Sarah and her brother and built a new life. They were pleased and learned their feeling grew into romantic love. Life changed for them. However, they are not really free, unknown to them Silas was observing them
  3. What a heavenly life. work at a slow pace and then at the end of the day drink beers with friends at the beach. Noah's parents might feel he needs to be more responsible and find a better job in London. He will have that conversation when they visit later. Noah found he was upset at a friend offering to find a female date for Leo, his good friend. Noah did not like the offer but he did not really understand why. Leo turned down the date invitation and Noah felt much better. These two seem to like each other more than they now consider, but are not aware what to say or do about it.
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    So, Finn is free from legal trouble. you are saying. Somehow all the stolen property evidence in his garage is no longer his and Finn is not awaiting trial. This new arrangement would let Tarquin think he control's Finn and Orel. When they say no to him and mean it, Tarquin will be shocked, He will own very little and Orel and Finn will own and control it all. I suggest they get advice from Oliver who may be going to Ottawa and Lydia.
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Orel with his requirement to community property will upset Tarquin's plan of control of all the Merrick assets. They will be Grady assets now and not subject to his control. Tarquin will be livid when he finds out. For now, Tarquin probably is ignoring the critical details, just pleased that he thinks he won. BTW, Tarquin must think he can control the two newlyweds. But, I think he will find out he cannot. Meanwhile a reputable effort by two experts is underway that will give evidence to oppose Tarquin's claim of guardianship/conservatotship. Tarquin's request to legally control Orel might be moot since he will be an adult and soon to be married.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    OK--what happened to the deal Tarquin offered Finn in jail? Some part of this story is missing. Finn is out working on the Delorean and not in jail or restoring historic cars at the manor
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 22

    I bet,if Will was forced to decide, he would not surrender and chose his duty to his country
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 22

    I hope as it turns out, Will may not have to make a final decision. Graves feeling very pleased with his good fortune might decide to threaten Will tonight Maybe, West and Peter can rescue Ned and Enrico later in the night. They will need to kill Graves, I hope they can do it silently so West and others can escape.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 22

    In the spy trade , it is called a honeypot. A good looking woman offers sexual favors and gets intel from a guy speaking too loosely or who will leave maps, war plans, etc around.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 22

    Eventually, Graves threw Peter out. He intends to fuck Ned. Ned is a younger better choice, He will feel great joy fucking Will's son and humiliating Ned and Will. Tonight, Graves will play with Ned who offered himself. Tomorrow, he intends to tell Will he must step down to save Ned Graves does not think Peter or West are able to threaten him. He has guards. Graves is an idiot and likely to be killed tonight.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Fenn was distressed at the evening dinner and celebration. Ain was getting drunk and saying romantic thing to him. Fenn did not like how Ain a was acting, He left needing a break and needing to think. A man followed him and engaged him in=m in conversation. Ain came upon him and was very hostile saying he needed to leave his future husband alone. A fight ensued and the man drew a knife and hit Ain drawing blood. Fenn went into his shadow form holding the enemy still till guards came to get him. He will be interrogated But, then a fire broke out in the building holding the grand dinner celebration . Was this attack on Ain a distraction for the main enemy effort? The real plan must have been to kill Ain and Fenn and the leaders of his country in the fire. I hope few people are killed. It would be a classic move. Take out the head of the opposing force. I agree the security was weak. I cannot wait for the next chapter and the after action report.
  12. These two young men were surprised and faced serious trouble on their planetary cargo ship. The ship was attacked by raiders and Lt, Jonathan Vally as navigator and Vallin Sturgis, a genetically enhances pilot, needed to escape. Their cargo ship was being blown apart. Lt Vally led Val to a special area that contained a secret exploratory ship that had great speed. The two took off and their blast seemed to injure the attacking vessel. Maybe, it cannot chase them. The two escapees successfully reached Jupiter Station. Val is being taken to the medic. He is impaired since he did not complete his required bonding before he piloted the ship. I hope they can bond and begin their explorations. Interesting start with a promising future when you decide to pick it up.
  13. Marry Me! Wonderful you tied it all together. They accepted they are in love. Lyn proposed to Alexander and they are getting married soon Alexander met him at his hotel room and they fucked three times with Lyn bottoming. They talked it all through and became closer and honest and truly connected. Well Done
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    Yes, it is compelling and puzzling and mysterious. I cannot picture the end yet. And no--I am not asking for any clues or breadcrumbs
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    You need to find Lydia a sexual partner, please.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    Merrickville is turning into a gay soap opera and will be an interesting place to live once Tarquin is neutralized
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 21

    Hey, Andrew Highmore had a hockey jacket and he was not weird!
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    Orel and Lydia can work together and help the town prosper.
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 21

    So, the kids will not be called sprogs, but now chipmunks?
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    The squires training continued around the keep. Kaylen led them to the manor for more training. The steward of the manor would watch and test them tomorrow. This night in their room they expressed their strong feelings for each other, held hands and experienced their first kiss. A line was crossed. They became more committed to each other.
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    I am willing to give our good author his creative license for his passenger survivability scenario to make the plot move along. This subject is outside your normal subject area. I would not be as forgiving if this was a spy/mystery story written by Lee Childs or Vince Flynn or Brad Thor.
  22. We got to a magnificent high point--Liam founded an agency that ethically handled stars "You've become...a proof-of-life. That someone can survive the machine and come out the other side with their humanity intact." Then Liam is asked by the interviewer for the TV show --"What did you lose"--This would be on the public record Liam said "Everything" What did Liam mean? Did he lose Hudson?
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    Tarquin is lying and manipulating Oliver. He is not going to resign after the Gala. He is just buying his silence and peace till it is too late to stop his plans. He will own Oliver even more since he is needed to stay now and not go to Ottawa in order to protect Orel. Tarquin says he will save Finn from jail and approve of them getting married and then staying at the manner. Tarquin expects he can control them all and push Orel to sign what legal documents he wants since he is his guardian. Orel does not know that he gave Finn the choice of staying in the manner repairing its historic cars and being with Orel or going to prison for a very long time. Tarquin said he would tell Orel about the offer he made to Finn. Tarquin will be surprised, I bet. Lydia and Ms. Patel are securing the evidence to contest Tarquin's guardianship/conservatorship. Orel may remember signing the deeds and know he owns the land and object to what Tarquin wants . Orel will now have more control if he is legally free of Tarquin's control. Maybe, the Vicker's company has great cams that show someone planting the evidence in Finn's garage. Tarquin's house of cards could collapse.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 21

    Will' political instincts and judgment are outstanding. He picked the right running mate who understands him and complements him. The ticket will be much stronger. Plus, Will has the right message. He stood up to man who lost his son and got him and the crowd to realize enough was enough. Will is the change candidate who understands them and their predicament and will fight for them not the corporate bigwigs that are feasting on them. Wil gave them and new shared enemy and he sounded right
  25. akascrubber

    To Be King

    If you are open to a suggestion--Maybe compose a small tale about a powerful mage called Kandric
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