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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Well, you are indicating there are two competing love interests, so it sounds like 4 people--maybe Finn and Oliver and Orel and Lydia? I am just guessing so we will find out the truth as your story progresses
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Orel thinks Finn will be good for Oliver. “Ollie,” Orel looked up again. “I like Finn, he’d make you smile if you let him. I’m okay, if you want to… I can loan him to you, if you want to.” The awkward way of Orel’s, trying to give him permission."
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 37

    The boys are excited and happy be here. The tension is drawing Adam and Right closer. But, for now Rick has to leave them to work with the police,' Rick knows g he is the bait. He thick Corcoran will show himself on a side street and lure him to give chase so Cocoran can kill him That is only one dangerous option. I bet Rick will be surprised.
  4. akascrubber

    "Pure Love"

    I hope Liam can devise a brilliant retort for the media and blame their trip as an action by an agent who wanted more money from him and more control over him
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Are you saying Orel is gay? Does he like someone other than Finn who he was forced to fuck years ago?
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Orel is surprising. He turns out to be very perceptive. He knows Tarquin is controlling Oliver by using him or threatening him. Orel also knows Oliver likes boys and has since he was nine years old. He tells Oliver to go to Finn and he will help him. Finn helped Orel. He said he would loan Finn to him so he will not worry. Maybe, Finn can help him be safe, too. Orel knows Finn is gay. Orel is not. Finn leaves for the garage to see Finn. Will they be able to connect on a personal level. Will Oliver open up to Finn? Will Finn bring up Lydia liking Orel? I think Oliver needs to find out some way that Lydia is a financial mastermind. Maybe if they talk, she might be able to help him with his financial issues.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    Just Perfect and Powerful William Carter stood up for his kids. He will not have them threatened and bullied. Then he stood up for his family and Canada speaking unfiltered to his citizens on TV. Hooray! "Je m'appelle William Carter. Je suis fier de qui nous sommes. Vive le Canada." (Translation: "My name is William Carter. I am proud of who we are. Long live Canada.") Let us see what happens next in Canada and Washington, DC.
  8. Things are still unsettled. Grandma found out she was sideline The Senator is on the run Tristan and Little B are here for now. The elders have questions for them Noah and Shiloh are together and safe. Danger seems to be around the corner.
  9. akascrubber

    "Pure Love"

    OMG--What beautiful, sensuous love making. They finally expressed their love for each other. Meteo saw Liam and choked but promised Hudson he would not tell anyone But, things got tense. Paparazzi flooded the outside street. TMZ showed up with cams. Liam knew what happened. His agent told the press to punish him and ruin Hudson's life What will Liam do?
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter3

    I think Tarquin has to be done in. He could fester and get more poisonous, if exposed. I expect a person will come forth to take him out and the murder will be unsolved.
  11. Now that Cavendish and Elizabeth are on a honeymoon in the south of France, any child that results from their coupling can be attributed to their sexual play without any hint that the father might be Granger. Cavendish needs an heir, too. George is very lucky with his sexual partners. It appears the handsome Spanish captain who is his escort is going to be receptive to a mutual time of passion. He could have a private area for them away from Daventry. Plus, the captain might well open up about the Port's ships and Spanish navy plans. Sex can open loose lips. George is a very exciting lover.
  12. akascrubber

    SCENE 2:

    What a tough unexpected complication
  13. What a wonderful, happy chapter Thank you George quickly handled his affairs in London before he left for Spain, Cavendish and Eizabeth were married. He enjoyed their foursomes as planned and learned he was very pleased to have sex with Elizabth and she learned much from their interludes It was a cautious joy to transit on the Belvidera. He found he had to bolster Weston who he found out was nervous he would make a mistake before his former captain. George assumed his usual teacher/ counselor role and helped Weston to regain his confidence and forcefully took command of his ship The Spanish port call was a bit out of kilter. They were not expected and the officer greeting them was put out by their appearance until he learned who they were. They were taken to the port's commander who was rude and uncooperative until George produced a letter from the Spanish King asking him to accommodate and help George. They will stay for a few days so George can study the port for his country's intel uses. Daventry will work on improving his Spanish with his tutor and a convenient reason for a few days stay. George will have a handsome Spanish captain to guide him. He thinks they might have things in common but for now Daventry is cockblocking him. I bet this problem will not last long.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    I want to commend you for your text presenting exceptionally powerful, convincing, evocative graphic imagery. I felt present on the Fortress Rock, felt its bitter cold and understood better the pain and troubles and aspirations of the key players. These people are very brave and resolute facing a superpower aggressor.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter3

    And Lydia's lawyer, Ms Patel, can be effective and vicious against her opponents. Tarquin will be surprised and disoriented, not suspecting serious opponents.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter3

    Now we know what happened and Finn began to plan along with Lydia who is all in helping Finn and Orel. She believed him. Finn told Lydia that Tarquin stole their innocence and broke them. He found them in the barn and forced Orel to fuck him against their wills. Finn became the town's problem child and he and his family were forced out by the establishment and Tarquin. Finn told Lydia--who would believe him over Tarquin, He had no evidence. Orel came to see him late in the rain. Finn comforted him and gave him a stone to keep and hold to be safe. He can come back anytime, but must stay at his home by Tarquin's demands. When he comes back, Lydia wants to be present. She likes Orel. Finn... "made a decision, there in the creeping light. He would proceed on two tracks. Track One: Fortify Orel. Create the sanctuary, brick by brick, promise by promise. Track Two: Test Oliver. Push him. Probe him. See if the Suit was just a polished shell over the same rotten core, or if he was something else—something that could be used as a tool, or maybe, impossibly, as an ally." It is a wise start. Lydia agrees with him. I think he is going to need more than Oliver to destroy Tarquin. We will see.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    Andrew is being bold and very aggressive. He is tired of holding on the defense. Like his kids, he saw the tremors and felt the anguish Will displayed. I hope he stays safe through his risky flight and where he operates on the mainland. I bet he will inspire and energize the resistance. If and when he is found out by the Americans, an intensive manhunt will begin. He needs to leave instructions on the Rock behind for his people so they keep the faith and be strong. Does he have a good number 2? I am impressed by the extensive, thoughtful Canadian psyop campaign. It makes sense and should become even more convincing over time as the hurt from the occupation increases. Might the ""I.Know." message give Will hope and a renewed dedication to carry out his plans with his inner circle. I expect Will could begin his own psyop campaign messages to reflect his messages. Yani and crew are essential and formidable and might adapt what they are doing to also reinforce what Will is saying now.
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    Jody brought together hot guys to be his new roommates. early on more friends joined them for a rousing sex filed extravaganza. Even one guy who just wanted to watch finally let Jody suck his cock and decided he would have more fun going onward Jody decided to sign up for the Navy rather than be drafted into the Army. Jody would start his service when he graduated, He might not like this plan when he graduated. The VietNam War was winding down and not as many people were needed. But, it might be a short term problem for him. The Navy might cancel his contract since it also will fewer people. We will see!
  19. OK--Jack is the only one on the trail through the high mountains who sees things and becomes terrified. Theo and Vince do not see the mist and ghosts and dead wolves he sees Then one creature flowes though him and solidifies and claims he now has Jack for control and more. Jack feels so alone and scared Very supernatural and puzzling. Who is the creature who steps in to own Jack so he cannot help Theo find his pack?
  20. They survived so far and handle problems. Klebber agrees to spend his two week vacation with Dennis in Costa Rico. He thinks it is safe and not facing any serious Covid-19 problems. He his set up to remote teach since he may have to use it when he gets back Now, what is past is prologue. The real journey and building of a relationship with ups and downs will begin in Costa Rico.
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    BTW--I would love a deus ex machina solution for Tarquin at the right moment.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    I hope soon we will meet and see Tarquin acting as he normally does. It would help to learn what he did in the past to Orel and Finn. We have only briefly leaned about him and how controls others. Oliver thinks he is a spendthrift. He tells Finn he does not see him as able to get him mental health care. Maybe, Tarquin will become so poisonous and cruel that he might be disappeared with the help of someone like West Harding
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 36

    Adam and Coop are helping Nick and Brad being out in public as gay males. They know much better that they need to be aawre and on the lookout for Corcoran. The boys, I think, learned some commonsense ways to live in public around others, especially older gay males who might like young boys too much Coop goes on duty after lunch. Adam will take care of he boys who really want to be part of the festivities Corcoran is expected to make some sort of a play for Coop. No one knows his plan. I wonder if he might try to kidnap one or both of the boys and try to force Coop to come to him, warning Coop to not tell anyone else.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    So, the town is a long running soap opera with an insane cruel leader, broken souls and lots of hidden secrets, Lydia and Finn are the keys that might open up and disinfect Merrickville, Finn concluded..."The war was coming. Tarquin’s shadow loomed. But for the first time in ten years, Finn wasn’t standing alone in the dark. He had an ally in velvet, a reluctant general in a suit, and a pure soul that had not forgotten him."
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    OMG--The Delorean opens a can of worms and hard memories for Finn and Orel. Oliver does not know what he is doing and what he is unleashing We will find out, Neither Oliver or Tarquin are likeable or perhaps worse in Finn's estimation. Lydia is getting what she wants. Finn thought...."the silence of the shop, and the sinking realization that he had just sold his soul to sit at a table with the family that had tried to destroy it."
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