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  1. Caleb confessed trying to hold onto Silas, but he could not hold onto him . Slias was pulled away by a riptide. His body was found two days later. Shilo thought Caleb did not try to save Silas and let him die. Shiloh was wrong. What an emotional time. Will Shiloh forgive and no longer hate Caleb? Tristan gave Noah access to Shiloh's memories. Noah knew the pain and anger Shiloh felt and his need to peace and reconciliation.
  2. What a terrible shock--Lyn was alone at home. he was simply told his mom had died. He is lost after the funeral. Brad and Alexander are there to comfort him. What is to happen to him now? He is going to have lots of questions.
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 29

    The tension is rising on multiple points--Will some be saved while others are kidnapped? Andrew took more of the poisoned pills as he left the residence. Has Dr McLeod begun to activate the flight response? Will he seek her out and be sent on a terrible path in flight fighting more demons? Is he going to be lost for now? He is out of commission unable to help West or protect the kids for now, it seems. The honorable, ethical Dr Kinsley refused Dr McLeod's apparently official order to take control of the kids. Will Dr McLeod go around Dr Kinsely and send official forces to pick up the kids while the PM is tied up in Parliament? Who is left in the residence to refuse her with her when she shows up with written orders with police forces? Has the DG acted in a way to stop Gagnon and negate McLeod? What is going on? At least we know West and CSIS forces will be going after Peter and Matt and Ned. So far, neither Silas nor his crew know that CSIS is going to evacuate the mountain lodge. I hope Silas stay's ignorant
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 28

    I am expecting one of more spoilers that will create tension and draw us onto needing to read Book 3 to learn if the issues are resolved. Of course, I may be wrong. We will see in a few days.
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 28

    BTW--are you going to have Andrew triggered and flee and get lost as a cliffhanger at the end of Book 2? Will could be devastated just as he is made head of the national unity government.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 28

    Totally risky and critical situations Is Andrew going to break? Gagnon asked that his fight risk be instigated. He knows what is destroying Andrew's internal control. Andrew is taking the pills that capture/control his mind. Can West act to contain him at the residence? Will took the unexpected risk of his career. He did not resign but asked for a national unity government from Parliament. It will surprise Parliament. He listened to the forceful reasoning of Caleb Henderson. Perhaps, Will is going to be helped win n his motion because the Conservative Party is leaderless and cannot organized a forceful resistance.
  7. This spy and mystery thriller set in a bitter cold, hostile wilderness will capture your attention and keep it. The CSIS is in the background. There are twists and turns and lots of violence with really bad guys lead by Wolf surprisingly trying to control the world's financial system who turn out to be facing 4 high school students aided eventually by El Coyote. You will want to find out how the two sides fight and who wins.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    Well done! Part realism, part fantasy Andrew Carter was told to fuck off--but I am sure he will not. Maybe, his help might be needed? The four boys are in love and are consummating their relationships and are moving to Australia to continue their high school education They will have a challenging complicated future and I look forward to reading about it
  9. Maybe Granger can find his next ship to command at the dockyards and St Vincent will owe him a favor after his help at the dockyards
  10. Juno--Elizabeth Danfield ?
  11. This tale has more twists and turns, For now, Will and the family are free from involvement. The Ortega family is behind the efforts. They are =mae they did not get to buy Buck Industries and hate Travis. The FBI is on them. Fellowes works for Ortega. They want to push Petrovic out Someone named Juno is the snitch on the Ortega family and their people I think Will and his family/friends need still to be careful. Happy Thanksgiving. You did not leave with a real cliffhanger and that is something to value.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 27

    Renn has met two men who might show up later and injure him or more : Ytter Kazerbol and the upset Mungo Zdain is totally submissive to Renn who uses him as a fu..toy slapping and rough housing him using degrading names. Zdain thinks he deserves this harsh treatment. His father despises him and thinks he is defective. Zdain accepts this terrible label and receives BDSM pleasure from Renn. Renn is on the lookout for the meaning of the red comet. He hopes seers and wise men on the Misty Isles can help.
  13. Another reason to be thankful on this holiday, George was at his best! Granger and Daventry teamed up with the PM and foreign minister and it worked out as Granger predicted, Daventry will be the ambassador to Spain and Granger will make the introductions, Granger demanded two things as his price to help them and it involves the Navy. They agreed but told him he had to get the agreement from St Vincent. Granger got St Vincent to give Weston commend of a frigate and to promote Kingsdale to Commander and give him a command. Granger wanted a frigate to take him to and from Spain commanded by Weston. He is being given the Belvidera which is wonderful homecoming for Granger. St Vincent had two requests for Granger and he agreed, He will help him looking over the shipyards when he finishes his duties--and seeing a child is born--and will spy for the navy on the ships in three Spanish harbors, So it seems favors are asked and exchanged to the benefit of all...
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 27

    I hope Will can realize something is not right and Andrew is acting in a very unusual manner. He needs to get help for Andrew who might have even more extreme mood swings. Will might feel things are unnatural. Might Andrew tell him he is on medication to help him calm down and it is not helping him. The DG should be calling or seeing Will immediately to relate what Yani has told him. The head of CSIS should realize the mole is going to hurt Andrew without knowing what the medicine is, It description is not yet known so that is a direct clue it is malevolent.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    Helen and Rick made progress in the case against. Shae and Jimmy are together and safe. Jarvis had his hearing and was denied bail. Those connected to Javis gave away their identity. Jarvis looked fearful of the assistant commissioner and two thug like coppers with him. Rick tracked down a young man, Casey, who knew Jimmy and Shane and spilled the beans. The wo hugs wwer enforcers for Jarvis and the assistant commissioner was a client who liked kinky sex with the boys roleplaying with him as the headmaster using corporal punishment. Now, Rick needs to keep Casy safe and h get his testimony on the record. Are there any other high profile clients that might interfere? Is Jarvis in danger from being killed in jail ? Epstein in the US supposedly committed suicide awaiting sex charges.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Bravo--Well Done So many heroic actions--Enrico was impressive and all of his new family acted effectively and responsibly Wolf was painfully taken out and left penniless. They left in the plane minutes before the Canadian authorities arrived to arrest the bad guys. Is Brian free of CSIS control? It is wonderful to hear that they all will continue in new stories
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 27

    So explosive--Andrew is so wound up and intensely suspicious. Will and even Jared do not suspect Andrew is drugged and not fully in control. They are thinking conventionally. I hear things are going to get worse. Yani has or will inform the DG. The DG needs to act fast. He has to inform Will and find out from him and those around Andrew how Andrew is doing. His unusual behavior should be identified. The regular CSIS doctor should check on Andrew and suggest changes and new med. The mole cannot be allowed to hurt others like West. She is a malignant cancer.
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 26

    Silas may not be a politician, but he is directing and building up one that will argue for Will's removal and then his job in Parliament and the Conservative Party.,
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 25

    Ok, Joel is a teenager with hormones and likely mood swings and uncertainties. His sexual desires and interests just might have been unlocked and raised to a new level by his mutual masturbation with Davin. Will he regret playing with Davin? It seems not so far. He was turned on tonight by Davin's actions and gladly kissed him back. It was all so new and had to feel great. Davin could be enough for him. He has given no indication that he wants to open up and "play the field." He noticed physical, appealing things about his agriscience teacher and even Roy. He can believe he can notice guys without wanting to have sexual relations in the Clintonian sense with them. Joel may also be naive enough to not realize his gazes longer than normal will be noticed by other males. He might consider Colt's raw comments at dinner were just wrong and not showing his true feelings. Will Colt's remarked close up Joel's admiration of males he likes? I do not know. Maybe, he will need to hear from Davin.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    “El Coyote has come to collect his due.” And Enrico is going to make the Wolf pay. He might be left behind badly hurt awaiting CSIS or RCMP capture. It looks like Enrico will be able to take his son and friends away in his seaplane and get the vital medical help Alex needs in time,
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 26

    Andrew right now is a weapon of mass destruction. He is chemmed up and paranoid and needs professional help very fast to recover his balance. The DC needs to step in. Yani has or will give him the facts and the destructive efforts of the mole to act. She has seriously impaired Andrew on purpose. He has taken half the bottle of the poison "Andrew sat at his desk, but his posture was wrong: hunched forward, rigid, his fingers drumming a frantic, silent rhythm on the mahogany surface. The small bottle of Lisinitor pills sat next to his keyboard—half-empty."
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 26

    "Thorpe chuckled, “shortest premiership in the history of Canada, you were determined though. Do you think there’s a plot against you unfolding in the wings here? I doubt it, there isn’t a politician in the country that wants your job right now.” Is not Silas Abernathy working behind the scenes to push out Will and replace him after he is destroyed by his handpicked Conservative Party leader?
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 25

    So, Joel agreed to be a traitor and is joining the baseball team as a shortstop. He had a simple, non-painful talk with Coach Finn. Joel wants to be number 0 Life at home changed a bit for Joel. Colt spoke out saying Joel had the hots for his agriscience teacher Braden. He outed Joel to the group around the meal. Only Lacey and Gavin do not know Joel is gay. Davin said it did not bother him and Celia hugged him for being so accepting, Later Joel and Davin kissed passionately in his bedroom. I do not think they can keep their relationship secret for long. Finally, thank you for this early chapter. Happy Thanksgiving
  24. akascrubber

    Realities

    So weinerdog---If Brad is in on Lyn finding Luke giving him a blowjob, does he want to encourage Lyn to offer him a blow job, too?
  25. akascrubber

    Realities

    Lyn is incensed about Luke blowing Brad and confronts him in private. Luke admits he hss been blowing Brad for a year and he considers it just fun. He considers Bella has gotten into his life so he is returning the favor. Luke feels no guilt. Lyn cannot believe Luke. ut, Lyn will not tell ella and thinks Luke and Brad should tell her, Lyn is told another opinion by Luke that confuses him. Luke is told ..."You have zero reason to be jealous of me because of Brad.” “That’s what you think,” Luke threw at him." So, Luke thinks Brad has unresolved feelings for Lyn that Brad so far has hidden from him Is this matrix of feelings connected to their fight/breakup at the end of college that Brad's parents mentioned? I can see Lyn confess his feelings for Brad and run away from a shocked Brad who did noy have time to process what Lyn said. Brad had to see himself as straight for the sake of his future. Can Lyn stay silent? Will he talk to Alexander for advice?
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