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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    "King" Baldwin is a bastard and fool. He locked the city's gate keeping his countrymen outside to be slaughtered by returning Turks. It was a horrible, action. Baldwin claimed he was king of the city and he did not anyone to come inside and challenge his rule. A wounded rider reach Lord Haskal's camp and told them what Balwin had done, Everyone was upset. Most pained was Wylan who felt the angony of those dying outside the gates, Stephen provided medical care to Wylan through the night and Wylan survived still traumatized Haskal took control of Mamistra and promised to treat the people fairly. Darien knew Baldwin would come to them for help. He knew Balwin's men would turn on him and they did. Baldwin approached the gates of Mamistra and asked to be let in. Haskal said no and told them to camp outside and leave in the morning. That next morning, Baldwin's men asked for food and water, The answer was still no. Balwin fled on a horse probably fearing the increased hatred of his few remaining men. Those remaining outside were now helped. Val found Balwin's crown and gave it to a local priest to feed the children We saw that a leader can be cruel and self-serving and another can stand for honor and what is right. Baldwin likely has not yet disappeared
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    Amalgamate

    Politicians can be mysterious. Maybe he wanted to insure his daughter got great seats and personal time with her favorite band. If he runs for president, he will not be home much and this goodwill gesture might show her again he cares about her. Maybe the senator is going to meet some donors and or advisors in separate meetings.
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    Amalgamate

    OK--we now know DJ and Michael love to fuck . Thanks, too, for the hot sex. For DJ it is path breaking and more thrilling when Michael fucks him than any past partners. The sniper has gotten ready for his killing shot. He checked out his location by the catwalk and hidden his rifle. He is wearing a security guard uniform This is going to be very tense and dangerous.
  4. These three are being tormented and toyed with. They are unsure of what is fake and simply hur Theo faces an evil being who tries to deceive him and make him feel guilty about his father and his causing his pack to be lost, It defended the world against evil and was a real target. Theo realizes he is being manipulated and is making some progress, He finds himself in a blizzard and drives on to seek his pack's home. He sees smoke in the distance and moves toward it Jack and Vincent are striving to find Theo. They know he needs them. Jack remarks about their search to find the home of Theo's pack,,,. " I don’t know, but if we’re there… we will prevent him from destroying himself, as well." The evil forces are not by far defeated yet. They will keep on trying to deceive Theo, Jack and Vince.
  5. Two seemingly very different 35 years olds meet years after attending high school together, They have matured and think they have learned lessons from how they faced their problems and now live independently. Avery, a successful business consultant, brings in his car to the neighborhood car repair shop. run by Dino. They were opposites in high school. Dino was part of a larger family full of jocks. Avery was the out and gay debate guy But, now they learn they have things in common, including hot sex. It turns out eventually Avery has to decide whether to try to make a life in Seattle with Dino or move away and take a full time job elsewhere. What happens to them and how they communicate and miscommunicate matters. They have big decisions to make You will want to hope they become a couple. I think you will be fascinated to see what happens
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  6. I agree with the James Bond living through it all comparison. But, M died in a shootout in Skyfall so real pain from a key character's death can happen along the way.
  7. Finally, at the last moment Avery realizes he needs Dino. A tough decision was made after he was ghosted for 48 hours, Avery will take the job offer and move. Dino showed up too late, they fucked and eventually, he learned Avery was moving away. Avery has rented out the house. He accepted the full time job and signed in the dotted line. He packed his car with his goods and began his car trip until too many memories, and some good advice told him he needed to stay and be with Dino. It is now messy and impractical, but Avery is going to find a way to make them work.
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    2 : Encounters

    What a thought-provoking encounter. If true , this will change the normal understanding of human history Balder explained to Mark that he along with others visited earth and taught earthmen to work iron about 1200AD.A fight erupted within his people on how to treat other worlds, Loki and his members wanted to conquer and rule. Balder and others did want the same goals, He was wounded in battle and Thor,his brother sent him away to safety in his ship. Their healing power is exceptional since he may have been dead or near death, Balder was in his ship for500 years. With what Balder described, the First Friend reported finding other planets around Balder's home system that were conquered. This might need to be tracked to watch out for further threatening expansion. Mark felt drawn to Balder and was worried his feelings were not natural but manipulative. He will need to be careful.
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    1 : Awakening

    Provocative start--This could go in many interesting directions. Thanks
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    Chapter 12

    Edgar had been feeding the beast his meat for weeks, He was really enhanced and Tyler noticed his predator nature and too sharp teeth. He could tell the beast is not just human and is warned. Tyler is now in the fight for his life. He must creatively respond. Edgar has laid a trap for him Can Tyler's friends help him in anyway?
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    Chapter 17

    Haskal knew how 200 men could take a city : Psyop warfare and true deception. Then Baldwin stole it from him because he had 10 times the men who would fight him to get the city from Haskal., Haskal listened to Wylan worrying and a large group of riders arriving by morning. He had his men leave and will let Baldwin handle the new force. Wylan is continuing to show he is needed. He is unable to talk about his last communication from the sorcerer
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    Chapter 11

    Mhalyn saw the High Herald cloaked moving through fields destroying food crops. She ran to tell her rebel friends. It was thought the High Herald was going to cause a famine and would blame the rebels. Petre thought the people would turn on them and no place would be safe Petre thought they might have to flee to Orinovo. What a scary thought. The High Herald is showing how evil and cruel he can be.
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    Mousetrap

    One supposed dead end and Gabiel still looks for shooters. He cannot figure out who he fought with earlier and Scott is no help. It looks like the Senator is going to be targeted at the concert by a sniper Scott breaks into the Hershey computer system and finds a message that was likely sent by Gabriel's old boss. He needs to call Gabriel to tell him who on the inside was contacted. So, who did Mehmet contact?
  14. That park was a place for gay hookups. Police in older times might be on the lookout for sexual play. I am sure they do not do it now. They let their desires go free when at Avery's home and there were in heaven, in sync, both experiencing glorious orgasms. But Dino's phone rang and he abruptly left without commenting. Avery was dumbfounded. He ran the likely reasons for Dino's actions and his thoughts got darker after not hearing from him for two days, Avery accepted the full time San Diego job. Nothing was keeping him here in Seattle. Dino showed up and explained why he left and why he was tied up. They both talked and now understood each other. Their sexual chemistry reignited. Dino went after Avery's body As a final fling--awesome. If they both wanted more, then real problems arise. They will be living in two far away towns They are going to need to talk. The final chapter has raised my expectations. Is this going to be a tragedy or a happily ever after story?
  15. It is substantial and slowly developing. I expect you are going to surprise us.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    Matt, Simon, Gareth and others--Please enjoy your growing friendship and romantic impulses as long as you can. Life gets in the way and shakes things up. Live for the moments you have.
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    Sanctum

    Oh No--John survived the perils of the confessor's interrogations and was put into the human army that was to invade the elf lands fearing death. But, he awoke to find the army turning on itself and the humans were fiercely killing each other with no other beings in sight. He mounted a horse and rode far away from the killing until he was engulfed in a thick fog. He was shocked to find Karsa, his former lover. But, this was not the same person. This Karsa hated him.“You…” He spat. “…You low-breed human filth.” Is this elf now going to kill John?
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    Chapter 11

    Simon looks like Ed Sheeran
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    Chapter 10

    Fenn has figured out he can create a shadow wolf and have it slash a tree. He will explore this power more and see what else he can direct a shadow being do as he orders. He wants more information and does not want to disappoint the Herald again
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    Chapter 16

    Only 3 more chapters in this book and the crusaders continue on. It appears they will defeat the crown prince and his forces.
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    Chapter 16

    "Rashid had killed him. Ishan knew it with a certainty that burned in his chest like a brand. Rashid had sent the assassin...." to kill his father and him and he would try again. His grandfather implied wrongly he orchestrated the killing of his father. Ishan could not put together the assassins. He was a sorcerer not a fierce warrior with ties to assassins like his older brother. Maybe, his grandfather really knew this but needed the crown prince to kill the crusaders. Ishan was expendable in his eyes. Ishan is now held captive in his quarters. His brother, the crown prince, was ordered by his grandfather to attack the crusaders. The crown prince, I expect, will be focusing on attacking and destroying the crusaders and to earn his grandfather's approval. Ishan will be killed after the crusaders are wiped out. Ishan reached out in his isolation for Wylan and could only expressed his grief. He is paralyzed. Islan needs to think about what he can do now. I think after reflecting to he will tell Wylan that a major attack is coming. He might be able to give him advice on how to prepare to fight and find his older brother so he is killed. His father's death needs to be avenged
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    Chapter 15

    Let us find out what Wylan's sorcerer suggests as a next step now that water has been found
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    The "It" Boy

    Will is desperate for a solution and relief. I think he is going to hear Jeremy out and, if his ideas promise a way out, he might well follow Jermy's plan modified by his own ideas, too. Will knows the campus and how the students are acting and realizes a change is needed. He will want to know what could help him deflect attention away from himself. What is Jeremy's plan to help Will? Might he suggest Will begin a part time modelling contract with a reputable agency until a new "it" guy emerges?
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    The "It" Boy

    Jeremy is insanely jealous Will won the costumed contest, not him. He counselor turned his anger around and said he needed to take credit also for the win. He picked the costume. The paparazzi are driving Will crazy on campus. He is the "it" guy and the star. He does not know what to do. If he cannot find a solution he will transfer to Stanford Jeremy surprised him and attends his next volleyball game. He sat next to Marie who told him about the paparazzi hounding Will. Jeremy congratulates Will on winning his game and say he may have solution to help him handle the camera parasites. Will wants his help. We will find out what Jeremy has in the next chapter. A good plan could bring the brothers much closer together.
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    Chapter 24

    Gloucester stood firm against limited French first attack. With no siege engines, Louis withdrew to regroup and prepare for fighting when Spring weather favors campaigns, Cardinal Guala lifted his staff. “And let no man’s heart fail. Henry’s cause is holy. The Charter is renewed. The realm gathereth to its king. Stand firm, and Heaven shall stand with thee.” The royalists will unite and prepare over the winter. Louis will be attacked
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