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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 25

    You painted a picture of impending disaster with no ready solution for Will Carter The media led by the charges of Caleb Henderson and thinks Will Carter must behind Peter and Matt being hidden. Mel, frustrated by the Colonel's stonewalling thinks he is lying and will increase his efforts to hide the military coverup. Mel is not hopeful. She is going to call Will. "The political crisis had become utterly personal. The moral authority of the government was hemorrhaging, and the crisis room, filled with the noise of collapsing faith and fear, desperately searched for a solution." The situation will improve markedly in the near future. Caleb Henderson is going to meet with Will and confess about his role helping Silas carry out his nefarious plan with Matt and Peter. At some point, DG is going to tell Will about the new doctor mole that is planning on hurting Andrew and West.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    So far so good.... Helen and Rick cleared out the legal hurdles and have Shane in protective custody. The two crooked cops showed up but missed them and they got away to a safe place in the area. Rick will take Shane and Jimmy farther away to keep them out of the reach of Jarvis, Rick is taking them to the home of Martin's parents. Rick is once again to go through Martin' stuff looking now for any clue that might relate to the new murder. Helen and Rick are still tasked to see that the new float is ready for the parade.
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    Very Exciting action--The armored Land Rover held up as they faced the first trap. The vehicles trying to hurt them are taken out. Kenny and Alex are learning and winning. Now, they are facing the dam and Wolf's soldiers' perimeter barrier. Kenny used the automated heavy rifle to aim at Wolf and a guard forcing them to duck. They have shocked them. But, how are they going to get inside the dam? How about more diversions from Enrico and Steve becoming more destructive on the server farm and Wolf's AI? Can Kenny find a hidden road that will let then travel inside the dam and link up with Steve and Brian and Enrico?
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 25

    Good News--Progress Yani isolated a cell phone inside the CSIS HQ in a wrong place. This cell phone was reaching out to Silas Abernathy. He found out it was the doctor supposedly sent over from the PM's office to analyze Andrew and West. With his team's help he found out such disturbing details that he called the head of the CSIS to report another mole. Yani learned the doc was not assigned by the PM's office, but her orders were falsified. He also had to have found out how hurtful the drug she ordered Andrew to take. She will soon be arrested and held in a secure facility and interrogated. Andrew will be taken off his destructive drug. The last main mole may be taken out. Silas Henderson gave a strongly critical report on TV about Will and corruption. He accused Will of hiding Matt and Peter from facing serious charges, But, leaving the studio Caleb went into a restroom and threw up. He knew he was lying and that Silas was behind the kidnapping. He had crossed a line and was sick at pushing his charges so far as requested by Silas Abernathy. Caleb decided he needed to clear his conscience. He made a call and asked for an appointment to see Will Carter. There are more reasons to see the corner being turned. Mel has chewed out the colonel who replaced the dead general and wanted to know where Matt and Peter are, He said he did not know. She was furious. Mel is going to bump up the problem to Will to get him involved before the military closes up tightly. They cannot hide from the PM, can they? Finally, it seems Peter has found a way to reach West by using the internet capabilities of a game handset. Their guardians messed up and did not see this loophole. Let us hope Peter and West can find a way to point out their location. Silas probably thinks he is on track to destroy his enemies and win his battles. He had no idea his efforts are going to begin to fail spectacularly.
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    How about saving his partner in the dam, Steve, who is playing havoc with the data servers and Wolf's AI ? They need to escape with Enrico plus Alex and Kenny who are coming to the dam. There is room for many to be heroes.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    The attack by Alex, mission commander, and Kenny, tactical accountant, is beginning. They know their mission and know where to go. Alex has 12 hours to operate charged with drugs until he crashes badly. They are armed with the right tools. Now they must successfully get to the dam, get inside to the server farm and notify Enrico's people where they are so they can damage it somehow. They all must escape from the dam and they will be extracted by Enrico's men. This is a very delicate operation facing committed, trained forces. They are on the clock. They are going to need lots of luck. The Wolf's men know they are in Radisson. Hopefully, Enrico can distract Wolf's men so they can enter the dam and find the server farm. It is going to be fascinating see them in action.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 24

    Your comments about Will finding a way to hold his head high and confidently finding his solution through this mess is encouraging, I had been seeing disaster and a very sad story happening. I will be looking forward with great interest to your plot development. Soon people in the US will be celebrating Thanksgiving. Having to read a depressing tale now will be so out of sync with the times.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 24

    Andrew was given a termination order by his boss. This is the rough nature of the intel service. The CSIS must do this under its regular authorities when the threat to the nation is so grave and it was. He did his duty as a CSIS agent. Andrew did not act impulsively or without thought. Of course, Andrew is human and regrets having to kill the general. Andrew also knows there are major threats out there aiming to hurt or destroy people he loves as well as the nation. Will must know he was given a proper order. He is fighting the system and Andrew is being damaged by his morality and an Order mole. I said in an earlier comment, the US Secretary of State around 1919 closed the department cryptographic office that was breaking the codes to read the diplomatic messages of other countries. I am sure other major countries had similar code breaking offices. Sec State Stimson said in effect--Gentlemen do not read other peoples' mail.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 24

    I am betting on the Director of CSIS being very insightful and realize that the drug Andrew is being given as having terrible effect and not what should be happening. He might have a CSIS doctor test his blood. With evidence he can confront Will since he has direct access to him. I hope Sarah does not push and suggest Will could benefit from using a supposedly beneficial drug to let him handle his stress.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 24

    Will, You are an idiot. He gave away a terrible secret. Why this Sarah? Does not CSIS have its own professionals who counsel staff after critical events?. You blindly pushed Andrew away with this horrible , cruel analysis and hurtful drug by a mole for Silas Abernathy . His mole says--“The drug is an Agonist-based Dissociative Inhibitor. It does not treat CLIS-D; it creates it. The primary function is to destroy his compartmentalization and amplify his existing shame and paranoia, masking the effects as severe burnout.” He is going to be made impotent and in need of care away from the CSOS West will protest and not meet Sarah. He will not be given the hurtful drug as it stands now. I expect he will be forced out of CSIS. This Sarah will remove CSIS as an effective opponent to the order and she will go on to traumatize and mislead Peter, Matt and Ned or Ed, I expect. Will--The results of this order will severely harm you and your family
  11. akascrubber

    Confusion

    I agree. I think Walter is behind the CIA kill squad. He has the position, the authority and knowledge of how to order a hit and the likely reason to have Josh killed so as to not reveal what he knows.
  12. Now, we are making progress, Al long as Theo can keep his sexual drive under control and not fuck the two would be mates The three meet at the boulder, touch and read the runes they see They find an insightful riddle. They must go as a group and find the Wisdom Tree. Theo's pack is there hidden. Theo might well get his pack back from where Cassandra hid them. Can he accept the help of Vince and Jack ?
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 23

    OMG--This is "The Empire Strikes Back" We are going to have one heck of a mess with pain and distress all around for the good guys. I am going to need a therapeutic, life affirming, good government solution with a loving Andrew and Will Carter in Book Three, please.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Jarvis was tracked and found at a charity auction with his wife. He surprisingly ran away and had to be caught before he left the convention center. He did not want to be arrested. He was going to be held overnight to see a judge tomorrow. His lawyer could not get him out. The inspector receive two worrying calls: one from the police commissioner and one from an assistant commissioner, Are they connected to Jarvis? Are one or more of them users of the rent boys controlled by Jarvis? Rick took the night off from Adam to think. He is worried about the rent boys and the murders. He is finalizing the move of the boys tomorrow. I think both boys are in increased danger. Jarvis and his men now have more need to kidnap them. Rick and Helen need to be extra watchful and protective of them.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    You are going to have fun with your next story.... But for now, you have shown us how Kenny did focus and saved Alex. They are alone and Alex still have real and serious med issues that impair him. The huge dam disaster has sent most south from Raddison to help at the disaster Nice cliffhanger--Who is calling Alex at his motel room? I bet it is dad since he can be tracked by the use of his credit cards. I hope it is not Wolf.
  16. akascrubber

    Confusion

    Bravo--Josh number one and Josh number two to the rescue.What an amazing, educational chapter. Josh number two with the Jason Bourne's skills took over. So, it was a CIA team that was ordered to kill Josh and the man in the hospital. They thought they were authorized to end both lives under a Chimera order. When the CIA desk was called for termination approval, they only heard confusion and then heard a CIA team was on its way to their location. Nevertheless, the rogue team was going to kill Josh. But Josh number two did not wait. While lying on a cot zip tied in a warehouse, He took out 5 guys meant to kill him. What a heroic performance! Then he took over a Tahoe and drove away fast. Josh number two was in charge, He called into the FBI and asked for Greg Kincaid, When he encountered resistance, he knew the code words to be transferred immediately to Greg's cell phone. Josh number two talked to Greg and was given a place to find and await medical care. Greg now knows about Josh number two The CIA needs to find out about the kill team and who authorized it..The CIA kill team needs to be found and stopped from more killing, Elenor as we have all said needs to be punished and reprimanded. Claire can let go on her. Are we getting any close to unlocking the CIA system? Greg might find some clues talking to both Joshes.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 24

    Joel has sabotaged for now his low key role at his new high school. I do not think his situation is as dire as Custer's was. He has made waves and made himself to be a visible supporter of the school's rival. He fit the role of a traitor to most of the student body. He has rejected joining the baseball team so that option was newly taken off the table. Given his very public actions will he listen to others he knows and moderate his hostility to his new high school? Or, will his anger issues still rule him. Let us hear what guidance the principal is giving to Joel and Roy. Will she suspend then for a few days? Will she assign them some extra duties?
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 23

    True believers-Their leader died. All hope was lost. Those inside the Alberta compound agreed to commit a mass suicide. The compound was set on fire and massive explosions shocked the surrounding Canadian Army and then the news when it was reported on air. Caleb Henderson attempted to spin the explosions and deaths as a failure of the government and the Prime Minister, It was not convincing and rang hollow. Will the Conservative Party leadership take up his views? Will spoke to the nation through the TV news channels."We will own the trauma. We will not own the corruption. We will rebuild, and we will emerge from this darkness stronger, more resilient, and more united in our commitment to the values we share." He pledged to seek out and fight the shadowy Order which is behind the effort to overthrow the government. He was earnest , solemn and forceful and had to give confidence to those worried about what has been happening Driving to CSIS HQ, a huge motorcycle ran into his car forcing him to stop. He got out and Brad Lapointe spoke to him claiming he would end West and get back for his jail term and fight 18 years ago. Brad was big and bulky. He expected he could easily kill West. But, he was wrong. West had learned how to fight in combat and strategically hit Brad and disabled him after taking brutal hits. He zip tied Brad and reported the attack to 911 and CSIS HQ.. He learned Brad was connected to Peter's corrupted evidence. I expect Brad is going to be interrogated by CSIS soon.
  19. The three are talking past each other, again Lyn is now in a position to not need money from Alexander and wants to pay him back. Lyn asked Alexander to tell him how much he owed him. But, Alexander said he would not. Lyn said it was humiliating. Alexander said he gave him money since they were friends and he did not need to be repaid They ended up getting physical and holding hands. Just then Brad found them and hinted they were acting gay. Lyn wondered why Brad would say this. Brad began running his hands through Lyn's air in an act of dominance cancelling out what Alexander had just done with Lyn. Again, Lyn could not read what was motivating Brad. I bet Alexander can see the latent rivalry with Lyn being oblivious.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 24

    Joel made his point visibly and loudly and with intent. He was not a Warhawk. He was a Tiger. He rubbed his disobedience and what must be real anger in the faces of the student body. He was not making an effort to fit in. He is willing to be ostracized and it is happening. I am sure the principal with chastise both Joel and Roy. Is he trying to sabotage his life as a student and maybe prevent him from inviting the two Celia wants him to invite I think he needs to really think about his new type of behavior. Is this rebellion an outgrowth of his mutual masturbation session with Davin? He seemed to ignore this action in the morning. I am sure Colt and Trace will be talking to him to find out why he did it.
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 22

    Thomas Dewey received leaked information in 1944 that the US had broken the Japanese code before the Pearl Harbor attack. He was furious at how badly the code breaking was handled and thought FDR should be impeached over not being ready for the attack. FDR would have faced a serious public outcry and loss of support in his re-election campaign. BTW, both candidates truly hated each other. General George Marshall convinced Dewey to not publicize the code breaking because it would critically harm our ability to fight the Japanese and give away a vital vantage. Dewey put his country first and did not leak the US code breaking ability.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 22

    I am in favor of Andrew's position given the seriousness of the threat and can see he is not acting without a moral compass. He knows Silas and his men have killed and want Will destroyed. Taking out this mole will likely really hurt to planned insurrection. The danger is not over. In 1929 the US Secretary of State Henry Stimson closed down the US codebreaking office which was reading foreign diplomatic messages. He said in essence--"Gentlemen do not read other's mail." The US government changed this position as tensions heated up in 1940.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 22

    It was painful to hear Will and Andrew fight. Both have strong guiding principles. Will does want Andrew to turn into his dad. Andrew feels he has to do terrible things to protect Will, his family and the country. The enemy has no limits and wants to take over the country. Will is going to carry out more bad things and he knows it. I hope Will again keeps not asking questions that is going to cause Andrew to lie. Well, they fought hard and kissed at the end. The staff accepted it and saw them as passionate committed partners. They loved each other clearly. The three boys overheard the load, angry voices. They were not troubled, and they knew Andrew and Will would make up. Weston was very insightful. He remarked that Jacob and Tommy were getting close and said they should get on and kiss each other. Those two ganged up and tickled him. Well, I expect it will not be long before Tommy and Jacob kiss and no one will be upset.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    Wolf is not ready for real chaos and his plans falling apart, It will be glorious to watch. Enrico was misunderstood and not seem as truly dangerous as he is. He skillfully robbed the guards to get the tools he needed. Enrico was taken to be with Brian and Steve and together they soon will begin the wreak havoc. He took the boys to a room with a computer terminal and told Steve to mess up Wolf's AI system which is soon supposed to crash the world's financial system. Steve is in heaven. The computer system accepts him and gives him full control with Alex's drone leading the way. He is going to take down the AI threat Alex gives Brian a gun to protect Steve, Then Alex leaves them to cause more disturbance. Alex captured a cell phone from a guard and is calling others--like his men and maybe CSIS to alert it to in impending disaster and need for men to take back control of the dam.
  25. When the family gets together and finally listens to each other they can find solutions. It took time and some extra steps but the meeting in Will Hawaii home was conclusive They figured out Petrovic was providing data to get rid of his opponents and leave him and his core people harmless. Moreover, Jake, Brad and others would be tagged as the ones who leaked to the FBI. However, the drive was not opened at Escorial and no cash payment is going to be made so the family would not be implicated. The FBI will take down those with the evidence they have and further investigate Petrovic. Brad and Jake will ask for a pardon for BIG since they gave the files on the crime gangs. With Fellowes and his law firm destroyed, Ttavis should be free from any more problems.
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